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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
grt part i loved the ,music and the partyatmosphere
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow so sweet please conti soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry guyz i'm gonna continue next friday or this coming saturday,itz cuz i'm soooooooooooooo busy,my dad is coming back from pakistan on sunday and sooooo many people will cum 2 our house 2 meet him and i have to study for my stupid spanish test which counts 15% of my grade and itz on tuesday!sorry i'll try to post on saturday otherwise if i cant den itz next friday!sorry! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Temi

sorry guyz i'm gonna continue next friday or this coming saturday,itz cuz i'm soooooooooooooo busy,my dad is coming back from pakistan on sunday and sooooo many people will cum 2 our house 2 meet him and i have to study for my stupid spanish test which counts 15% of my grade and itz on tuesday!sorry i'll try to post on saturday otherwise if i cant den itz next friday!sorry! 😭

aww its ok sweety studies comes first hope u get the best grades best of luck and last part was awsome i love happy parts tc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 25:

the party is till going on and then the lights turn off and we see angad and josh in the middle and the song starts:

angad - this is 4 u kripa!

Haan kab tak jawaani chhupaaogi rani
Arre kab tak jawaani chhupaaogi rani
Kanwaaron ko kitna sataaogi rani
Kabhi to kisi ki dulhaniya banogi
Mujhse shaadi karogi, mujhse shaadi karogi - 2

Arre kab tak jawaani chhupaaogi rani
Kanwaaron ko kitna sataaogi rani
Kabhi to kisi ki dulhaniya banogi
Mujhse shaadi karogi, hey mujhse shaadi karogi


Hey mujhse shaadi karogi, mujhse shaadi karogi

Jhumka dilaaoonga kangna dilaaoonga
Sab kuch main laaoonga teri kasam

Chanda churaaoonga taarein bhi laaoonga
Sooraj jhukaaoonga teri kasam


Kabhi to meri jaan deewaani banogi
Mujhse shaadi karogi, hey mujhse shaadi karogi

Mujhse shaadi karogi, mujhse shaadi karogi
Main jab bhi aaoonga vaapas na jaaoonga
Doli uthaaoonga teri kasam

Sab ko dikhaaoonga tujhko churaaoonga
Dulhan banaaoonga teri kasam

Arre kab tak meri jaan yun mujhse darrogi
Mujhse shaadi karogi, mujhse shaadi karogi

Mujhse shaadi karogi, mujhse shaadi karogi
Arre kab tak jawaani chhupaaogi rani
Kanwaaron ko kitna sataaogi rani

Kabhi to kisi ki dulhaniya banogi
Mujhse shaadi karogi, mujhse shaadi karogi

Mujhse shaadi karogi, mujhse shaadi karogi

kripa:
Tujhse shaadi karoongi, haan tujhse shaadi karoongi - 2

angad then bends down and proposes to kripa

angad - will u marry me again,mujhse shaadi karogi phirse? (smiling)

kripa - yes!

angad puts a diamond ring on her hand and gives her a whole set.kripa is very happy and hugz angad.everyone jumps all happy and the party goes on for a while and then the party ends.

after the party in angad and kripa's bedroom.

kripa - hamari shaadi to ho chuki angad to pirse kyun?

angad - jub hamari shaadi hoi thi to hum ek dusre se nafrat karte the aur humne ye bhi kaha tha phere mein ki hum ek dusre ki zindagi barbaad kardenge,aur mein ab chata hoon ki hamari shaadi luv marriage ho arranged aur hatred wali nehi.kripa,shayad us shaadi ke vaje se sub bura humare saat hora tha.

kripa- haan,lekin tumhe kaise pata ki maine kya bola the pere mein!

angad - (laughing) jis tara se tumne apna chehra banay tha use pata bhi chalta ki tum kitni mad thi aurmujhse nafrat karti thi!tumhara chehra istara tha,(he makes a face at kripa)

kripa - angad!wait till i get u!

kripa chases him around and angad is keep making faces at her.kripa falls onto the floor right on her face and she screams!angad sees and runs and carries her to the bed and while dat,kripa is hitting him non stop and crying.

