'Rajveer-Naina Some Love Stories Never End...'COMPLETED - Page 2

Originally posted by: gargy4u

Welcome to the grup dear:) and the only thing which inspired writer like me is the only negligence and disappearance of Raj like that and their love stories remained unfulfilled one. As a die hearted lrlian we will always cherish rn and the bond betwn the cadets. How much we wish for them to come along and creat a same era but... Anyways Lrl will always make me nostalgic. And no matter of the resemblance of the plot or the charecter every piece of LRL ff wl be cherish individualy.. Waiting. Do pm mee

Originally posted by: RNpoint1857

Hi Mrumi

Hi Ria..😊

First of all welcome to the world of writing fictions 🤗👏 And I am glad that the first pair you chose to write upon is Rajveer-Naina.😳 It's just a shubharambh, I am sure many more stories will follow. 😊

Thank you so much dear... its you who first told me that i should write fictions and see i am here..

Yup.. jidhar Rajveer hai shubharambh toh udharhi hai..😳

The truth that even after a decade your love for Left Right Left, Captain Rajveer and Cadet Naina is still intact makes me to feel really very happy. 😳

Yes.. after a decade also the jadoo of Rajveer Naina is intact.. and you know my love for Rajveer..😳😉

The moment I received your PM and read the subject, it succeeded in bringing a smile on my face. And I actually said, "chalo Mrumi ne bhi likhna shuru kar dia!"😆😛 Awesome! Now we'll get another story to read on Rajveer-Naina. 👏

As you said that your story is a simple story with no twists and turns, I would say no problem even if it is a simple one unlike normally we get on Left Right Left with all suspense, twists and turns but I am somehow sure that it would turn out to be a story worth reading. 😳

I don't think that in my very first attempt i should try suspense.. so i keep it simple.😊

The way you comment on any fic, shows how much you enjoy reading and putting your thinking into words. So somehow I am sure you won't fail to give us a beautiful story 😳

I hope i can reach your expectations.😕

Hey even though almost all situations have been written upon by other writers but it doesn't mean that you can't use those situations again! 👍🏼 You have your own thoughts, we would love to read how you can put the same situation which others have already put in their stories with your own flavor. 😳 Even if the story might move in the same track as of some other writer but of course there will be always a variation sometimes in the dialogues; other times in the scenario; may be characters too. So you don't have to think what other writers will think if they find resemblance with their stories 😳👍🏼 And I am sure the idea of the story is only yours and not of anyone else's. 😳

It is just one precautionary measure.. baad me no one should say anything against my story..😳

I shall wait for the first part. Well I guess not only me but other readers of Rajveer-Naina's stories will also be waiting for the update eagerly.😳 It's good that it's a story with finite parts, that shows that you are clear with what you need to show and how you are going to achieve the goal! 👍🏼👏

Thank you for liking my decision. First i want to make myself sure that I can write fictions and readers also want to read my stories and wait for it. then i will decide i should continue with my writing or not after this story. therefore i need honest comments of you all.

Yes I guess we all are very well aware that you love to write lengthy parts, thanks to your comments 😉 So this is going to be interesting to witness how you'll use this talent of yours in your story 😆

Thanks for the compliment..😳 I hope i can utilize my talent..

😛 Well talking about me I'll try to give lengthy comments 😉😛

but I guess it would still be nothing in comparison to your comments 😆

Don't tell me.. teri ye pehli hi comment mere comments se lengthy ho gayi.. i know you are not only one talented writer but also one wonderful reader.😊

Anyways don't you dare forget to PM me once you start posting 😆😉 Looking forward to your story. 😳

Oh.. dhamki..😆.. I will surely PM hu.. are bhai mujhe bhi toh ache readers chahiye.. 1st story hai.. marketing toh karna padega..😉 tere wo din kabke gaye.. ab hum Ria ki nayi story dhundte hai tere PM se pehle..👏

Stay blessed!

All the best again😳

Thank you so much.. take care..😊

❤️

Originally posted by: rkchandni

woww.. dear... welcome to this awsm world of writing...
alll d very best... do pm me for ur updates...

love...

