FF: Left Right Left The Desires Updated Pg19 on 2.7.2017 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Hi Riya,
Aakir kar Maine puri chapters Aaj pad li hai,
Maine pahle bi kaha tha aur Aaj be wahi kahungi, u pour ur heart for this couple.
Very well written
Waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Haii
di,

Wow di very good. I read all part just now
Amazing.

Please cont soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update but who came at last
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: vssdp

Awesome update

Loved it
Continue soon and thanks for the pm



Awesome update
Loved it

Thank you 😊

Continue soon and thanks for the pm

Will continue soon 😊

Stay blessed!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55


Thank you 😊

Stay blessed!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: rajveernainalov

Hii...
Thnx for pm.
Desires...really desired part
Dr. Shalini need to be strong..
And my captain ,why is he so shy.??.they could complete their left conversation but
Damn brig. Came there..why why why??
It means- naina plzz wait.captain will make u waited.
Alekh saved huda..huda ji to aj hudagiri ke chakkar me fans hi gye the...thnx to ali nd alekh..
And gunny is here...gd.
but Who came ???
Suspense...
I m waiting for next update.and for the desire..



Hii...

Hello 😊

Thnx for pm.

No problem 😊

Desires...really desired part

Hahaha! 😆

Dr. Shalini need to be strong..

Indeed! 😕

And my captain ,why is he so shy.??

Iska jawab aj tak koi nahi de paya!!! 😆 😕

.they could complete their left conversation but
Damn brig. Came there..why why why??

😭 😭 😭

It means- naina plzz wait.captain will make u waited.

A bit more... yes!!! 😭😛

Alekh saved huda..huda ji to aj hudagiri ke chakkar me fans hi gye the...thnx to ali nd alekh..


So true! 👍🏼

And gunny is here...gd.

Yes! 😳

but Who came ???
Suspense...

Read further to find out 😊

I m waiting for next update.and for the desire.

Updated already! Do check 😊

Stay blessed!
❤️
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Waiting for the next update



Will update soon 😊

Stay blessed!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: kusima

lovely update the things happening inside raj naina are explained very well
the story is very interesting thank god they are in kma and attending their classes as they do in the serial it takes me back to the serial days
loving the rn eye contact



lovely update the things happening inside raj naina are explained very well

Thank you so much 😊

the story is very interesting thank god they are in kma and attending their classes as they do in the serial it takes me back to the serial days

😳

loving the rn eye contact

Thank you ❤️

Stay blessed!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Avinanda120

Hi dear,

Oh yes u are back finally.
I missed u .

Lagta hain meri dhamki ki kuch Jada hi asar Hui hain. Madam ne badi jaldi update de dia.

Tab to yehi tarkib ajmani chahiye .

Ab hain update ki Bari.

To madam u deserve a worm kiss on your chik for this update.

Its so enchanting & beautiful. The way u draw Rajveer & Naina's pation just extremely wonderful.

Judi & Shalini also very nice.
Please cont.soon.

A very big thanks for this pm.

Or last but not the list don't even try to vanish next time. Remember I am after u always.



Hi dear,

Hello! 😳

Oh yes u are back finally.

Yes I am back at last! 😛

I missed u .

Awww... Missed you tooo!!!! 😳

Lagta hain meri dhamki ki kuch Jada hi asar Hui hain.

Haan mujhey bhi kuch aisa hi lag raha hai! 😉

Madam ne badi jaldi update de dia.

Hai na? 😉 Mujhey bhi bilkul aisa hi lagta hai! 😆 But I wonder Captain Rajveer ki Cadet Riya darpok kaise ho sakti hai? 😉

Tab to yehi tarkib ajmani chahiye .

Azma kar dekhlo 👍🏼 😉

Ab hain update ki Bari.

At last!!!!

To madam u deserve a worm kiss on your chik for this update.

