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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Oh poor khushi...now aman and sheetal have successfully escaped from their nosy family...what will happen to arshi...

will they be able to get some time for each other...

can't wait to find out more...

really, this is such an intriguing story...

thank u for mail...

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Awesome update Charity!! Poor Arshi this is so funny cannot wait for next update!!!!

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Read 3rd and 4th chapters...I did not expect that their honeymoon would be cancelled due to work reasons...poor them...at least payal was practical enough to make some timetable...initially I thought about food but when she said about sleeping arrangements I was shocked but felt she was practical...Khushi was extremely happy that 2 people are out of the house but 3 are in...there is so much one can endure...It is hilarious to read but the problems are real...Beautiful presentation of current middle class family system...

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#154

The Hassles of a poor suffering Family with restricted options!!!!

Loving this story!!!!

Superb Work!!!!!

Especially those snippets at the end!!!

Take Care!!!!

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Sandya

@Ssanjinika

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#155

What is the lover-boy doing? Get a room dude! I am sure you can dream up an excuse for one weekend. Frustrated biwi is never ever going to let you forget this ever!😉

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#156

The entire update is extremely funny. So, not only Sheetal & aman are happy in escaping the house, the other family members were equally happy because of the same reason. May be , aakash didn't voice any opinion, because, he was hoping , what if he too can escape from this situation.

So, Anjali is not the over pampered girl over here & she gets her occasional doze of kicking out from her home by her parents.

Kids are not as innocent as we think themselves to be. They hear , sees & absorbs every words & actions around them while pretending to be reading or playing & will use those same words against you with guarantee at appropriate places while acting all innocent. Aarav is no different.

The way he remembered only the selective words , it is going to bring a Tsunami in Anjali-Shyam's life . 😉

& the monologue - it is obviously from Sheetal. Well, one cannot blame her.

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Oml...these two are gonna die out of frustration🤣

Shyam and Anjali coming over means the room is taken and the "coitus initiation night" is postponed indefinitely, right 😆

Arnav Khushi needs to learn something from their bhaiya bhabhi and get out the zoo that's their home!

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Well, isn't sheetal and educated and the smart one to get ride of the ever growing Ranade family with space crunch. At least there leaving will provide privicy of the alone bedroom time to other couples 😉

As for payal, she seems to be the idex page of Ranade family. Have all the derails and everything aorted out but her daughter Bubbly 😆

Dear newly married, seems like other couple is surely going 'coitus' over their night. 😉 😆

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Chaitu,

Your tale is a reality check in totality. So many problems and solutions offered all in one go. A reader can easily relate, judge, or be anxious at the same time. Khushi's plight is described wonderfully. Wedded is a perfect blend of wit and humor. With every update expectations are effortlessly exceeded 👏

A few thoughts,

Bubbly - Does she have a bob cut like the real Babita? She was rude in the beginning and likes lipsticks. How old is she? 😲 Is Lavanya her sister?

Devyani is the great grandmother who traveled to airport to see her grand kid off? That is impressive!

Aman, Arnav and Anjali are the siblings - Did I miss any?

Manohar, Arnav, Akash seems like a silent guys, mind their own business. It feels like the ladies rule the house.

Aarav's innocence was hard to give a miss.

I always wonder why sister-in-laws are hated so much, now I know.

What are Aman and Sheetal's professions? She seems to have a practical approach.