Arshi FF: The Broken Hearts#2 NEW LINK ADDED pg 153

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babuloo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#611

That was a lovely one,were Payal once respect arnav n feel too do something to him n Khushi bt now she hate him that great

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Love.life2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#612

Amazing teaser.

Arnav is really not being liked right now.

I would have still understood if he were single concentrating on his career but he married La and wanted kids when he crushed Khushi for wanting those things thinking they come in the way of his career.

I don't know how he can ever redeem himself. He didn't look back at her. He could have at leadt tried to know if she was alright he knew snake was after her in college and could have hurt her after he left. At least as a friend he should have kept a watch on her.

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#613

Interesting teaser.

You are a beautiful writer and I trust that you will bring justice to it.

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hiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#614

superb teaser
i was hoping that payash would b related to this sumhow..
nice arnav realising step by step hw wrong he was & willing to redeem...
now update whole part soon
waiting for it

no probs u r slow writer..
according to me u r rabbit & m tortoise...
i update once a month😆😆😆

thnks 4 pm...

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katj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#615

Nice teaser
Update soon please..
Thanks for PM

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yoga123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#616

Amazing update and nice teaser...

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saack

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Posted: 8 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: MoonBow.

That was a beautiful point. Yeah he was so guilty I doubt he would have moved on. But he actually did. That was very jarring and made me dislike arnav on the whole.
Didn't care for khushi one bit. College arnav was foolish, ignorant etc so I get it. But this current one after he made a name .. Didn't visit khushi etc.. Can't ship them wholeheartedly.

Sorry to butt in but I share your feelings on this this so much.

Even I am disgusted with this Arnav for marrying La and wanting a happy family and future with her.

To some extent, I could understand him leaving Khushi for his career...but what exactly stopped him from contacting Khushi again once he was ready for marriage? If he really loved her, Khushi should have been the first person he thought of when he thought of marriage. Khushi married Shyam 2 yrs ago and Arnav married La 4 yrs ago.

I really don't want Khushi to be with Arnav in this story. He really does not deserve Khushi.

Would he be here with Khushi and Sia if everything was hunky dory with his marriage?

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saack

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Posted: 8 years ago

#618

Hi Rose,

Since you have written this story, I am sure you were aware that everyone will hate this Arnav...and true to your intent, I really do hate him.

While I blame him for breaking Khushi's heart and her dreams to fulfill his career aspirations, I don't hate him for that.

I hate him for marrying Lavanya and dreaming of a happy family and future with her. How can he do that if he really loved Khushi all along and was guilty of breaking her heart? At the point when he thought he was ready to marry, why didn't he think of Khushi even once? She was not even married to Shyam at the time he married La. Was he still in love with Khushi while being married to Lavanya and planning kids with her? What does that make him as a person and as a husband?

Please do explain his POV on this at some point in your story. I am really not sure what redemption is acceptable for this level of betrayal.

I am really proud of Payal for being such a loyal friend. I also like Anjali who didn't attend his wedding showing her displeasure about his behavior towards Khushi

Payal is a doctor while Khushi seems to have been doing nothing. She was a good and hardworking student..so, how come she never did anything big career Wise?