Awww... reallyy??? Thank youuu 😆 😆 😆 😆 😳❤️ 🤗

Lag ja galey ke fir ye mauka ho na ho...
jane fir ye pyar ki barsaat kab ho...
lag ja galey a... a...

😆 😆 😆

Its so enchanting & beautiful.


Was it? Thank you so much! 😳❤️ 🤗


The way u draw Rajveer & Naina's pation just extremely wonderful.

Thanks a lot for the compliment! 😳

Judi & Shalini also very nice.

😊

Please cont.soon.

Sure! 👍🏼

A very big thanks for this pm.

No problem! 🤗

Or last but not the list don't even try to vanish next time. Remember I am after u always.

Hahaha!!! 😆 😆 😆 Dhamkiii... wo bhi Captain Rajveer k FF par... daro Avi zara Captain se daro!!! 😆 😆 😆

Jokes apart. I'll try my best ki ab main firse gayab na hun! 😉 😛 Par agar ho gayi to maaf kar dena apni iss 'bechariii' dost ko 😭 😆

Stay blessed!
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#60
Chapter 5

Naina smirks and says,

"Well that's quite obvious, yahi do (2) options ho sakte the, our teesra option tha bhi kya?"

Looking towards Brigadier Chandok, Naina teases Captain Rajveer, trying to lighten his mood,

"Sir, I think Captain Rajveer ko apse classes leni hongi firse!"

Smiling a little, Captain Rajveer turns to look at her, still smiling, he dares her,

"Agar aap itni confident hain ki mujhey classes ki zarurat hain, to Sir ko khamakha disturb karne ki kya zarurat hai, aap khud hi kyun nahi de deti mujhey classes? Itne dino se aap iss academy mein hain, and you are a bright student, I am sure apne aisa bohot kuch seekh lia hoga jo main KMA mein student rehte hue nahi seekh paya!"

(Rajveer-Naina fast tune begins)

That comes as a surprise for Naina. Staring ahead of her, she widens her eyes. Fully aware of Brigadier Chandok's presence in front of them, she chooses to remain quiet. Her state makes Rajveer to smile secretly.

Laughing, Brigadier Chandok asks Captain Rajveer to continue with his story.

"In short main samjh chuka tha ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye main yahan se nahi nikal paunga. Maine faisla kiya ki main jahan bhi rahun, main wahan se bhaag jaunga!",

he tells them, without any hesitation. But his eyes turn teary, as the feeling of helplessness that he felt during that time when he made this decision came rushing back to him. A knot forms inside Naina's throat as she could feel his state perfectly. Brigadier Chandok lowers his eyes too, ashamed, that he couldn't do anything for him. Looking back towards Captain Rajveer, Brigadier Chandok apologizes,

"I am sorry Captain. KMA ka principal hone ke bawajud main tumhare liye kuch nahi kar paya"

says Brigadier Chandok feeling ashamed of himself.

It hurts Captain Rajveer to see Brigadier Chandok in that state. Cadet Naina turns serious too. Placing his hand on Brigadier Chandok's hand, he assures him,

"Sir please... please aap aise mat kahiye. Main janta hun Sir, agar apko sub kuch pata hota to aap mujhey kuch nahi hone dete. Sir, apne jo kuch bhi kiya bilkul sahi kiya. Aapne apni duty nibhai. Iss mein kuch galat nahi hai".

"Mujhey aaj bhi wo pal yaad hai Captain, jab maine apne inhi haathon se tumhare ranks, tumhare medals tumse cheen liye the",

confesses Brigadier Chandok, feeling ashamed of himself for doing so.

"Aaj ehsaas ho raha hai, kitna galat tha main!",

confesses Brigadier Chandok, bowing his head, out of shame and regret.

