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Posted: 8 years ago
Congratulations Nisha. Heart felt good wishes to u. Ds d 1st tym I'm posting in ds forum. I must say I had never came across such an amazing writer coz d author should b in a way such dey should make d characters so alive dt we all r in illusion dt in sum part of world RnB n II n all other characters do exist. Hatts off 👏fr making d characters so lively n sosy became daily dose of life. Im really in short of words to glorify u. I can juss say I never enjoyed any writing to ds extent. Loads of love n hugs to u n plz continue ds story as I already mentioned sosy is part of my life.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Looks like our author sahiba is busy in her new yer celebrations...
Enjoy nisha we r waiting here only...

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Posted: 8 years ago
13 vs Thirteen
"I am not sure what he expects Nivi to be doing" R&B asked scathingly

"Hes old and he is old fashioned, well hes not old fashioned he just expects Nivi to participate" II mumbled loading the two industrial size dishwashers
He rinsed off the dirty dishes and stacked them on one side

"Nice attempt at trying to defend him" R&B said bluntly

The family had eaten in the formal dining room with fine (er) china and silver (for Amma Appa), Sam and Tan had arrived for dinner Lasya and Nivi giggled and played around with food not eating much running up the stairs giggling breathlessly

The boys were eager to know what the girls were talking about. The girls were in their own world
Lasya 15+, her braces had come off recently, she was not very tall, had Sam's round face and dimpled chin like her Mamaji
Short wavy hair dyed purple or orange or pink
Today it was dyed green in places
She wore sweats and an old tee
Nivi wore jeans and a baggy tee

They couldnt stop looking at the phone all through dinner

II had rules

NO PHONE at dinner
But today was a exception since Nivi had cramps

"Amma too rich" "Amma too oily" "Amma the naan is under cooked"
The coal fired angeethi in the back yard was spectacular

But Nivi was a "teen" now
Life was full of drama

The boys watched their sister giggle with Lasya longingly

Sahana was in a corner being "handled" by Jenny

Appa and R&B did not exchange a word

Tan, Amma Sam and Ranjan chatted cheerfully

"Did u want me to send a turkey sandwich upstairs?" II asked kindly

"Umm.. no.. I had a consultant over for lunch and Mahavir did a take out from House of Ming at Taj Mahal" he said quietly

"Appa you want more salad?" II asked

"You have made so much kannappa I cant eat so much" Appa cooed

"Nobody gets together any more. I go to Sam's to eat and never invite her"

"She is afraid I will steal her kids uncle" Sam giggled

"No I am not" II squirmed hot and bothered

She was extremely possessive of them, it was a popular joke in Chanakyapuri

"Uncle jab yeh raat ko soye tab iske kaan mein jaakar Siddu Vedu kehkar dekhen" Sam laughed

Appa did not enjoy that comment

First his grand daughter was being a brat second his daughter was being made fun of

"Aap Sahana kehkar dekhen main mudkar doosre side so jaaoongi" II lied

The moment her name was said

She ran across the giant formal dining room with the grand staircases going through them
The girls got up with a secretive smile

"Hey, arent u going to finish?" R&B asked them

"Daddeee we are going up to watch videos" Nivi giggled

"Amma is OK with that?" he asked

"Amma said it was fine" Nivi claimed

II looked piercingly at her daughter "Mac n cheese venum nu kettey I made it" (u asked for it)

"Amma I promise I will eat later, I am not hungry" she claimed

"Athey can Lasya stay tonight? pleezpleez pleez?" she begged

"Usko SCHOOL hai" Sam said loudly

"Inko bhi hai aaj chhutthi lee hai kal shaayad hi" II mumbled

"Amma cam me go to Sam athey's?" the boys hatched a quick plan

The dogs' ears cocked up

"Seriously? we havent been to Shanti Niketan in FOREVER dude" Chuck yelped

"Mo you may not" II mimicked

"II" R&B bristled

"I am kidding... I am not mocking them" she said her eyes dancing

"Daddeee" they petitioned

"You guys both have school

"Nandu na comed" Siddu said
Lasya had lied to them earlier

"On velaya dee?" II hollered after Lasya

"Mami I told them HE COULD be coming" she said primly hiding her fib

"Dont do that raja, they are still babies" II was disappointed

The girls were of a different league when they were together

They were some times like mean girls

"Ammaaa" Sid dropped his napkin his spoon and eventually his water tumbler

"Paavam dee, give them to me I will feed them"

"No ma... they are over 5+ the school says I shouldnt even been asking them to eat" II said sadly
"Paavam di, what school is that" Amma did SMH

"Nee KV poney what went wrong?" Appa demanded "Send them also to KV no" Appa nodded happy with his diktat

"Appa they were a terror at home" II said glumly

"I can see that I say, Mr Ranjan my daughter was not so belligerent" Appa said smugly

"They must take after me then" R&B said coolly

"Uncle isne bahut sataya hai Ma aur Dad ko" Tan supplied

"Yes yes... I know that, 10? 12 years? no 14 years ago? also he was like that only" Appa said gleefully

"Lekin Uncle bahut seedha hai mera bhai" Sam was proud

"Sure" muttered II

Sahana now perched in Amma's lap and ate mangoes hungrily

The boys had 90% of their dinners still on their plate

Mavvy knew what to do

He brought out a new plate of steaming baby naans and paneer II shifted to the chaise lounge chairs along the wall and started to feed them

"This school is double work and so much waste of food" Ranjan muttered

"All kids these days no respect for food" Appa joined

"They eat when they get hungry" R&B said

"They also help the mother when they want" Appa reminded R&B of Nivi's blatant disregard of his request

"Shes 13 Mr Iyer" R&B said

"thirteen" Appa said loudly

Amma stopped her convo with Tan and looked at Appa in shock



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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you for the sweet anniversary wishes you guys
I feel like its been a decade of knowing you all
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Thank you for the sweet anniversary wishes you guys

I feel like its been a decade of knowing you all



Same here nisha
Thanks to you we all hav a place which according to all is an illusion or imaginary world but wht it means to us only we can understand
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was an amazing update with lots of depth in it
Wether it was of teen talk and behavior or how elders see it
Or the difference of age between siblings and how does it effects their inner matters
Be it generation gap and a mothers possesiveness

I just love it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wishing everyone here a Happy Prosperpous and a Peaceful New Year May all our wishes come true 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
Happy New Year my lovlies!! Hoping this year beings all that is great and good for you and your loved ones. Stay blessed!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Happy new year to all of you...
May this new year bring lots of happiness and peace to all of you
Enjoy... 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Happy Newyear everyone🥳
Have a blast..

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