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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 45

Siddhant reached hospital & took her in his arms...

He rushed inside...

Siddhant; Doctor.. Doctor...

Hospital staff rushed towards him and directed towards the emergency...

Siddhant took her to emergency & dropped in the bed for treatment...

Doctor rushed knowing about he emergency case...

Doctor: OMG.. how this happened...

Siddhant; Some chemical spit on her doctor...

Doctor:Oh.. just wait outside.. i will check her...

Doctor also called the specialist for this and continued his first aid...

Siddhant came out and called Jamanlal and told about the happening...

In few minutes.. special doctor reached the hospital and went to check Roli...

While Jamanlal & meena with tears reached hospital too...

Jamanlal: Siddhant.. what happened to Roli..

Siddhant explained whatever happened... with tears...

Jamanlal: What doctor said...

Siddhant; Special doctor has come she is getting treated...

Jamanlal: OMG.. why this is happening to my daughter... that too when your marriage is just in couple of days...

Siddhant; Uncle.. now Roli is more important uncle... i wish she recover from this...

The time was moving while Siddhant was walking restless here & there...

Jamanlal & meena were sitting on the chair outside the room with tears...

Treatment & its required tests were going on inside...

Siddhant prayed to God...

Siddhant; Oh God.. till day... though i suffered since childhood.. i never asked you for anything.. now nothing should happen to Roli.. please bless her.. please...

In some time...

Doctor came out...

Doctor: Please come to cabin for discussion...

All the 3 rushed behind doctor to his cabin...

Doctor: All the required tests taken.. even you all know special doctor too came for this...

Siddhant; Yes doctor...

Doctor: Its very fortunate that the chemical was not so concentrated...

Siddhant; Thank God...

Doctor: Still.. as it is acid it hurt the skin badly... on her face.. shoulder... hand... even legs...

Siddhant: OMG... what to do now doctor...

Doctor: Specialist opinion is the spoiled skin will be peel off slowly and new skin will be formed...

Siddhant: Then there is no problem right doctor...

Doctor: Yes.. if the new skin formed.. if not... then we need to go with plastic surgery...

Siddhant; Ok...

Doctor: But its not something which will happen in a day or two...

Siddhant; Then...

Doctor: Atleast it will take 1 to 2 months for the old skin to peel itself and then after that atleast 1 month we need to observe whether new skin starts forming... then only we can decide...

Siddhant looked at Jamanlal who was sitting speechless...

Siddhant: Its ok doctor... Roli is safe right..

Doctor; Yes she is safe.. nothing dangerous to her life.. only physically she got hurt...

Siddhant; its ok doctor... she is safe... that is more important...

Jamanlal: But Siddhant... what about your marriage...

Doctor: marriage!!!

Jamanlal: Yes.. this week end was their marriage... tomorrow mehendi...

Doctor: Sorry.. it will take atleast 10 more days for her to come out of the pain created by the burn..

Jamanlal started crying...

Siddhant hold his shoulder...

Siddhant'; Uncle.. you should not break like this Uncle.. you should be our moral support... no worry about marriage... we can arrange after Roli fully recover from this...

Siddhant consol her parents & bring them out of the doctor cabin...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi dears,
is the story line today reminding you about some movie...

yes.. its vivaah... my friend asked me to write on that film...

And i thought why not include it in this FF itself... and here it is...

Yes its emotional track... but hope you all likes...
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Posted: 8 years ago
oh,don't know abt that movie...but it's superb here dear...poor Roli...what'll b her reaction now?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome love it.. Can't wait.. Waiting for roli recovery
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 46

Roli was shifted to separate room...

She was kept under net like which is kept for burn cases...

Jamnalal & Meena with Siddhant went inside the room...

Jamanlal & meena were unable to control them and started crying badly seeing Roli...

Siddhant too got tears which started scrolling from his eyes...

But when he realised her parents are crying badly..

He hold their hands and bring them out...

Siddhant; Uncle.. Aunty.. if you both cry like this.. then how Roli will handle this...

Jamanlal; Siddhant.. you saw how our Roli is...

Siddhant; Yes uncle...

His throat blocked & he was not getting further words.. only tears were coming out...

Siddhant: I know... how hurting it is... but more than pain we are getting on seeing that.. i am thinking about how Roli is bearing the pain.. how Roli can face this truth...

Jamanlal: Yes Siddhant... she cant bear it.. she cant...

Meena; How beauty conscious she is.. now how she will feel looking her like this...

Siddhant: Uncle.. Aunty.. please hear.. its known that she is hurt and she is going to come through very difficult phase now... its paining.. very paining.. but its not time for us to cry for this.. instead we should become her strength.. we should be her supporting system... then only she can cross this... please understand...

Jamanlal; How can we Siddhant...

Siddhant: We need to Uncle.. i will suggest.. you both go home.. relax yourself and come later... i will take care of her.. please.. i am not trying to push you out.. but i dont want Roli to see you both in tears like this...

Jamanlal; How you will handle beta...

Siddhant; I need to Uncle.. its all for my Roli.. i will do it...

He wipe his tears...

Siddhant; I will handle uncle.. you both go home.. collect courage to face and fight this phase and come back as support to Roli.. please...

Jamanlal & Meena went home...

Siddhant returned to the room...

He sat in the chair kept beside the bed...

Siddhant though told her parents... was only finding difficult to face her when he practically look at her...

The tears were coming out of his eyes without hearing his words...

But no... he consol himself... he collected courage...

