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Nisha0604 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Butterflies...

II turned to look at him exposing her back to the wall of mirrors lined with "artist bulbs" all around

The crisp billowing cotton saree was stiff as adamant Nivi at bedtime

She looked lovely he thought
Her hair in an almost undone braid-shower-knot at the base of her neck, clumps of long wispy curls escaping all day after having danced in water, dried in clumps all around her face
A large oval bindi adorned the center of her forehead.
She realized quickly of the view she was affording him, she pulled the pallu not so gently across her back, the crisp starched edge of the saree scoring her smooth back
She winced, groaning softly

They werent officially talking to each other
Sure he tok her to work yesterday.
He felt her back last night

"Umm" II ack him finally

He was leaning on the doorjamb. He proceeded to walk as if she had just said

"OH PLEASE COME RAVISH ME"

the strange fluttering of a million butterflies began deep down way down... way way down and climbed up her insides
The gooey feel of fudge slithered down her belly

She set her phone on the bath counter

"New saree?" he asked as if he spent his nights counting the hangers in the closet
She looked at him like she was coming up with an answer

"Nooo really old" she lied smugly

"how come you dont have a blouse?" he nailed her

AYYYO

OK FINE

"Because the lavender color fades quickly" she said sagely

"Ah" he nodded as if he bought her explanation

He was exactly a foot from her, in fact his flip flop clad, toe, nudged her bare ones

He gently twitched his toes, sending a "knock knock is anybody home?"

She pulled her toes back

REALLY?
WE HAVE A KID NOW
QUIT COMING ON TO ME LIKE I AM SOME STUPID FAWNING TEEN

He reached and felt her waist

BOOM!

Just like that, a warm sexy hand on cool shapely waist

AYYYO!!!!!

She almost gurgled in delight

But then she didnt arresting that unwise sound until it croaked and died in her throat
Bad idea
Since it caused him to assume
He was having no effect, and so he grew bolder

A long shudder and a even longer sigh.. caused him to stop the stroking, just in time before his thumb could encounter the bulging ripe curve encased in lace

She held his wrist not so surely, peeling away his palm

They locked gaze.

He bend down right side of her neck, she turned, obstructing him
She bend down to her left shoulder, her unpinned pallu sliding like a sheet of freshly milled paper, floating down on her belly
The fine butterfly pattern on the wispy caramel colored lingerie exposed giant patches of curves encased in gauze.
Gauze so fine he could see her blood vessels underneath

She freed her right hand which was gripping the edge of the white marble sink counter and pushed on his chest so he wouldnt crush the folds of her pallu
He brought his left hand out of his pocket surely and slowly, and grabbed her wrist stopping her

She stood here almost naked waist up.

"let go of my hand" she hissed breathlessly

"U let go of mine?" he reminded jiggling his right hand that was still imprisoned on her waist

She assessed the risk of doing that by first loosening her grip

He freed his right hand completely to use his index finger to trace every butterfly on her curve

She writhed, her mouth dry. Giving up to exhale and acknowledge the pleasure

She used her left hand to grip the counter. So she can ready for the onslaught

It came

The tip of his thumb and tip of her...

She counted three strokes... thats all... and then her brain was too numb to count

He let go of her right wrist, and gathered her with an arm around her waist. The searing heat from her body absorbed fully by his strong stiff form

"Will u stop?" she asked, her head flung across the crook of his arm her eyes dazed, as she tried to peer through them

"No II" he said, like he was refusing to pick up the paper mess across his office

OH OK FINE

GO AHEAD
I HAVE ALL NIGHT
MAKE SURE YOU PICK ME UP AND LAY ME ON MY BED WHEN U ARE DONE COZ IT DOESNT
FEEL LIKE I CAN MAKE IT THERE
MY LEGS HAVE TURNED INTO MUNIRKA PAATI'S (AKKA'S MOM IN LAW) TIRUNELVELI HALWA (wheat halwa)

AKKA

AYYYO
AKKKA
I HAVENT CALLED HER


SHITTT

His fingers were inside the lace...

