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Posted: 8 years ago
One hour in the afternoon isnt certainly going to be enough to catch up on all that they hv missed these last years but just goes on to show how certain bonds are timeless and the bonding priceless!!!!. PERFECT!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Last year on this day the stork began to hover the sky

A dainty doll to deliver to an excited family

II went into labour and he was delirious when the angel arrived

It was love at first sight and he refused to budge from her side

Good fortune seemed to knock at their door

The chatter and laughter was sure to flow

A face off about where she with the baby should go

His home or her parents the din did grow

The angel and her doting dad measured the boutique suite

As long as they lingered there

A peep into the future Nisha regularly serves

A reverie of the day she arrived and the manner is what i mull over now.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Svm, you actually live this tale.

Nivi was born exactly a year back. I guess it was April / May in sosy land but date was 24th January.

Edited by PriteeMisra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Pritee i so love the tale
Edited by moonwearer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
After watching three CUTEST puppies being rescued from the Italian avalanche I couldnt control myself

I was reminded of James & Chuck

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Murukku Madness


II was prepping to head out to watch the twins perform at their school

Sahana slept in a makeshift playpen in the kitchen
II fried the last batch of murukku in oil

Her hair tied in a high knot, her pallu tucked safely on her waist

One of the twins, Vedu sat under the kitchen dining table trying to read a book

Both had gotten hair cuts this morning.
Nivi was as usual upstairs

Sid came down crying

"Amma mimika SUT the doh" he had a blood curdling scream accompany his complaint

Sahana sat up in her playpen and rubbed her eyes

The curls falling all over her face

The puppies that were snoozing by her playpen barked and circled her playpen, panting, urging her to get out

The boys were no fun today, Ved was sniffling with a cold coming on

Sid was generally crabby

II turned her stove to simmer down and ran out to the grand stair case

"Who opened the gate?" She was terrified

Sid had rolled off the back kitchen spiral staircase, atleast 8 steps two weeks ago

"Ammmaaa Mimika SUT THE DOH" he shouted

"Ondee ma... shhh shhh" she cradled the fat boy in her arms, sliding the custom gate open

Sahana was a devil, she screamed from her playpen, standing up, the dogs went on their hind legs and kissed her face

"Oh we love u so much. Can u get out? Do u want us to chew the nylon and rescue u from the human?"

Sahana became distracted and started playing with them

Sneezed as the dogs' whiskers tickled her nose

"Niveee" Ii shouted

R&B and Nivi peeked from their floors

Nivi much later than her dad, only after II screamed her name 5 times

"Nee gate tarandu poteya?" (did u leave the child gate unlocked on top of the stairs?" II was furious


"He put his hand imprint all over my walls, I am not BABY Amma" she was horrified

"Keezha vaa nee first" II ordered

She cud hear Nivi's "Tchhh" and the look she gave her Dad

"Can u get me out of this? Ur wife is having a meltdown"

"Did u leave the gate open Nivi?" he asked grimly

"Sheesh" Nivi mocked

"Go down please" he said softly

James: I managed to tear a hole here"
He scampered around a worn side of the playpen

Sahana stuck her leg out and it STUCK

Chuck :Want me to tip this over? Huh? Huh?" Huh? I cud do it... I wud, but u got to promise us u wont pick us up by our ear "

James "Or TAIL or TAIL..


"Chuck: Yep!

Sahana was trying to yank her foot out, and shouted angrily

Vedu crawled like a baby and went near the playpen and lay on his belly, face held in his palms, legs dancing back and forth watched the spectacle of the dogs tearing up the play pen

The dogs pushed it along with Sahana the playpen slowly began to move

"I CAM HOD IT" (I can hold it) he promised the dogs and sister

"DAYDOO.. DAYDOO" Sahana cooed for Vedu flailing her arms hoping he will pick her up

