Hogaye Hai Mohabbat..RA Last Part (Pg:43) - Page 3

Originally posted by: cute_rabi

nice promo 👏

Rabi

thnx rabi 4 likng the part....n i will post frst part soon...😊

Originally posted by: starbellz_21

wow!gr8 casting!!! 😊 😊 😊
promo's seems really interesting... waiting for the first part...
gud work 👏

thanx 4 likng the cast n promo...frst part will soon be posted....jus keep readng n commentng...😊

Originally posted by: sun_423

toooooooooo gooddddddddddddd promo...very very very very intresting.... 👏
ab please story bhi jaldi se start kar do..me waiting eagerly... 😃

thnx surya 4 likng the promo...n m writng the frst part...will post it soon...😊

so guyz the wait iz ova now...herez the frst part of "Hogaye Hai Mohabbat" 4 u all....

Part-1:
Ik badii se Haweli(palace)bahir se dekhai jatey hai...camera ab andar ke taraf move karta hai...dalan(short way)se hotey howey...hum andar dakhil(enter) hotey hain...Ik bada sa varanda hai..jis mein ik buhat hi bara peer laga hai...jis pe ik jhola latka hai...hum dekhte hain ke koi jhoola le raha hai...yeh ik larke hai...hum us ka chehra nahee dekh pate..kyunke teez hawa ne us ka chera baloon se dhak rakha hai..usne ik red or green coloured chorridar phena hai...aur woh bhut mast hoke jhola jhol rahee hai..aur saath mein koi lok geet(folk song)ga rahee hai...tabhi koi usey pukarta hai..aur woh jhule ke raftar ahista kardete hai..
Sumone:ab bas bhi karye na phopho(aunt)..mere barii kab ayegi...app kabse jhola..jhol rahe hai..ab mujhe dein..
Grl:arey chutki thura sa sabr karo..bas abhi dete hoon..itne acha mosam ho raha hai..is mein jholne ka apna he maza hai...
(tu woh sumone..is a sweet lil grl chutki...now see whoz the grl..)
Chutki:plz...phopho..app dein na...mujhe bhi musam ka maza lena hai na..
Grl:acha baba..yeh lo..ab khush..meri jaan..
Chutki(sweetly after sittng on swing):thank u phopho...ab duniya ke sabse ache phopho ho..ab mera kitna khayal rakhte ho...mujhe homework bhi karate ho..mujhe sweetsbhi lakar dete ho..warna mama tu kabhi mujhe kuch lake nahee detein..aur jab dekho tab dante he rehte hain...ur the bst phopho..
Grl:acha je..ab maska lagna band kijye..aur sahee bato..ke asal baat kia hai...haan..
Chutki:woh phopho...kuch bhi tu nahee..mein tu aisey he..
Grl:mujhe ache tarah maloom hai...tumhara koi lalach zaroor hai..ab jaldi kaho..kia baat hai..
Chutki:woh merey ik school frnd ka bday hai..aur mujhe usey gift dena hai..tu..app ko tu pata hai..mama..kabhi nahee manege..app plz..mere help kardo na..
Grl:hmm..help..par mujhe kia milega badle mein..bolo..
Chutki:mere ik sweet se kiss..
Grl:arey wah bhai..mein nahee karoongi kaam ik kiss ke liye..yeh bhi koi baat hui..mein gift lake doon..aur mujhe mile sirf ik kiss...now ways..
Chutki:acha..phir apko kia chaye..mere pass tu kuch nahee hai..kia doon apko..
Grl:arey budhu mein tu mazak kar rahe thi..tum fikr na karo,,min tumhein ik buhat acha gift dongi..tumhre frnd ke liye..ab ..ik sweet smile do mujhe...
n then chutki smiles..
jus then we hear a voice frm behind...
Voice:haan haan aur bigaro isey manial bibi..tumhein tu ik yeh mere ladle he mile hai bigarne ke liye...zidain iske tum pore karo...phir jab yeh aur zidi ho...tu iske bawa(dad)...mujhe konsein...
(so the grl..talkng 2 chutki..was our herion..manial..)
manial shrminda khare hote hai..usey batein chup tu rahee hote hain..magar..bolne walee uske bhabhi hain..isliye woh unhe jawab nahee de sakte..kyunke woh us se badi hain..chahe woh kuch bhi kahein..usey humesha khamosh suna he parta hai..
M:bhabhi..plz..app chutki ko kuch maat khayega...app se tu woh kuch nahee mangte..aur mera dil karta hai..apney bhai ke bete ke liye kuch lena ka tu app ko kia aitraaz hai..
(bhabhi-shazia-S)
S:yeh aur suno...haan..bhaye app hum koon hotein hain bolne walee...mazee se laad uthaoo..mere bala se..jab agli paar tumhara bhai poochega ke itne ziddi kyun hui..tu keh dongi..apni is behan se he poocho..
M:plz..bhabhi..app aisey he baat ka batangar bana rahee hain(jus draggng the talk)...chorye na..
Chutki-C
C:mama..plz ab phohpho ko kuch maat bolye..
