The Chase - Fishy? New Game? - upd pg 26!

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armaghan

@sidra01

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#191

wow awsome i feel sad for poor angad she finally returned 😆 magnificent part

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 18 years ago

#192

i have been waitin for this one since las tuesday.great part 😆 😆
hope to see summore soon.Excellent job

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ixi-shaj

@ixi-shaj

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#193

Hilarious!! 👏 👏

she just feels sorry for him- i would too...

ps. Angads name changes to Shiv near the elevator part. lol

pps. u have to update sooner. 😡

Edited by ixi-shaj - 18 years ago

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Sumra

@Shazia_haya

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#194

i just raed it alll in one go...n it's awesome....man i luv it...do continue soon...n nice cpncept of the robot thing....it's a new one i guess....i mean teh cpncept of a robot is something new....

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sna004

@sna004

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#195

Hahahah.. your fanfic's just amazing!! So robotic 😉 but definitely great! Keep up the good work and keep writing! Take care

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kriti mehera

@Love''sAngel

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#196

nice part
but is the real kripa back or something else is going on in her mind>??
continue soon

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Sanya

@-Rose-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#197

Thanks People, let the comments comming in and I'll update soon!

Do you really think the girl who entered is kripa or one of her tricks? 😉 😆

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popgirl

@popgirl

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#198

Awesome Fanfic Continue Soon plz 👏

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nuts123

@nuts123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#199

Hey i just caught up with ur fic... and loved it alot... hehe kripa being a robot sure cracked me up!!!...but itz good 2 c kripa FINALLY feeling guilty 4 her actions, and seeing the love 4 her in his eyes🥰...

but u haven't continued this thing in over a year yaar Angry