The Chase - Fishy? New Game? - upd pg 26! - Page 16

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.IqbalKhan

just caught up.....awesomeeee work..... this ff is hilarious.... continue with the good work...... and plss dont make us wait for ages...

Nice name, Mrs.iqbalkhan 😆 😉, he's taken by Sneha 😉 Angad is taken by me 😉. Thank you for your lovely comments and I'll try to post it soon 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8888888888888 compltely different ff welldone plzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: karipa

gr8888888888888 compltely different ff welldone plzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon

Thank uuuuuuuuu Karipa. I will cont sooooooooooon.😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Act Five

Scene One

They very next morning Kripa freshen up and came down to see Angad sitting watching T.V. "Good Morning" she greeted him with a big smile. Angad looked at her surprised and greeted her back in a same way.

Don't show me your ugly teeth! She thought. She went to the kitchen and made a breakfast humming a tone. Angad came in and asked for help, she told him to set up the table. Angad was surprised at her friendliness behaviour, he knew something was wrong.

"What are you doing today?" she asked.

"Staying home and looking after you" he said calmly.

"Oh you don't worry I can take care of myself"

"No, the doctor told me to take extra care of you. You want your memory back fast. If you don't get it enough in time, it could be possible you could loose it forever"

What does he think of himself? Just by showing he cares for me doesn't mean I can fall for him. May be he uses the same method to sweep the girls off their feet. Just then the door bell rang. She quickly got up and went towards the door, before Angad can interrupt her.

Angad spread the butter on his toast with the help of knife. The sight that greeted him made him shock; the knife fell from his hands. Kripa stood with another young man, his eyes averted to their hands that were holding each other. So that was her plan. He smiled.

He went up to Kripa and put his arms around her shoulders, she looked at him evilly. "Aren't you going to introduce me to your friend?" he asked "Honey" adding a tone to the voice. Kripa let go of his hold and moved to the man who was starring at him.

"This is Zayed and this is Angad my brother" she said. "He is not my friend but I forgot to tell you we are seeing each other" Brother, my foot! His eyes burned to see both of them cuddling close.

"Nice to meet you" Zayed said, shaking his hand. Kripa invited him along to have breakfast with them. Angad sat at one end while Zayed on the other and kripa on the middle. She bought her chair close to him and smiled to herself. From the corner of her eyes, she saw him frowning, perfect, she thought!

So that was her plan to get rid of him. "Kripa" he said sweetly as he saw her getting comfortable with him, "would you make a coffee?"

Kripa looked at him and knew what he was trying to do. She smiled, "Angad, you can make it yourself as I am BUSY here"

"You forgot Sweetie; I don't know how to make coffee?"

"Oops, that's bad. You better try to learn to make one, other wise no one would marry you!"

"Sweetie, what happened to you?" he asked putting a fake concern on his face and moving his chair closer to her, he pretends to check her forehead, "No you don't have a fever, I am already married" kripa gave a nervous giggle, she'd look completely like a fool in front of him. Although he is hot but she has bribed him.

"What-ever! Why don't you make one and for me too. Do you want a coffee too?" she asked Zayed, he nodded. Angad grinned, "Have you tasted her coffee, I tell you she makes world's best coffee Man!"

"Angad I am sure he isn't here to see my cooking skills, why don't you make me one? And Zayed have already tasted my hand-made food and drinks, haven't you?"

He smiled, "Yes. Of-course!"

Seeing he didn't have any choice he left for kitchen. Kripa grinned and saw Angad peeping out of kitchen every few minutes. She wrapped her arm around his shoulder and rested her head on him. That Monkey! He thought as he took a peep once again from kitchen, does he has to come here instead of 60,000 billion populations in London. Quickly he poured the coffee in three cups and placed them on a tray. A mischievous smile was on his face.

As she saw Angad coming out of the kitchen, she hugged Zayed. Zayed, surprised accepted the hug. Angad stood with the tray, how long does he have to bear with this? Why can't just she accept him, see love for her in his eyes. Hem hem, he coughed. Kripa pulled away and looked at Angad. Seeing the reaction on his face, she congratulated herself. "Aah, the coffee smells so good, why did you lie?"

"Of course I didn't. I wanted to taste yours." He carefully handed right mugs to kripa, Zayed and for himself. He waited took a sip from his cup. Kripa waited both of them to have the first sip to ensure nothing was wrong. When satisfied she took the sip. The taste didn't even reach her throat that she immediately started coughing and hot coffee fell on her. She screamed loudly making both of them jump. "WHAT THE HELL!"