"Vidu da" she squealed

He paused at her sudden energetic order

"Please" she ordered huskily

Her face now buried on his chest
"Please kanna" she said spontaneously thinking of Nivi

"No kanna" he said in perfect Tamil diction




moonwearer thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kandangi selai uduthi
pinnal mudichittu
udal Irram ularum munne
Kai pattri, idai sutri
Swasam orrumikka
Kannanum Kannammavum
oviyamai vaarthaigalil
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Posted: 8 years ago
"No kanna"
🤣 🤣
I cant control laughing!!!!
The most funny kanna moment!!!😆
ishruhi thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
When she turns more adamant,he will get his butterfly girls for help to mess with her!😉
Simmideepak thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you thank you thank you
Made my day finally "the kanna"
Thank you ab bus finger kange Ke kame ha

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Posted: 8 years ago
"New saree?" he asked as if he spent his nights counting the hangers in the closet

OMG! As if he spent his nights counting the hangers in her closet. Gawd!! This is so insanely funny 👏

Well don't know about hangers, he surely is in for a long one counting all the butterflies the ones patterned and the ones fluttering in her belly. And there are only millions and more for him to count.
Oh I also loved reading the 'Tirunelveli halwa ' version of legs turning to jelly . 😆 😳

Alrighty! it's fudge, butterflies and Halwa folding and slithering on her smoothly for now. So far so good.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ha ha
Just loved the kanna movement...
And how easily he said "NO KANNA "
😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wht a master stroke Nisha
Aur waise bhi I like every time he or she say kanna to each other
👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Are we getting a new update now? ??
My sunday begins on a very boring note!!
Please give us a refreshing update!!
I badly need one :(((
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Posted: 8 years ago
Gold, Silver & Cold

She was an hour late that evening going downstairs, flush and full bloom
She chose not to wear the saree afterall
He had crushed it beyond belief by the bath sink and later on his couch when he carried her

William's call from work interupted his sojourn through the garden

"Where is my bra?" she hissed agonized... afraid Dad was going to come up

He lounged back (unaware it was behind his back) "Not sure" he formed with his lips as he continued talking

She dragged her pallu from under his body and walked out

"Do u send sarees to Chennai for drycleaning?"

"Whoaa?" she asked dazed as he smoothed her tousled hair

"I see a price tag from RMKV" he tried to hide his chuckle unsuccesfully

She had lied it was an "olddd" saree

"None of ur business" she shrieked

"Probably" he agreed kissed her achingly
The week, two weeks of dodging each other, clawing each others eyes out had finally gotten to them
They feasted on each other

they didnt go all the way

His fingers and lips created havoc
He held her close as she exploded on the couch, patient and protective holding her throbbing form after 10s of minutes of tormenting
He felt her moist hot cheeks with the back of his fingers

Her eyes closed as she fought her way back from ecstasy
Low moans admonished him

He found her caressing the cleft on his chin and the dimple on his smooth cheek

"U are welcome" he laughed on her ear as if she was thanking him for shaving

"Lets talk II" he begged

"Fine... get off me Id rather go down" she dodged

JUST USE ME
JUST LET ME USE YOU
DONT COMPLICATE THINGS
WE WILL NEVER GET ALONG
ITS A FACT
I AM SHAMELESSLY ADMITTING I AM ATTRACTED TO YOU LIKE... I DONT EVEN KNOW WHAT ANALOGY TO USE... I AM FOGGED UP

AYYYO


I WILL FEEL ASHAMED FOR LOSING MY MIND I KNOW THAT
I AM WEAK ALRIGHT?
I HAVE ZERO WILL POWER

She groaned when her demons had done talking

He sighed and continued his onslaught

She wore a navy kurti over a yellow vine patterned pathani salwar
Made Amma instructed kheer, but a quick & easy condensed milk version with nuts, and rice
Didnt sing... too weak and tired to do it
"Where is my newest issue of Fast Co." he bit her chin
"I burned it" she said ferociously
"II" he begged
"Would also like to know what the inter bank lending rate is today?" she mocked him for being distracted while making love
"No just tell me how the European markets did today" he countered
As she began to thrash violently pushing him off...

HE PUSHES YOUR BUTTONS
HE KNOWS HOW TO DO IT

II clanked an empty cooker in the sink viciously, as feelings of shame overpowered her weak body

Ranjan and Nivi came down at 10:30

"Toongave mateya di nee?" (dont u ever sleep?)

"Beti kiski hai?" Ranjan mocked understanding II's Tamil

II nodded. "I shudnt be asking her, because she has no idea abt her bed time its my fault" Ii said gruffly

"Khaana lagayin puttar" he said yawning

"Dono kya kar rahe the?" she asked rocking Nivi as she patted her

"Isne kela khaaya, cheese, phir cracker... halla machaya, Elmo lagaya maine, dono ne dekha theatre mein" Ranjan explained

