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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Part 10
Madhu thinks for a while and decides to speak to Radha before going to Gopi. She goes to Radha.
Madhu: who is that guy dropping you home daily?
Radha: He is my college friend. I have told you that day.
Madhu: If he is only a friend, why should he drop you daily? Now, even Dhawal saw you with him. I can make out from your face that he is more than that.
Radha: Even if he is my boyfriend, what's the big deal? I will be needing somebody in my life one day or the other. When Gopiben had a boyfriend, you did not have any objection & got her married to the one she loves. That is not fair!
Madhu slaps her
Madhu: Don't compare that guy with Ahem as he came with his family & asked for Gopi's hand but this guy has not stepped in our house even once. Moreover Gopi has completed her studies & is working. Are you going to college to study or to keep boyfriends?
Radha: Now I know that all of you love Gopi more. Nobody loves me. Noone understands my feelings.
Madhu raises her hand to slap Radha but Dhawal stops her hand & pacifies her.
Dhawal: I know everything. There is no point in slapping her in this age. We need to find his background.
He then tells Radha to ask the guy to meet them.
Next day
Radha tells Umang about what happened in her house. Swayam agrees to come to her people.
After college hours, both come home. Radha introduces Swayam to her parents, brother, aunt & uncle.
Urmila gets an impression that he is rich
Dhawal & her parents speak to Swayam(Umang) & ask him where he lives. Umang gives them his address & tells them Radha knows his house.
Radha had got the proposal after Gopi's wedding but she had colored her tooth with black sketch pen & told the guy that she is not keeping good health. She had told the family that she didn't want to marry.
At MM
Kokila takes the jewellery from Kinjal's cupboard & goes to her room. Kinjal checks her cupboard to find her pregnancy report but does not find it. Kokila comes to her room.
Kokila: So this is the one you are looking for.
Kinjal is shocked.
Kokila rebukes & slaps her. She asks Gopi where Kinjal went.
Gopi: She had gone to meet Elesh.
Kokila assumes that Kinjal is carrying Elesh's child & prepones the wedding. She stops Kinjal from going to college.
Kinjal goes to Gopi to take her help. She tells Gopi to tell that it is Umang's child
Gopi: If he really loves you he would have come home with the proposal. Anyway, you call him up. Kinjal calls up Umang who agrees to come.
After the conversation, Umang is in a fix. He then makes a plan to get rid of both Kinjal & Radha.
Kokila is disgusted with Kinjal after learning from Gopi that the child belongs to Umang. Ahem learns from Kokila about Kinjal & slaps her. Gopi pacifies him.
Ahem: Kinjal's marriage with Umang cannot take place. The reason being he is his ex brother-in-law. He has created a lot of problems for us after the divorce. He had gone to the extent of breaking the glasses of our windows. He had also gone behind the bars for that. Later, I took pity on him and bailed him out. He does not belong to our level.
Gopi: What about the child?
Ahem: Yes, we have to find a way. Only answer is abortion.
He goes to Umang's workplace and beats him black and blue.
Kokila too decides to take Kinjal for abortion. Kinjal overhears and tells Umang about it who tells her not to agree for it. Kokila drags Kinjal but is stopped by Baa and Hetal. Rashi informs this to Urmila who informs Elesh and his parents about her affair and that she is pregnant. Elesh's parents cancels the engagement.
Baa: Killing the foetus is a sin the answer is to get her married to the person who made her pregnant.
Kokila reluctantly agrees. Umang then comes to MM
Umang: I know that we have not been in good terms after the divorce. However, I want to forget whatever has happened and want to marry Kinjal. The family agrees.
Next day
They go to his house with the shagun only to find that Umang has absconded.
Part 11 coming up

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Part 11

The Modis track Umang and there is a heated argument between them.

Umang: You people have thrown Anita out of the house so I have pretended to love Kinjal. I never loved her in my life.

Physical brawl takes place between Ahem and Umang. Kokila faints. Modis take her home. Kokila is tensed about Kinjal. Her affair with Kinjal becomes known to all. The family decides to send her abroad at their relatives place but they refuse to accommodate her. Urmila talks to Dhawal about his marriage with Kinjal. She convinces dhawal who agrees. Urmila comes with the proposal to MM. Kokila visits the place and reluctantly agrees. On the wedding day, Kinjal elopes but Is caught and pushed into it. Kinjal and Dhawal get married. Jeetu and Jayantilal decide to merge. They renovate the house and merge them. Urmila takes ground floor and Madhu takes the top one. But there is one common kitchen and one common hall. Kinjal enters as a bride. Everyone welcomes her. She meets Radha.

