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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

finally caught up with all the pending updates! *huff..*

Loved them all
Anika-Yog have started bonding stronger, good! Knowing each-other and expressing their feelings is lovely. Very sweet romance, I'm lovin' it!
Anika is evolving into a truly loving and caring Indian wife who'd do anything to save her husband, nice! SHe has slowly started feeling for him but is unaware of it!
well, Yog is too cute, can I have him?? please? *puppy face* Anika won't mind ;)
the case is going on well, anika ke haath bahot lambe hai.. hain!
Dutta, I love him too! He's right arm of Anika, good job dear!
MLA sahab, wow, ka jawab mila hai, saat janam me bhi nahi bhoolega wo! Anika se panga nai leneka boss!
now, lets see what happens next!
do continue soon
extremely sorry for late comments di, couldn't find time to look up the updates. Don't know when I'd read the next but keep pms coming. Thanks!

Thanks Neha Dear glad you liked it
True Anika after knowing the truth relazied her misake & took first step to understand each other
If she is a wife ... she will surely do everything possible to save & keep her husband happy
Situtaion is like that ... to be true Anika like Yog as a friend & now it will take time change her mind set
Haan leloo ... Par Anika ke keher ke liye ready rehna Uski zimmedaari meri nahi hai 😆😆😆
Anika knows odds & evens of her job so use pata hai aise logo ko kaise deal karte hai
not an issue dear ... will keep sending PMS jab fursat main hoo pad lena
Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Anika ka keher? Kyu?? SHe doesn't love her husband as such, main rakh lung, aur don't worry, it won't be a big deal ;) trust me!! :P
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

Anika ka keher? Kyu?? SHe doesn't love her husband as such, main rakh lung, aur don't worry, it won't be a big deal ;) trust me!! :P


Haan Haan try maar loo 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago



PART 11 A

Next morning Anika eyes flew open bit early & she smiled looking at the sleepy face of her husband who was still hugging her in deep sleep. She quietly without disturbing him went to have a shower & by the time she was back Yog too got out of his nap holding his head which was spinning badly.

He murmured in irritated voice "Pata nahi kya pila diya tha ... ab tak sir ghoom raha hai"

Anika smiled & said "aapne kal galti se bhang ki thandai pee li thi isliye sir ghoom raha hai ... ab uthiye fresh ho jaaiye aur lemonade aur pill table pe rakhi hai le leejiyega sir ghoomna band ho jaayega ... main breakfast lagati hoon" Yog nodded & went to freshen -up & after that took his lemonade & pill after that he felt much better.

Suddenly one thing struck in mind he thought "maine kal kuch nashe main ulta seedha to nahi keh diya ... nahi nahi kuch nahi kiya hoga warna ab tak meri haddiya salamat nahi rehti ... kuch yaad bhi to nahi aa raha"

He stressed & remembered "itna to yaad hai ki main Anika se kuch Meetha khane ki zidd kar raha tha uske baad nahi" His thoughts were broken by Anika's call who called him for breakfast.

Yog came & said with hitched voice "I am sorry mujhe pata hai maine kal bahut bakwaas ki hogi ... tumhe pareshaan bhi kiya hoga"

Anika smiled & said "aapki galti nahi hai Yog ... par aapne zayada kuch nahi kiya bas meetha khane ke liye zidd ki aur thankfully waha pe Rao ji ke alava kisi ne nahi dekha"

Yog sighed in relief & said "Shukar hai! waise aaj Saturday hai main jaldi aa jaaunga aur kal subah nikalna hai to main tumhari packing main help kar doonga"

Anika replied "Haan! Main bhi koshish karungi ki jaldi aa jaau ... waise maine suitcase arrange kar diya hai aap check kar lena kuch aur chahiye ho to" Yog nodded & after a while finishing their breakfast both went to their work places to start their day.

After a while Anika reaches her office & she tracks the case proceeding of MLA & also of Moti making it full proof so that they are properly trapped. She even informed Dutta that what all is to be done in terms of investigation & how to pursue forward in this matter.

She after a while was checking ATR reports when Rao came in & said in apologetic voice "Madam mujhe maaf kar deejiye meri vajah se Yog saab ..."