"Sir please, koi galat nahi tha - na aap, na court ka faisla aur na main. Agar kuch galat tha, to wo the halat! Kuch galat tha to wo ye ki maine kayi logon se kayi baatein chupayi!"

says Captain Rajveer, lowering his eyes out of guilt and regret. He looks at Naina through his peripheral vision. Naina's heart skips a beat, as she could read his expressions clearly. She could understand what is he referring to by the line

'maine kayi logon se kayi baatein chupayi!'
clearly. But it is Brigadier Chandok, who is unable to understand his double-meaning words and asks,

"Kya matlab?"

Taking a deep breath, he shifts back his attention towards Brigadier Chandok.

"Matlab ye Sir ki mujhey apse 'red box' ke barey mein, Major Shakti Chandra ke barey mein, I mean jo kuch bhi baatein humare beech hui, jo bhi situation tha, wo sub kuch bata dena chahiye tha, trial ke dauran. Par uss waqt mera subse bharosa uth gaya tha. Mujhey samajh aa chuka tha ki meri madad ab koi nahi kar sakta!"

Suddenly, Captain Rajveer feels exhausted and asks permission from Brigadier Chandok,

"Sir, if you don't mind, to kya hum ye baad mein discuss kar sakte hain?"

His expressions tell Brigadier Chandok and Cadet Naina that he is tired and needs rest now.

"Oh sure Rajveer, tum ja kar ab rest kar lo",

smiles Brigadier Chandok, feeling concerned.

"Thank you Sir!"

"And Rajveer, ek baar Dr. Shalini se mil lena. I would suggest you to have proper medication. I want Captain Rajveer all fit and fine, back into KMA!",

smiles Brigadier Chandok. Naina smiles too.

Lowering his eyes, Captain Rajveer gives little smile.

"Don't worry Sir. I shall take care of him",

assures Naina, smiling.

(Rajveer-Naina fast tune begins)

"Agar aap hain inke saath Cadet Singh, to I am sure Captain Rajveer would be perfectly fine soon",

smiles Brigadier Chandok.

Captain Rajveer and Cadet Naina, reciprocates the gesture.

"May we leave now Sir?",

Cadet Singh asks for permission, on behalf of both of them.

"Sure Cadet!",

permits Brigadier Chandok, smiling.

Captain Rajveer and Cadet Naina leave.

~*~*~*~


"Kanchanjunga Military Academy ka main rule hai discipline! Kya mujhey ye baat apko yaad dilani hogi Cadet?"

asks Major Nayyer to a cadet, standing at the corridor. Bowing his head, out of shame, the cadet apologizes,

"I am sorry Sir, wo actually ye Karan mujhse pange le raha tha, to maine dhyan nahi diya ke aap aa rahe hain, aur isliye ye takkar..."

"Cadet!",

scolds Major Nayyer, then continues,

"Aap yahan soldiers banne aye hain, ya aise yahan apne classmates ke saath masti karne?"

"I don't understand kya soch kar apne KMA mein admission liya hai? Mujhey to abhi se apne desh ki chinta ho rahi hai, ye soch kar ki hum apne desh ko aap jaise soldiers ke hawale karne wale hain! Do you have any idea, what it takes to become a soldier?"

asks Major Nayyer.

"Aaj ke bachon ko kuch samjhana...",

Major Nayyer shakes his head to a negative, staring the accused cadets seriously.

"Cadets, jab tak aap KMA mein hain, aap KMA ki responsibility hain. Aur KMA ke rules and regulations follow karna apki duty hai. Understood?",

scolds Major Nayyer.

~*~*~*~

Sitting near the window of the mess, Suriji sings a song all alone, for no one in particular. But being loud by nature, his voice scatters in the whole mess, it's just that there is no one to listen to his singing, except the orderlies working in the mess, who are by now habitual to hearing his singing.

"Mere sapno ki rani kab ayegi tu, ayi rut mastani kab ayegi tu. Beetijaye zindagani kab ayegi tu? Chali aa tu chali aa"

"Aa gayi!",

teases an orderly. That skips Suriji's heartbeat, who takes his words seriously and imagines in no time, that Lolita Ma'am is there in the mess.
He turns with his heart full of expectations, his eyes eagerly waiting to get a glimpse of her. His blushed face reflects his feelings for her! As soon as he turns and finds that there is no one there, his face falls. His cheeks which recently turned red out of blush, turns to a darker shade of red out of anger for the orderly. The orderly laughs at Suriji's innocence, thinking how cute Suriji is!