Radha: I am sorry for what Umang did to you.

Kinjal cries. Radha comforts her.

At Dhawal's room, they have a conversation.

Dhawal: I had suggested both the families to merge the house since you are coming. I am sorry about what had happened to you. No matter what people think about you, I respect you. We have also put an AC and WiFi. As of now I may not be able to give you the best facilities. You have to give me some time. But whatever freedom I have, I will give you the same freedom.

Kinjal: I know you have passed on the loan application for us but you don't earn as much as my family. Take your own time.

Urmila: No need to dance on your family's income. I know you and your brother have lived in your uncle's money but my Dhawal is self made. He does not have parents. We have raised him up. First you earn as much as your peehar then you talk.

Dhawal: Enough fai.

At the top floor

Madhu: Be careful otherwise you'll land in the same mess.

Radha: Ok.

Navratri festival comes. Modi family invites everyone. Radha and Gopi meet each other. Madhu is worried about Radha and tells the same to Gopi.

Part 12

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Part 12
After the end of the function, Radha chooses to stay in MM. Madhu objects but Kokila agrees. Kokila shows Radha her room. Rashi gets irked seeing Radha and decides to plot. Radha calls Umang and tells him that she will be staying in MB.

Next Day
Radha goes to the college. At the end of the day, Umang takes her to the disco.
Radha: I don't know to dance.
Umang: I will teach you. They dance on the song

Gopiyon sang ghoome Kanhaiya
Raas rachaiya Ragha na jaaye re
Abb saanwra na bhaaye

Radha on the dance floor
Radha likes to party
Radha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)

Panghat pe aake saiyyan marode baiyaan
And everybody crazy on Radha
Chhedde hai humka daiyaan bairi Kanhaiya
And everybody crazy on Radha
Hoga woh lakhon dil ka chor
Humka toh laage woh
Hua hai aise baawla jo kehta jaaye:

"O Radha teri Chunri
O Radha tera Jhalla
O Radha teri natkhat najariya
O Radha tera jhumka
O Radha tera thumka
O peechhe peechhe saari nagariya" (x2)

Radha on the dance floor
Radha likes to party
Radha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)

O o...
Maathe pe pankh more
Kehte hain makhan-chor
Bajaye bansuri
Bada aaya chitt-chor
(But Radha wants more)
Dhoondungi charon aur milega koi aur
Dungi main haathon me mere dil ki ye dor
(Cuz Radha wants more)

O Radha Radha bholi deewani hai
O Radha Radha do pal jawani hai
O Radha ko sambhalo koi isey bata do
Ki milega na koi Sanwariya

O Radha teri Chunri
O Radha tera Jhalla
O Radha teri natkhat najariya
O Radha tera jhumka
O Radha tera thumka
O peechhe peechhe saari nagariya

Hey Radha Radha kaahe itna guroor bhala
Chhodo bhi nakhre ye kaisi ada
Tune kya socha ek tu hi mash.hoor yahaan
Laakhon hain Gopiyan bhi humpe fida
Ho saari hi duniya ye naari hai
Shuru humse teri kahaani hai

O rehne de re Kanha
Bhoolega tu sataana
Jo girungi main ban ke Bijuria

O Radha teri Chunri
O Radha tera Jhalla
O Radha teri natkhat najariya
O Radha tera jhumka
O Radha tera thumka
O peechhe peechhe saari nagariya

Radha on the dance floor
Radha likes to party
Radha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)

O panghat pe aake saiyyan marode baiyaan
And everybody crazy on Radha
Chhedde hai humka daiyaan bairi Kanhaiya
And everybody crazy on Radha
Hoga woh lakhon dil ka chor
Humka toh laage woh
Hua hai aise baawla jo kehta jaaye:

"O Radha teri Chunri
O Radha tera Jhalla
O Radha teri natkhat najariya
O Radha tera jhumka
O Radha tera thumka
O peechhe peechhe saari nagariya" (x2)

Radha on the dance floor
Radha likes to party
Radha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)

Umang drops her at MM. Ahem goes for an important meeting after the office hours. Gopi while returning from the office sees Swayam(Umang) with Radha who drops her near MM. She recollects about seeing him before and gets a doubt. She decides to speak to Radha. Rashi too sees her with the guy and tells Kokila immediately.