Anika said cutting him short "Rao ji koi baat nahi ye sab hota rehta hai ... aur haan aapne bahut accha intizaam kiya tha hume bahut accha laga aake" Rao joined hands & took leave after thanking Anika.

Anika remembered what happened last night and her lips curved into a smile ... she first time saw Yog in a sloshed state he really behaved like a 4 year old kid who wanted to have his sweet ... she also understood that Yog only wanted her happiness & love in return & after that remembering those close moments with Yog her shy smile grew deeper.

Here at the hospital Yog was in a process of handing over his cases he was briefing his comates who were suppose to handle the cases in his absence after an hour Anika was free so she thought of visiting at the hospital to see if Yog is also done with his work then they can go back home together.

Luckily by that time Anika reached hospital Yog was also free but a female patient was irritating him big time, she was from a high class family & was openly flirting with Yog & he was about to blast on her for that when Anika came in with a knock & asked "Yog! aapka kaam khatam ho gaya ho to aap saath challenge ya time lagega"

The girl said intervening in between "Unhe time lagega aap jaa sakti hai"

Anika looked at Yog as if asking for approval & he responded with a puppy look on his face & Anika understood his situation & said "Maine sawaal aapse nahi kiya tha apne pati se kiya tha"

Girl with a scornful face said to Yog "Yog ye tumhari wife hai?"

Anika said with a calm smile "kyu aapko koi aitraaz hai ... ya shaq hai?"

Then turning to Yog said "Yog! main aapko batana bhool gayi ... maine wo Shikha waala matter deal kar liya hai" & winked at him & added again "ab wo aapko irritate nahi karegi ... uski itni himmat ki aapko mere saamne hug kare ...

use to 3rd degree torture doongi abhi abhi arrest order leke aa rahi hoon uska bas ek baar mere haath chad jaaye to uska saara bukhaar apne aap utar jaayega"

Girl till now was listening quietly & got terrified & said "aapne really use arrest kiya hai?"

Anika said "haan! aur nahi to kya uski itni himmat ki mere saamne hi mere pati se flirt kar rahi thi ... wo kya hai na main thoda sa possessive hoon aur mujhe ye sab bilkul bardasht nahi hai"

Then turning to Yog said "aur koi bhi aapko aise pareshaan kare to seedha mujhe aake batana do minute main seedha kar doongi aise cheap aur ghatiya ladkiyo ko aise hi deal karte hai"

Girl with terrified expressions said "accha main chalti hoon"

Anika said stopping her "Are! Aap kaha jaa rahi hai ... rukiye na aapko to check up karana tha?"

Girl replied "Nahi baad main I am fine now" with that she walked out of the hospital.

Anika & Yog looked at each other & burst out in a peal of laughter. Anika after catching a breath "ye ladki thi ya chewing gum ... lagta hai use aapke treatment ki khaas zaroorat thi" & again laughed.

Yog said making a face "Anika kya tum bhi! Par baat to sahi hai ... thi to ladki jaisi cheez par DNA chewing gum ka tha ... ek kaam karte hai main aise saare patients tumhare paas bhej deta hoon unka shock treatment acche se ho jaayega"

Anika laughed & hearing their laugh & voices Jannat & Jaanawaaz to barged into the cabin & saw both of them laughing both wished Anika & Jannat asked "Kya baat hai Bhabhi jaan aap loog aise kyu has rahe the?"

Yog said controlling his laugh "Jannat! wo Neeta aayi thi"

Jannat said making an irritated face "wo chudail fir se aayi thi ... mera to mann karta hai ki use jaanwaro ka tranquilizer de doon ... use zaroorat hai"

Yog said with a laugh "Anika ne jo uski haalat ki hai na uske baad use kisi tranquilizer ki zaroorat nahi padegi" & with that he told them everything.

Jannat & Jaanawaaz looked at each other surprised & then they too burst out laughing & Jannat said "aapne sahi kiya Bhabhi jaan ... wo isi layak thi ... accha hua Bhai jaan aapki bala tal gayi" Anika & Yog smiled & after a while both took leave as they had to pack & leave next morning.