angad -kya kripa!tum abhi tak bache ke tara rauti ho,chup ho jow varna dusre bache bhi jage ge aur unki crying aur loud hai!

kripa - ahaaaa!

angad covers her mouth and kripa bites him and laughs!

kripa - duffer mein jaan buj ke giri hoon aur agar bache utte to tumne hi unko sulaana hai! (laughing)

angad - acha!

angad goes out of the bedroom and goes to see if the kids are awake.he doesnt see prateek and sur in thier room and luks everywhere and finds dem in poonam's room ,poonam is in the middle and prateek and sur are in the sides sleeping and angad smiles and leaves.he goes back to his room and goes to sleep.

morning

naina is in the living room wid the pandit luking for a auspicious day for angad and kripa's marriage.

pandit - ek achi si din hai.

naina- kub pandit ji.

pandit - 7 din mein hai.

naina - shukriyan pandit ji.

naina gives everybody sweets and then aliya goes upstairs to tell angad and kripa.

angad is getting ready and kripa is at the mirror putting on her earings.

aliya - (running)BHAI!

angad - kya hain aliya.

aliya - bhai,naina aunty ne tumhari aur kripa ki shaadi ki date fix karli!

angad -really!
kripa - kub hain!

aliya - saat din mein!

angad and kripa are happy and it ends.

hey hoped u liked it everyone!i just had time so i decided to post the next part.i'm decing to change poonam's name to priya.wat do u guyz think?and i'm chaning karthik's wife name to puja.leave comments!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part!!!!! 😃 👏 👏

I hope they get married sooon!!!!!!!! 😉 😃 😳
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Edited by zeenat_786 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg!i'm so angry and upset 😭 😡 ,i had my spanish test and i got a zero cuz of this stupid gurl dat sits next to me!i took out paper out of my desk and i didnt know it wuz my spanish papers!it was flipped the other way,so i wuz writing down sum word i didnt know how to spell so i checked which spelling seemed correct so then that gurl saw my teacher suming over to me and flipped my paper and said "hey brother!she has her spanish papers and is cheating!",so then i stuffed it in my desk but i got caught!i felt like strangling dat *****!then i got a a a.....0!waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 😭 i studied so hard for dat test!all dat studying for no reason!now my stupid spanish teach is mailing the test to my dad and i wuz soooo upset dat i called my dad when i came from skool and told him everything!and my dad told me 2 calm down and i wuz kinda happy that he didn't yell at me ,den he said he would talk to my teacher.i asked my teach for the retake and told her wat happen but she wont gimme the retake! 😭 😡 ,then I told her my dad iz gonna talk to her about it,and she said she will think about letting me take the test! 😊 i hope she does!i luv my dad the most! 😃 better than my mom cuz I didn't tell her cuz I'm scared she will yell at me and she always does that to me! 😡 so my dad iz my best friend,I only share sum stuff wid my mom when she's in a gud mood to listen to me,but I hope my teacher lets me take the retake!dat test wuz out of a 100 points! 😭 😡 And after class I cursed dat gurl out sooooooooooooooooo much and I wuz crying 😭 and angry 😡 and yelling at the same time at her!my friends had to pull me away from that gurl! 😡 (only if they let me set dat gurl up 😡 )i don't wanna say that gurl's name cuz if I do then I'm gonna get that anger back and arrrrrrrrrrgggggggggg I just HATE 😡 her!!!!!!!!! 😡 .u guyz pl pray for me that my teacher will give me the retake! 😭 plz Allah!i really wanna take the retake and pass! 😭 i studies sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hard for that test!!!!!! 😭

u guyz i'm gonna write the next part and post it next week cux i'm very upset and i got sooooooooooooooooo much homework for spring break,i hate my teachers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!epsecially my biology teacher!!!!!!she is the worst!1 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Temi