Kokila: You have got a fickle mind.

Rashi: No kaaki, I saw it in my own eyes.

Kokila: Enough. I don't want to hear a single word.

Meanwhile, Gopi calls Radha to have a conversation with her.

Radha: Its been a long time we met face to face & spoke.

Gopi: Yes, that is true.

She then asks Radha about her preparations for her exams & her other activities.

Radha: They are fine.

Gopi: I believe that you have made a lot of friends.

Radha: Yes, I have a lot of good friends. Kinjal is my best friend. I have other friends. They are Amulya, Vaishali, Pooja, Shobha, Bela & Jane.

Gopi: What about the guy who dropped you?

Radha: He is my best friend. I leave college late as I would be doing my work outs. His college hours are in the afternoon. So when the lectures are over, he drops me.

Gopi: How long do you know that guy.

Radha: I know him for 6 months. He is Umang's twin brother. His name is Swayam.

Kokila overhears their conversation & realizes what Rashi said is right. She goes to Gopi.

Kokila: What is the matter? Is everything alright?

Gopi: Yes everything is fine.

Kokila: I can make out from your face that you are troubled. I heard the conversation between you & Radha. You are troubled from the time you spoke to your mom.

Gopi tells Kokila what she has seen & the conversation she had with her mom. She asks for Kokila's help to find out about Swayam. Ahem enters the house & hears it. They go to his room.

Ahem: You seem to be so upset that you didn't even attend the meeting. You told me that you are not well.

Gopi: I have a headache.

Ahem touches her forehead & finds out that she has a high temperature.

Ahem: OMG. I will call the doctor.

Doctor comes & writes the prescription. Ahem goes & gets medicines for her. She takes them.

Ahem: Now you relax. I will speak to you later.

After dinner, all go to bed. Gopi thinks about Radha.

Next Day

Ahem: How are you feeling now?

Gopi: I'm better.

Ahem: You are looking pale. Tell me what is the matter.

Gopi: I want to ask you one thing.

Ahem: Tell me.

Gopi: Does Umang has a twin brother?

Ahem: Don't take his name. My blood boils when I think about him.

Gopi: I can understand Ahemji. It is about Radha so I asked.

She tells him everything she saw & heard. Also her conversation with Radha.

Ahem: He does not have a twin brother. He is lying. He has stooped to such a low level. Let him come here. I will show him.

Gopi: Then my suspicion is right. He was wearing dark glasses. He had also shaved his hair.

Kokila comes in.

Kokila: Calm down son, don't take any such step out of anger. It will make the matter worse.

Ahem: He has created a lot of problems for us. We were also ready to get Kinjal married to him forgetting the past but he ran away.

Kokila: Yes, I know. I see that both of you are angry.

Gopi: Not only that. He is now fooling Radha, presenting himself before her as his twin brother.

Ahem: Yes mom.

Kokila: O Lord Krishna. He's gone to such a low level. We have to inform Madhu & Dhawal about it.

Gopi: We should tell this to Radha first. If we tell this to mom now, it will be hard on her.

Kokila: Yes, you are right.

Kokila calls Radha. She comes.

Gopi: I want to tell you something important. It is about your personal life & that is the turning point of your life.

Radha: Is it about Swayam?

Gopi: Yes, it is about Swayam. But you first you need to answer some of my questions.

Gopi: Do you love me?

Radha: What kind of question is this?

Kokila: Just answer in yes or no.

Gopi: I'm asking this to see how much you trust me.

Radha: Yes, I do love you. I cannot forget what all you did for me. You took care of my needs.You gave me whatever I want even if you had to go out of the way without affecting your routine. You took care of me like a mother.

Gopi: Do you trust me?

Radha: Yes, I do.

Gopi: You admit that I have fulfilled all your desires. You say that I took the entire burden but have never let you feel the pinch. But now we are going to talk is something serious. I have given you the dress you wanted. I gave you the bicycle, sports items that you wanted. I have enrolled you to the gym that you have wished for but I'm sorry. We cannot do that with respect to life partner. If possible, please forgive me.

Radha is shocked.