Yog & Anika reached home quickly & after a while they completed the packing & relaxed themselves. Little later Anika served dinner & Yog started cheekily "Anika! ek baat batao tum sach main itni possessive hoo kya?"

Anika replied in a same tone "Kyu aapko shaq hai aazmaana chahte hai ... to fir yaad rakhiye agli baar aapki us Neeta ko warn kardeejiyega agli baar mere haath chadi to uske baal us statue pe milenge" she finished her sentence pointing at a black statue of daemon placed on side table.

Yog looked at Anika with surprise first but then saw a sly smile playing on her lips & understood she was joking & then both burst out in a peal of laughter.

Yog said lovingly "uski zaroorat nahi hai Anika & thanks a lot mujhe samajh main nahi aata ki aise logo ko kaise deal karun"

Anika with a teasing smile raising her brow "Aise loog! Aur kitni padi hai aapke peeche"

Yog said irritated "tumhe mazaaq soojh raha hai ... pata hai mujhe laga tha kitum gussa ho jaaogi even I feel helpless at times"

Anika said lovingly "Yog! main aapki koi pagal patient nahi hoon ... ek matured officer hoon aapki patni bhi hoon itni samajh hai mujhme ...

ek sacchi baat batau jab aapse jude logo ko sab chahte hoo to gussa hone ke bajaaye ye samajhna chahiye ki aap bahut khushnaseeb hai kyuki jinhe aap chahte hai unhe bahut logo ka pyar mila hai aur unhe apne dil ke kareeb rakhna chahiye kyuki wo loog bahut keemti hote hai aur keemti cheez hamesha sahej ke rakhte hai"

Yog smiled & said "point noted ... kaafi gehri baat kahi tumne ... par aacha hua us bala se peecha chhota"

Anika said in a serious tone "aap par kisi bala ka saaya nahi pad sakta Yog ... Nazar utarne ke liye main jo hoon"

Yog smiled at his sweet wife & after finishing dinner Anika went to kitchen to clear the things & Yog went back to his room thinking about what happened today. Anika's presence in his life has changed things to great extent, her maturity, her strength, her sharpness last but not the least her shyness & her hitches he had all experienced in this short span of time.

He was proud of his wife. Anika comes back with a hot chocolate mug & places at computer table & without a word she lay on the bed to sleep surprising Yog.

Anika looked at Yog's face & said "ab kya hua! Main koi doosre greah se aayi hoon ... chudail ya dayan hoon ... ya aap mujhe pehli baar dekh rahe hai"

Yog nodded in negative with a smile & Anika said "Good! to fir hot chocolate pee ke so jaayiye" she turned her side & set the early morning alarm in her mobile & closed her eyes to sleep . Yog too with a smile lay beside her & slept calmly.















SCROLL DOWN PART 11 B 😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago



PART 11 B

Next early morning Anika got up at the alarm beep & that broke Yog's sleep too. Anika quickly went to fresh -up & after getting ready she rushed to kitchen to prepare a heavy breakfast as they were travelling.

Anika quickly made Aaloo parathas for breakfast & packed some for journey too. By the time Anika prepared the breakfast Yog too got ready & quickly after having breakfast they made their way to Vashisht Vila which was around 5 hrs of drive from Nagpur.

Anika & Yog started their journey as place was outside the city their journey was filled with more of natural beauty. Anika too enjoyed the journey and was feeling the cool breeze of the morning on her face. Yog showed some of his favorite spots in the journey which he use to visit when he use to travel home.

Anika too enjoyed watching the places & they were quite beautiful too. After halting for lunch about half an hour they started their journey again. When it was early evening they entered the outskirts of the town & Anika could see thou it was a small place but had each & every facility for daily life, specifically it was quite & away from the city pollution.

Anika with a smile was observing the beauty & greenery of the place. After a while Yog stopped the car near a beautiful temple & said "Anika ye humara khandaani mandir hai ise mere Dadaji ne banvaaya tha ...