"Amma baby is THUCK... Amma baby is THUCK" he said firmly

Got up and went to the kitchen and started opening all teh drawers

Nivi came down feeling the end of her looong braid

"He fell last week di" Ii was pleading with her oldest

Sid whimpered and lay on her shoulder

"Amma HUNDRED times he knocked on my door"

"where is thatha?" II asked worried abt Ranjan

"He went to sleep, he said I shud watch him" Nivi was whining

"Nivi ENOUGH" II warned

"He banged my door, put handprints all over, avana onnume solla mateya?" (the boy doesnt get any scolding?) Nivi began to cry

"Hes NOT EVEN 5" II sat down on the second step, and held Nivi's hand "Come sit"

"U dont like me any more, I get so much beat up Amma" she sniffled

"U have three lil babies raja" II begged

R&B was stepping down

"II hand me Sid" he offered

Sid went to him "I mant to go to Dadooo" he said

"Hes taking a nap, want to go up with me?" he offered

"Two days ago, he pulled the power cord on my phone so bad, the pin got bent, its mine and he broke it" Nivi cried

"Listen" II begged

"They want everything thats mine MY EMAIL MY TEXTS MY PHONE MY LIP GLOSS" Nivi was merciless

"Nivi" R&B was leaning on the rail

"I weared Mimika wipthick" Sid supplied unnecessary info

"Paaru, he again wore the caramel tasting one" "Ewww I can never wear it again, Manya athai sent it ONLY for ME" Nivi was sobbing

"Nivi, come lets go up" R&B offered

"NOT when u are carrying THAT" Nivi said upset

R&B froze...

Nivi looked apologetic and afraid

"Mimika DUST needs a BWAKE" Sid explained

Something clattered in the kitchen

II inhaled "Ayyo I burned the last batch of murukku" she panicked

"Why cant we get it from the store II" R&B panicked afraid there was burning oil and two of his rowdies loose some where in the vicinity

II sprinted followed by a Sid carrying R&B

"I wanted to eat" "Poruma.?" II was upset

"Ask someone to make it for u" he begged angrily

"VEDANTTT" II shouted, he held a butter knife in his hand

II got it off his hand

The dogs and Sahana were eating, there were crumbs all over the playpen

"What happened to her leg?" R&b asked

"Ayyoyo I dont know she woke up and screamed" Ii informed

"Amma bay THUCK... I COT baby's leg" Ved said all knowingly

"Ada Paavi, ada kudu da" (Gimme the knife) II grabbed and slammed the drawer shut enabling the child lock on all

R&B rescued the lil monster
They all sat on the kitchen floor... II brought them the jaggery syrup dipped, and plain salted ones

The dogs ate Sahana's and II dragged their bowls of food from the wall by the backyard, sliding glass doors, James pushed his bowl towards Sahana in an attempt to share

"U humans I tell u. Its a consipracy, u feed us this chalky shit and eat fried snacks?" Chuck barked

"Va" Nivi reached for Vedu smiling quietly

Vedu was elated, he sat on her godee

"They love u angel" R&B kissed teh top of Nivi's head

"I love them too daddy, but they cant come into my room"

R&B chuckled
"NO BOYS" Nivi said primly

"Amen!" R&B nodded happily

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Posted: 8 years ago
I wonder whats got me smiling is it the antics of the babies and dogs or the announcement by the teen angel or the Dude's relief at boys being barred.
Exactly a year ago on a Sunday morning i read the update announcing the angel's arrival. Vikas messaged me to alert her arrival...today the teen with her preferences makes me smile...
Lovely update Nisha
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks Vidya
I can actually picture this family in my head. They do and say things how ever I write about them. They are scarily real

Imperfect yet cute
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nisha the power of an effective piece of writing is to almost touch and feel the characters and visualise the scene unfolding before ones eyes and that the power with which you write and make the characteristic so we can relate to.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its really scary but tooo cute to handle too!🤣 ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
"Amma baby is THUCK... Amma baby is THUCK" he said firmly


"I weared Mimika wipthick" Sid supplied unnecessary info

This stole my heart!❤️

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