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Posted: 18 years ago
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Attention:!

i will not be posting new parts until my exams are over!i really need to study,i just had me prelims for biology today and i'm continueing them on tuesday so i really gotta study,i have to get a 78 or up to pass math and bio will be easy but not the regents!so i have to really study,i'm gonna post a next part after skool is over,so sorry!just informing u!who ever has exams too,GOOD LUCK! 😊

i'm out!
luv,
tehseen/temi

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I'm back!!!!!!!!no posts?! 😭 skool is finally over!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [:D/] and i passed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [:D/] yay!!!!!!!!!!!omg i'm soooooooooooooooooo happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!but sad also cuz i'm going back to the same skool and i hate the skool,watever atleast i got sum of my friends by my side.and sad cuz i got stinkin summer homework!!!!!!!i got biochemistry hw,global studies hw,math project,english hw and thats all,but its alot of it!!!

why not any posts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i'v been gone and no posts!atleast i could have got 1 comment or 2.i'm gonna post the next part later,so start commenting.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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here is the next part!

part 29:

we see the doctors bringing shabbir in the same hospital aliya is in.

angad goes to the front desk to make sum formalities and stuff.

while angad is walking,the doctors are bringing shabbir in his way,they pass by each other but angad doesnt see shabbir,all of a sudden angad's watch gets stuck wid the sheets on shabbir.angad truns around and sees shabbir and is surpised.

kripa is wid aliya and aliya has a baby boy.
aliya is crying and saying to kripa

aliya - kripa,mujhe baut dhar lagra hai,mujhe aisa lag ra hai ki me shabbir se dhoor ho jowngi.

kripa - aliya dont worry,wo ara hai.

then we see angad asking the doctor what happen to shabbir

angad - doctor ye to shabbir hai,isse kya hua doctor!kya hua hai isse!

the doctor tells angad about the plane crash and everything and

doctor - aur iske bachne ki chance baut cum hai.

angad - doctor plz,kuch bhi karo lekin shabbir ko kuch nehi hona chay hai.plz!

doctor - we will try our best mr.khanna.

then angad goes back to kripa and aliya

aliya - angad,kya hua hai,tum itne worried kyun lagre ho.

kripa - haan angad,wat happen.

angad - kuch nehi,wo mujhe sar mai dard ho raha hai.kripa tum bhair (outside) ajow.

kripa cums out of the room

kripa - angad kya hua hai?

angad - wo shabbir issi hospital main hai,aur uski ........plane crash hua hai.

angad tells her everything and about his survival chances.

kripa - angad ab kya!aliya ka kya hoga!

angad - kripa tum plz aliya ko mat patana.abhi vo shabbir ki operation kare hai.

kripa - teek hai,main jaati hoon aliya ke paas,tum shabbir ke paas jow.

angad goes and waits outside the operation room wid da rest of the family (yea angad told dem too)

naina - bechari aliya ko patta bhi nehi hai ki shabbir issi hospital mai hain,angad mujhe baut dhar lagra hai,plz god shabbir ko save karlo.

angad - mom,sub ko dhar lagra hai,aap plz mat ro.

then the doctor cums out of the oporation room

angad - doctor,shabbir kaisa hai ab.

doctor - (puts his head down) i'm sorry mr.khanna,but shabbir is no more.

angad is surpised and everyone else is surpised too.aliya's mom starts to cry and anita is left staring at the doctor all surpised.

angad - nehi doctor aisa nehi ho sakta!plz doctor-

doctor - i'm mr.khanna,humne baut koshish ki hai lekin humse nehi hua.i'm very sorry.

the doctor walks away.

everyone is crying and aliya's mom says

aliya's mom - meri bachi ka kya hoga,itni choti umar pe vo vidva (widow) ban gey hai.aur uska bacha ka kya hoga,apne papa ke bina jiye ga.god,meri bachi ke saat kyun.

kripa hears everything and is surprised.

everyone goes home and they take aliya and shabbir's body to cremate.

the next day

they lay shabbir's body down on a white clothe and everyone is sitting wearing white clothes and crying.
aliya is thirsty and goes downstairs to get water.while she is walking,kripa is cuming upstairs.
aliya reaches down and sees shabbir's body and evryone in white clothes crying.aliya is suprised and breaks down and sits on the stairs staring at shabbir surprised.anita sees her and is surprised.

