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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
thanx 2 both of u 4 likng.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow guri your ff is awesome just caught up ...bichari manial aur uski family ki aurtein feel soo baad for them 😭 i like the bond tht manial and her mother share .....and shayan ki family is so funny every1 is so loving and caring...i loved your ff and learnt many new words lol 😉 continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey dear just read the last two parts & luved it... 👏
shayan's such a sweet bro.. 😛 😊 😛
and ha..aapki is kahani ke zariye hume urdu alfaaz bhi sikhne mil rahe hai..😉 😳 😳
so gr8 going !!!!
and continue soon 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guriya that was such a cute and emotional part 👏 poor manial.she is going thru so much pain and still not complaning 😭 shayans and his bonding with his brother and sister were really gr8 👏 i hope shayans father called him to talk abt his marriage to manial 🤗 can't wait for the next part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honii


wow guri your ff is awesome just caught up ...bichari manial aur uski family ki aurtein feel soo baad for them 😭i like the bond tht manial and her mother share .....and shayan ki family is so funny every1 is so loving and caring...i loved your ff and learnt many new words lol 😉continue soon 👏


thanx honii 4 likng the ff....n the characters...u luved the ff...n the writng...m v happy....n i will continue soon...keep readng... 😊

Originally posted by: starbellz_21


hey dear just read the last two parts & luved it... 👏
shayan's such a sweet bro.. 😛 😊 😛
and ha..aapki is kahani ke zariye hume urdu alfaaz bhi sikhne mil rahe hai.. 😉 😳 😳
so gr8 going !!!!
and continue soon 😳 😳 😳


thanx 4 likng the parts...n i m happy u learnt sumthng frm it...actually its story of tht type so hav 2 use sum urdu words..bt i try 2 explain wht they mean so u all r nt confused..hop u all understand wht i mean...n keep readng... 😊


golu m jus busy these days in my college work so m nt able 2 continue this ff...as hav less time...bt i will try 2 pst next part asap....

Originally posted by: Paru_M


guriya that was such a cute and emotional 👏 part poor manial.she is going thru so much pain and still not complaning😭 shayans and his bonding with his brother and sister were really gr8 👏 i hope shayans father called him to talk abt his marriage to manial 😛 😉 😉 😛 can't wait for the next part 😊


