Rab Ke Khel|Part 6|QUIT NOTE|

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Hello Everyone! I know I am incredibly inactive off late but I had to post this one because I was just too intrigued to see the response. This is the season 2 of Khel Khel Mein and will replace it once it gets completed in 2 updates.

I hope you all will like it.

Love,
Yagya

INDEX

Sneak Peek of Part 1
Part 1
Sneak Peek of Part 2
Part 2
Sneak Peek of Part 3
Part 3
Sneak Peek of Part 4
Part 4
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Prologue

"Ek Khel Tumne Khela, Usi Khel Ka Jawaab Maine Diya. I wanted you and your family to live through the pain which me and my family had live through, just because of your immaturity, Mr.Arnav Singh Raizada. And I have no regrets whatsoever for doing this," said Khushi, decked up in her bridal attire, as Arnav let the tear burning his eyes roll down his clenched jaws.

Arnav let the hazy vision of his love of his life fill his senses as he devoured the poisonous truth revealed by her. His brain which believed that he had finally managed to ignite the flame of love, matching his intensity, refused to believe it while his heart, overcome by the pain of betrayal by none other than the person whom he had trusted more than himself, chose to overlook the brain's questions.

He grabbed her by her elbow, amidst the gasps of shock from both the families, and pulled her to the altar. The altar which was supposed to be the seat of their auspicious union would now witness their separation.

" Just under this altar, Ms.Gupta, I had wanted you to take all your sorrows into my account. As this sacrificial fire as witness, I wanted to take the sacred vows with you and never break them but you chose to give me sorrows which I didn't want," he said pointing towards the altar and the house decorated like a bride.

His voice cracked and he felt choked but he knew that he couldn't stop. Because if he did, he will never be able to say what he wanted to.

"You chose to break me. I played a game with your life and you played a master move to make us equals. I beg of you, Ms.Gupta, to please stop this game. It might bring joy to you to see me heart-broken and my family humiliated in front of the whole town but I am sorry but I cannot take it anymore," he said to a stoic Khushi and feeling more betrayed by every passing moment as he eyed her nonchalant expressions.

The families were unable to digest the events of the day. While the Guptas chose to side with their daughter, aware of her intentions, the Raizadas were clearly broken at the revelation and by the state of their matriarch which it causes. Never did they ever think in their dreams that Khushi Gupta would brew a storm of a potency they had beheld that day.

"I free you from myself, any relations we might have between each other and my expectations. Leave. Leave me, my house, my sight and if possible my dreams and thoughts."

" Chotte, no! Khushi Bitiya cannot do it! NO!"

Khushi unwavering expressionless facade slipped when she saw Arunima losing her consciousness at the sight of her son banishing away his soul and the splitting image of herself. She trusted Khushi and she had trust on her trust that Khushi was incapable of such a heinous deed of lodging a false complaint against the Raizadas.

" Arunima Aunty.." whispered Khushi as she turned towards Arunima, only to be stopped by Arnav's words,

" Go away from here, Ms.Gupta. Go away before I forget that I had loved you in the past and do something I would regret."

The already faded facade slipped a bit more to reveal the horrified reaction of her to Arnav's words. Stress immediately took a toll on her health and her affliction of losing consciousness under severe stress took control over her. Arnav, who was moving towards his mother who had lost her consciousness being a blood-pressure patient, eyed the swaying Khushi and immediately ran towards her, ignoring his own mother, when she inclined close to the ground.

" KHUSHI!"

Shouts reached Arnav's ears as he quickly supported her and lifted her up in his arms. He hated her for what she did with him but there was a concern, which would not fade irrespective of the situations, deep in his heart.

Where would that concern lead them to?

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Edited by -Slytherclaw- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantastic prologue Yagya
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Interesting prologue yagya
I love the name "Rab ke khel"
Thanks for pm
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Love the prologue 👏
Eager for the story.
Thank you for the pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue
Loved it
Eagerly waiting for it to start
Thanks for the PM
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very interesting prologue.. looking forward to read more of it.. best wishes and happy writing Rab Ke Khel! lovely title..

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow.. excited to read this one...
plz start soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb concept...
Intense start!!
Khushi taking revenge from arnav...
Breaking der relationship!!
Anurima n khushi both falling unconscious!!
Waiting for d update!!
Continue soon
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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absolutely amazing... loved it..awaiting the upcoming updates... great job Yagya...😊

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