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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: golu_1677

wonderful parts guriya.

thnx golu...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honii

wow guri di long tie since u continued this fic was missing it very much... but now u poset m so so so happy this part was hamesha ki tarah superb just toooo goooooooooooooooooood 👏 will be waiting 4 the next part continue sooooon

thanx hana.so much 4 likng da part..n i knew i continued after a v long gap...bt m busy wid studies a bit...so...bt don worry i"ll try my level bst 2 continue when possible...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-8:
shayan has returned bck 2 lahore and is busy in his studies...its evening time n we see shayn in his apartment n getting ready 2 go sumwhere...hez werang a deni jeans wid a sea green color t-shirt on it..n iz lookng v handsom...he wears his watch took his belongings n gav one last look in the mirror 2 his appearance n went out...drove away in the car...now lets see where hez headng 2...he reaches outside a v posh resturant,park his car n came in...reach the dining area n looks here n there 4 a while a sif searchng 4 sumone n @ last moves 2ward a grl who has bck 2ward us....reached the table...seated on the chair infront of the grl....
S:m sorry..i know..i know m late...bt woh i went 2 sleep so...
G:har bar tum aisa he karteho shayan ik tu..mahiney ke dus din tumhey ghar jana parta hai..aur ghar na jana ho tu busy wid ur so called frnds..aur wid studies..merey liye tu tumhare pass kabhi time hota he nahee hai na..
S:come on aaima(so the grl iz aima..if u hav 4gotten abt who she iz..shez sayan's gf..remember)aisi koi baat nahee hai..
A:aisi baat nahee tu kia baat hai shayan...aur ur fed up of me..n tryng 2 avoid me now..?
S:no ways..yaar..u know h much i luv u..aur tumhari jagah..is poori duniya mein koi nahee le sakta...meri zindagi mein tum se barh kar koi larki nahee hai..aur mein ne kab avoid kiya tumhein..jab bolte ho..bottle ke jin ke tarah hazir ho jata hoon..
A:jhoot na tu koi tum se bolna sekhi mr.shayan..jab se wapis ayein hai..mr ka koi naam ho nishan he nahee..aj tu had ho gaye poorey department ke chaar chakar laga diye mein ne aj...par no use..by da way where were u ..?
S:woh yaar mein itney din tak classes miss ke na tu..usi ke chakar mein tha..notes waghera bananey mein..aur woh ik tu humara kharoos marketing ka teacher..serey se sunta he nahee ke bande ka sath masla kia huwa..bas elaan kar deta hai ke submit before 2day evening..uski tu na mein..kisi din bas uski koi dukhti rag haath lag janey do..usko tu hum sab aisa dekhein ge ke uski saath pusthein bhi teachng na karein...
A:tum bhi na shayan..bechara ik professor aisa hai poori universit mein jo tum sab doston ko sedha karna janta hai..aur tum log usko bhi nahee bakshte..doosron ke tu jo halat hai tum logon ke wajah se sab jante hain...is bechare ko tu choro..
S:awain...ajj tu is ne mujhe jitna kaam karwaya hai..ab tu buhat hua...akhir shayan ke bhi college mein koi repu hai..iska tu mein kuch kar he loonga..tum iski choro...
A:i hop agley nxt week tak bechara theek rahe....
S:theek he rahe ga..isko tu wiasey bhi mein ab summer break ke baad akar niptoon ga...parso tu viva ke baad mujhe waisey bhi jana hai..