anita - aliya.

everyone sees aliya and is surprised.anita goes to aliya and brings her to evryone,aliya doesnt respond to anyone.and starts to cry.kripa cums downstairs wid aliya's child.and aliya starts to shake shabbir and says

aliya - shabbir!utto!!utto na!mere saat mazaak mat karo,plz!!!!utto na,mujhe chor ke mat jow,plz shabbir utto!.....(crys) UTTO!SHABBIR UTTO!DEKHO!humara bacha ro ra hai,tum utte kyun nehi,tumne mujhse vaada kiya ta ki tum mere aur humara bache ke saat kabhi nehi choro gey,to abh kya hogaya hai!!!!!!!!!

evryone is crying and they pull aliya away from shabbir's body and aliya is trying to break away.

aliya - SHABBIR!!!!!!!!!!!!mut jow,plz!!!!!!!!!

they take away shabbir's body and aliya is left crying on naina's shoulder.

2months pass by:

aliya is playing wid her son rahul. and she is still wearing colorful clothes and doesnt have a haar around shabbir's picture.

kripa - aliya!

aliya - aayi!

aliya goes downstairs and asks kripa

aliya - kya hua kripa?

kripa - aliya tum rishi,sur aur bani aur prateek ka khayal rak sakti ho,maine doctor ke paas jaana hai,mai 1 hour mai aajowngi,agar koi problem hai phir -

aliya - phir call karongi,dont worry kripa ,i'll take care of them,u go.

kripa leaves and aliya goes to the kids and takes dem to her room.

aliya picks up shabbir's photo and says

aliya - shabbir,tumhare bina mujhe acha nehi lagta,jub se tum chale ge ho,ye bache aur ye parivaar mere sahare ban ge hai,shabbir,tume kyun chale ge ho,(in the background the rythm of the song meri dunya is playing ,the ad version),a tear rolls down aliya's cheek and she wipes it off and starts playing wid the kids.

bani - chachi,aap ro kyun rehi ti

aliya - kuch nehi beta,vo kuch aank me a gaya ta,jow ke low.

bani - teek hai chachi.

they play and josh cums in and says

josh - hi evryone!!!

all the kids - chachoooo!!!!!!!!!!humari choclate!!!!!!!

josh - pele hug do phir kissee!

they hug and kiss him on the cheek and get their choclates.

josh - hi aliya!how r u?

aliya - main teek hoon,wat about u?

josh - i'm fine.hey aliya vo angad kider hai?

aliya - vo kripa ko doctor ke paas check up ke liye geya hai.

josh - oh ok,aliya kya hua hai,maine bair (outside) se suna hai ki tum rorehi te.

aliya - nehi josh vo -

josh - aliya,ab tum bahane mut banow,mujhe batoa,tumhe shabbir yaad agaya hai.

aliya - haan

josh - aliya,tumhe pata hai,if u need me or have a problem,tell me,i'll help u anytime.after all wat r friends for.

aliya - thnx josh.

josh takes rahul from her and starts to play wid him.

aliya (thinking) - josh itna acha dost hai aur rahul ke saat aisa kel ta hai aur pyar karte hai jis tara ek baap apne bache ke saat karta hai,i really owe josh big time,thnx josh.

then it ends on aliya's smiling face.

i hope u liked this part,u guyz can make prediction of wat will happen next,if u wanna.anywayz,i'm soooooooooooo happy skool is over and that i passed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yay!!!!
i hope u guyz liked this part and comment!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😉 thank you so much dear for start again i am waiting for this thanks for pm me 👏

oh no shabbir 😭 great part i wish josh aaliya ke saath ho jaye 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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promo:

we see all the family members convincing josh to get married to aliya and he says:

josh:lekin-

naina - josh plz!hum aliya ko samjiayengey!

josh- haan aunty lekin agar aliya has a problem wid this decision den forget it,i cant marry her,i'll marry her if she is okay wid getiing married again.

then we see everyone telling and convincing aliya

aliya - no!maine kitni baar bola hai nehi!

kripa - leking aliya,apne bache ke baare socho,jub vo bara hoga,tumse agar puche ki uske paas papa kyun nehi hai,phir kya bolo gi,usse bhi pura huk hai to have a papa,plz aliya,ur gonna be doing this for ur own child!

aliya thinks about and says:

aliya - kripa just gimme sum time,i think about it.