Radha: Why are you apologizing to me? If you don't like Swayam, I want to know the reason. He looks like Umang but he isn't. He is his twin brother.

Ahem: Who told you that Umang has a twin brother? If you are thinking like this, I tell you that Umang does not have a twin brother. I know that family for many years. I know him pretty well.

Gopi: He is the one who dumped Kinjal & now he is making a fool of you.

Radha: I'm not able to believe. what proof you have?

Ahem shows the wedding album with Anita & the family photo.

Kokila: This is the proof.

Radha: He has not told me anything about Anita.

Gopi: How can you expect him to tell. The same person had come to our place to ask for Kinjal's hand. I got the doubt when I saw him dropping you here.

Radha: But our parents & Dhawal are fine with it.

Gopi: I know it & have heard a lot about you. She might have accepted it but at the same time she wanted to find out about him. You know our mamiji very well. She saw that person in the restaurant & park with Kinjal. Then even Dhawal saw you. Mom is very much worried about you. They have not decided anything about the guy.

Kokila: Just because he changed his name & hairstyle, his character is not going to change.

Madhu calls up Gopi to find out whether she spoke to Radha.

She puts on the speaker phone.

Kokila: Yes, we spoke to her. I want to tell you something very important. Please come to MM. Also ask Dhawal, Kinjal & Urmila to come to MM tomorrow. (Next day is Sunday).

All come to MM. Even the entire family gathers at MM. Gopi, Ahem & Kokila inform Madhu, Jayanti & Dhawal about Umang.

Urmila: I had a doubt about this guy. I had seen him with Kinjal many times.

Dhawal: I too had a doubt when fai told this to me but I gave him the benefit of doubt.

Kinjal gets furious.

Kinjal: He has stooped to such a low level. I will not spare him.

Dhawal calms her.

Radha is dismayed. She goes to Madhu & Jayanthi.

Radha: Mom, Dad

Madhu tries to slap her but Dhawal stops her.

Jayanthi: I was proud of you but you have let me down. It was my fault that I went away.

Gopi: Even I didn't want to go. Mom, I went to study abroad because you have insisted. Mamaji, I thank you for taking the responsibility but no one told me what was happening. Kinjal, you have been coming to our house often but you too didn't tell me when it happened.

Radha: That guy came in my life after you went.

Gopi feels guilty for leaving the family.

Ahem: It is not your fault. Even if you were there it wouldn't have been possible to keep track of somebody all the time.

Kokila: We could not even keep track of Kinjal despite everyone being at home. We can only tell them the do's & dont's but it is left to them

Urmila tells Radha: Now the entire thing is front of you. The decision is yours. You try provoking him. Then you will know the reality.

Madhu: Why are you teaching wrong things to my daughter. If she comes home straight, that is enough for us. From now on somebody should accompany Radha to the college & gym.

Kinjal: We are in the final year. So I will go with her.

Urmila: If everyone goes out who will take care of the house?

Kinjal: What made you to think that I will do these things & not complete my studies.

Kokila: When Gopi can balance between her house, college life & part time jobs then why can't you? Despite all these Gopi has topped in her studies & her extra curricular activities. (She tells this to both Urmila & Kinjal).

The cops do the further investigation about the dead body. They find out that the murder has happened outside the casino. They get some information that Umang & his friends were there. Cops are in search of them.

Part 13 coming up

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Part 13

Radha is shocked to hear this but cannot forget Umang. She gets heartbroken. Kinjal comforts her and asks her to come to her place. Gopi feels Madhu has been strict with Radha.

Gopi : Mom, instead of sending her to the college, how about keeping her engaged at home so that she won't have time to think about him.

Madhu : It is my mistake. I didn't keep control on her.

Gopi : It is not your fault.

Hetal: Radha is immature and innocent. Young blood boils but you should make her understand.

Madhu agrees. Kinjal takes Radha home.

Radha : I have ruined your happiness unknowingly. I am sorry.

Kinjal : It is not your fault. We both are cheated. We are in the same boat.

Both decide the teach him a lesson.

The cops enquire at the casino and gets details about Umang and his friends. Tripti's parents find the guys pic and show it at the police station. Next Day Kinjal and Radha go to college. Umang comes after college hours to meet Radha. He is shocked to see both of them together. He thinks of an opportunity to meet Radha privately.

