Fated to Duty Prologue

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Silence fell through the house as the body was brought in laid across the floor for all to see the once silent house echoed with the harsh taunts of "Gaddar Gaddar".
From faraway watched a figure clad head to toe in white, once a livley creature now a lifeless corpse eyes brimming with unshed tears for the injustice done to her hero, bestfreind, brother and the one and only best passout Captain Naveen Singh Alluwaliyah. 😭. Her heart trembled full of sorrow and rage unable to hold on her heart shatterd in to a millions of shards, any remaining composure was now totally destroyed she fell on her knees unable to control her inner turmoil of overwhelming emotions and screamed "BHAIYYA BHAIYYA" 😭

Here it is guys let me know how u feel like comment and review
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice...
continue soon... 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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just read your story
superb start & great update 👏 👍🏼
please continue & update soon
please do pm me whenever you update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1
A month had passed since the tragedy occurred in the Alluwaliyah residence the people of the house were still in a state of grief trying to overcome the loss of there dearest Naveen. somewhere in the house there was somebody who was not yet willing to overcome the shock its was none other than Naina.

Standing near the window looking out she was shedding tears continuously remembering all her beautiful moments with her brother not being able to take the pain she fell on her knees with her face in her palms sobbing and mumbling to her self she said " kyun bhaiyya kyun humein chor kar chaleygaye ek baar bhi aap ne mummy papaa aur aap ki Nain yaani mere baare mein nahi socha ke aap ke jaane ke baad humara kya hoga main jaanti hoon ke aap kabhi galat nahi hoh sakte main aaj aap ko vachan deti hoon jab tak main aap ko begunaah saabit na kardo tab tak main chain se nahi bethoongi i promise bhaiyya i will get back you your pride honor said Naina" walking over to her laptop she decided to take an admission in KMA.

Here it is guys, the first chapter hope you enjoy it and please leave me some feedback.😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
beautifuly written 👏 👍🏼
loved naina's spirite 👏
thanks for pm
keep smiling keep writing ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hay dear friend, your story is very good . nice start. Keep it up. Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you guys for liking my story and encouraging me to write i will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2 Whilst getting ready for bed she was lost in some deep thoughts when she heard a knock on her door coming out of her trance she heard a voice " Naina kya main andher aasakti hoon" walking over to her door she opened it and saw her mum with two coffee mugs in her hand "maa aap yahan iss waqt aap abhi tak soyi nahi said naina worriedly " are beta shaant ho jaao woh mujhe neend nahi aarahi thi iss liye socha tumse aake todhi baatein karlo" she took the coffee and placed it on her drawer and made her mum comfortable and went and sat next to her " toh kya socha hai tumne ab kya karogi" not understanding what she was talking about she asked " maa aap kis baare main baat karahe hoh mujhe kuch samajh nahi araha". "Naina dekho tum ko ek poora mahina hoh gaya hai ghar par, na toh tum bahar jaati hoh aur nahi tum kissi se baat karti hoh esa kab tak chalega aur tumne jo itni mehnat ki hai apne studies pe uska kya" not knowing what to say she started playing with her fingers trying to figure out how to tell her parents about the decision and promise she made earlier gathering her courage together she spoke "maa woh mujhe aap aur papa ko kuch batana hai isse pehle main aap ko bataoon aap ko mujhse promise karna hoga ke aap mera saath doge" getting worried her mum said " ese kon se baath hai saaf saaf kaho beta mera jee gabra raha hai" holding her mums hand she said " maine kma join karne ka decision liya hai aur uss ke liye maine application form bhi bhar diya hai". " kya nahi tum wahan bilkul nahi jaoogi samjhi tum iss decision main hum tumhara support bilkul nahi karenge kya soch kar tumne yeh faisla liya hai hum ek bete ko koh chuke hai aur ab tumeh nahi koh sakte" shouted Mrs Aluwaliyah with tears streaming down her face " maa meri baath samajh ne ki koshish kijiye yeh karna behad zaroori hai bhaiyya ke saath jo huwa aur kyun huwa hai yeh jaana bohot zaroori hai aur jo log iss ghiloni saazish main shaamil hai un ka pata lagana parega agar aaj hum logon ne kuch nahi kiya toh aage kabhi nahi kar payenge plz maa" told Naina crying ". " tum samajh nahi rahi hoh Naina jitna asaan diktha hai utna hai nahi tumeh maaloom bhi hai iss kaam me tumeh kitna katra hai u could die dammit. " i know par iss ke alawa humare paas aur koi rastaa nahi hai aur yeh mera akhiri faisla hai main kma zaroor jaoongi aur bhaiyya ko shaheed aur innocent saabit karoongi chahe kuch bhi hoh"turning around she saw her father there she knew he heard everything walking up to her he said " mujhe tumpe garv hai aur main jaanta hoon agar tumne koi faisla liya hai woh soch samajh karliya hoga jaoo beta mera aashirwaad tumhare saath hai" feeling overwhelmed she hugged her parents and bid them a goodnight walking over to her bed slipped in to a deep slumber waiting for the new dawn and challenges that were waiting to come her way. here guys thats it for today im soo tired hope u like it and plz guys do leave me comments i hardly get any and the people which leave them thanks a ton love you guys muahxxx
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
beautifuly written 👏 👍🏼
naina's father is so supportive & trust his daughter 👏
please do pm me whenever you update next part
keep smiling keep writing ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update.,waiting for nainas entry in kma & her meeting with rajveer,continue soon

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