Originally posted by: Mrumi

Thank you so much dear..

ya i will..

and I know ke tune tera bhi FF update kiya hai.. lekin sach me mujhe time nahin mil raha.. 25th tak toh mere exams thi and then i was on vacation with family.. and yours is RN FF.. so i want no disturbance while reading.. so jaisehi mujhe time milega i will read all remaining parts in one go and will comment surely..

Love and hugs

Originally posted by: -purnima-

Congratulations on beginning a new phase 😊
...
It gonna b wonderful to have RN once again...considering story is abt 7...
But I am bias to only captain 😳 😳 ...what happens to rest of characters, I don't mind 😆 😆 ...as long as I have capt to swoon

Happy writing & hope u get regular & consistent not. of comments on every part ...like you have been regular commbtor on other FFs 😃

Njoy !!!

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

Hi

Got another Writer

and as u said there are many amazing writers who had pen down many beautiful ff,ss,os on our favorite jodi Raina

but it always great to see another person in the writers list

so welcome to the list

plz cont soon and pm me

I am here with 1st part of my first Fan Fiction "Some Love Stories Never End..."

Sit back and Enjoy..😊

Give me suggestions for improvement.

Chapter I

A ball of rage is roaring upward and the flames rise boldly against the black sky. That great fire glows their skin red, orange and gold. Every eye reflects the flickering, each iris containing a small picture of the bonfire. They are roasted from the front, frozen from behind. Plumes of grey are buffeted into that night sky; carry aimlessly by chill January wind of Ambala. The voice of crackling firewood is trying to break the silence which fills in the air.

5 young soldiers are watching the bonfire as if it can burn up their inner rage, as if their frustrations, anger and vulnerability are the fuel turns into black confetti. It is that same lakeside place in Kanchanjunga Military Academy' where they had spent best days of their life. Now all those days seem like one big dream for them. Everyone is in his own thoughts. It is not that they are oblivious about each other presence. That feeling of togetherness is the only oxygen of their life which gives them strength to fight battles outside the battlefield.

Yudi gets irritated with the voice of this uneasy silence. He decides to break the ice. "Guys, we are meeting after long 9 months. Aaj bhi tum sabko hamesha ki tarah koi baat nahin karni ? This is the same place jahan hum kitni masti karte the, hamari aawaj ki gunj aaj bhi hai yahan ki hawa me. Jab Naina saath hoti hai toh koi nahin thakta.. sab bole hi jatey hai.. ab kya hua..? "

"Naina ke liye hum sabko outdoor mode on karna hi padta hai Yudi. Uska silent mode atleast normal mode ho jaye. Lekin aaj tak apne software ko nahin thik kar paye uska kya thik karenge..." says Pooja who is still playing with grass. Helplessness reflects from her voice.

"Ek baar ke liye dimag toh samajh bhi jaye par iss dil ko kaise samajhaye. Jab hum duty par hote hai tab dil laga rehta hai. Lekin ab ye 40 din ki chutti..." Yudi interrupts Ali, "Dude, what are you saying? tumhe ye holiday nahin chahiye? Jab se last year KMA se pass out huye hai tab se ab jake sabko ek sath mili hai holiday. Tumhare aur Pooja ke engagement me bhi nahin mil paye the hum because duty join karke jyada months nahin huye the. Aur ab jab unexpectedly 40 days ki lottery lagi hai wo bhi ek sath toh tum pareshan kyu ho?" asks Yudi surprisingly.

"Hum pareshan nahin hai Yudi bhai.. khushi toh hume bhi ho rahi hai lekin sath me ye jo sabke chehre pe mayusi hai wo hum phirse dekhna nahin chahte the. Waise kaha jaye toh aaj hum sabke liye khass din hai. Aaj hum sabko hamare Gantantra Diwas ke sanchalan me shamil hone ka mouka mila. Meri aur Guru ki regiment ko shamil kiya tha sanchalan me.. iss saal army ne hamare defence ke ladkiyon ki shakti dikhane ke liye unki tukdi ko khass roop me sanchlan me shamil kiya tha jisme Pooja thi aur jisko lead Naina ne kiya.. Huda bhai Bikes ke manore me the.. aur aap.. aap toh hum sabse aage nikal gaye.. aapko hamare desh ka Rashtragan bajane ka mouka mila. Itna garv ka din hai aaj lekin aap khud hi batayiye ke kisike bhi chehre pe wo garv aap dekh pa rahe hai.. wahi udasi hai, wahi adhurapan hai jo hum khud bhi mehsus kar rahe hai. Aaj agar Rajveer sir hote toh unko humpe kitna garv hota." Ali explains sadly.