A:jana hai...abhi tu tum wapis aye ho..ab phir...tumhein na yahan ana he nahee chahiye tha..wahen reh jate...(says tht wid a lil ghussa)
S:yaar naraz tu mat ho...mujhe bhi koi shok nahee hai..roz roz..chakar laganey ka..bt this time mein dad ko naa nahee bol paya...aur wiasey bhi mein ghar nahee...apni dadi ji ke haan ja raha hoon...woh dad itni arsey baad unsey mil rahein hain..n even she wants 2 meet all of us...plan tu mera sab ke saath janey ka tha...phir mein ne socha..ke agar ik do din mein wapis na yaa..tu app madam tu mujhe kacha he chaba jayein gi.woh bi widout dakar...
A:acha..yani ke app janab ke khayal se mein itni buri hoon...aisey hoon mein kya..haan bolo...
S:na baba..meri kya majal jo mein app ke khilaf ik lafz bhi kahoon...woh tu app he hain ke meri tareef mein phool jharte rehte hain...
A:chalo mein tarif mein @ least kuch tu karte hoon..app janab tu tarif kya...ik lafz bhi nahee kehtey..bura he sahee...
S:arey phele bolna tha na..apko apni burai itni pasand hai..mein tu ik na khtam honey waley nazam likh deta apki burayion par...
A:shayan tum na..(n she strted hittng him wid her purse)
S:arey aima..lagte hai yaar kya kar rahi ho..log dekh rahe hain..pata nahee kya sooch rahe hongey merey barey mein..meri bi koi izaat hai yaar..
A:kya soochna hai...keh rahein honge..kabhi gf se panga nahee karna chahye..warna aisi he parte hain...
S:ji nahee yeh nahee keh rahee hongein..balke bol rahe hongein ke...hai bechara..kitni zalim hai iski mehbooba sare bazaar maar rahe hai..sab ke samney yeh alam hai tu...peeche pata nahee aur kya karti hogi..balke yeh bhi sooch rahe hongein bechara shadi se phele itni kha raha hai..shadi ke baat mano ik aur shaeed hua...
he laughed on his own joke..nt realizng tht aaima had pt da bag bck on table..n tears were quite visible in her eyes..shayan jus look up 2 seeher reaction n gt shocked...n was dumbstruck @ wht happen 2 her all of a sudden...
S:aaima..kia howa..tum ro kyun..kya huwa..r u alrite...mei tu bas mazak.aaima...
A:its ok shayan m fine...mujhe kuch kaam hai mei chalti hoon..dinner phir kabhi kar lenge...
n she stood up..n was abt 2 walk...when shayan stood n held her hand...
A:shayan plz mera haath choro...i hav 2 go..
S:mm..hmmm...ahamm..(turning his head in no direction)
A:plz shayan..mein koi scene create nahee karna chate..so plz leave...
S:aur mein na choron tu...
A:dekho shayan m nt in a mood 2 fight so plz leave my hand...
S:mein tu nahee chorney wala..tum koshish karlo churwaney ke...yeh haath umar bhar ke liye thamney ki kasam le hai..aisey thori chutney donga...
A:bs karo shayan buhat huwa...maat bhelao mera dil apni in batoon se...tumhara kya hai.tumhare liye yeh shayad dil lagi hai...pal do pal ka saath par merey liye aisa nahee hai...mainey tumhein apna sab kuch mana hai..toot kar chaha hai tumhein...mera pyaar koi mazak nahee hai..jis ka tum tamasha bano...aur na he koi geri pari cheez hai ke jis ke yun mazak mein he sahe ruswai kardo...tumhein tu ehsas bhi nahee mujh par kya guzarte hai...haftoon tum mujh se nahee milte..kabhi yeh kaam..tu kabhi woh..kabhi yahan jana hai tu kabhi wahan...do pal ke saath ke liye bhi taras gaye hoon mein...tumhein shayad he farq parta hai..kyun ke shayad tum mujhe bhool paoo..par merey liye tum mera phela aur akhri pyaar ho..jisey mein shayd marr kar bhi na bhool paoon...