He cant cry... He cant weaken his Roli further...

Now Roli is sleeping with the effect of medicine...

With its effect.. she wont feel pain too...

But how long.. she will be waking up in few minutes...

Then the burning start everywhere...

Siddhant prayed to God to give her courage to face it...

In a while...

Slowly... Roli started murmuring...

Roli; aaahhh... aaahhh...

Its the voice of pain...

Thoough her eyes were closed... the mouth was uttering the voice of pain...

Siddhant felt very bad seeing her condition in pain...

He was looking at her face whether she is waking up...

Roli slowly wake up and opened her eyes...

Siddhant; Roli...

Roli tried to look at herself...

Siddhant; Roli... relax.. dont move.. nothing.. just relax.. ok...

Roli; Siddhant.. what happened to me.. why my body is burning like hell...

Siddhant; Nothing Roli.. you will be alright soon...

Roli: what nothing Siddhant.. i know Veeru pour something on me...

Siddhant; Yes he did.. good that it was not too dangerous.. so doctor applied ointment... you will be alright soon...

Siddhant tried to consol her...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 47

Roli looked at Siddhant...

Roli: Siddhant... you are telling me i will become alright.. that too soon...

Siddhant; yes Roli.. you will become alright...

Roli: Siddhant... you know how my body is burning... my face.. my shoulder.. my hand.. my leg... everywhere..

Siddhant: Roli.. as you just got injured today.. its like that.. slowly you will become alright.. trust me...

Roli: Siddhant.. answer me.. why i am kept inside this net...

Siddhant; Roli.. its because.. i told right.. ointment is applied... so to cover you without touching your body.. this is kept.. nothing else.. now just relax & close your eyes...

Roli: I am unable to Siddhant.. its burning...

Siddhant got tears... which came out slowly without hearing his words...

Siddhant; Roli...

He was not getting further words & his throat was blocked...

Roli: Siddhant.. you are telling me nothing.. then why this tears...

Siddhant: Nothing Roli.. as you said its burning.. i got tears...

Roli: Siddhant.. i cant see you in tears...

Siddhant; I too cant see you in pain Roli.. wish i can take your pain...

He got more tears and he lean on the bed and started crying...

Roli: Siddhant.. is anything wrong Siddhant.. why are you crying like this...

Siddhant realised what he did & swiftly wipe his tears...

Siddhant: No Roli.. nothing is wrong.. as i said.. just got tears as you told its burning...

Roli: Ok.. but i wont give the pain to you...

Siddhant: Why it is so...

Roli: Siddhant.. i can bear this pain.. but cant see you in pain...

Siddhant: i know Roli... i know...

He controlled him further...

Siddhant: Now.. i am telling you right... just close your eyes and sleep.. will you...

Roli: Yes i will.. i wont go against my Siddhant words...

Roli closed her eyes...

Siddhant just prayed to God to give courage to Roli to bear this and courage to him to handle her...

Roli though closed her eyes.. the burning was giving her the taste of hell...

Roli: aaahhh.. aaahhh...

She was continuously murmuring...

Siddhant felt bad seeing her pain...

But was helpless in getting rid of it...

After pushing the horrible night...

Roli parents came to hospital in the morning...

Jamanlal: Siddhant... how is Roli now...

Roli opened her eyes on hearing her father voice...

Roli: Pappa...

Meena: Roli.. how are you feeling now...

Roli: Mom.. its burning badly mom.. but Siddhant telling nothing and it will be alright..

Jamnalal & Meena looked at Siddhant...

Siddhant: Uncle & Aunty.. you both tell her.. she is not believing.. she is going to get alright soon right...

Jamanlal & Meena nod their head as acceptance...

Roli: Then why it is burning like this...

Siddhant: Roli.. i told right... even if we get cut in the finger.. it will be paining for 2 days.. am i right...

Roli: Thats right...

Siddhant; Its the same.. you will be alright soon...

Roli; Is it pappa...

Jamanlal: Yes Roli.. you will be alright soon...

Roli: Then why all are having tears...

Siddhant; No...no one is having tears.. am i right uncle.. am i right aunty...

Jamnalal: yes Roli.. we are ok.. just relax..

Meena: Yes Roli.. nothing to worry. just relax..

Roli smiled...

Siddhant; Good.. Roli smiled... i have been telling this only since yesterday.. but only now she is getting smile...

Jamanlal: Siddhant beta.. we will be with Roli.. you go and fresh up yourself...

Siddhant; Yes uncle...

Siddhant went out signalling to Jamanlal to come...

Jamanlal signalled Meena to be with Roli and went out with Siddhant...

Siddhant: Uncle.. just maintain the same... i will go to college and see the position... then come to hospital...

Jamnalal; Ok.. but how long Siddhant.. wont she see her own hand or shoulder...

Siddhant: I know Uncle.. right now she is unable to as it is covered by net.. let it be.. i will come back soon.. lets handle it...

Siddhant rushed out from hospital towards house...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Dears,
Do give your valuable feedback about the current story line...

Further updates tomorrow...

Good night... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry for late reply di... I'm just loving it. Its very heart touching di...
Edited by haldankarpreeti - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome love it can't wait feeling bad for rosid... Let's how roli will take truth
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Posted: 8 years ago
awww di I told you to write ff on this concept but u included it in this ff & changed the fire one into acid the track turned into emotional one loved it di now will see how sid becomes roli's strength & help her cope up with this situation u made me cry di super duper awesome love u di waiting for next eagerly update soon

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