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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: i_am_PRASANNA

just superb dear...plot is so good...twist upon twist...1st Roli denied,then Sid denied,Roli loved him,but he stood away,then Roli proved herself n now both became 1 finally...n 1 more superb thing is they're getting married!!...now it's just happiness with them...beautiful love story...


Prasu.. did you heard someone tried to make Elephant while end up making monkey..

This FF is like that only...

Actually sorry to say.. it was your suggest concept which i thought of giving & started the FF..

But this FF took it to different dimension & the basic concept which you gave is completely lost...

So elephant become monkey... 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
awww roli got angry on friends comments & sid just smiling waiting for next eagerly update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: banuprasa


Prasu.. did you heard someone tried to make Elephant while end up making monkey..

This FF is like that only...

Actually sorry to say.. it was your suggest concept which i thought of giving & started the FF..

But this FF took it to different dimension & the basic concept which you gave is completely lost...

So elephant become monkey... 😆


no no dear...i liked it a lot infact...u really did fab job in making it so grand from a simple line...every twist is really unexpected n i'm very much happy with ur creation
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww beautiful Roli got angry Sid just smiled waiting for their marriage
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Posted: 8 years ago
Y sid not tell the truth and also stopped roli to tell eagerly waiting for nxt banu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Y sid not tell the truth and also stopped roli to tell eagerly waiting for nxt banu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: banuprasa



Prasu.. did you heard someone tried to make Elephant while end up making monkey..

This FF is like that only...

Actually sorry to say.. it was your suggest concept which i thought of giving & started the FF..

But this FF took it to different dimension & the basic concept which you gave is completely lost...

So elephant become monkey...😆

he he 😆 what was the elephant di I mean concept that you made monkey 😉
Edited by himani_rosid - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 43

Siddhant excused all the friends and went out of the class towards Roli...

She was standing near the tree with angry filled face...

Siddhant went near her...

Siddhant: Roli.. what happened???

Roli: What is this Siddhant...

Siddhant: What???

Roli: What is the need to hide the truth to them???

Siddhant; Why should we tell the truth now???

Roli: because.. did you saw how they talk.. they are asking you being driver how you getting married to her.. this.. that... i cant hear all these...

Siddhant: Roli.. tell me.. is it not true you loved me as a driver... did you love only because i am the owner of the company...

Roli; Not that siddhant...

Siddhant; Then what they asked is right only or not... i made you love me when i was driver only right.. thats what they asked.. moreover they are asking being ignorant about the truth.. why should we take it serious and tell them everything.. let me be your driver and we are getting married.. i dont want to disclose that i am rich to anyone.. hope you understand...

Roli turned towards Siddhant...

Roli; Siddhant.. i dont know why you want to hide the truth.. let everyone know...

Siddhant; Then the friendship which i am having with them will be lost Roli.. They are close to me thinking me as their level or lower than them and moving closely.. if they know i am rich.. then they will start staying away from me.. which i dont want to happen...

Roli; You are strange Siddhant...

Siddhant; There is nothing strange Roli.. i know how i was all these days with the rich.. thats why i am understanding how they will react if they come to know the truth.. infact the servants in our house you just see.. they wont move that close to me even after our marriage thought not knowing about the truth.. did they ever moved close to you... like they do with me...

Roli: No.. even they call me mam when i was as servant for 2 days...

Siddhant; Exactly.. i dont want that to happen.. i want to be one among them.. so let it be...

Roli; I cant win you in argument Siddhant...

Siddhant; This is not argument Roli.. just my point of view...

Roli; Ok ok.. enough.. i am hungry... you will fill my stomach with talk or what...

Siddhnat laughed...

Siddhant; Ok come.. lets go...

Roli & Siddhant went to canteen...



Evening...

Roli & Siddhant returned home...

Jamanlal & Meena were already in the hall...

When Roli & Siddhant were about to go to their room...

Jamanlal: You both please be here...

Jamanlal called all the servants to the hall...

All gathered in few minutes...

Jamanlal distributed the invitation to all of them...

Jamanlal; I am glad to tell you all Roli marriage is arranged in next week...

Servants: Oh.. Congrats...

Jamanlal: And boy is our Siddhant only...

All were surrpised..

They looked at each other...

Roli & Siddhant looked at each other...

Jamanlal: Marriage is going to happen in this house only & wish you all participate & cooperate to make the function grand.. the food should be so tasty.. the house should be so nicely decorated... All arrangements should be very nice...

All agreed...

Then they went back to their work...

As Siddhant expected...

Talks were happening between servants that Siddhant moved closely with ROli and made her love him... Also to be with him only Roli was together with servants... Now knowing all those her parents are getting them married...

Roli as well as Siddhant heard that when they were walking outside in the evening...

Roli looked at Siddhant...

While Siddhant expressed to just stay quiet...


Edited by banuprasa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: himani_rosid

he he 😆 what was the elephant di I mean concept that you made monkey 😉


That i will tell you later... 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi friends,
happy that you all enjoying this ff...

Further updates about marriage & further will give tomorrow...

Good night...

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