S:tu chup kar...gaz bhar ke larke nahee..aur yeh lambe zuban(small child..bt speakng lik an ederly lady)..aur reh apney is phophi ke suhbat(company)mein..aj mere agay bole hai..kal..baap ke agay bolna..
M:bas kijye bhabhi..app us becharee ko kyun kuch keh rahee hain..jo kehna hai..mujhe kahye..apna ghussa nikln hai tu mein hon..kyun us masoom ko bolte hain..
jus then we hear voice of a grl....fr a nearby room...shez screamng..lik anythng...
S:lo..yeh ik aur drama shuru hogaya..bhai is ghar mein ik pal ka chein nahee humein..pata nahee..kab yeh chup hoge ab...
M:plz bhabhi..app jante hain na sab kuch..jiji(manial's elder sis)ke yeh halat kaise howe..woh tu yeh bhi nahee jante woh kya karte hain..kyun chikte chilate hain..woh kahn pure hosh mein hain..sab kuch jante howe bhi app bajye ke unke liye duwa karein..sunate rehte hain..
S:bas zyada bol maat apne jiji ke liye..sab jante hoon mein...yeh uske karmoon ke he saza hai..jo ajj is haal mein hai...warna..yahan sabhi ke saath..kuch aise he kahani hai..par baat guzarne ke hote hai..magar nahee..tumhare behna ne tu rajke humarey khandan ke shan barhaye hai...
M:bhabhi plz..app..jiji..ke liye ik lafz nahee bolenge..
S:Dekh lena ik din tera saath bhi aisa he hoga manial..tu jo udhakte phirte hain na yahan se wahan..bas ik bar mamiji ki bahu ke yahan se pegham ajaye..phir mein dekhte hoon...tere kitne hasi nikalte hain..phir hasna aise bateesi nikla ke..
Manial doesn't say anythng n stares her wid anger..n leaves the place...
S(herself):arey bhai Allah jhoot na bulwaye..jaisa boo ge waisa he katooge..tum logon ne kab apne bahoo ke saatha acha kiya...mujhe dekho..mere umar he kya the aur leke bandh diya mujhe us budhe ke sath...jo ke pyaar kaam..maarta zyada hai...mere haye lage hai tum logon ko.ke ik ka tu haal tum logon ke samney hai(pointng 2 manial's elder sis)..dusre ke sath bhi kuch acha na hoga..kahe dete hoon...woh tu shukr karo mein hoon jo guzar rahee hoon..abhi dekhna..dusre ayegi tu kya wabal hoga..
jus then another lady comes....
Majee:bas kar bahoo...kabhi tu acha bol..agar terey saath bura howa hai...tu kyun us bechare ko bura bolte hai..balke uskey ache ke duwa(pray) kar...warna kya hum nahee jante..yahan..ke waderoon(the rich n ederly people in village) ke faisloon ko..tu bhi tu kuch na bole thi apne..bawa(dad) ke agey...duwa kiya kar..ache ke...mere betyoon ke naseeb mein janey kya likha hai...ik ke saath tu bura howa he..ab dusre ka na dekh paoonge..an dekh paonge...(sayng this she strted cryng.... n went inside...)
S:Yah Allah...kahan phasa diya mujhe...jisey dekho..mujh pe he chrta hai..takreer(speech) sunaney ke liye in sab ko tu mein he mile hoon na..
n sayng this she also went inside the kitchen...
yeh tu is ghar ka rooz ka haal hai..roz he yahan..koi larai hote hai...roz..he shazia ke kismat mein maar atey hai..yah woh apne husband se khare sunte hai...roz he yahan manial aur chutki ke chekarein goonjte hain...roz he yahan jiji..ke cheekein logon ke diloon ko dehlate hain...roz he yahan majee apne baityoon ke kismat ache honey ke duwa karte hain...par roz yaheen isi haweli mein sanata bhi chata hai..aur woh wqt hota hai shaam ka jab ghar ke mard(men)...kaam se wapis atey hain..kaam bhi kya..woh tu malik(owner)log hain..sirf jake..apne neeche waloon pe..gaon(village)ke ghreeb mazdooron par hukum chalate hain..aur ghar mein atey he woh shoor hota hai..jaise pure duniya(whole world) ka kaam tu yahee karte hoon...aur phir bechari aurtoon(woman)ke shamat hoti hai...peer(feet) dabnay se le kar...khana pakaney...samney rakhne...yahan tak ke raat dair tak yeh becharian bas..lage he rehte hain...lekin uff tak nahee karte..kyunki..yahee yahan ke aurtoon ka farz hai...unke zimadari..chahe..usmein unke zindagi khud he kyun na pis jayee(spoiled)...par yeh lage he rehte hain..kya inke zindagi kabhi badal jayegi..kya jo aj tak hota ya hai..woh agaey bhi chalega..kya manial ke saath bhi wohi hoga jo ke jiji ke saath howa...kya manial kabhi khushi payegi..yeh kya khud apney app mein he ik sawal hai jis ka jawab sirf us upar walee ke he pass hai..aur jiska samna humein karna he hai..ajj nahee tu kal.