na bhool paoon..
shayan was jus quite n was lookng v serious when she said all tht...n left her hand also...finally spoke..
S(serious tone):aaima mujhe nahee pata tha ke tum..(suddenly changes his face expression..n burst out laughng..aaima shocked)itni acha bol lete hoo..yaar tumhein tu apni uni ke debate competion mein hisa len achaye..i m sure u will win da frst prize..kya bola hai aj tum ne..alfaz..andaz..ghairaye..i m so impressed...
n strted laughng again...
A(wid anger):shayan kya karoon mein tumhara....m leaving...
n she left n shayan went after her..almst running..n came where she was near her car..opening da door...
S:woah..my my..kya speed hai madam apki..chal tu aise rahe thein jaise..marothon race mein dor laga rahe hoon...
A:shayan mein baat karney ke mood mein nahee hoon..so bye..
S:acha..acha..ab no mazak.ok..ruko aur suno meri baat..
A:no way..koi fayda nahee hai shayan..mein ja rahee hoon..tum phir apni stupid harkatein shuru kardo ge...
S:acha baba..pakka promise kuch nahee karonga ok..ab tu sun lo..ik min ke liye he sahe mujh becharey ko..kabse tu tumehin sun raha hoon..
A:shayan tum phir..
S:(makes a puppy face n hold his ears):ok sorry...plz yaar..tum janti ho..mein nahee ho un sab mein se..jo lik izhaar karte hain..u know na..i don say thngs..bt u know tht also i luv u..n i do care 4 u...aisa nahee hai ke i luv 2 be away frm u ..agar aisa hota..tu mein yun baba se tumhare wajah se jhoot na bolta..baba tu mujhe saath janey ko keh rae the..n i knew..i wont be able 2 stay so many days..widout meetng u..so i lied yaar..only 4 u...n u say thngs lik i don hav feelngs..n don care...(now hez tryng 2 make a fake ghusa bhara face)..
A:aley..aley yeh kya huwa...yeh tu mera sweetie pie..ghussa hogaya mujh se..ab jaldi kuch karo aaima..warna agar uni ki kisi larki ne yun...mr shayan ka mun phola huwa dekha tu woh samjhey ge..ke shayad shayn ko koi allergy..vallergy ho gaye hai..aur phir tu sari uni mein khabar phal jayegi..oh no..phir tumhara kya hoga shayan...tum kisey aur kaisay bologe..ke shayan ke peeche tu larkion ke line lagi rehti hai....
now shayan fake expression chnaged into sort of horor...
S:nahee woh..mein tu theek ho..m fine..kahan phola huwa hai chehra mera..tum bhi n aaaima..nazar kamzoor hogaye hai..chasma lagwaoo...
aaima strted laughng @ his chnage of sttement so did he relized wht trick she played..n both laughed 4 quite a while n then shayn put his hand on aaima's shoulder as aaima was standng wid her back on car....
S:u know wht...i jus luv da way ur...
A:even i do..my sweeto..(pulled his cheeks)
S:kya yaar...tum bhi na...yeh bhi koi pyar karney ka tareka hai...
A:janab humara tu pyar karney ka yahe andaz hai..ab app ko bhata hai tu ok..aur nahee tu..
S:nahee tu..
A:tu bhi ok...
n wid tht...they both srted laughng again..n spent da whole evening in beautiful ambience of their love....
