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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update...👍🏼...it's just like the movie...😎...waiting to see Maaneet moments......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic start

Father John took care of Arnav and Geet but now Arnav has become a man earning and takes care of his sister
while Maan works in a bakery and takes care of his mom
he has seen Geet and is mesmerized
eagerly waiting for Maaneet's first meeting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! well written! Maan sees Geet n is mesmerised! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome Start

Geet and Arnav has been raised by Father John and when they were younger he took care of them but now Arnav can provide for his sister
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Posted: 8 years ago
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WOW!! awesome update dear...loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update..
thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2
Maan's dream background song is

Mere khayalon ki mallika
Mere khayalon ki mallika
Chaaron taraf teri chhaiyaan re
Thaam le aake baiyaan
Chaaron taraf teri chhaiyaan 're chaiyaan

Mere khayalon ki mallika
Mere khayalon ki mallika
Chaaron taraf teri chhaiyaan re
Thaam le aake baiyaan
Chaaron taraf teri chhaiyaan 're chaiyaan

Aayi phoolon ke ras mein nahaake
Laayi geeli si khushboo churaake
Hey aayi phoolon ke ras mein nahaake
Laayi geeli si khushboo churaake
Teri aankhon mein hai halka sa nasha
Tera roop meri nazron mein basa

Mere khayalon ki mallika
Mere khayalon ki mallika
Chaaron taraf teri chhaiyaan re
Thaam le aake baiyaan
Chaaron taraf teri chhaiyaan 're chaiyaan

Jaadu chhaaya hai tera jaadu
Kaabu dil pe nahin kaabu
Hey jaadu chhaaya hai tera jaadu
Kaabu dil pe nahin kaabu
Sapnon ki pari itna to bata
Rehti hai kahan tera naam hai kya

Mere khayalon ki mallika
Mere khayalon ki mallika
Chaaron taraf teri chhaiyaan re
Thaam le aake baiyaan
Chaaron taraf teri chhaiyaan re chaiyaan

Mere khayalon ki mallika
Mere khayalon ki mallika
Chaaron taraf teri chhaiyaan re
Thaam le aake baiyaan
Chaaron taraf teri chhaiyaan 're chaiyaan

Geet goes to the college. After she came out, the two boys named Alex and his friend Tony flirt with her. All others are enjoying.
Tony: Can I read your hand?
Shirley/Geet: yes, why not?
Tony: your life is terrific and a dynamic person is going to enter your life.
Arnav comes
Tony: In your hand, T is written T for..
Arnav: Tony right?
he then beats both the boys and said, "Next time if you flirt with my sister, this hand of mine will make you cost your life. understood?"
Geet and the girls laugh.
Geet and Arnav get into the bike.
Geet; We have to reach by 12.
Arnav: Yes, I know. I will just drive the vehicle. don't say left or right.
He drives the bike rashly with great speed. the girls admire him. Arnav sees Roxanne/Khushi and calls her name.

Geet: now at this point of time, I don't want you to get entangled to Khushi. Take a right turn.
Khushi/Roxanne is dating and flirting an old man, which Arnav had spoilt.
Man: He is completely mad.
after Arnav and Geet left the other side, Khushi said, "Show off."
Arnav drives the bike recklessly. A cloth flew and covered their face. Arnav unknowingly dashes the inspector. He takes out the cloth from their head. All 3 laugh
Geet: Sorry inspector. It was a break failure.
Both reach home.
Geet: We have reached.
Arnav: I have to get my bike serviced.
Geet: Nothing is wrong with the bike. Why did you indulge in Khushi lafda? I told you to take a right turn.
Arnav: Shutup.I think today has not been a good day for me.
Geet: What not nice. Today is a special day for us.
Arnav: What special?
He sees their birthday cake.
Geet hugs and kisses Arnav and said, "Happy birthday Maxie."
Arnav: I'm sorry i forgot. Happy birthday little sister.
Geet: What little sister? We are born on the same day.
Arnav: Day is the same but I came 15 seconds earlier than you.
Arnav's gang celebrate their birthday.
Geet gives Arnav the pouch as his birthday gift.
Arnav: You have made it right.
Geet: Yes, I have made it
Arnav takes the pistol.
Geet: Not today please.
Arnav: The pistol gets into this pouch.
Micheal gives a scarf to Geet as a birthday present.
Geet: Wow.
Micheal: Whether Max remembers your birthday or not, I will always remember your birthday.
Arnav: Ae rascal. You remember that because we are born the same day and time.
All of them have a wine.

One day one businessman named Malhotra comes to Vasco looks for a space for commercial purpose to expand his business.
Malhotra: I want a place for office purpose.
Prakash: There are plenty of places here and you will get it easily because the real owner is not alive.

Prakash's and his men show him the place that happens to be Max's(Arnav) territory. the men come and throw the things of the tenants.

Tenant: Why are throwing away our things and breaking my house?
Men: the house is not yours just because you occupy it. Come sign here.
Max's friend Micheal sees the fight between Eagles and the scorpions and inform him about it.

Arnav/Max: Come, Micheal, let's go and resolve this issue.
Arnav and his men reach on time and defeat the scorpion men.
Arnav: I guess you have forgotten what I did to you last time. It was only because of pastor you got saved. From the time you villagers came here, the peace in Vasco got destroyed. I have warned you never enter in the Eagle territory. This portion is for the Christians and the other portion belongs to the Hindus. You can do whatever you want in your partition. Otherwise, I will break your leg and give it to you.
Prakash: and before we came you go guys were dancing at the ball right? Does Vasco belong to your dad?
Prakash's men laugh.
Arnav laughs. He said, "Why your mom didn't tell you or what?"
Arnav's gang began to laugh. The Eagles and the Scorpions began to fight till the police came and stopped them.
Police: What is happening here? Arrest these men.
Prakash: What did we do? It is only a friendly fight.
D'Costa: Yes, he is right.We told that we will drop them to their place in our bike. They wanted to go somewhere else. So we tossed in the form of this fight.
Police; Shutup. I think both the groups should be husband and wife. Sometimes you fight and sometimes you people love.
Everyone laughed.
Police caught Prakash's collar and said, 'you find it funny when I talk about marriage right?"
Pastor: Excuse me. These kids began to fight again?
Police: are they kids? These people are adults.
Pastor: They are young so they are always eager to show their strength.
He tells the boys, "Why do you all fight? You all can do something concrete with your energy rather than fighting like cats and dogs. Life is precious. Live like brothers."
The pastor requests the inspector and said, "Please spare them this time. they are ignorant and innocent. they won't do it again."
Police: Fine, this is the last time I'm leaving them. Next time, I won't spare them.
He then tells everyone to leave.
Pastor: Max, again you started fighting?
Max/Arnav: They started it again. They are attacking our people.
Pastor: Two wrongs does not make one right. Last time, you were late for the service. You should now be on time.
Arnav: Fine.
Next day is the service. Geet/Shirley come late for the service yet again.
Maan goes to Mumbai and comes back within a week. He meets Prakash.
Both hug.

Edited by katrinasalman - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! well written! superb song! Maan lost in Geet! Arnav teaches Tony a lesson! Maan is back fmr Mumbai! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
awesome update
loved it soo much

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