omg!i'm so angry and upset 😭 😡 ,i had my spanish test and i got a zero cuz of this stupid gurl dat sits next to me!i took out paper out of my desk and i didnt know it wuz my spanish papers!it was flipped the other way,so i wuz writing down sum word i didnt know how to spell so i checked which spelling seemed correct so then that gurl saw my teacher suming over to me and flipped my paper and said "hey brother!she has her spanish papers and is cheating!",so then i stuffed it in my desk but i got caught!i felt like strangling dat *****!then i got a a a.....0!waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 😭 i studied so hard for dat test!all dat studying for no reason!now my stupid spanish teach is mailing the test to my dad and i wuz soooo upset dat i called my dad when i came from skool and told him everything!and my dad told me 2 calm down and i wuz kinda happy that he didn't yell at me ,den he said he would talk to my teacher.i asked my teach for the retake and told her wat happen but she wont gimme the retake! 😭 😡 ,then I told her my dad iz gonna talk to her about it,and she said she will think about letting me take the test! 😊 i hope she does!i luv my dad the most! 😃 better than my mom cuz I didn't tell her cuz I'm scared she will yell at me and she always does that to me! 😡 so my dad iz my best friend,I only share sum stuff wid my mom when she's in a gud mood to listen to me,but I hope my teacher lets me take the retake!dat test wuz out of a 100 points! 😭 😡 And after class I cursed dat gurl out sooooooooooooooooo much and I wuz crying 😭 and angry 😡 and yelling at the same time at her!my friends had to pull me away from that gurl! 😡 (only if they let me set dat gurl up 😡 )i don't wanna say that gurl's name cuz if I do then I'm gonna get that anger back and arrrrrrrrrrgggggggggg I just HATE 😡 her!!!!!!!!! 😡 .u guyz pl pray for me that my teacher will give me the retake! 😭 plz Allah!i really wanna take the retake and pass! 😭 i studies sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hard for that test!!!!!! 😭

u guyz i'm gonna write the next part and post it next week cux i'm very upset and i got sooooooooooooooooo much homework for spring break,i hate my teachers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!epsecially my biology teacher!!!!!!she is the worst!1 😡

aww thats really sad man that girl will surely get punished and dont worry everything would be fine i hope ur teacher allows u for a retest and uwill get great marks tc and dont stress urself and con whenevr u can well i was wondering y ak r getting married again and again😆read someone elses fics to enlighten ur mood or watch ur fav show or eat ur fav ice cream to calm urself😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaghan0

aww thats really sad man that girl will surely get punished and dont worry everything would be fine i hope ur teacher allows u for a retest and uwill get great marks tc and dont stress urself and con whenevr u can well i was wondering y ak r getting married again and again😆read someone elses fics to enlighten ur mood or watch ur fav show or eat ur fav ice cream to calm urself😆

😆thnx 4 the advice,i'm laughing about the last part,eat ice cream!i'm eating ice cream right now!its vanilla and its my favorite ice cream cuz its hagen dazz!i luv haggen dazz,thnx 4 the advice!

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part 26!

angad and kripa are very happy.

dayz pass by and everyone is making arangements for the shaadi.

the gurls went out to shop for there clothes and other shaadi stuff and the boyz ,the same.

finally the mehndi rasam day arrives and kripa is wearing this:



and all the other gurls are wearing either yellow,green,orange or mixed.

the gurls sing songs and then we see angad,nishant,shabbir,josh and karthik peeking at the gurls and say:

nishant - yeh kya hai yaar,ladkiyon ko itna maza ara he aur hum ladko ko ider bat ne para hai,aur i'm bored!

angad - hey this rasam is part of the my shaadi and i wanna have fun too!

josh and shabbir - yea,same here!

nishant - oh!i have a plan!

angad,shabbir and josh - wat!

nishant tells them the plan,how to get into the party.

we see the gurls singing and sum gurls putting mehndi on kripa's hand and it say angad's name on her hand.

aliya - hey kripa,how do u like my design,luk at it.

kripa luks at it and says

kripa - omg this is beautiful,aliya ur such a gud mehndi designer!and u wrote angad's name so nicely!thnx!