background voice:

kya aliya maan jayegi shaadi ke liye?



hope u liked da promo,anywayz,i wont be able to post the next part for a while,cuz i'm busy,so it will be sum time that i wont post the next part,but wen i do,then i'll pm u guyz.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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here it is!

part 30:

We see kripa cuming back from doctor appointment and shopping and the kids run to her and say:

prateek - mama mere liye kuch liya!

sur - mama meri dress!

rishi - mama!

kripa- mama ko rasta do na!

all the shopping bags fall down and kripa makes aface and says:

kripa - mai sub ke liye lekar aiy hoon and now could u plz help me.

they pick up the bags and josh and aliya enter in the living room.

aliya - hi kripa,shopping kaisi thi?aur doctor ne kya bola?

kripa - teek thi.aur doctor ne bola ke sab teek hai.

josh- anywayz kripa,angad kidar hai?

kripa- vo baki sub bags lekar are &nb sp; &nb sp;hai.

later in the day:

everyone is talking about aliya.

naina - mujhe lagta hai ki aliya ki dusri shaadi karana chaye hai,wo rose apne kambre mai shabbir ki tasveer dekti rehti hai,istara se vo apni zindagi nehi guzar sakti!

kripa- haan mama,lekin kaun usse shaadi karega.

angad - someone jo uski feelings sumjhe aur usse achi tara se janta hai,like josh.

kripa- haan angad lekin how r we gonna convince him?

angad - dont worry,mai baat karta hoon usse.

we see all the family members convincing josh to get married to aliya and he says:

josh:lekin-

naina - josh plz!hum aliya ko samjiayengey!

josh- haan aunty lekin agar aliya has a problem wid this decision den forget it,i cant marry her,i'll marry her if she is okay wid getiing married again.

then kripa goes upstairs to aliya's room and talks to her.

aliya - no!maine kitni baar bola hai nehi!

kripa - leking aliya,apne bache ke baare socho,jub vo bara hoga,tumse agar puche ki uske paas papa kyun nehi hai,phir kya bolo gi,usse bhi pura huk hai to have a papa,plz aliya,ur gonna be doing this for ur own child!

aliya thinks about and says:

aliya - kripa just gimme sum time,to think about it.

kripa - fine.

then kripa leaves the room.

aliya (thinking) - kripa sehi bole rehi hai,mai to sirf apne bache ke liye to ye karehi hoon, lekin shabbir........mai kya karu.

the next day:

everyone is having breakfast and they see aliya cuming downstairs.she sits on her chair and doesnt touch her food,she keeps staring at it thinking.

kripa- aliya,kow na.

aliya - oh sorry.

josh comes and luks at aliya and aliya luks at him.

aliya gets up and josh says to her:

josh - aliya,its ur choice remember.

aliya - everyone,maine apna faisla karli hai-

josh - aliya,i need to talk to u before, making ur decision.

aliya -okay.

they go to a room and talk

josh - aliya luk,mai sirf tumse shaadi kara hoon,cuz of ur child and ur happiness,agar tum nehi shaadi karna chahti phir it okay.

aliya -josh, teek hai,ab chale.

they go to the living room.

aliya - mera faisla hai kee.............

everyone is waiting and are luking at each other.

aliya -ki........mai josh sai......shaadi........karungi.lekin sirf rahul ke liye.

everyone is really happy and josh is happy too.

it ends on aliya's face.

sorry,its short,i was doing my summer homework,right now and decided to post the next part,so i have to continue homework,so bye!hopeu liked this part!bye!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow josh and aaliya so sweet thanks alot dear 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amamzing so sad parts great that u finally con congrats on passing school pls con asap
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry guyz!sorry i didnt post the next part, its just that i get sooooooooooooooooooo much homework now and i'm fasting cuz it's ramadan and i'm sooooooooo tired now these dayz so i wont be able to post the next part for a long time till maybe january cuz i have 2 regents to do in january and then i'll post the next part after that, i promise!sorry!
bye!
luv tehseen!

Ramdan Mubarak everyone!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no replies, not surprising......i started a new fanfic its called "*~*HighSchoolMusical 2*~* AK style!

sum of u must be reading it.i'm not gonna write much of this fanfic hardly cuz its getting boring doing kyph but i will still be doing this fanfic but not dat much.just informing u people.bye.

~tehseen~

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