Hogaye Hai Mohabbat..RA Last Part (Pg:43)

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

guriya totally awesome....super coolllllllllllll... veryyy nice...loved it dil se... 👏
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please start the fanfic soon..me waiting for it very eagerly... 😃

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: golu_1677
wonderful intro. just waiting for the first part. Post it soon

thanx golu 4 likng the intro..n will be postng the frst part as soon as possible...😊

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: cute_rabi
Yes Great introdcution..pls try send it 1st part soon..

Rabi

thanx rabi 4 likng the intro...😊

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: sun_423
guriya totally awesome....super coolllllllllllll... veryyy nice...loved it dil se... 👏
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please start the fanfic soon..me waiting for it very eagerly... 😃

thanx a lot surya...4 likng the ff n commentng...n i will strt it soon...jus keep readng...😊

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Parvathi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

awesome intro 👏 very interesting and different concept nice work 👏 👏 😊

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 18 years ago

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thanx parvathi 4 likng it...n keep readng...i will be postng frst part soon.... 😊

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

Promo:
Shazia:Dekh lena ik din tera saath bhi aisa he hoga manial..tu jo udhakte phirte hain na yahan se wahan..bas ik bar mamiji ki bahu ke yahan se pegham ajaye..phir mein dekhte hoon...tere kitne hasi nikalte hain..phir hasna aise bateesi nikla ke..
Manial doesn't say anythng n stares her wid anger..n leaves the place...
Shazia(herself):arey bhai Allah jhoot na bulwaye..jaisa boo ge waisa he katooge..tum logon ne kab apne bahoo ke saatha acha kiya...mujhe dekho..mere umar he kya the aur leke bandh diya mujhe us budhe ke sath...jo ke pyaar kaam..maarta zyada hai...mere haye lage hai tum logon ko.ke ik ka tu haal tum logon ke samney hai(pointng 2 manial's elder sis)..dusre ke sath bhi kuch acha na hoga..kahe dete hoon...woh tu shukr karo mein hoon jo guzar rahee hoon..abhi dekhna..dusre ayegi tu kya wabal hoga..
Majee:bas kar bahoo...kabhi tu acha bol..agar terey saath bura howa hai...tu kyun us bechare ko bura bolte hai..balke uskey ache ke duwa(pray) kar...warna kya hum nahee jante..yahan..ke waderoon(the rich n ederly people in village) ke faisloon ko..tu bhi tu kuch na bole thi apne..bawa(dad) ke agey...duwa kiya kar..ache ke...mere betyoon ke naseeb mein janey kya likha hai...ik ke saath tu bura howa he..ab dusre ka na dekh paoonge..an dekh paonge...(sayng this she strted cryng....
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so ppl do tell me h was the promo....will be waitng eagerly 4 ur comments.... 😊
wid luv
guriya.... 😊