"Thehrja khotya main tainu nahi chadanga!",

says Suriji, pointing his index finger towards the orderly and gets down with a motive to catch him.
The orderly, fully aware of what's coming up next prepares himself for a chase. He runs away, out of the mess, before Suriji could catch him. As Suriji runs after him, unconsciously he collides with Lolita Ma'am who was entering the mess at the same time when he was exiting it.

The collide results into a fall, in such a manner that Lolita Ma'am falls on Suriji. This unexpected situation makes both of them to blush. Where on one hand Suriji shows his blush by lowering his eyes; there on the other hand Lolita Ma'am's scold makes it clear how shy and blushed she is feeling.

"Suriji! Ye... ye aap kya bachon ki tarah bhaag rahe the? Aap... aap hatiye yahan se. I said leave me!"

Lolita Ma'am looks into Suriji's eyes as she utters the last words.

Suriji who was in daze for all this time, staring at Lolita Ma'am's beautiful eyes, wakes up from his daze, blushing, he says,

"Lolita ji aisa hai, I beg your pardon, par pakda apne hua hai mujhey, maine apko nahi".

"Come again Suriji?",

says Lolita Ma'am creasing her brows. Suriji points towards her hands which are holding him tightly. Feeling utterly shy and embarrassed at her own stupidity, Lolita Ma'am avoids looking at Suriji at first. Then at last staring him, looking into his eyes, she blushes, which makes Suriji to blush even more, and she gets up quickly.
Getting back her composure, Lolita Ma'am crosses her arms and clears her voice and asks,

"Suriji, ye kaisa bachpana tha? Aap iss tarah se mess mein bhaag kyun rahe the? I mean iss age mein?"

scolds Lolita Ma'am, getting even more irritated as she utters the last words.

"Lolita ji, aisa hai bachpana karne ki na, koi umar nahi hoti. Kabhi-kabar na, badon ko bhi aise hi bachpana kar lena chahiye",

says Suriji, smiling.

"Suriji aap...",

Lolita Ma'am begins to say something, but Suriji interrupts her,

"Oh na ji na! Aisa hai main iss baat par apki ek nahi sunne wala".

Suriji notices how unlike other days, today Lolita Ma'am is listening to him without arguments.
Making full use of the opportunity, Suriji, mustering all his courage, utters the words,

"Bohot ho gaya, aap mere saath Durga Puja ki shopping karne chal rahi hain aaj bus".

Uttering those words in an authoritative voice, Suriji holds his breath, waiting to know her reaction.

Getting a bit emotional on hearing Durga Puja, she couldn't deny him. Smiling, she says,

"Theek hai Suriji, main chalungi Durga Puja ki shopping ke liye".

Getting the desired answer from her, fills Suriji's heart with joy and out of excitement, he says,

"Oh balle! balle!"

The orderlies present in the mess clap their hands, as they hear that Lolita Ma'am has agreed to fulfil Suriji's desire to go out for shopping with her. Blushing, Lolita Ma'am leaves the mess. The applaud makes Suriji to blush too.

"Chalo ho gaya, cheti-cheti kaam karo sub ab!",

says Suriji, in order to hide his blush and shyness.

~*~*~*~

Captain Randhawa finds a girl wearing a red top and blue jeans, her hair neatly tied up into a pony tail, standing at the entrance of his classroom.

He notices how the moment he turned to look at her, her whole demeanor changed. The girl creases her brows, turning her hand into fist, she takes a step back unable to believe her eyes. Unconsciously she utters,

"Vansh!"

Captain Randhawa, who is at his ease, asks,

"Yes? Whom do you want to meet?"

