TR SS ' KUCH TOH HUA HAI

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TR SS - KUCH TOH HUA HAI

CHAPTER 1

FLECHAZO

It was a normal weekend when Mr. Reyaansh Singhania was chilling out with his friends in a pub when his friends cum employees are trying their level best to make him hook up with some girl. A tall and a fair girl enters the pub, who can be termed as attention seeker as she was showing off maximum skin and instantly all the boys were determined to hook her up with Rey. Here Rey and Swayam were discussing about some important project. Soon, that girl came to Rey and asked him for a dance when he politely denied her, she was still embarrassed and left the place when Vicky came there.

V: Are you insane? Can anyone deny a gorgeous like her?

R: she was beautiful but not my type.

V: What do you mean your type?

R: Vicky it's not about girl, it's about her inner beauty. And you won't understand.

Sw: will I understand? Can you enlighten us a bit more about your choice?

R: She is supposed to look like she belongs to me. As soon as I look at her, I am supposed to get that pull towards her that she is my life and I can't survive without her. Her eyes should be so deep that I may drown into them and I can just die in those eyes.

V: Swayam, only you can understand this language.

N: Sharon's one and only Romeo.

R: fine, I don't care if you guys understand me or not.

V: chill, the whole week you will be in the peaks of Reyaansh Singhania, why cant you behave like Rey atleast for a day?

Sw: I think it's getting late, we should leave.

R: yeah, let's leave.

They all left for their respective homes.

Rey was on his way on the passenger seat as he was in no mood to drive when the car broke down on a dark and quiet road.

He got down when driver was checking the car, he heard sobs of a small child, he approached closer to the noise and saw a small 4 year old crying beside a woman who has fainted.

He rushed towards them when the kid looked at him with eyes full of unshed tears, he knelt on the road beside her and asked the 4 year old.

R: beta, kya hua?

She dint react

R: aapka naam kya hai?

A: Alka

R: yeh kon hai?

A: mummaa...

R: baby, rona nahi, idhar aao...

He took her in his arms and fondled her back and he couldn't see the woman's face clearly

R: aapne kuch khaya?

She nodded her head in a no.

R: kuch khayenge?

A: mummaa...

R: ek kaam karte hai, aapko aur mumma ko me apna ghar leke jaunga, aap kuch khaake phir so jaao. Kal subah tak mumma uth jayegi aur fir baat karenge theek hai.

She nodded her head in a yes

D: Sir, car theek ho gayi

R: tum iss bachi ko leke chalo, car me bithao... me aa rah ahu

He turned her around when his heart skipped a beat and he gently removed the hair which was obstructing him from her face.

She was looking broken, tired and as if not eaten for a week. He picked her up in his arms only to feel her as light as a feather.

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R: kya hua doctor?

Doc: she is very tired Mr. Singhania and needs rest, looks like she is not eating enough for a while. She needs rest as of now.

Rey sat beside her when the clock was showing 3 AM. Damini, his servant fed Alka and she is fast asleep in the guest room.

Rey was lost in a questionnaire, who are they? Why were they in the middle on the road? Why a beautiful and an innocent soul is facing so much? Why is a 4 year old a part of this? Is she really her daughter? She doesn't seem as a married girl? What's going on?

He was staring at her face the whole night.

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Pre - cap: Their past unfolds. His feelings towards them.

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Flechazo mean love at first sight. Due to lack of practice I don't have any idea, how this turned out. I wanted to make it a little dark and serious but it just dint happen. I am not sure how many shots this will be but I will try my best.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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add this acc for pms... only to read like and comment
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Awsm concept part 1 nice
Next update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was beautiful waiting for the next.
And I understand that lack of practice me too in the same boat.
Durgapuja vacation is starting from 7th oct me too will try to restart the pendings.
Anyway loved it too the core.
Waiting egarly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start...
concept seems interesting..
cntnu soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update dearrr
i thing vo ldki koi or nai taani hi h
plzzz update soonnn
cant wait to read more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept..
Amazing update loved it..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept
Eager to read more
Continue soon
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Nyc update dear...
Concept sounds interesting...
Eagerly waiting for nxt update...
Update soon...
Thanks for pm...
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Awesome really good start
Lack of practice😊
U really think so , but it doesn't seem
I m really waiting for yr next update

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