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so guyz this was the frst part..4 u all...sorry is baar is mein hero ke entry nahee ho payee..reason..arey bhaye humarey hero ji..zara esp hain na..tu unke entry bhi zara esp se he hai..tu jus wait 4 him..n m sure u will luv rajeev in this role 2...coz its different frm wht we all usually see him lik...
so do comments n tell me h u liked the part..n i know was a bit borng...sorry guyz...shuru ke parts thorey aise he honge...baad mein hav lts 4 u all in store..so keep readng n commentng..i will wait eagerly... 😊
nxt part:entry of more characters....
ok now me sayng bye 2 u all..
wid luv
guriya... 😊

guriya yaar the first part was very damn intresting... the descriptions of every character u have given it just tooo apt... simply perfect... keep up the good work... 👏
👏 ab please jaldi se continue karo..me very eager to read our herojee's entry....continue soon... 😃

Originally posted by: sun_423

guriya yaar the first part was very damn intresting... the descriptions of every character u have given it just tooo apt... simply perfect... keep up the good work... 👏
👏 ab please jaldi se continue karo..me very eager to read our herojee's entry....continue soon... 😃

thanx surya 4 likng the part...n don worry our hero's entry will be v soon...😊

too gud 👏
ur story seems very diferent.. i like the characters..now just waiting for our hero's entry...
gr8 going 👏
continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: starbellz_21

too gud 👏
ur story seems very diferent.. i like the characters..now just waiting for our hero's entry...
gr8 going 👏
continue soon 😊