Ye kareeb 68 saal purana hai ... yaha ke mahant ab iski dekhbhaal karte hai aur khaas mauko pe pooja ke liye hum sab yaha aa jaate hai"

Anika looked at the beautiful temple & exclaimed "Mandir bahut sundar hai Yog ... lagta hai aapke Dada ji koi zameendaar the"

Yog said "Haan! aur wo Shiv ji ko bahut maante the isliye uhone ye mandir banvaaya ... chalo ander darshan karte hai"

Yog & Anika went inside the temple & saw few priests were arranging things for the evening prayers as it was about to start. An old priest came out seeing Yog & Yog greeted him by touching his feet & said "Pranaam Pandit ji ... kaise hai aap?"

Priest said blessing him "Ayushyamaan ho Yogendra beta ... yaha sab kushal hai mujhe pata laga tumhara vivah ho gaya hai ... bhadhai hoo ... tumhari patni bhi aayi hai?"

Yog nodded in positive & Anika came forward & touched the feet of the priest & Yog said introducing "Ye meri patni Anika hai"

Priest said blessing her "Akhand saubhagavati hoo beti ... shankar parvati si joodi hai tum dono ki"

Pandit ji gave them Prasad & asked Anika "tum kya karti hoo beti?"

Anika replied "ji main ek police officer hoon"

Pandit ji smiled & said "Bilkul apne naam jaise gun hai tumme ...zara apna haath dikhao beti"

Anika showed her hand & Pandit ji smiled looking at it "tum apne har karya ko dakshta se karti hoo, tumhare karyakshtra main tumhara bahut samman hai ... dharya aur shakti tumme dono hai ... bachpan kasht main beeta hai par ab tumhare saare kasht door ho jaayege ... tume bahut prem aur samman milega ...

aur ek vishesh baat shayad koi tumhe aur Yogendra ko nuksaan paunchana chahta hai tumhe satrak rehna hoga aur ek dusre ki shakti banna hoga ... main jaanta hoon tum dono in sab main shayad nahi maante parantu jo dekha maine bata diya aur shegra hi tumhe iska anubhav bhi ho jaayega"

Anika & Yog after taking aarti thanked the priest & they made way to Vashisht Vila. After a small drive they reached their home & Yog parked the car. They entered the huge bungalow & saw their sweet sister in law Bhoomija watering the plants in the garden.

Yog & Anika went to her & Yog said greeting her "Good evening"

Bhoomi turned & saw Yog & exclaimed with surprise "Are Yog bhai! Anika kaise hoo aap dono ... ab waqt mila aane ka"

Yog replied "Sorry! kya karu Girish uncle ki tabiyat achanak kharaab ho gayi thi isliye nikal nahi paaye"

Bhoomi said "ruko main maa ko bata ke aati hoon"

Yog said stopping her "are pehle ruko to ..."

He first touched Bhommi's feet then hugged her & then kissed her forehead & said blessing her "Jeeti raho ... kush raho"

Bhoomi said irritated "ab ye kya dhong hai?"

Yog said "Are meri badi bhabhi hoo ... aur badi bhahi maa ki jagah hoti hai isliye pair chuye ... meri dost hoo isliye gale lagaya ... aur mujhse 1 aadh saal chooti hoo isliye aashirwaad diya"

Bhoomi said laughing "accha! shadi ke baad bade hoshiyaar ban ke aaye hai doctor saab"

Yog said softly in her ears "waise his highness Hitler saab ghar pe hai?"

Bhoomi said smacking him "Paaji! Apne papa ko koi Hitler bolta hai kya?"

Yog said "Koi ke bare main to main nahi jaanta par main to bulata hoon"

Bhoomi laughed & then hugged Anika welcoming her warmly. She instructed a care taker to take the luggage & she informed Manjula, Rama Kant & Manohar about the arrival of Yog & Anika. Manjula welcomed them with all the rituals as Anika was stepping into this house for the first time after marriage.

All the three elders blessed the new couple & they went inside the house. After a normal chit chat for few minutes Bhoomi & Manjula went to kitchen & asked the cook to check for dinner.

Anika after a minute too barged in the kitchen & asked "Main kuch madat kara doon?"

Manjula said "Anika beta! tum abhi abhi to aayi hoo aur aate hi kaam main lag gayi"

Anika smiled & said "Kaki Maa! Ye ghar bhi mera hai aur ye kaam bhi ... ab aap is ghar ki badi hai to aapko to sab par thaat se hukum chalana chahiye aap jaayiye ye sab main aur Bhoomi bhabhi dekh leenge"

Manjula smiled & left the kitchen after giving cook a proper menu. Bhoomi said to cook remembering "Maharaj ji khaane main wo ..."