aliya - no problem!

then we see sur sitting alone,doing nothing(the boys are wid the men)

sur - god!i'm soooo bored!mere upar bhi mehndi nehi lagaya!

poonam- hey,sur,dekho ab me bhi agey,tune mehndi lagani hai?

poonam shows a mehndi cone to her.

sur - ha!jiji! i luv u!

poonam starts to put mehndi on her and kripa sees them and smiles and thinks:

kripa (thinking) - mein baut khush hoon aaj,meri dono beetiyan itni khush hai,agar poonam nehi hoti to sur uder akeli baiti hoti,thank you god apne mujhe ek samajdar beeti diya,poonam.

priya - (snaps her fingers in front of kripa) - hey kripa!kya hua tumhe!tumhe angad yaad ara hai!

kripa - (blushes)- nehi to,....vo maine sur aur poonam ko deka to-

priya - to,tum soch rehi thi ke agar poonam nehi hoti to,hena?!

kripa - haan,i'm just so happy that i have another daughter and sur has a big sister to luk up to.

then we they both luk at sur and poonam and smile.

we then see the men and they are dresses up in lady clothes,salwar kameez.
they enter into the party and angad sees kripa and keeps staring at her,nishant keeps callinghim and then hit him.

angad - wat!...i mean (whispering) wat!

nishant - could u at least listen to me and stop yelling,and by the way,u dont luk gud in that dress!

angad - hey!tumne bhi to pena hai na!and like u luk "pretty" in that dress! u luk bad in that dress too!

then all of them move towards around the party and then dadi sees josh and goes to pull his ears and she touchs someone shoulder and but sees its a gurl,and thinks:

dadi - yeh mein kya dekh rehi hoon,josh to ider hi tha!...forget it,maybe its just me.

then josh is walking fast and bumps into a gurl and he gets caught!

gurl - ahh!ladka!wat r u doing here!ur a man!

everyone luks at josh,and angad,we see karthik,nishant and shabbir trying to walk out but they get caught!

then we see all of the men making scared faces!they run and the gurls chase after them wid dandas and shoes and aliya,priya,kanan and other ladies are running after them,they approach them and start hitting the guyz!then the screen blurs up.

then we see the guyz waking up,wearing the same clothes.but they see themselves wearing make up,nail polish and stuff and they see very white powder on there faces with alot of lipstick on.

we see the gurls back to their party and they are laughing.then they have sum fun.and stuff.

the next day!

we see everyone making preperations for the shaadi cuz its today!

kripa is getting ready and iz gonna wear this:




then we see kripa getting ready and angad getting ready.

angad is gonna wear this:



then we see angad going downstairs to the mandap and we then see kripa all ready and priya and kannan and aliya bring her down.kripa is coming downand angad sees kripa and keeps staring at her and is very happy,kripa is just luking down and smiling.kripa then sits down in the mandap.then the pandit does all the holy mantras and stuff (sorry,i dont know anything about indian marriage),then angad puts the sindoor on kripa's head and the mangulsutr on her,then they do the pheres and stuff and then they sit down and then angad,gives and a kiss to kripa on the cheek and kripa is making a surprised face and they take a pic of them.then we see that the marriage is over and angad carries kripa to there bedroom,they arrive to their bedroom,angad puts kripa down and takes off his sash and hat thingy.we see angad cuming on the bed and says:

angad - aaj,yeh hamari raat hai,kripa,i'm going to show u how much i luv yooh and this is going to be the most beautiful night we ever had,i luv yooh.

kripa hugs him and he puts her on the bed and takes off her jewlery,he takes off her tikka and kisses her forhead,takes off her earings and kisses her ears,takes off her necklace and kisses her around the neck,takes off her bangles and kisses her hands.then he takes off her shirt,from the back,he unties the strings and kisses her back and kripa shivers.then kripa says :

kripa - i luv yooh too.


and then we see them both kiss on the lips and it ends.


hope u guyz liked it!there might be a part two to this part!by the way,i changed my mind,i'm not changing poonam's name or priya's name.

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