thanx 4 likng...n neaxt part iz comng v soon....😊

Originally posted by: golu_1677

wonderful part.pls cont soon

thanx 4 likng it golu....m continuing soon...😊

Part-2:
We see a huge building frm outside...we see inside of the buildng now....stairs n we move upwards...now we r infront of a flat...lets jus move inside...hmm..quite cozy one...frm one look one can say a neatly kept flat...one can say the person livng in this house has a v good choice coz it decorated beautifully....we now peek inside a room...we see a huge bed..on whch diff shirts r kept...n we can hear voice of shower comng frm the near washroom.....ok..till the perosn iz havng a shower...we will see h the room is....@ one corner their's a desk n chair whch havng a laptop..n few books on it..above the desk iz a shelf on whch few more books r kept...then we see side tables on whch a photo frame iz kept...n in the frame theirs picture of perfect family...family of shayan...includng his mom,dad,bro n sis..lookng happy n contented...so frm a glance of the frame we came 2 know its shayan room..bt where he iz...so wanna know..oh look he came out of the washroom...bt whts this yaar..he had towel on his head...n was lookng hot without shirt...bt wht yaar cant see his face...then we hear ring of mob...now where this mob iz..oh..its on the other side table...n we seea name flashng it...wanna know...whoz name it is..ok..i mgng near it now...2 tell u..bt whts this..nt fair shayan..u picked up the phone..now h wil i know...anyways..we still r nt able 2 see him..as his bck iz @ my side...bt i can hear wht convo hez havng wid the person on other side...so
Sh:hi jaan...
we cant hear the other voice...
Sh:mein ghar par he hoon...nahee ajj nahee gaya..tum aisa karoo..come here..n i will tell u the reason
Sh:haan baba..tum pohancho bas..
Sh:ya luv u 2..
oh...sumthng fishy fishy shayan...bt now stop it..we lost our pateince...now show ur face..wht this shayan's turning bck....n here he turned...so wht 2 say abt him...jus no words...hottest guy..lookng kool as eva...he picked one shirt frm the all kept on bed n wore it....n then he went 2ward the cupboard n picked a bag..n kept the clothes in tht....then went 2ward the kitchen...n made himself a cup of coffee...oh so he self dependent..nice...went 2ward the launch n sat on a sofa...n havng coffe..wid a mag in his hand..jus then bell rings...n he gts up...a mirror wa there beside the entrance n he looked himself in tht frst...adjusted his hair once again..n open the door...we see infront of us a grl....its no one other than aima...
Sh:hey jaan...come inside..
A:hi shayan..lookng hot as eva..
Sh:wht..u had any doubt...
A:nah..
n wid tht both reach the launch n sat on sofas...
A:so tell..why u iddn't came 2 college 2day...u neva miss college ...i thnk..?
Sh:woh actually the thng iz..
A:shayan..tell straight..when eva u mumble thngs infront of me..sumthng iz always wrong..
Sh:woh kya hai na aima..i had 2 go 2 my home..2day..
A:wht..u cant do this shayan...
Sh:plz aima undertsand na..baba..called..las nite..n said its urgent..
A:yeh ghalat hai shayan tum abhi last week he ghar gaye the..ab phir..
Sh:woh baba ne kuch khas kaam se bulaya hai..tu i hav 2 go..warna nahee jata na..mere apney studies ka harj hota hai..bt baba ki awaz se lag raha tha..sumthng urgent...somujhe jana he hoga..
A:tum ne wada kia tha shayan..ke tum ab nahee jaoge..tumne pichle kitne dino se merey saath time spend kiya he nahee hai..jab dekho ya tu ghar jana hai ya koi aur kaam..mein tu kuch hoon he nahee na tumhare liye..
Sh:plz jaan aisa kuch nahee hai...try n understand..mein jald he ajoonga..i promise..aur aney ke baad its promise..we will spent more time 2gether..jus plz abhi ghusa maat ho..tum jante ho..mein tumhare narazgi bardasht nahee kar sakta na...tum agar naraz hogaye tu phir mein wahan bhi khush nahee rahoonga..
A:aur jaisey mein yahan tumhare baghir bade khush hongein..even i will miss u lik anythng...shayan jaldi ana..
Sh:jo hukum sarkar..bas ab app apna mood kharab maat karein aur smile...
aima laughs @ this n shayan gts lst in her beauty n innocence..
aima sees him lookng so intensly...she blushes...
A:shayan..aisey kia dekh rahee ho..
Sh:yahee ke..kia jadoo hai tum mein ke din badin aur dewana ho gaya hoon mein tumhara..
A:bas bas..zyada maska maat lagoo...i know bara jadoo hai mera tum par..tabhi tu bhagte phirte ho mujhe se har hafte..
Sh:arey..aisa kaise soocha mere barey mein tum ne..app ko kia maloom janab...hamrey dil pe kia guzarte hai..jab hum app se dur hotey hain..par app ne tum humein bena kisi tfshish ke mujrim he bana diya..
n sayng this he amde a v cute lookng angry face..as lik a kid gussa on sumthng taken frm him..
A:oye hoye..janab ko gussa agya...
dosent sayanythng..stay in same position..
A:acha baba..m sorry..phir aisa nahe bolongi...sorry..
holdng her ears sweetly...
Sh:its ok...maaf kia..kya yaad karogi..
n he laughs sayng this..jus then aima picks the cushion..n strts hittng him wid it..n he rans over the flat 2 save himslef frm her hittng....
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so guyz this was shayan our hero's entry...wht abt him..u all saw wht he iz..h he iz...h his luv is..whther 4 family or 4 his luv...do comments n tell h it was...me waitng eagerly...
nxt part:intro of shayan's family.....
note:shayan lives in lahore alone..as he came 4 studyng here...n he own's a flat...his family lives in gujranwala(a small town..nt a big city)...n he often visits them..as its nt far frm lahore....
abt manial's family they liv in a village in NWFP(north side of pak)...