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Asif n his family except shayan packed there belongings n strted their journey 2ward da village....they reached there by night time...n evryone welcomed them whole heartedly....beamma was happy 2 see his son after such a long time...n even more happy 2 see armghan n aliha...as she was neva able 2 see h they grew up...n now seeing them grown up..n such mannarable...gave her a sense of relief tht even his sons choice was nt tht bad..frst she did nt mixed up wid huma(shayan's mom)..bt later she felt tht she was indeed a woman...whom u can be proud of..a great mother...an excellent wife..and above all was now provng 2 be a good bahu....armghan n aliha went nicely along wid manial n chutki...rest 2 them seemed bit wid attitude...so they tried 2 stay far away frm them only....
It was da nxt day now..shayan had 2 come 2morrow morning...frm beamma...asif came 2 knew abt manial's marriage wid a person twenty yrs elder than her....n een nt tht only he was already married...as according 2 their tribe..a grl of there tribe cannot gt married outside da family..so hav 2 look in family 4 suitable groom..bt if hez nt there a grl had 2 gt married 2 sum one v elder 2 her...so as man can gt married 2-3 times...wht eva might be da consequnces..even they can outside...bt grl cant...as if they will.there were cases of both da couple gt killed coz grl married n outsider...against da tribe...when asif khan heard abt this cruelty happening wid manail..he felt pain 4 tht poor grl....even he saw wht was manial's elder sister state...n why was she lik tht...even worse can hapen wid her 2...da sweet grl..whch he liked so much...n who was takng care o her needs frm da time he cme here..he imagined wht his daughter aliha might be @ manial's place...n tht thought jus broke him up..n he decided 2 talk 2 agha jee abt this matter....
he went 2 him n sat nxt 2 him in da mens area..where men deal wid their tribes matter whole day long....as no was there.....he strted the convo..n explained 2 him tht he was doing wrong wid mainal...
Aj:Humne jo faisla kia hai buhat soch samaj kar kiya hai...aur yahee sadiyon se hota aya hai..aur ab bhi aisa he hoga....kise ke kehne se revaitain(traditions) nahee badaltein..
As:magar bhai je yeh zulm hai zyadti hai...app manial ke saath...akhir woh app ke apni bete hai...app ne apni bari beti ke saath jo kia us ka nateja tu app ke samney he hai..ab app phir kyun aisa kuch duhrana chahte hain...soch lijye...
Aj:tu aur koi rasta hai tumhare pass..yaad rakho asif humare khandan mein larkei bahir nahee byahi jatee...aur ab manial ke pass is baat pe guzara karne ke ilawa aur koi haal nahee...tu behtar hai usey tum mein se koi...achi umeed na dilaye..
As:par..bhai ji..app..
Aj:bas...keh diya...ab kuch aur nahee...haan agar tum waqai manial ke bhalai chate ho..tu le aao...kise aisey ka rishta jis pe humein aitraz na hoo...tumhe lagta hai..kya hai koi khandan mein aisa..hota tu hum na kar dete manial ki baat...agar nahee hai...tu behtar hai..bas chup chap beth kar tamasha dekho...
n he left sayng tht....n asif wa left worried as wht should he do now.....n after lt of thnkng he came 2 a decision n smiled n seemed relaxed now...n went 2 talk 2 his wife now.
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so guyz this was end of this part...hop u all hav liked it...do comments n tell me h it was...i will be waitng eagerly 4 ur replies..
nxt part: shayan's arival....shyan n manial meet 4 da frst time....
ok guyz till then hav a nice time...
do take care...
wid luv..
guriya...😊