Cook said cutting her short "Haan haan! Pata hai kadi banani hai ... Yog Babu ko bahut pasand hai na"

Bhoomi & Anika smiled at him & Anika added "aur Raghav Bhaiya ke liye?"

Cook smiled "are bade babu to file aur kitaabo se hi pet bhar lete hai unhe khane ki zaroorat thodi hai"

Anika & Bhoomi laughed at his comment. Little later both Anika & Bhoomi started to help Maharaj ji in preparing dinner. Anika in her chat with Bhoomi & Maharaj ji started to know likes dislikes & habits of all the family members.

After a while Raghav too joined the family as he was out for some meeting. Anika gelled well with Vashisht family in just few hours she had a hunch that it will not be easy to adjust with a high class family but was contended that all the family members had simple nature & they all welcomed her in the family with all the love & affection.

Most contending part for her was that Yog was by her side & had already briefed her about his family & the remaining part was completed by Bhoomi & Maharaj ji. After a while dinner was served & all started having dinner with usual chit chat.

Bhoomi said serving the kadi to Manohar "Bade papa aaj Kadi Anika ne banayi hai ... chakh ke dekhiye"

Manohar said tasting it "Anika beta! kadi bahut acchi bani hai ... main to ek katoori aur loonga"

Yog said stopping him "Papa! Bas ek katori aapko khatta kam khana hai warna fir acidity ki problem ho jaayegi"

Raghav said teasing "Kyu Yog! tujhe kam na pade is liye Bade Papa pe raashan laga raha hai ... waise bhi kadi sabse zayada tujhe pasand hai"

Yog replied "Bhai! aapko pata hai na last time jab papa ne gadbad kha liya tha to kitni takleef hui thi"

Manjula said "Yog bilkul theek raha hai ... Bhai saab ko sehat ka bilkul khayaal nahi rehta bas kaam ka khayaal rehta hai"

Manohar said "are meri fikar karne ke liye tum hoo meri dono pyari bahue hai mujhe kis baat ki chinta ..." turning to Anika said "tum daalo beta ... ye Bholu doctor kya ban gaya sab pe rook lagata hai"

Anika smiled & poured a scoop of kadi & said "abhi bas itna Papa aapko khatta kam khana hai"

Rama kant said with a smile "Bhai saab dekh leejiye Yog sab kuch sikha ke laaya hai Anika ko" & all smiled at his comment.

After dinner was over Manjula came to check for medicine of Manohar but saw Anika taking Milk & medicine for Manohar she smiled & said "Beta main yahi lene aa rahi thi Bhai saab hamesha bhool jaate hai"

Anika replied "Kaki Maa jaanti hoon ... isliye apne saamne khilaungi"

She marched to Manohar's room & entered with knock & placed Milk & medicine saying "Papa Dava le lejiye"

Manohar with a smile "Par tum kyu aayi beta kisi ko bhej deti"

Anika said "Ab jab tak main yaha hoon aapko mere saamne dava leni padegi"

Manohar suddenly questioned her "Anika beta! Yog pe hue attack ki investigation kaha tak paunchi hai?"

Anika asked stunned "Papa! aapko pata hai? main khud aapse baat karna chahti thi ..."














So how was it guys please drop in your comments as I write for you guys so please do let me know all your bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love you all


Regards Goldie 😊😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update.. two chapies so so cite...
Yog anima mandhir wala scene was nice.. lpriest tling abt their future... guess they will overcome that...

Bhoomi yog scene is superb.. liked their convo
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: arshiabigya

Nice update.. two chapies so so cite...

Yog anima mandhir wala scene was nice.. lpriest tling abt their future... guess they will overcome that...

Bhoomi yog scene is superb.. liked their convo




Yipiieee i m the first
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: arshiabigya





Yipiieee i m the first


Thanks dear
Glad you liked it
You will see supporting each other
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
I love it
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dipamanvar

Nice update
I love it
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon


Thanks Dipa 😊

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