"sahi bola usool tu. Aaj apunko sirf do logonki bahot yaad sata reli hai.. ek apunki maa aur Rajveer sir. Agar wo dono aaj hote toh aapunse jyada khushi unn dono ko hoti. Kash aaj aapunko parade me left right left karte huye unhone dekha hota..." Aalekh says without even changing his gaze from burning fire.

"You bet man.. seriously mai bata nahin sakta ke jab mai hamara national anthem play kar raha tha tab mujhe kitni khushi ho rahi thi.. Red fort pe hamare bharat ke republic day pe Jab hamara Tiranga aasman me lehraya toh sirf ek hi baat..."

"...mujhe yaad aayi" suddenly says Huda and all are started looking at him, who was still laying near lakeside, keeping his one hand on his forehead and other on his stomach, "hum kisi seema ki raksha nahin karte hum is jhande ke abroo ki raksha karte hain." This one sentence of Huda succeeds to take all of them back to that unfaithful day. They all drive themselves back to 1 and half year.. That independence day which they all are unable to forget... or for them it is impossible to forget...

That day.. Tiranga was flying as high as it is flying today. There stood the man who they still admire the most. They all were waiting for his orders. He was proudly watching his Tiranga flying high and started interacting with his cadets still looking at Tiranga...

"Yahi hai hamari pehchaan... yahi hai hum.. iske bina hum kuch nahin." Now he started looking at them and continued with his last lesson, as their teacher, as their mentor, "Iske liye hum jaan de bhi sakte hain aur isiki shaan ke liye hum kisiki jaan le bhi sakte hai. Isi ke liye hum jeete hai cadets aur isike liye marne ka khwab bhi dekhte hai. Jaante ho cadets, isse bada, isse upar aur isse ahem hamare liye kuch bhi nahin. Kyunki chahe hamare pass zameen ho ya na ho, daulat ho ya na ho, Pariwar, khana, dost ho ya na ho, hum sirf tab tak hai jab tak hamare pass hamari apni aazadi hai. Hum isi aazadi ke rakhwale hain. We are soldiers of this' flag. Hum kisi seema ki raksha nahin karte, hum iss jhande ke abroo ki raksha karte hain. Main nahin janta ke aanewale waqt me zindagi hum sabko kis mod par le jaye. Lekin bichdne se pehle mujhse wada karo cadets, ke apne khoon ke aakhri katre tak tum iss jhande ki abroo ki raksha karoge. Wada karo mujhse ke tum log khudko mita doge lekin iss Tirange ki shaan ko kabhi maila nahin hone doge. Come on guys, wada karo mujhse." He took this promise from all 6 of them and then disappeared.

"...we are soldiers of this flag".. Yudi completes his remaining sentence. Tears are flowing from every eye. "Aaj tak aapun log sir se kiya hua wada nibha raha hai aura aage bhi nibhate rehnge. Issi jhande ke liye jiyenge." Aalekh again makes that promise to his sir.

"Yaad hai guys, uske last year ka Independence day, hamara Kma ka pehla Independence day.. tab exactly flag hoasting ke time chotasa blast hua tha aur hum.." Yudi laughs on himself.. "aur hum Bharat ke future jawan, kaise ghabrake idhar udhar bhage the, tab sir ne hamse kaha tha..." "Agar kabhi sar katane ki noubat aai hi gayi toh sab se aage, sabse pehle, Main Hoo Naa..!!" This time Yudi interrupted by Ali. "Aur hamare sir ne aakhir tak unki baat sach karke dikhai. Hamesha hamare saath, hamare aage khade rahe, hamari dhal banke. Hamari har musibat pehle unhone jheli." Ali smiles remembering all incidents when Rajveer saved them from Maj. Bhargav, Maj. Nair and sometimes even from Brig. Chandok.