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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another great part. Just waiting for shayan and manial to meet
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow guri di another wonderful part just toooooooo goooooooooood awesome fantastic will be waiting 4 the next part i think manial and shayan are going to get married in logon ka deci son yahi hoga continue sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: golu_1677

another great part. Just waiting for shayan and manial to meet

thnx golu 4 likng..n both will meet soon...😊

Originally posted by: Honii

wow guri di another wonderful part just toooooooo goooooooooood awesome fantastic will be waiting 4 the next part i think manial and shayan are going to get married in logon ka deci son yahi hoga continue sooon 👏

thanx hana 4 likng da part...n lets see whts da decison..wait n watch...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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rocking part guri 👏 manilal is getting married to someone who is 20 yrs older than her 😭 that's terrible 😭 i guess shyan's father will come for her rescue and make her get married to shayan 😉 cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Paru_M

rocking part guri 👏 manilal is getting married to someone who is 20 yrs older than her 😭 that's terrible 😭 i guess shyan's father will come for her rescue and make her get married to shayan 😉 cont soon.

thnx paru 4 likng...n yah abt manial thts true....so lets see wht happens n wht shayan's dad will do...i will be postng it by 2nite Inshallah...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-9:
Nxt day...shayan came out of his lecture room..wid his usual frnds..whch include mahad(aka ejaz khan) ali(aka chitanya chaudary) and umair(aka iqbal khan)...they were passing by da corridor dicussing da lecture of 2day..n h boring da professor as usual was..n da pranks they played on him...blah blah..when...
Mahad:chalo ji apni tu chuti hui samjho..socha tha aj teri jaib|(pocket) saaf karwayeinge..tujh se kuch khana peena karwayeinge..magar..hai re kismat...
Ali:kyun..ab kya howa..abhi bhi hum aisa kar sakte hain..i don thnk..shayan kabhi mana karege..waisey bhi bade din baad humarey haath aya hai yeh..warna tu..woh is ke chirya..humarey se phele dana chug lete thi...
umair ho was quiet n nt said a word yt..looked @ where mahad was lookng n relized y he said so..n said..
Umair:chor ali..aj mein tujhe kuch khila pila deta hoon..shayan ke jaib phir kabhi khali kareinge..chal..
mahad:bilkul sahee..chal chalte hain..shayan phir terey gaoon se aney ke baad milenge ok buddy...
shayan was a bit suprised @ wht happen 2 both mahad n umair..n y they were speakng lik tht..even ali was..
Ali:par yaar...
b4 ali could complete...sumone jsu came near them...
Sumone:hi shayan..
S:oh..hi aaima tum..?
ali looked straight n realized y both mahad n umair said so...
Ali:hi aaima...hru?
A:hi ali..m f9...wht abt u?
ali:m fine 2..chal shayan we will leave u guyz carry on..bye aaima..bye shayan..
umair:hmm..yah..bye
n three of them went ahead..n shayan n aaima wer left alone..
S:aaima ik minute tum yahein tehro mein abhi aya.
A:ok..par jaldi ana..
S:yah..don worry..abhi gaya aur aya..
he ran 2ward da three of them..n reached quite breathlessly...three gt shocked as wht happen 2 him..
Mahad:abey tujhe kya hua..yun hamta kamta kyun bhaga ja raha hai...kya aaima ne teerey peeche police laga de hai..
S:mahad tht was spossed 2 be funny.
Mahad:i thnk it was..
S:if it was...i will catch u later 4 this..abhi tu mein jaldi mein hoon..
Umair:haan haan pata hai...us maha rani ko waisey bhi tera humarey saath hona..kabbhi bhi pasand nahee hota...
S:ok guyz ct it short..m sorry..i knw tum logon se promise kia tha.tht 2day i will go out wid u guyz..aur poorana sara hisab chuka donga..par yar meri majbori samjho..plz..
Ali:teri kya majbori..har bar..aisa he hota hai shayan..woh muhtarma ati hain..aur app humein bhol ke un ke saath gul...ab pyar karney ka yeh matlab nahee ke banda dostoon ko he bhool jaye...
S:guyz u know aisey koi baat nahee hai..jus tht..she oesn't lik u three..n i avoid..coz mei tum logn ke beech koi jhagra nahee chahta...as u know..tum charoon merey liye imp ho..ahr ik ke apni jagah hai...so..m sorry..nxt time haan...
three of them were quiet as hey knew he always says tht...n as always aaima spoils there plan...