Angad immediately rushed to her side and started brushing the towel against her dress. Seeing their closeness, made Zayed look at them weird. She has just told him to act like her boyfriend and paid him but nothing. Seeing their closeness as physical closeness in brother sister! And to his shock, he pulled the screaming kripa in his lap and started calming her down. He placed a quick peck on her lips.

It felt so good to be near her, only if that monkey wasn't here. "WHAT THE HELL, YOU IDIOT." Kripa screamed so much that she didn't notice a quick kiss of him and her position. After few more moments, she realized her position and saw Zayed leaving. Giving him a dirty look while he grinned, she ran after him. "WAIT" She called after him. but he didn't listen just zoomed off from his car.

Scene 2

So what this plan didn't work but she'd definitely getaway from him this time. Definitely! She thought. She wondered why Zayed left them in such hurry! The stupid coward, can't he see Angad was playing with him, he wasn't good for nothing! That idiot bummer!

They were sitting on the sofa on a lovely evening; Angad was grossed in T.V., while kripa browse herself in magazines. She still didn't reveal to him that she's kripa; it was his fault of what he thought of her. She had worn a black addidas track suit with yellow tank top and trainer. She also had shoulder bag where she had her money and necessary things. The bell finally rang; she got up to see who it was.

Angad looked at the door to see kripa closing the door and going somewhere. Quickly he opened the door and saw kripa running through the nearest part. She was running away.

Kripa didn't know how fast she ran as if she was running for her life. She was coming to an end and there she'd catch a taxi on main road and spend a night somewhere. She looked back to and let out a scream as she saw Angad jogging behind her. Increasing her speed, she ran faster than ever and to her relief she saw some crowd passing. She quickly got her self covered and stayed low. She caught a glimpse of Angad scanning the crowd. Staying low, she pushed each people to get to the front, she didn't care if they gave her nasty looks but she has to get away from that crazy guy. Kripa jogged her way to the front staying low in middle of crowd, she spotted a cab. Quickly she made a run for it and sat inside.

"Take me away from this place, far away!" she breathed! The driver looked at her puzzled. Finally calming herself down, she said, "Central London, Madame Tussaud"

He nodded as he turned the car.

Angad stood there scanning the crowd; there was no sign of her. Ahead he saw taxi coming his away and nearer and nearer and when it went past him, he saw kripa making a face at him and he watched the taxi drive away? Was that kripa? Oh sh*t!

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Sorry for posting it late. Expect the next part by Tuesday! Keep your comments coming up!LONG ONES, I never get bored of reading long ones 😆 😉.Kripa just ran away!

Sanya

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Posted: 18 years ago

Well, you took your time didnt you.... 😡

Anyway i forgive u for this hilarious part. i wonder if they will engage in a high speed chase between taxis? they really should.

ps. Sophie writes chick-lit, soooo funny. read her books.

Edited by ixi-shaj - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
haha she ran away!! haha!!! she must be desperate!!!lolz

u sure took ur time and now ur gonna make us waait til ur easter breaks, in april rite?? i read that on barsaat.. well tryy and post sooner!!

now the next part(my prediction): taxi chase.. how far can one[kripa] go to get away from the other[angad]...
that was so funny with zayed thinking theyre bros/sis.. why was he so pised i mean she means NOTHING to him!! lolz reminded me of this other show i say with the exact scene.. cant remember which show.. o well

continue soooooooonn!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg!!!
kripa just ran away!!!!
cont. soon!!
i am soo eager!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

omgsh haha that was funny! angad didnt notice untill after a while! haha she ran away... but angad will catch her somehow....lol

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Posted: 18 years ago
funny hilarious 😆 kripa never gets tired of runnig i am amazed how angad kept his cool infront of zayed well i still dont get kripas problem 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

Well, you took your time didnt you.... 😡 😳 i am sorry, I was being lazy but I had other things to do!

Anyway i forgive u for this hilarious part. i wonder if they will engage in a high speed chase between taxis? they really should. aww Thank you and I am glad you found it funny, yeah high speed taxi. it reminds me of rat race 😆 😆

ps. Sophie writes chick-lit, soooo funny. read her books. Maybe I'll try to read her books during holidays and I have noted the title. Thanks again.

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