Part 14 coming up

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Part 14
Next Day
Both Kinjal and Radha go to college. Umang keeps bothering Radha. However, Kinjal was intervening between them. Umang offers a lift to Radha but she refuses.
Umang: You don't know how much I love you. Trust me, I am Swayam.
Kinjal intervenes.
Kinjal: Now I know you are not Swayam. Now Radha is my sister. I will take care of her.
Both of them leave.
Radha: I am not able to forget Swayam.
Kinjal: Swayam does not exist. Umang does not have any brother as such. The faster you understand, better for you.
She then informs her maika about Umang. Kokila & Gopi goes to Rashi for help.
Rashi: I think mom is right. If we ask Radha to provoke him, she will know his reality.
Gopi: But it is very risky.
Kokila: Rashi is right. Let Radha go with him but we will keep an eye on him.
Gopi rings up Kinjal. Kokila tells her about the plan. Kinjal agrees.
Kinjal: You can go with Umang. Who knows he might want to change.
Radha is happy.
Annual day function is nearing. All of them practice. Umang & Radha are dance partners. Cyrus attends the function. All parents are also invited for the function.
Umang & Radha dance on the song yeh kaali kaali ankhen...
Cyrus: Congratulations Umang.
Umang: Which Umang are you talking about? I am Swayam
Cyrus: Now I understand. You are refusing to recognize me because the girl is near you.
Both fight.
The Modi family comes & stop their fight. They get the confirmation that Swayam is Umang.
At MM
Rashi: I think we can get more information from Cyrus.
Kokila: Yes, you are right.
She then tells Ahem & Gopi to go to the casino where Umang goes but they should reach out to Cyrus before Umang does. Cyrus dials Gopi's number. She puts on the speaker phone. He tells Gopi that Umang is Tripti's killer & urges them to meet him.
Kokila, Gopi, Rashi & Urmila go to the casino. Ahem, Jigar & Dhawal inform the cops about the murder. The ladies reach casino & find Umang & Cyrus fighting. Seeing the MM ladies, Umang runs away but the men catch him on the way & drag him to casino.
Cyrus is injured. Radha comes out but Umang tries to brainwash her. The Modi men come to casino with the police. Cyrus gives his statement. Radha realizes her mistake & refuses to support Umang. The cops arrest Umang.

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 15

Radha thinks about her moments with Umang and cries. Though she didn't support him, she feels bad for him. Two weeks pass but Radha is unable to forget him. She wept inconsolably. One day, she decides to meet Cyrus to find out what evidence he has about her Swayam. She goes to meet him after college hours.

Cyrus: I know for what you have come. What do you want from me?

Radha: How do you say that Umang and Swayam are the same? What proof do you have? He looked completely different from Umang.

Cyrus: There is no Swayam here. Umang was also Jeevan in front of Tripti, your cousin sister. He had. also dumped Kinjal. He is a liar. He raised his hand on me only because you were with him in the annual day. I didn't feel bad about that but felt bad because he refused to recognize me. If you are interested come with me. I will show you.

He takes Radha to Umang's place and. opens his trunk. She finds the mangalsutra which Tripti had made. She sees his childhood pics and recollects that Ahem showed his wedding album with Anita. She gets shocked and decides to meet him what all these evidences.

Cyrus: You can take them if you want but don't show it to anyone in the house.

Radha thanks Cyrus and leaves. Cyrus meets Umang in jail and takes back his statement, getting Umang released.

At Umang's house

Cyrus: You must be thinking why I took the complaint back. I withdrew it because I felt that you are the one who has been helping me financially. I gave the statement against you as you refused to recognize me because of Radha.

Umang: Thanks for withdrawing the complaint. What do you want from me now?

Cyrus: I am thinking of starting a business and I can't trust anyone other than you.

Umang: What made you think that I will join you. If you want me back, you have to pay back the money that I gave you.

Cyrus agrees but asks for a months time. Umang agrees.

At MM Radha keeps the pics and mangalsutra safely.

Gopi and others are concerned about Radha whereas Rashi and Urmila make fun of her. Rashi calls up her mom and tells her that Radha still loves Umang and thinks that he is Swayam. Radha overhears it and snatches the phone from her and breaks it. Both fight. Everyone comes to the room and stop the fight.

Radha: I heard her telling about me to her mom and making fun of me.

Rashi denies it.

Gopi:When I was looking for Radha, I also heard it.