"Dad will Manya be home for dinner?" she asked politely

"Kara text usne?" he asked

Manya never texted II

It was surprising Ranjan didnt know that

"Umm.. pata nahi, mera phone oopar hai" II lied

"call mein hai janab?" he asking darting his eyes to the ceiling

NO...
HE IS NOT ON ANY STINKIN CALL
HE IS PROBABLY TAKING A NAP ON THE COUCH
RECUPERATING HIS ENERGY

"Pata nahi" she lied again

"Tu bahar se aa rahi hai?" Ranjan asked confused

AYYYO
NO
I WAS UPSTAIRS

"I wanted to go to the Moti Bagh temple, but nahi gayi" she admitted

"Samjh gaya, ghar pe navratri hai, par klesh hi klesh" he sighed

R&B came down just as Nivi began snoring steadily

He grabbed her off II's shoulder

"Khaana khaaya" Ranjan asked as he saw his son go up again

"Be right back" R&b said

They ate talking about Diwali bonuses for Excelsior employees

"Tan has handed gold and silver coins to his high performing employees" Ranjan said

R&B chewed on it thoughtfully

He shrugged

"I get lame gifts from KMPG" II declared


"Imad ne kaha I shud just pay 20% or 25% towards a high performer's new car" Ranjan said

"If they cant come up with the rest, what good is it?" R&B asked

Ranjan nodded

"Chache ne apne saale se gall kara, oda travel agency hai na... Susheel" Ranjan said aloud

II ate quietly

"Singapore trip da idea ditha see" he said

R7B didnt respond or ack

"Roj uska daftar aana jaana haiga, uski gall nahi mana?" he asked R&B a lil upset

"Sure" go right ahead R&B nodded

"Mujhe garantee do aap, jab India rahogey to hafte mein do din Excelsior nu dogey" he challenged

AYYYO
NOT AGAIN

"Ive gone there every day this week" R&B argued

She got up to serve kheer.

"I am full I can have a spoon of urs" R&B said carelessly when she placed a bowl before him

He put his bowl away, and took hers and ate three spoons

"Handa Motors is doing a raffle of a car with Sony TV" Ranjan said unhappily about his rival

"Huh" R&B grunted

"Chache ne kaha marketing firm di koi lode nahi, ab Hande ne car ka promotion announce kara" Ranjan said sadly

"U either dismiss his ideas or approve of them" "dinner contemplation of failed bids to increase revenue is not helping Excelsior"
"If u find it hard to do I can do it for u" R&B was irritated at his Dad's inability to be firm with his brother

Ranjan lowered his head

II grabbed her kheer bowl off R&B's plate to punish him

"Whatt?" R&B grunted "Do u want to lie to him so he can save his pride?" he mocked his wife

"Dont be rotten" she hissed

"I cant advise if it just bounces off walls and strike me back" R&B declared egotistically

"Gudiya" Ranjan protested feebly

"Do u have a better plan?" he challenged his wife

Umm" II dragged her feet

"Exactly" R&B smiled cynically

II poured out his kheer into her bowl and tasted quietly

Whenever she set her spoon down he took a spoonful for himself

"U shud do a handful of trip giveaways for mechanics and do gold coins for drivers and such" Ii said

Ranjan smiled pleased

"Tu?" Ranjan asked his son

He shrugged "Umm.. yeah.. sure" he nodded agreeably

"He will text u his true opinion later Dad" II took a jab

"Rabba" Ranjan groaned

"Sooner or later u will have to slow down" II spoke softly

"Some day I want to beta" Ranjan nodded weakly "Going there keeps me busy"

There was a tense silence for a while

"Dad... I want to invite a few women next week for an evening" II said

Ranjan was too preoccupied in thought to realize his DIL was asking for permission to host

"Sitaraman nu kahin..." he nodded

"Its OK?" she asked

R&B's face was expressionless... he was pissed at the formality but thats something he wud address in private later
He just wanted to see if Ranjan was going to blow up

"Kee gall kar dee beta" Ranjan was shocked

"Amma said... I mean Amma did not ask me to ask for permission" II lied hotly

That lil cue was enough for R&B he realized it was Mrs Iyer's idea

"Amma's friends" II squirmed

"Teen saal ho jaayenge," Ranjan sighed in despair that II still didnt think she belonged

"Dad... its one whole evening I just wanted to make sure umm it was not a bother" she cudnt come up with a smooth defense

They heard footsteps...

Manya walked in with Sam & Lasya in tow

"Ghoor mat, I am staying the night" Sam said smiling weakly

Ranjan was startled

"Teri karaamat hai?" he asked Manya furiously, as to why his daughter would show up unannounced on a Fri night

"She called me I just went to give her a ride" Manya said deeply hurt

"Tan kithey?" Ranjan enquired

Lasya went to R&B
It was past 11:30

"He is in Pune for two days" Sam muttered "I missed u guys, aur mujhe cold hua hai" Same fake sniffled

"Huh" R&B grunted "and thats totally not a lie" he nodded cynically not believing her.




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