IPKKND OS NEW: Dinner with Mr and Mrs Raizada 15th november 2016

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: jagrutid

suppose it was a little different to the kind of thing i normally write but not to far off the mark - glad you enjoyed it..

it sure is a little diff... arnav here is a little different... he is free n expressive abt little thgs he wants frm khushi...
khushi too is a little less shy ...

n yet they hv the same level of understanding as they always do in ur stories :) ... whn they dont really hv to say much to knw abt the other ... love tht .. :) :)

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

That was awesome
Loved it totally
A perfect one interms of explaining that every relation has a different essence that's makes it beautiful
U know your one shot sweet nothings is one of my favourites and I just think I got another favourite
Looking forward to more one shots 😊

Edited by littlemissstar - 8 years ago

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: littlemissstar
That was awesome
Loved it totally
A perfect one interms of explaining that every relation has a different essence that's makes it beautiful
U know your one shot sweet nothings is one of my favourites and I just think I got another favourite
Looking forward to more one shots 😊

Because you mentioned sweet nothings I just literally had a quick read of it because it feels like such a long time now. I recall that I wasn't really ever 100% about the end of that os. The bit at the poolside but I'm glad you like this equally as much.

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: jagrutid

Because you mentioned sweet nothings I just literally had a quick read of it because it feels like such a long time now. I recall that I wasn't really ever 100% about the end of that os. The bit at the poolside but I'm glad you like this equally as much.

Ohh okay ..But that had a perfect end
Arnav trying to explain in his Asr way..that's what I enjoyed most
I hope you write more one shots like sweet nothings and this one ..capturing the daily lives of arshi 😊

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Nice contrast between the two pairs. Love in its different forms.

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: littlemissstar

Ohh okay ..But that had a perfect end
Arnav trying to explain in his Asr way..that's what I enjoyed most
I hope you write more one shots like sweet nothings and this one ..capturing the daily lives of arshi 😊

I want to write more one shots yes and deedar was my last attempt before this one which i think in terms of one shots i am post proud of up until now .. i will defo keep writing these and i think after expecations and mr and mrs raizada in the making is over i will be sticking to just one shots ..