Rashi: I didn't mean it. I was joking.

Gopi and others tell her not to make fun like this and leave.

Radha decides to leave MM as she is not able to stand Rashi. She packs her belongings and. goes back to her mother's place. Urmila calls her a panouti and refuses to take her in but Madhu comes to her rescue. Kinjal backs her.

Next day she meets Umang and tells him to stop bothering her showing all the evidence. Umang confesses the truth to her and tells her why he did that. He further tells her that he loves her more than before and gives her 2 days time to think about it. Radha is inwardly happy that he told her the truth and decides put a word once again before the family when it comes to that.

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Part 16

Radha is thinking whether to accept him or not. She remembers Gopi's words and how she supported her when Rashi made fun of her. Urmila and Madhu fight about Radha. She tells Madhu that Radha broke Rashi's phone. Madhu goes to Radha and asks her the same to which she says the mother and daughter were making fun of her. Madhu gets back at Urmila. Jayantilal, Dhawal and Jeetubhai come home. Madhu talks to him about taking a separate house as Urmila does not want Radha and she has no right to decide about who should be there and who should not. Urmila on the other hand fights with Jeetubhai and Dhawal for the same but they tell Urmila that Radha has every right to stay as everyone has financially contributed. Jayantilal tells Madhu not to take Urmila's words seriously but Madhu tells him that she interferes in our matters and behaves as if Radha has left her sasural and come back. Kinjal and Radha are not ready for separation as they are close to each other. Madhu also talks to Jeetubhai and Dhawal about it. Radha and Kinjal decide to patch up between them. They decide to play a reverse psychology on both of them and start executing it. Radha got engaged in this and her daily routine that she didn't get time to think about him.

Rashi calls Urmila about their drama to help the Modis to make Radha forget Umang to which she tells her that it is going well. Madhu doesn't know about it.

Kinjal tells Radha that she shouldn't have broken Rashi's phone to which Radha admits. She goes to MM and apologizes to Rashi who tells her that she shouldn't have teased her. Both patch up. Radha tells Rashi about what she found at Umang's place. She shows her the mangalsutra which Tripti had brought. Gopi comes in and sees it.

Cyrus pays Umang whatever he owed but he asked for some time to think about it before joining. Radha also knew that Cyrus took his statement back and tells the same to the family about it.

They again go to the cops and show all the evidence which Radha brought and give the mangalsutra back to Tripti's parents.

Umang is in jail again and realizes that Cyrus and Radha betrayed him. His plan to take revenge has backfired him.

Tripti's parents remember her and sell it. They get good money from that.

Cyrus meets Umang and is not able to believe that Radha did this to him. He shows the bail papers to the police and get him out. He then asks Umang why is he doing that? Umang tells him that he wants to hurt the Modi family for what they did to his sister. Anita comes in and tells him that he already took the revenge by dumping Kinjal and killing Tripti. Anita had realized her mistakes but cannot go back to Ahem as it is too late and Ahem loves Gopi very much and considers her more than his first love. She tells Umang about Nilesh who is her present and is romantic like Ahem. She requests him to forget whatever has happened as it is her fault. Both hug each other.

Umang: If I go to Tripti's parents to apologize, I don't know how they will react. It is better that I surrender myself.

Anita is happy that for the first time her brother took a right decision. He surrenders himself before the law.

All are amazed to see this change in him

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Part 17

Umang expresses his desire to the court to change for better. The court gives him 2 years of imprisonment as a form of punishment. In jail, he is thinking about the moments with the girls and bitterly cries for what he has done. He develops the feelings for Radha and realizes that what he did was wrong. Anita goes to MM and apologizes to the family for her misdeeds and on behalf of Umang for all the troubles. She hugs Gopi and tells Ahem that he could not have got a better partner than her (Gopi). She hugs everyone in the family and takes their blessings. She requests them to forgive Umang as he has surrendered himself to the law after getting the bail. She hugs Radha & requests her to forgive Umang. She then gives her invitation card to the family & asks them to come for her wedding. The family looks at the card & tell her that Nilesh is their family friend & they will come.