S:ab kuch bakoo bhi teeno..mujhe jaldi jana..hai..warna woh yahaan warid ho jayegi..
Umair:its ok shayan..mein yeh nahee kahoonga ke akhri baar...coz i know..tu jab wapis ayega tab bhi aisa hoga...so..ab ja..aur njoy..hav fun dude..
S:thnx yaar umair..mujhe pata tha...in dono mein tu rati bhar bhi akal nahee ik tu he tu samjdhar hai jo meri prob samjhe ga.
Ali n Mahad(2gether):acha bacho..hum na samjh aur yeh mr smjhdar..teri tu..
n they ran after him...n as there was a celing in the corridor shayan hurriedly climbed it....
Ali n mahad behind:tujhe tu baad mein dekheinge..
Mahad:abhi tu is umair ke bache ke khabar lein zara ali..kyun..bara apney app ko akal mand bananey pe tula tha...
n umair knew now they both wont leave him..so he ran as fast as he can...
n shayan while walkng 2ward aaima..watched this n laughed..n thanked God 4 such sweet blessings..da frnds whch he gt were nt anythng less than a bleesng..as they knew his probs..n always understand him...
he came 2 aaima..
S:sorry..late tu nahee hua..
A:nahee it ok..waisey gaye kahan thee..
S:woh..haan..woh na..haan yaad aya woh assignment submit karni thi na lst day tha.bus wohi karney gaya tha..
A:shayan..jab jhoot bolna nahee aye..tu nahee boltey..
S:acha..mein ne kab jhoot bola..
A:mujhe maloom hai..tum apni un stupid dostoon ke peeche gaye they...i don't know wht u lik abt them..mujhe un mein se ik bhi ik ankh nahee bhata..
S(himself):aur unhe tum nahee
A:mujhe kuch kaha?
S:ahan..nahee tu..come on aaima..choro in sab batoon ko..chalo canteen chalte hain..n wil hav sum coffee..wht say..
A:ok..as u say..chalo
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Its a new day...n we see a car moving on rough roads of a village...n then it stops wid a jerk...we see sumone comng out of da car..n its none other than our hero shayan..so @ last he reached....there was a big gate infront of him...n guards standng outside da closed huge door..when he came close 2 da door da guards smiled @ him n opened da door 4 him...as they were already informed tht a gust might be arriving @ anytime...he went inside n was lookng around..n was in a awe 2 see da beauty around him...the house frm inside was no more as compared 2 a palace...he went further n was tryng 2 find sumone..bt silence was all around...no one was there...till far...as it was afternoon time...n evryone was asleep...shayan was now standng in a veranda(an open air area..included inside the house)...n was lookng here n there 2 find sumone...suddenly sumone came running down da stair...n wid a jerk hitted him...n was abt 2 fall...shayan gt shock..as he was nt ready 4 such a situation...n da grl jus hitted him...n was now fallng on da ground...when he jus caugt hold of her wid his hand around her arms..n there she was..yes none other tahn our heroine manial...in arms of shayan...both realized soon @ wht condition they were in..n shayan jus left her 2 stand on da ground...as he was now embrassed as wht might sumone had seen both lik tht...or wht da grl might be thnkng abt him...as he knew h conservative ppl living here can be @ times..
after returning frm da shock...manail realised wht situation she was in..n look @ her dupata...whch was now...touchng da ground..n whch should be covering her head instead..she huriedly fixed it up on her head b4 anyone might hav seen her in tht condition...
M:shukriya..app ne..waisey app kon..?
S:woh it ok..mein shayan..asif khan ka bara beta..woh yehin aye hain na..m right?
M:oh..acha tu app shayan hain..je chacha je yahen hain..woh abhi tu agha je ke saath bahir kahin gaye hain..app yahan kyun khare hain..app andar bare kamrey(drawing room types) mein aye..
n then she took him 2 tht room..n he sat on one of da sofas..she was still standng..
S:actually mujhe kafi pyas lagi ahi..agar pani mil jaye tu..?
M:mein mafi chahti hoon..app se kuch thanda ani ka poochna tu bhool he gaye...mein abhi le kar ati hoon..
n when she was abt 2 leave da room
S:waise sab log kya ghar pe nahee hai..woh kya hai na..koi nazar nahee araha..
M(turned):nahee sab gahr he par hain..woh kya hai na..dupahar(afternoon)ka waqt hai..humarey haan sab sawerey(morning)jaag jate hai tu is waqt sab apney kamroon mein aram kar rahein hongey...app bethye..mein abhi chachi aur aliha ko batati hoon app ke aney ka...
