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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: rkchandni
awssmmm
start...

too good...
it was like a whole recap of lrl...
thier convo was awsmm...
conti soonnn...

Thank you..

I am glad that you like their convo😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: vssdp
amazing plot and very nice story
I read 1st part and seriously the emotions of cadets towards their rajveer sir was depicted beautifully
fabulously written
Thank you..😳

I also had not watched lrl but when I visited this forum I started watching some episodes of it and I really loved it
LRL hai hi aisa... pasand toh aana hi tha..😃
But don't worry I am going to give background of every convo and scene.. so agar tumne particular scene nahin bhi dekha phir bhi You will understand..

Cadets and Rajveer bond is worth reading
Continue soon dear and thanks for the pm
I am glad that you like their bond which i tried to show..
yes.. i will😊

May I know your name
My name is Mrunmayi and yours..?

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Mrumi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: RNlove4life
Superb story mrumi... 👏
Reminded me of lrl days and the way you've portrayed all the characters, I wish original lrl had done just a bit of that. It's so amazing...!
Please continue soon n do pm me :)

Thank you..😊

You are right.. Even i wish the same.. therefore I m writing it in a my way.. I really wanted them to show that cadets are missing him each and every occasion.. Even if Rajveer was not gonna come back but They could cherish his memories..

Anyways.. thanks for this sweet comment.. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: npksk8495
superb update amazing start 👏 lrl days ki purani yadain taza ho gayi i just love the cadetes' emotions their feeling toward their rajveer sir warna show me to after rajveer's accident sabhi to jaise bhool hi gaye the ki rajveer naam ka koi person bhi tha beautifully written
thanks for pm take care keep smiling keep writing

Thank you..

I am glad that I can cherish that wonderful memories of you all.

I know.. as I said already in my FF's introduction and also in previous replies,This is the only reason why I am writing this FF..

I want to give justice to Rajveer's character.. and this is my way..

Keep Smiling..😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: anju_panghal
another fan of ur story😛
Awww.. so sweet of you..😳

awesome start...sirf cadets ki hi ni meri bhi saari yaadein taza ho gyi
Yahi toh mai chahti thi ke hum sab wo pal phir se jee sake.

wo lines jo rajveer ne aakhiri bar tirange k niche khde hoke boli thi apne cadets ko...made me cry😭
Wo sabse pyara aur emotional scene hai.. one of my favourite scene of Rajveer

sahi kaha tha rajveer ne "agr kbhi sir ktane ki noubat aa bhi gyi to aap sab se pahle aap sab ke aage m hu na"
Woh hamesha hi sabse aage tha.. usne apna kaha hamesha sach kiya.. sirf baki ke log hi use kabhi samajh nahin paye..🥺

very emotional part...they all r remembering their past days n naina is not here with dem...she's still like that😔
Haan.. atleast mere ff me toh mai use dukhi dikha hi sakti hu..😔

missed naina in this part...n waiting for raj's entry...
raj ko jldi lana pls...uske bina sb soona soona laage😔
I guess.. you have to wait little bit more for his entry.. 😈

eagerly waiting for next part...pls continue soon n thanks for PM😊
You are welcome😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: gargy4u
👏 👏 awsm start dear:) so many realization and truely living the old days a bit more closely... Its surely going to be am intrstng Ff:) waitnng

Thank you..😊

Glad that this FF succeeds to take you in that beautiful era.

I seriously hope that it will turn in one interesting FF.😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria
Hi
The up is really good
Thank you😊

So the story starts as a continuation of the legend LRL
Wow i really liked the way you have pen down the emotions, the feelings of the cadets where met after 9 long months
Glad that you liked it.😳

Huda , Yudi Alekh ,Pooja and Ali all 5 were there but where is Naina
Hope we get to see her in the upcoming part
Just wait and read..😉

Plz cont soon and pm me
Surely I will...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: RNpoint1857
Mrumi I have just started with reading this story. I must say from the beginning itself my heart is fluttering.❤️ I mean girl this story seems to have potential! 👍🏼 Wow! I hope whatever I am assuming right now that I might get it in this story, turns true! 😳 I'll keep updating this post as I read further, alright, so stay tuned! 😉😛
No problem😊

First thing I liked the collage you made for Ch 1 👏
Thanks a lot.. you know I spent 2 hours for that one collage... Feww..... It is cover collage for my FF.

Coming to the story, the first few lines of Para 4 depicts their obvious love for Naina and sincerity
for their friendship 👏
You know I actually have scrolled upwards to read that what I wrote in para 4...😆😆😆..
The bond of friendship which they shared is hard to get.. and therefore I want to show that bond.

The use of Rajveer's words in Para 9 succeeded in bringing many old memories. Frankly got a little emotional! 😛 I mean the way he was holding the flag and was looking towards it... wow! 😊 Thanks for giving us a chance to cherish that moment! 😳❤️
It is one of my favourite Rajveer scene. Believe me even I have tears in my eyes when I wrote that para.

The way Pooja scolds Huda was so cute! Shows she really wants their friendship intact! 😊
Haha.. I really used to enjoy their cute little fights in serial. 😆

Well but I guess Huda has his own apt reason, so we cannot exactly get angry on him for that. 😊
Exactly.. He has his reason.

Haha! The moment Huda said he still loves Naina, Alekh ka BHAI mode shuru ho gaya 😆 I love him so much 😳
Aalekh...❤️