#3 ArshiFF Like Never Before 2 : Ch 29 (A,B): pg 117 : 23.5.17

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PEARLPOO

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Posted: 8 years ago

#721

Thank you for pm. This update is just an awesome update where u showed every person emotion very detailed manner which I can't stop to read second tym. Akash imp in arnav life is lot more than v feel like an otherhalf who don't need words to express ourselves. Every word in dis update is Soo much filled with all emotions n u make us feel it. Confrontation is really mind blowing for pjs hope he won't get another attack due to this Hahaha.
In part A, u wrote about Numbness I jst love that lines where everyone had felt at least once at a tough situation of their life. Finally arnav won,,,,,

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sudhalata1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#722

What a confrontation. Loved every bit of the PJS downfall

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Doc-ere

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Posted: 8 years ago

#723

Finally everything will be in peace bez circle is completed.

I really like the scene where Riva & Ryan thanks PJ for bringing arnav in this world that was awesome .

Thanks for PM now looking forward for next update .

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Berryblossom6

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Posted: 8 years ago

#724

Hi dear i am new in this forum came across your story like never before and read all 1 and 2 which is still going on want you tell it was and is a one hell of rollar coaster ride every single word sentence emotions pain happiness everything i felt it to the core and you my dear is dont have word for you and now about this part have to say finally a long long wait to face person is over now Asr wil not have to think about his so called i dont want say the name i really hate him and frankly in our real world we have these type of person wolrd is filled these flithy peoepl no offense to any one but finally they will live there life in peace i am so looking forward to it cant wait for the next parts and love you buddy for hard work

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swetharajs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#725

Wow nice way to express ones revenge...

Loved the way each character expressed their feelings...

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spilla

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Posted: 8 years ago

#726

too much happened in this uodate , composed arnav and how he is disturbed all is well written

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chinnulu

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+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#727

Amazing update

The emotions of Arnav regarding his childhood and missing Akash was bought out beautifully. Loved the way Khushi wanted to sooth the pain Arnav is going thru. These two no needs words to express what the other is feeling. Arnav is so happy for what he have in his life with people loving, care and respect after the horrible childhood he went thru where he was left alone to grow up by himself with no one around him to protect from danger, love him and take care of him. Glad Khushi was able to put some sense into Arnav for allowing her to come with him knowing he needed her badly after facing PJS.

Loved the conversation between John and PJS. Even though he is smart enough to run his empire he is also over confident and think he can outsmart everyone else and underestimate other people's ability which is why he is at the stage where he has been bought to by his own kids. Loved the much awaited confrontation between Arnav and PJS. For sure PJS was shocked seeing Arnav there who is younger version of himself just by looks but more gentlemanly who know to take care of his loved ones and put himself in front of them in safeguarding them and see to it no danger reaches them. Loved the way Arnav gave him options which left PJS with nothing other than to work under him. Loved how Riva and Ryan wanted Arnav by their side when they converse with PJS for the last time in their life. Riva's last words with PJS was the highlight, no matter what PJS thought of manipulating them to gain his position back but was speechless hearing Riva's words. Her words for sure shows how much these two respect and what place Arnav have in their life and a tight slap for PJS. Now these three will have peace and able to move on without any shadow of their past.

Waiting for the next one

Thanks for the PM

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#728

woahhh..that was a brilliant update...from the start to the end it was just too good...the note on which the update picked up, it is true that when the pain becomes numb, the success after the pain too leaves behind a dull ache and that is exactly what Arnav is undergoing and I completely understand where he is coming from..and I am so glad he has Khushi by his side like his strength...Arnav with Khushi by him, with his family, friends by him he will always win...I cannot tell you how much I loved Arnav taking down Peter...it literally cooled my heart...Peter is a gone case and Arnav has made sure of it and I love it...and like the final nail in the coffin, I cheered when Riva and Ryan faced Peter putting him further beneath in the ground and making Arnav swell with pride...absolutely fantastic...very well written...and yes even I missed Aakash's presence by Arnav'side, on Arnav's big day...please do continue soon...waiting for the next update eagerly...👏

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

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Posted: 8 years ago

#729

ohh...so its the revenge time...

Mr.Sterling has no idea about his planned downfall...

and the way Mr. Raizada and his siblings has questioned him about his misdeeds...its perfect...

can't wait to read more...

and thank you for pm...

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#730

Oh my... oh my gosh... here is the chapter I had been waiting for a long time. Arnav and PJS confrontation.

Arnav's feeling numb... winning against pjs did not have that much impact on him now. The way riva and Ryan wanted to have last word with pjs... everything was nicely written.

The best part was the actual confrontation. Arnav was just superb and when riva and Ryan spoke to him and thanked him for Arnav ... it was like final nail in the coffin. Liked this chapter a lot.

I am sad that this story will be finishing soon. This is one beautiful story with so many wonderful people and the love they share selflessly.

I just want to thank you for giving us LNB 2

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