#3 ArshiFF Like Never Before 2 : Ch 29 (A,B): pg 117 : 23.5.17

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CHERUKURI9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#741

superb update. No way PJS can take back what he lost.

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ashu_123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#742

Hey...I am a new entrant to the fan fiction forum---been a silent reader for a short while...however, coming out of that shell, may I take a moment and say that you are an ammaazinnnggg writer..!!!👏👏👏

This story, I spent continuous 3 days reading it...and am I glad or what???

I stumbled upon this fabulous piece while surfing through in general, couldn't stop once started...and the rest is history...😛 😳

3 days...that is all it took me to fall, and fall hard in love with Arnav, Katherine/Khushi and their whole family...!❤️❤️

Unfortunate that I got to know of this wonderful story when it is about to end, but still very happy I got a chance to read a masterpiece..! 👍🏼

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metitaliya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#743

much awaited confrontation.really good.sweet revenge. arnav's won in best way.riva's words were so powerful.pjs lost everything

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jtammareddy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#744

wow! what an update. most awaited confrontation. poor PJS never saw it coming. well he deserved it.

loved reva. khushi is arnav's anchor . can't believe its close to end. can never get enough of these two.

hope we get to read many mor wonderful works from u in future.

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amita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#745

Sorry for late comments

It's summer vacation for kids and was busy with family

Part 28

A very beautiful update

Loved the way you penned their lovely vacation

Arnav and Khushi are really kids sometime so Akhilash is right that they need time for their own baby

Riya and Riva's conversation was so cute and beautiful

Loved the way both become sister cum best friends

Thoe's confession was really beautiful

And now Chris is also become a strong part of AR and Arnav's family

Really loved this update too much

I'm going to read next part tomorrow

Will come with next comment then only

Edited by star_fan1 - 8 years ago

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inamajar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#746

Brilliant Confrontation!!

His against revenge PJS even though is going to be achieved seems void without Aakash by his side. The person who helped him and knew that he needs that revenge to breath is not by his side. It Pains him to the extent that the hurt is unbearable.

The understanding between Arnav & Khushi, the Unspoken gestures. This has helped them over come so many battles and strengthen their relationship, that is the beauty of what they hold and cherish.

Ah! Closure Riva & Ryan wanted to be there for Arnav & also have the final word with PJS. The Siblings understood what it was all about, and hence when they wanted to do it together, there was no argument from anyone and Khushi was their biggest support.

What a strategic move. Keeping a lawyer right beside your enemy. Having direct information about the day to day happenings. Awesome. Loved John's Role and the way he is handling PJS.

What a Shocker for PJS and elation for Arnav on relieving who ASR is. What a slap on the face for PJS. Who did not care and was inhuman to his own kids.

How beautifully put by Riva. She spoke the three of them. They are each other's world and Above all Thankful for Arnav's existence in their lives ( it is true for his extended family as well and Arnav is grateful to his extended family as well ) which PJS had never acknowledged.

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UMMAR

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Posted: 8 years ago

#747

Brilliant chapter. Finally ASR win over PJS. I am just imaging two ASR with one is old and I just remember a scene from ISPKKND where la imagine ASR became old ...

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thiyamappy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#748

Thanks a ton for the pm... once again you nailed it with this chapters. Enjoyed every lines, para, words describing their feelings thoughts. There are many sweet moments. After reading this chapter and watching the new teaser I am trying to imagine the new and old IPK.

I am just imagining ASR with the kids the way you have put in this chapter with the shows..like what if he is like that in the show.

Superb update :)

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GoldenEyes

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Posted: 8 years ago

#749

Ahh the moment that we have all been waiting for!

Loved how it started very emotional with how Arnav's was feeling.

I am really glad with how supreme moment was written! Very too the point and brisk. Even Riva's short speech was to the point and heartfelt! No unnecessary words from any three of them 😊