n sayng tht she left...n shayan stood up..n was now lookng @ the interiors of da room...n no doubt they were speaking of da traditions of whch they were a part of...suddenly his thoughts went 2wards aaima...n a smile appeared on his face....then a thought came of who tht grl was whch he just met now...he tried 2 recall abt her...of who she could be...n wht might her name be...then he realized he had nt even ask her name...as da thought came he hitted his head slightly...reminded himself 2 ask her name...when she comes again wid da glass of water...bt b4 tht ....sum foot steps were heard...n shayan came out of his thoughts...n saw his mom n sis...n wid them an ld lady..wid grace..enterng da room...one glance @ her n shayan came 2 know who she was..as his baba always told him so much abt her dadi..n 2day when he saw her...he knew wht character tht woman had...da elegance,da charm...da persona she was caryng suited her fully...
shayan came forward n hugged her..n then he met each n evryone..n soon he was lookng lik as if he was da part of da house frm ages...a made came n gav him a glass of water...he thought of tht grl 4 a while tht where she might be..as if all were there n she only was nt there...he even didn't hav da courage 2 ask frm anyone else...who she was n where she went...his thoughts became wild...n drafted him 2 think of her as a n angel who jus came 2 escort her 2 da room...then he himself smiled @ the thought n realized y he was thnkng tht much abt a grl...n he shrugged all thoughts frm his mind n gt involved once agin in family meeting...
later as all men came...he met them all...he found agha je a bit strict n reserved.....whch he didn't lik..coz he lik fathers 2 be lik his baba...n hated ppl lik agha je..
later tht night as he was sitng wid salim n rahim...n was getting bored of their talks of pride..as he was different n didn't lik such talks...armgahn came n called him..as his dad was callng him in da room..n shayan heaved a sigh of releif n bid both good night n went 2 meet his dad...
he came inside da room..his mom was sitting on one side and dad was lyng on the other side of da bed..
S:baba..app ne mujhe bulaya tha?
A(gts up on hearng shayan's voice):haan shayan..aoo yaha betho..(makes place on bed 2 make him sit)
S:ji baba bolye
A:shayan...mainey aj tak apney bachoo ka har kaha mana hai..unhoon ne jo chaha woh unhe diya..aur yeh koi ehsan nahee hai mera un par balke...merey liye woh mera farz tha..mujhe lagta tha bachoon ko apney faisle khud karney chayein..yeh unki zindagi hai..unhoon ne isey jina hai..aur mein apni soch mein theek bhi raha..aj Mashallah merey teeno bache.apni chuni hui zindagyoon s ekhush hain..aur mein bhi ke mujhe naaz ha tum teeno par..ke tum merey aulad ho..bet amainey tu apna farz poora kiya..ab chahay acah kiay yah bura.yeh tum log jano..
S:baba aj app yeh kasie baat kar rahe hain.app ne tu humein woh hera banaya hai..jo kisi johri ke bas ki baat na thi..app se bhar kar tu koi baap kar he nahee sakta..
A:mujhe khushi hai betey ke mein tumhari nazroonmein kamyab raha...ik kamyab baap tu baan gaya..ap ik kamyab na sahi acha insaan bana chata hoon aur is kaam mein mujhe tumahre madat ki zaroorat hai...kaho karo ge meri madat..
S:madat kaisey madat baba?
A:beta..agar mein tumhari zindagi ka koi faisla karoon...tu kia tumhein us pe koi aitraaz hoga...
S:nahee baba..app ne kab ghalat faisla kia hai.aur mujhe yakeen hai ke app meri zindagi ka agar koi faisla karei ge tu woh meri bhalayi keliye he hoga..
Atu phir mein ne aj ik faisla kia hai beta..bas usey maan lena..yeh baap us ke sewa kuch nahee mange ga puri zindagi tum se...
S:baba..app yeh sab kia bol rahein hain..mujhe kuch samajh nahee a raha hai..
looks @ his mom..a sif whts dad sayng..mom says nothng jus looks down on the bedsheet...n then shayan helplessly looks @ his dad..as if hez confused..
A:shayan..mein ne tumhari shadi teh karde hai....
--------------------------------------------------------ok guyz this was da nxt part...so ow was it...hop u all hav liked it..do comments n tell me h it was..will be eagerly waitng 4 ur replies....
nxt part:wht will be shayan's reaction..will he agree 2 marry..or nt...wht if he says no..wht will then happen 2 manial...
4 answer of all these question..keep readng hogaye hai muhabbat...
till then...
hav a nice day..njoy...tc
wid luv...
guriya... 😊

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 17 years ago
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wonderful part guriya. I hope shayan aur manail ki shaadi ki baat ho pls..........

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