Yudi gives Ali one angry look, "Aaj koi mujhe meri baat complete karne dega. Har baar koi na koi meri baat kat raha hai. Pehle ye Huda aur ab tum. Are mujhe bhi toh Rajveer sir ki sari kahi baatein yad hai." Yudi says all this with his mock anger. "Nautanki..." Aalekh whispers to himself "Oye thand rakh Yudie, ek toh jabse hum yaha aaye hai sari purani yaadein fir taja ho gayi hai. Academy ke har ek kone me Rajveer sir ki yaadein hai. Aur tu hai ke apni liye baitha hai" Yudi creases his eyebrows with anger and going to react but again get interrupted, this time by Pooja.

"Yahi problem hai iss jagah ki.." Pooja wipes her tears and continues, "yaha aate hi hamare inbox ke old messeges open ho jate hai." "aur isi karan Punjaban, jab tau ne hum sabko aaj parade ke baad KMA aane ko kaha to maine mana kiya tha. Mai na aana chahta tha yaha phirse. Lekin phir mummyji ne kaha ke aise badon ko mana nahin karte isiliye mann gaya." Huda says now sitting properly infront of fire. "Huda, lekin tereko ek baat bhi manni padegi ke yahi wo jagah hai jaha aapun sab ek dusre ko mile. Yahich hamari dosti huyi. Bole toh apunko apni family mili. Yahich wo jagah hai jaha hamari life me hamare Rajveer sir aaye" Aalekh continues while controlling his emotions. "nahin toh aaj bhi aapun kisi jail me sad raha hota ya yahich isi academy me orderly bana ghoom raha hota. Lekin aaj aapun army me lieutenant hai.. aapun sab."

"Yes chief, KMA is like home for me. Yaha hamari kitni memories hai." Exclaims Yudi. "Acha hua Brig. Chandok ne khud hi hume puch liya nahin toh hum khud unse puchne wale the ke kya hum yaha ek din aa sakte hai kya.. purani yadein hai humari yaha.. yahi humne humare abbu ka sapne pura kiya.. hamare pariwar ke pehle army officer bane. Yahi toh Pooja ke roop me hume hamari jeevansathi bhi mili.." Ali looks towards Pooja, she blushes.

"Oye punjaban, tu toh sharma rahi hai yar. Ye kab sikh liya tune. Phoolan ke saath rehke tu bhi toh marne-marne ki bhasha karne lagi thi." Huda teases Pooja. "Oye Huda chup kar tu. Apne handset ka volume control me rakh. Ek toh parade ke baad tu out of range honewala tha. Main toh tujhse baat hi nahin karnewali." Pooja scolds Huda.

"Are punjaban, aise naraj na ho yar mujhse. Meri bhi toh halat samajh. Ek toh wo Phoolan hamse thik se baat nahin karti. Apne me hi khoyi rehti hai. Waise toh sabse bahadur aur achi sipahi wahi hai hum sabme lekin wo ghut ghut ke jee rahi hai. Mai aise nahin dekh sakta yar Phoolan ko." Says Huda and tries to look anywhere but his friends. "Aap ab bhi unse bahot pyar karte hai na Huda bhai?" asks Ali.

Huda stares at Ali and looks downwards. "haan yaron, ab bhi mai Phoolan se bahot pyar karta hu." Aalekh looks towards Huda. Huda continues, "Qaidi, tu toh janta hai ye baat. Tu hi toh tha jisne mujhe mere pyar ka ehsaas dilaya tha. Mere pehle tu hi toh samajha tha." "Huda, jaise aapun ne tere pyar ko dekha tha waiseich Naina ke pyar ko bhi aapun ne hich dekha tha.. khilte huye bhi aur murjhate huye bhi. Lekin uska pyar terese alag hai. Uska pyar uski jid nahin balki wo jisse pyar karti hai uski khushi tha." Aalekh says sternly.