The family attends the wedding. Umang gets the permission to attend the wedding. Kinjal & Radha also attend it. The marriage took place in a grand way. After attending the wedding,

Kinjal & Radha go abroad for further studies after their degree. Kinjal gets an offer for modelling & she happily accepts it. Radha gets an offer to act in the show & she accepts it. They have a good time forgetting all the unpleasant moments they had in their lives. She tells Kinjal, "I don't know whether Umang is pretending or he is genuinely sorry." Kinjal said,"Such people can never change. If he changes, it means that the sun has risen from the west. But don't think about it. When it comes to that, we will see."

Days pass by. Umang is released from jail 6 months before his term on the grounds of good conduct. He joins Cyrus's business & completes his education as well. Radha & Kinjal come back & start their cinema house independent from all. Dhawal does not like it but does not tell anything as they have been successful in that line. Kokila is not happy about that & confronts Kinjal & Radha for accepting those offers. Kinjal said,"How can you expect me to adjust without the comforts & luxuries that I used to have here? How long can I ask money from Dhawal? You people got me married to him but I fulfilled all the duties of a wife. I took care of Radha. I listened to all my elders so can't you listen to one request which I make?" Kokila said, "If the elders don't object to this, I have no objection." Urmila, Madhu, Jitendra & Jayantilal come & tell the family that they are fine with it. Jayantilal himself is in the film line. He joins Kinjal & Radha's business.

Umang & Cyrus are into financial services dealing in investments, chit funds & loans. An executive contacts the companies for loan application in which Modi Industries & RK Productions Pvt. Ltd are one of the companies. Radha & Kinjal apply for business loan & are shocked to see Umang.

To be continued

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Part 18

Radha, Kinjal and the Modis move out of Umang's office and applies for loan in Dhawal's office. The bank processes their applications. Chirag tells Ahem and Jigar that it is a right decision to move out of Umang's office as he is not worthy of any kind of relationship. Jayantilal tells the same thing to Kinjal and Radha. Gopi, Rashi and. Radha feel bad for Tripti. Radha feels lonely and gets depressed when Ahem and Jigar hug their respective wives. Gopi then hugs Radha and comforts her. She tells Radha that Umang is not worthy of her love and she will get a match who is far better than Umang in every way.

Umang had sensed Radha coming to his office and want to meet her but Cyrus advises him to forget Radha as he has screwed up everything in the past and move on in his life. Umang agrees but inwardly says that if Radha is destined to be his wife, no one can stop that. Neither Radha herself, nor her parents, nor the Modis.

Another collegian, who studied with Radha and Kinjal in India and US is secretly in love with Radha. He had seen Radha going with Umang on many occasions was heartbroken but could not forget her. However, he had interacted with Radha in US but could not express his feelings for her. He is a very shy person who is very much close to Dhawal. His name is Paul. He takes non-vegetarian food unlike Radha and the Modis. He is hesitant to put the word before Dhawal for two reasons. One of the reasons is because of her past and the other is because he doesn't belong to their religion. He is tall, lean, fair and handsome. He is a body builder. He is working in the corporate and is a Vice President.

He goes to the church regularly and prays to God about Radha's well-being and confides to the pastor about his feelings. The Father tells him that love has no boundaries and true love overlooks the past and accepts the person as they are. Paul asks for his help to put the word to Dhawal about Radha. However, he tells him to initiate. If his response is negative, he will help him.

Paul is from a very rich family but is neglected by his parents. They had separated because of their personal interests. There was neither compatibility nor mutual respect towards one another. His father was alcholic and a gambler and his mother took all the trouble to bring him up but as and when she expanded her business, he was left alone. Yet he is a gentleman who doesn't hurt anyone or misbehave with anyone. He has lot of respect for women and fights against injustice. He had lost his father who met with an accident and his mother is paralyzed who is on physiotherapy. The company is his own but uncle is managing it.

Paul prays to God to give him courage to speak to Dhawal. He then decides to give up non-veg and starts having veg.

After 5 months, he goes to Dhawal to find out what is in his mind when it about the wedding between 2 different communities.

He tells one story in which Dhawal has to answer it.

He puts it in the following way:

A guy and a girl are studying in the college and are good friends. The guy falls in love with her but is not able to tell her because of his shy nature. Both belong to different religions. The boy gets heartbroken when he sees his love going with some one else. The guy prays to the Lord daily with his full heart and finds a friend in a Father of the church. The guy lost his father and his mother is paralyzed. His uncle is taking care of the empire and the guy is assisting him and gets well paid for his work. The guy has switched on to vegeterian food. The father suggests him to talk to the girl's brother first then he will help him. What do you think the guy should do?

