IPKKND SS: Mr & Mrs Raizada In The Making C6 P33 22st Nov conclude

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

great story loved the beginning .you have a knack of dealing with a story from a different angle which we can never think of .

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sonali mehla

@dhakad_chori

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

wow so fast mr raizada i h=am hoping he is planning their wedding

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

interesting chapter 1...but i found one contradiction...earlier its written that Arnav was the oldest and the most responsible. But later its mentioned that he was the baby brother of Anjali (meaning she was the older one)

Another typo was when Arnav gets a reminder call from Akash about Khushi, but when he hangs up, he was talking to Aman.

Anyways, I enjoyed the chapter, and eager to see what Arnav is talking to his grand mother and her father about.

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pushp_barun

@pushp_barun

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

I m glad u started new ss so soon. Nice concept . Thank u:)

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

This is going to be a damn interesting one. Light fun filled one it seems. Please let the story flow in a more interactive manner. I meant one to one talks!!

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Congratulations for the new story..

I guess arnav is too fast may be he is telling his grandmother that he wants to marry kushi😉..

Thank u..

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

all the best for your new story , the first chapter is very refreshing and is very interesting

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Zeehana

@Zeehana

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

I am happy to find another story starting ...

Really liked how you started .

Usually you write stories having both of them having some sort of established relationship, This one you started the story them being strangers .

So I am really excited to read more!

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Yeah. This was nice. New beginnings and all.

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Manasa

@ManKiBaath

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Lovely start of another beautiful story in the making.

Arnav and Khushi both doing things besides planning their brothers and sisters wedding. Now can't wait to read what Arnav is planning behind Khushi's back :-)

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