Arhi SS l When She Rises From The Ashes l Ch 15 l Pg 75 23/11 NEW - Page 24

Originally posted by: love.piyali

Amazing update. Just came across your story in FanFiction section and read it in one go. Can't tell you how glad I am after finding it.

There are many stories of Arshi but very few revenge stories and even less good revenge stories. I am so happy that I found this one. Please please please do PM me. I'm sending you a buddy request, please accept it and PM me when ever you update next.

Usually in all revenge stories, Khushi forgives Arnav and they live happily ever after. I mean I don't understand the point of the revenge story if she is going to forgive him in the end. Not all stories have happy ending. Some scars run so deep that even enemy's blood tears can't heal them. I just hope that in your story Khushi doesn't melt and forgive them. Sometimes revenge is the key to happiness and not forgiveness.

I've read revenge stories wherein Khushi starts her revenge and then chickens out and forgives them. I mean if that is what the writer wanted to do then please don't say its a revenge story, say it's a forgiveness story. Its like being tempted with a chocolate cake and then saying that sorry the cake isn't for sale. I mean if you don't want to sell it then why the hell you are tempting other people to come to you. Atleast give true information about the story to the readers.

Please I beg you to consider my request and not make this a forgiveness story, there are plentiful of men out there in the world worthy of Khushi but not Arnav. It destroys the whole concept of revenge. But afterall its your story so I can only request you to consider.

Anyways I've already babbled a lot. But I have to say, I loved your story and would eagerly wait for further updates. So please do PM me.

P.S. I'm not always this whiny, its just that the past experience with other stories has forced me to say all this. I'm very sorry if I have hurt you at all.

Originally posted by: amus5

in this update Akash caught my attention. Well, I would say there are two kinds of cowards one who is actually a coward - who would by nature cannot be expected to standup for what is right while the other is one who knows what is right but is helpless in the given situation.Akash belongs to the second category and that is why he is able to accept his cowardice. Agreed, Akash has committed actions which eventually would become the death of his marriage but Payal is also at fault is my contention - reason mis-communication. If Akash had talked to Payal what he spoke to Arnav and if Payal had the guts to cross-over and reach out to Akash instead of burning her end of the bridge - I feel this marriage could have been saved.Yet again, there is something called ego which burnt the bridge between the two.

Originally posted by: _Oorja_

Hey Piyali,

Thank you. I am so glad that you found this ff. I don't know how good this ff will turn out with time but I hope to not disappoint you.

I would like to clarify one thing though. It's not a revenge story neither it's a forgiveness story. Its a story about how Khushi will avenge the injustice done to her in so many ways.

She might forgive but she will not forget.

It's a story where she would not back down from playing with fire. She will let ASR know that it's easy to become like him with time but it was hard to be her like she was in the past. When she was giving they only took now she wants to demand things and the raizadas will have to give, willingly or unwillingly.

Hope I made some sense up there.

Thank you again

Oorja