"Mera yakeen kar Qaidi, meri wo jid usi pal khatam ho gayi jis pal Rajveer sir ke pyar ka pure court me tamasha bana." Explains Huda. "Hold on Huda.. tumhare kehne ka matlab hai ke jab tumhe pata chala ke Rajveer sir Naina se pyar karte hai toh tumhe gussa nahin aaya? Jalan nahin huyi?" Yudi asks surprisingly. "Jat, tere mobile me koi virus toh nahin fail gaya.. tu ye kya bol raha hai? Pooja joins Yudi.

"Punjaban, virus toh pehle faila tha. Uss din toh puri tarah se nikal gaya. Mere Captain sir ki izzat meri aankhon me tab 100 guna badh gayi." Says Huda feeling proud on himself and on his Captain sir. "Aap sach me bahot badal gaye hai Huda bhai. Inn 9 mahino me jab jab hamari aapse telephone pe baat huyi tab tab humne ye mehsoos kiya ki aap ab woh Huda bhai nahin rahe jinse hum Academy me mile the" Ali says all these looking towards Huda.

"Haan Usool, mai badal gaya hun. Maine bhi khud me badlav paya hai." Continues Huda while all are listening what is he saying, "Pehle me mai jo bhi tha sirf mere mummyji ke karan tha lekin aaj mai jo kuch bhi hu wo sirf Rajveer sir ke vajahse. Agar wo nahin hote toh mai ek dehshatgard bankar reh jata naki jo aaj hu, Lt. Amardeep Huda." All 4 are shocked after listening to Huda. "Tu kehna kya chahta hai saaf saaf bol" demands Aalekh.

"Doston aisi bahot si baatein hai jo aap sab ko nahin pata." Huda starts telling his story. "Tum sabko yad hai jab pehle Rajveer sir ka accident hua tha aur Phoolan ne jaan pe khelke unhe wapas laya tha tab mainehi unke jeep ke breaks fail kiye the." "What...???" Shouts Yudi. "Haan Yudie, mujhe academy me phone aaya tha ke Rajveer sir desh se gaddari kar rahe hai aur Indian Intelligence ne mujhe chuna hai unko unki anjam tak pahuchane keliye.. aur mai pagal Jat, unpar vishwas kar baitha. Phir jab Phoolan unhe wapas le aayi tab un logon ne mujhe dhamki di thi ki agar maine ye kaam pura nahin kiya toh wo log Phoolan ko mar denge. Toh maine uss party ke bahane unke wine me poison mila diya. Lekin hamare Captain sir toh sachhe sipahi the unhone mujhe pakad liya lekin arrest nahin kiya balki meri aankhen khol di sachhai se rubru karwake." Huda remembers that incident which still frightens him. " tune ye sab us waqt aapun sab ko kyu nahin bataya?" Aska Aalekh. "kyunki Qaidi wo nahin chahte the ke kisiko ye baat pata chale. Sabse important baat toh wo unka mission aur identity kisiko pata nahin chalne dena chahte the aur unko mere future ki bhi parvah thi."

"Hamare Rajveer sir sach me great the, sabse alag. Hamare sabse ache teacher aur sabse ache dost bhi."Yudi says excitedly. " Hai.. Rajveer sir aaj bhi sabse best hai aur bole toh Naina ke jaise aapun sabko bhi ye yakeen hai ke wo jarur aayenge." Aalekh corrects Yudi and takes Huda back to topic, "Itna sab hone ke baad bhi tune kya kiya Huda jab wo mogambo aaya tha academy me. Tu uss vakil Salve aur Abhimanyu sir ko dosh deta hai hamesha kyunki unhone sir ke pyar ka tamasha bana diya pure court me. Tune kya kiya.. tune bhi toh puri academy ke samne unka pyar uchal diya na" Aalekh asks angrily.