Still in a state of shock, she forgets to reply. Not getting a reply, Captain Randhawa asks,

"Do you need something ma'am?"

Getting out of her daze, still at a state of shock, she extends her hand, holding some official papers, staring him constantly.

Eyeing her suspiciously, Captain Randhawa walks to her, staring her constantly.

(Read the lyrics written below in the tune of 'Saans mein teri saans mili to, mujhey saans aayi' slow version from the movie 'Jab Tak Hai Jaan')

F - Aas lagayi... thi jo tujhse,
pal mein wo sapna bikhar gaya hai.

Chahat ki ye baatein hain jhooti,
such ka aaina nazar aaya hai.

Baatein teri aaj bhi aksar,
leti hai, dil mein angdayi.

Pyar ka tohfa ye paya to,
Bujhi har baati,
nahi hum saathi,
nahi hum saathi.

Chont diya jo,
tu ne mujhko,
aah uthi zara si,
bujhi har baati,
nahi hum saathi.

Grabbing the paper out of her hand, Captain Randhawa looks at her suspiciously one last time before reading the contents of the paper.

"Vidya Saxena!"

Captain Randhawa reads out her name and looks at her.

"Vidya ne abhi ye admission forms bhare hain. Vidya BC...!",

as Vidya utters the word 'BC' she realizes what blunder she has committed. But what is said, is said! All the cadets attending Captain Randhawa's class laugh, keeping a check on their voices. But being a teacher Captain Randhawa is well aware about how students can be sometimes!

"Enough!",

scolds Captain Randhawa, giving a stern look to the class. Then turning to look at Vidya, he asks,

"Please continue, aap kuch keh rahin theen!"

Lowering her eyes out of embarrassment and shyness, she rectifies her words,

"Vidya ka matlab, Brigadier Chandok... Brigadier Chandok se milne ayi thi Vidya. Unhe ye form submit karna tha".

Staring her, Captain Randhawa tells her,

"Hmm... Ye Brigadier Chandok ka cabin nahi hai".

Keeping her eyes lowered, Vidya says,

"Vidya janti hai, par wo apne cabin mein nahi miley to Vidya ne socha kisi teacher se puch le ki wo kahan hain aur kab tak ayenge. Aur agar aney mein der hui to Vidya kisiko ye dekar chali jayegi".

"Agar wo aaj apko nahi mil rahe, to kal aa jaiye submit karne!",

says Captain Randhawa in his strict tone.

"Nahi!",

replies Vidya, almost immediately as if Captain Randhawa has committed a big mistake by asking her to coming tomorrow again. It comes as a surprise for Captain Randhawa.

Realizing that she shouldn't have uttered those words, she lowers her eyes, and apologetically says,

"Vidya ka matlab hai, Vidya ko kal kahin jana hai, kuch zaruri kaam se. Aur Vidya yahan nahi rehti, Vidya ka ghar bohot durr hai. To wahan se aana thoda mushkil hoga. Aaj to Vidya jaise-taise aa gayi, par firse aana Vidya ke liye thoda mushkil hoga".

Although Captain Randhawa understands her problem but he feels that there is something amiss. What? that he promises himself, he'll discover it soon!

"Theek hai aap ye form mujhey de dijiye aur apna contact number... oh, apka contact number to iss form mein hoga hi. Brigadier Chandok, ya KMA ka koi concerned authority apko call karke inform kar dega".

"Vidya ne yahan apna number likh diya hai. Par wo number naya hai. Number activate hone mein ek din lagega. To aap Vidya ko aaj phone mat karna",

says Vidya, avoiding eye contact with Captain Randhawa as much as possible.

"Hmm... theek hai",

replies Captain Randhawa, who pays attention on her each word and expressions. Smiling a little, one last time, Vidya takes his permission to leave.

As she leaves, Captain Randhawa reads her name again from her form,

"Vidya Saxena...",

and thinks!
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 8 years ago

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