'Rajveer-Naina Some Love Stories Never End...'COMPLETED

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Oh beta! I'll need time to read 😆 Lemme read first then I'll let you know how I liked it 😳

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Mrumi I have just started with reading this story. I must say from the beginning itself my heart is fluttering.❤️ I mean girl this story seems to have potential! 👍🏼 Wow! I hope whatever I am assuming right now that I might get it in this story, turns true! 😳 I'll keep updating this post as I read further, alright, so stay tuned! 😉😛

First thing I liked the collage you made for Ch 1 👏

Coming to the story, the first few lines of Para 4 depicts their obvious love for Naina and sincerity

for their friendship 👏

The use of Rajveer's words in Para 9 succeeded in bringing many old memories. Frankly got a little emotional! 😛 I mean the way he was holding the flag and was looking towards it... wow! 😊 Thanks for giving us a chance to cherish that moment! 😳❤️

The way Pooja scolds Huda was so cute! Shows she really wants their friendship intact! 😊

Well but I guess Huda has his own apt reason, so we cannot exactly get angry on him for that. 😊

Haha! The moment Huda said he still loves Naina, Alekh ka BHAI mode shuru ho gaya 😆 I love him so much 😳

Alekh reminding Huda that he mocked Captain Rajveer in front of all, well done Alekh! 👏

Hadd hai Huda kitna notice karta hai yaar 😕 mere Rajveer-Naina ko privacy do! 😉 ~ THE LAST 3rd PARA 😛

Double SIM lolzz... 😆

P.S. you know what in the beginning even I thought they are going to show love triangle but they didn't show anything as such, I am glad actually 😛 but they did give hint in the beginning when Abhimanyu entered. 😉

Oh the last line. Fab! 👏

Over all nice start looking forward to the next part. And specifically Rajveer-Naina's cute scenes. 😳❤️

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Mrumi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: RNpoint1857
Mrumi I have just started with reading this story. I must say from the beginning itself my heart is fluttering.❤️ I mean girl this story seems to have potential! 👍🏼 Wow! I hope whatever I am assuming right now that I might get it in this story, turns true! 😳 I'll keep updating this post as I read further, alright, so stay tuned! 😉😛

I hope I can reach all your expectations...😊

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Mrumi

I hope I can reach all your expectations...😊

You will without doubt! 👍🏼 You know what lemme tell you something as the story proceeds, mujhey agar particular koi scene mann karega dekhne ka I'll let you know tum apne hisaab se wo scene show kar dena please. 😉 As a reader kabhi-kabhi mujhey bhi mann karta hai ki koi kuch aisa dikhaye jo main dekhna chahti hun 😕 Khud likhna n dusro ka read karna there is a difference you know 😳 And here I get you so I am free to put forward my demands 😆 and YOU ARE TO LISTEN THEM AND FULFILL THE DEMANDS TOO! 😆

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Mrumi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: RNpoint1857

You will without doubt! 👍🏼 You know what lemme tell you something as the story proceeds, mujhey agar particular koi scene mann karega dekhne ka I'll let you know tum apne hisaab se wo scene show kar dena please. 😉 As a reader kabhi-kabhi mujhey bhi mann karta hai ki koi kuch aisa dikhaye jo main dekhna chahti hun 😕 Khud likhna n dusro ka read karna there is a difference you know 😳 And here I get you so I am free to put forward my demands 😆 and YOU ARE TO LISTEN THEM AND FULFILL THE DEMANDS TOO! 😆

You have total right to ask me anything.. Bas wo scene mere story me fit ho jaye..😊

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Mrumi

You have total right to ask me anything.. Bas wo scene mere story me fit ho jaye..😊

Now that is what we call 'challenge' and as a writer you should be ready for all challenges, always! 👍🏼

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Mrumi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: RNpoint1857

Now that is what we call 'challenge' and as a writer you should be ready for all challenges, always! 👍🏼

Yup.. I am ready.. I will try my level best to fulfill all your demands..😊

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Sanchari

@BedouinMe

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

OK, I'll leave a detailed comment tomorrow ! But abhi ke liye, this is something that can come from a die hard Rajveer and LRL fan.. Hats off to you yaar ! Is part mein kaise poore LRL ka safar samaa gaya hai ... Fantastic ! Very very very well written !

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

awssmmm
start...

too good...
it was like a whole recap of lrl...
thier convo was awsmm...
conti soonnn...

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: BedouinMe
OK, I'll leave a detailed comment tomorrow ! But abhi ke liye, this is something that can come from a die hard Rajveer and LRL fan.. Hats off to you yaar ! Is part mein kaise poore LRL ka safar samaa gaya hai ... Fantastic ! Very very very well written !

Tumne read kar bhi lia 😕 maine nahi kia 😭

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