"Qaidi, mai aaj tak sharminda hu mere uss ek gunha ke liye. Aur zindagi bhar rahunga." Huda tries to explain but Yudi interrupts, "Huda tab tune ye bhi nahin socha ke sir ke carrer ka kya hoga jinhone tera career bachaya." "Yudie, behek gaya tha yaar mai, mogambo ne mere Phoolan ke liye pyar ka acha istemal kiya."Huda accepts. "Aap sab sirf Huda bhai ko kyu dosh de rahe hai hum bhi toh usme utnehi gunehegar hai.. unhone mera bhi toh career bachaya hai" Ali also accepts his mistake again. "Aur mere bhi phone me virus tha us waqt." Pooja joins Ali.

"Lekin doston sirf yahi wajah nahin hai ke meri najar me Rajveer sir ki izzat badh gayi." Continues Huda with his guilty eyes. "Maine Rajveer sir se help mangi thi Phoolan ka dil jitney ke liye, maine unse unki Naina ko manga tha aur Sir ne bina kuch soche mujhe promise kiya tha ki wo Naina ko jitne me meri madad karenge aur unhone ki bhi.. unhone Naina ka haath mere haath me de diya. Jab court me mujhe Rajveer sir ki feelings ke bare me pata chala toh unke selfless pyar ke aage mera jid wala pyar sharm se jhuk gaya, haar gaya mera pyar. Koi insan itna acha kaise ho sakta hai. Har baar sirf dusron ka sochna. Mujhe pura yakeen hai appraisals bhi Sir janbuchke hare the apne dost ko jitane ke liye lekin uss dost ne unko kya diya, solitary confinement..? Puri army ke samne unke emotions ka majak bana diya.."

"Huda, tum Abhimanyu sir ko kabhi maaf nahin kar payoge na..?" Yudi asks Huda but he knows his answer. "Nahin, mai uss jhabrile ko kabhi maaf nahin kar payunga. Uss din court me gawahi dena uski duty thi ye mai samajh sakta hun. Actually wo bhi puri tarah se thik nahin tha kyun ki exactly waha pe kya hua ye kisine nahin dekha. Lekin uss Captain Salve ko Rajveer sir aur Phoolan ke rishtey bare me batane ki use koi jarurat nahin thi. Jis tarah se ye baat court me uchali gayi... Rajveer sir ke aankhon ke aasoo mai aaj tak nahin bhool paya.. jab jab Rajveer sir ko apne dost ki jarurat thi wo kabhi nahin tha unke pass.. nahin.. bilkul nahin, mai use kabhi maf nahin karunga" Huda says angrily.

Again voice of silence fills in the air. No one says anything for some minutes. All are remembering all that incidents which happened with their Rajveer sir. Again Huda start talking, "Mummy ji ki kasam doston Mogambo, ke jane ke bad maine kabhi sir ke liye na kuch bura socha ya na kuch bura kiya. Aur khas kar jab maine unhe apne desh keliye ladhte dekha uss gaddar Dr. Ritu ke sath. Goli lagne ke bawjud bhi sir jeete. Sir ka wo jazba mai kabhi mujhme la paunga ya nahin pata nahin." All others are looking downwards when they remembered the incident. When their Rajveer sir needed them most, they were not there for him. They failed. At that time personal goals were important for them than their country.

"Lekin maine ek baat notice ki uss din.." Huda continues, Jis Phoolan ne sir ko apni jaan pe khelke bachaya tha wo Phoolan uss waqt unka sath dene ko bhi taiyar nahin thi. Itna hi nahin usne to unka first aid bhi nahin kiya. Usne kabhi nahin bataya ke jab Dr. Ritu ne sir ko goli mari tab wo kya kar rahi thi. Uske baad bhi wo kitne dino tak sir se thik se baat nahin kar rahi thi. Ye bhi ek reason tha ke jisse mujhe laga ke ab mai Naina ko paa sakta hu." Huda confesses.

"Haan, ye toh uss waqt maine bhi notice kiya tha. Lekin mujhe laga ke Naina ka phone Abhimanyu sir ke aane se double sim ho gaya toh iske vajahse. Lekin Naina ne sir ka first aid bhi nahin kiya.." Pooja says confusingly.

Aalekh, who till now listening this conversation, decides something and shouts in loud voice, "Rajveer sir ko goli Dr. Ritu ne nahin Naina ne mari thi."

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