thanx paru 4 likng...n 4 ur lovely comment...n abt wht shayan's father wanna say...keep readng..n u will know tht soon.. 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-5:
All the family members had nice time havng dinner...n they talk normally abt diff thngs during the dinner...then b4 leavng shayan's dad...told him 2 see him in his study after finishng his dinner.
then shayan went 2 study room...where his dad used 2 be mst of the time...shayan while standng on the door..
S:baba...mein andar ajaoon...
A:haan...beta aoo..mein tumhara he wait kar raha tha...
S:ji..baba(n he came inside..n sat n the sofa..near the table...where his dad was sittng)...app ne bulaya..koi khas kaam tha...
A:haan...shayan..mein ne tumhein..lahore se isi liyye bulaya tha..ke mein tumse kuch salah(advice) lena chahta hoon...jo ke phone pe nahee kar pata mein..kyunke mamla..buhat serious hai...
S:app bataya baba..baat kya hai akhir...mein koshish karoonga..sahee salah deney ke..waisey app mujhse barey hain..app ke samney mein kya kahoon ga...magar app..phir bhi mujhse salah chate hain tu i will try my bst...
A:mein janta hoon..ke mein tumse umar mein bara hoon..magar zarori nahee salah ke liye umar mein bara hona chaye...aur mujhe apney bete par pura bharosa hai..ke woh har kaam soch samjh kar karta hai...shayad jo mamla mein tumhein batoon..mein usey leke jazbati hoke soochoon..par tum aisa nahee karo ge..is liye..i need ur help...
S:jaise app kahein..ab bataein..majra(prob) kya hai...
A:tum tu jante he ho..ke mujhe kai saal ho chuke hain..mein apney khandan waloon se nahee mila..aur uske wajah bhi jante hoke..woh tumhare mom ko accept karne ko tayar nahee the...jaisey ke humarey ghar ka rewaj tha..ke i cant marry sumone out of the family...aur mein is baat pe razi na tha..n wanted 2 marry ur mom..as i thought no one could be bst as wife 4 me..then ur mom..n m happy 2day tht i made tht decission..as ur mom proved 2 be..the bst wife...n m happy tht i gt such a gr8 family...whch iz only coz of ur moms bst effort tht m 2day proud of all my kids...
S:sirf mom he nahee baba..yeh apke parwarish ka bhi nateja hai...tht we all r so good...app ke jaisa carng n lovng dad...tu mein ne ajj tak nahee dekha..the way ur wid us...so supportive..n encouraging...n 2 me ur my ideal...
A:acha bas ab tarif band kar...aur sun..haan tu mein keh raha tha..ke jab..mere ghar waloon ne tumhare mom ke liye inkar kiya..tu i left my house...n came here..n all these years i neva looked bck..haan..par kabhi kabbhi..maaje ke khabar geri kar leta tha...uske ilawa koi contact nahee tha..mera baba tu meri shakal bhi nahee dekhna chate they..as 2 him..mein ik nafarman beta he tha...jis se milna unho ne marte dam tak na chaha..aur mein un ka dedar(saw him) akhiri waqt bhi na kar saka...khair kismat ko shyad yahee manzoor tha..aur mein kismat ke is sitam pe razi bhi hogaya...aur jeeta rehta isi tarah shyad...magar...
S:magar kya baba..
A:magar...pichle hafte...mere bhai ji ka phone aya mujhe..aur jo unho ne kaha..us ne mano...mujh mei ik naye..rooh phoonk de...mein apni is zindagi se khush tu buhat tha..koi dukh an tha..do samjhdar aur honhar bete..ik pyari,guriya se beti..aur itna pyar aur khayal rakhne walee biwi..sab tha..mere pass..haan..magar ik kasak thi dil mein..ik tamana..mein apne maaje se marney se phle milna chatha tha...ik yahi khawhish thi..is dil mewin...aur us upar wale ne sun he le...
S:yeh tu achi baat hai na..baba..agar ab app ke bhai je app se milna chate hain..sab puraney rishtey..jorna chate hain tu..kia masla hai..u should go...
A:masla koi aisa nahee hai..par..mujhe sirf samaj nahee a raha..kya karoon..sab theek lag tu raha hai..khush bhi buhat hoon mein..par ik anjana khauf bhi hai...is liye tujhe bulaya..ke tu sab sun kar kya kehta hai..
S:mujhe tu koi masla nazar nahee ata..app baba bewaja he fikr kar rahe hain..i thnk...its good oppurtunity..n u should awail..it..aur is bhahney..humein bhi apna dadyal dekhne ko mile ga...waisey apne mama se baat ke is barey mein..unka kya kehna hai..
A:tumhare mama se tu sabse phele baat ke thi..aur us ne bhi wohi kaha..jo tu keh raha hai..
S:tu phir pareshani kaise...jus go ahead...n i assure u evrythng will be rite..aur phir darney ke kya baat hai...app ko darr hai..ke woh waderey log hain..tu hum bhi kaam nahee baba..mein bhi black belt hoon..dekhye ga..koi meri family ke taraf ankh tu uthaye...wahen dher ho jayega...
A:(slaps him on head)badmash...hogaya hai..tu buhat...aur mujhe kya darr..apney do jawan betoon ke hotey huey..tu sahee kehta hai..tum se tu meri himat..hai..bas tu phir decided..agle hafte hum gaoon(village) ke liye niklein ge..tujhe bhi jana hai..yaad rakh..teri dadi..ne phone pe khas kaha hai..sab bachoon ko leke ana..samjhe..
S:par dad..mera viva hai hafte ko..i cant cum...app log jao..mein phir kabhi mil loon ga...
A:no ways..sab jayenge..warna unhein bura lagey ga...aur tu aisa karna na..mein driver ko bhej donga..woh directly tujhe leke..wahan ajayega..aur hum yahan se nikal jayenge...
S:par baba..mein..
A:shayan..no arguments now...chalo ab jake so jao...aram karo..safar ki thakan hogi...kaal subah milte hain...good nite...
S(lookng @ him helplessly):goodnite baba..waisay ik baat kahoon...sab achi baatein jo mein ne kuch dair phele app ko kahin..ap ke barey mein..us mein ik buarai add kar lejye...
A:woh kya beta ji..
S:yahi ke app buhat ziddi hain..apney agey kisi ke nahee chalne dete...
A(laughs):kya karoon..akhir baap kis ka hoon.. 😆
S:baba..app bhi na...goodnite...see u @ morning...yaad hai na..kahan par..tayar rahega...i"ll wait..
A:beta ji mein tu ready honga..app apney khair manaye..
S:oh..tu app mujhe challenge kar rahe hain...
A:koi shak..
S:ok then will see...
A:yah sure..will see...
n then shayan leaves the room..n goes off 2 sleep...2 wake up 4 nxt morning..whch will brng..sum new challenges...in his life...
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ok guyz this is up 4 now...i know its short..par abhi ke liye itna he....do comments n tell me h it was...i"ll be waitng 4 ur all replies..
nxt part: wht challenge...was shayan..n his dad talkng abt...n trip 2 the village...

till then..
hav nice time..
take care..
wid luv..
guriya.... 😊

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg guri di i loved this part it was too good awesome..the best thing about it talks/conversetion between shayan and his father it touched my heart their family care for everyone so nice ..once again great part will be waiting 4 the next part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very nice part guriya 👏 shyan and black belt 😉 nice combination 😊 😊 i guess something is definetly up in the village. 🤔 plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful part guriya. will b waitng for the next part eagerly.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honii


omg guri di i loved this part it was too good awesome..the best thing about it talks/conversetion between shayan and his father it touched my heart their family care for everyone so nice ..once again great part will be waiting 4 the next part 👏 👏



thnx honii 4 likng...n i"ll continue soon... 😊

Originally posted by: Paru_M


very nice part guriya 👏shyan and black belt 😛 😛 😛 😛nice combination 😊 😊 i guess something is definetly up in the village. plz cont soon 😊



thanx paru 4 likng the part...n shayan humarey hero sahab hain..aur hero mein extra qualities tu hongi hi na... 😆

Originally posted by: golu_1677


wonderful part guriya. will b waitng for the next part eagerly.



thnx golu n i"ll continue asap... 😊
Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 18 years ago

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