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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: VeeIyer


😃 Cheers to the behena brigade !! and thanks for the vote of confidence Kalpana !

How different the mindset of a western parent is to one from the east ?! I would not like to generalise, but Indian parents generally put the needs of their children ahead of anything else, whereas in most other countries it is the way you have written...

And about my friends ...they are not worried about my reading addiction. They give me the 'look' of being led astray by wayward people who hangout in the virtual world ...specially when I happened to comment that I have made a few friends 😆😆
Tempted to tug their leash by saying I have met a few too, but they are also in my age group. Why give them sleepless nights 😉


Vani Tell them you have met some of your virtual world friends and some have gone on a holiday together too. My son refers to my SoSy gang as YOUR ONLINE LADIES CLUB:)

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Posted: 8 years ago
Jhopa ani jaagruta

They pulled away when they heard footsteps outside.
He changed into a teeshirt, and jeans, he wore the jeans in the bathroom after a quick shut door routine and wore tee shirt by stripping down in front of her

She in the meanwhile pretended to look in her suitcase for "something"... basically nothing

When he stepped out she sneaked in and changed into the nightie, though she would have preferred her usual salwar and skinny tee she even looked at it fondly and felt it with her fingers, but wore what was given to her... quietly

"Be back in 15 mins" he had texted her when she came out of the bathroom

She noticed the tiles had trucks and dinosaurs and tools on them, the shower curtain had sports equipment logos... there was a giant mirror and the bath cabinet under the sink was of some dark wood

The mirror had a Post-it "Nihu brush karo" with a smiley face

Her heart skipped a beat as she stared at Nupur's hand writing for the first time.
She hadnt actually forgotten Nupur... how could she... she had married her husband

But the day had gone by in a blur
She was in a dreamy state of elation... the note woke her up...

She reached out to touch... but withdrew nervously

She looked at her reflection, her eyes were like saucers and her cheeks were red...

She took deep breaths to calm herself down and brushed... and shut the light and stepped out

A tray with jam & butter sandwiches and a mug of hot chocolate awaited her on the bed

She ate ravenously and brushed again... trying not to look at the Post it

Shut out the light and came to bed, set her head down on the pillow and was knocked out...

It was almost 4 in the afternoon when she woke, Aadhya sat by her "Aayi" "Aayi" "ake ara" "ake ara" she shook her

Suvi sat up in a daze... and realized she was still decked up

"aapana eka sundara haara ghaloon aahata" she said in awe of Suvi's mostly gold with occasional black bead fat diamond pendant mangal sootra

She hadnt worn much jewelry the 6 years of Aadhya's life

Here she was wearing bangles and earrings and the necklace

Suvi hugged and told her how much she missed her last night

Suvi noticed the bed looked slept in... she turned a subtle shade of red when she realized

"Neel kakani aamhala ice cream dila" she said smugly, her face was strawberry scented her hair was hanging in sticky clumps

"Neel?" Suvi stopped

"To khoopa majedaar aahe" Aadhya was overjoyed

"nihar kuthey aahe?" she asked softly

"Tohi gela... tyaane mala rasta olandayala madata keli" (he helped me cross the road)

"Oh?" Suvi nodded stunned


"ajji kade jau?" (did grandma go?)

"Nakko" Aadhya climbed on her lap, and kissed her many times

"Aayi tu beautiful" she said

Suvi smiled and reached for her phone

"Kab uthengi aap?" Neel had texted her at Noon

"Khabar nai" she texted with a smile

"Hum jagayen aapko?" he asked IMMEDIATELY

"Barobar" she said😳


Edited by Nisha0604 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Rhank you thank you sooo much for writing both stories today...i was craving for both😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
And you gave glimpse of all of our favs...
Ii ,rnb,all kids,dogs,ranjan(mention kiya),neel,suvi n kids too...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
A triple Sundae today 😃
Most appreciated Nisha !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you for indulging us Nisha.
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Posted: 8 years ago
This ID update was such a balm this morning after dude in the future update of Sosy got my goat . Aadhu with suvi was such joy. Nihu helping aadhu cross the road ... so tender.
Neel changing his jean in the bathroom and tee in front of his wife with the wife awkwardly rummaging in the suitcase basically looking for nothing surely had me rolling. Much needed !! Thank you Nisha.

Life!!!!The post on the mirror asking nihu to brush with a smiley. Pierces!!What can we control?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kamjor ani atyavashyak

Neel returned almost immediately, to find her cooing to her daughter, helping her count her red bangles

"Good math lesson" he chuckled

His deep loud voice sending a shiver down her back

"Tum raat ko nai soye?" she asked

"Aap din mein sotin hain hamein raat ko bhi neend nahi aati" he sat casually at the end of the bed

The door was partially closed

He picked up Aadhya, she froze, shyly

"Mumbai kaisa laga aapko?" he asked

"Khoop chhan" Aadhya said and began to giggle like a silly girl

"Yahin ruk jaayen?" he asked

She stopped and looked at her mother


Suvi's expression was of a torn woman, the melee the chaos of relatives and the grand festivities were intoxicating

She was almost an orphan... well if she ignored Tai

Tai had texted her this morning, threatening to leave the apartment if she didnt send money within a day or two.
Suvi realized she must have lost some big gambling debt.

Tai had a gambling habit and "donating to loser nephews" habit too


"Suvechha" he tapped her shoulder

"Mumbai mast hai... but NOIDA... matlab... Delhi" she quickly checked herself hugely embarrassed at being caught mentiong HIS abode as her destinatation

"Aayi main Nihaad ke house mein jaayegi?" Aadhya asked trying to confirm if what ever the kids around her had tutored her about the last couple days was indeed true

"Jee bilqul" Neel smiled "Naya kamra... naye toys..."

"Aur Nihaad bhi new?" Aadhya questioned

Neel nodded hugging her innocence as she tried to tell Neel, if she had a sibling now

"Evening mein jayega main?" she asked

He laughed out loud at her Hindi

"aami amachya bhaashewar kaam karane aavashyak aahe" Suvi reminded her daughter who looked confused

"Mede ko new school bhi jaane ka hai?" she asked

Suvi shook her head

"Aai khelanya saathi bahare jaoo sakana kya?" she asked

Suvi nodded...

Aadhya sprinted away

Singing and skipping... suddenly very happy

"Aapke saath kya karen batayen" Neel muttered grabbing her hand quickly, after bolting the door behind Aadhya

"Umm... Amma ke paas jaane ka hai?" she asked deliberately avoiding the hint

He gently tipped her back on the bed and bent over... his white muslin kurta with white embroidery magnified

He groaned and opened his mouth hungrily on her, pressing down with urgency... "Intezaar mein hum sookhkar" he whispered... and kissed her hungrily
not in a mood to finish his agonized rant

"Deva... ti dhita kara" (slow down) her laugh muffled on his chest, as he fondled urgently, urging her to kiss him back







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Posted: 8 years ago
Update ke intezaar main hum bhi roz sookh jaate hain 😃😃😃
And the reward of one brings as big a smiley to the face as my previous line !!

Ami khup kamjor ani update khup atyavashyak 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: VeeIyer

Update ke intezaar main hum bhi roz sookh jaate hain 😃😃😃

And the reward of one brings as big a smiley to the face as my previous line !!

Ami khup kamjor ani update khup atyavashyak 😛


Couldn't have put it better. Forget better, wouldn't even be able to convey anything like this.

Thank you so much Nisha.


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