Dhawal answers that the father is right. Paul reveals that he is the guy and Radha is that girl.

Dhawal is shocked and amazed.

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Part 18

Dhawal asked Paul, "Why didn't you tell this to me directly?" Paul said, "I wanted to know about your opinion about inter-caste/religion marriage. So I had brought this in the form of a story." Dhawal said,"I don't care about the religion as long as the person is good at heart and you have it."

Paul said,"My parents had a loveless relationship and had applied for the divorce as my father was alcoholic and a gambler. They had also separated but my father had got liver problem and the doctor gave him some medicines and asked him to stop drinking. My father realized his mistake and began to work hard and earn money in a honest and legal way. He started real estate business and it was going well. My mom saw this and decided to give him a chance. My parents patched up and decided to go to the court and withdraw the divorce application. My mother was happy that she saw his car which he had purchased out of his efforts. The car met with an accident which took away my dad's life and my mom became paralytic. She could not bear the trauma. The doctor gave up on her after which Father came in our life and took care of us. It was because of him that my mother had drastically improved her health. I gave up non-veg when I learnt that true love teaches us to sacrifice. That is the reason why I'm able to talk to you now."

Dhawal said, "I will call you Krishna as it is your original name. I know you from our childhood & understand what all you had undergone. Don't worry, I will put the word. Tomorrow is Janmasthami & my sister Gopi's birthday. Come with your family for the function."

Paul said, "Oh Gopi, I know her very well. She was designing dresses for my mother. I guess, Radha is her sister."

Dhawal said, "You are right. See you tomorrow."

The Modi family come to Shah-Kapadia Niwas for double celebration. The celebration was grand. Krishna had come with his family. Dhawal introduces them to the Modis & reveal about his proposal for Radha. The elders send Krishna & Radha to the terrace to talk to each other.

Radha: I never knew you love me.

Krishna: I loved you since our college days but you were more with Umang. I was shy to tell this to you before Umang came in your life. I could tell this to Dhawal in the form of a story. I had changed my religion because of the unavoidable circumstances and I found that friend, guide and philosopher in the pastor. Whatever I'm today, it is because of him, Kanhaji and Jesus. I do go to the church and believe in Jesus but at home, it is our kanhaji. We have given up non-veg & will not have it anymore.

Radha: I'm sorry to know about your dad's death. It was unfortunate.

Krishna: I also wanted to tell you about Umang when I saw him romancing with Kinjal & Tripti. He had beaten Cyrus very badly after your dance competition.

Radha: I came to know about it in casino. I never knew he was Umang. He told me that he is his twin brother & his name is Swayam. I came to know that he does not have a twin brother only from the Modi family. Later, Cyrus revealed that he killed Tripti. He had told her that his name is Jeevan. I saw him working with Cyrus in a financial company. I avoided him. I'm ready to marry you.

Krishna: I like you & want to spend my life with you but not against your wishes. I don't know what is in your mind, I'm very happy with this relationship but I don't see he same in your face. It was my mistake that I didn't tell you directly but from my side, you can take as much time as you want. If you have those feelings for Umang, it is better you face it. I'm sure, you will definitely get over it. My yes is there. I want you to accept me wholeheartedly. Not under family pressure. I'm always there for you.

Radha: I wish you had come to me before Umang. I need some time to understand you more.

Krishna: No problem. I'm not in a hurry.

Both come out. Krishna & his family express their liking for Radha. All are happy. Radha decides to face the reality as suggested by Krishna. Both Krishna & Devki go to the father for the thanksgiving. Father said,"Nothing to worry, if Jesus is willing, Radha will definitely revert to you. Since it as all of a sudden, she will need some time." He suggested Krishna to fast for 3 days. Krishna agrees & starts fasting immediately. Father had told him to fast during the day & break it in the evening. And on he third day, he is supposed to pray to the Lord & end his fast.

Gopi asks Radha about her opinion about Krishna. Radha said, "He is a nice guy & better than Umang. But he feels that I'm accepting this proposal under family pressure. He told me to take my own time. He told me that avoiding Umang means running away from self which is not correct. Whenever I see him or even think about him, I see Tripti's face. I see her in agony when he had stabbed her. I don't know how to convince him that I don't love Umang anymore."

Gopi said, "We all know Krishna very well. He is a very principled man and a good person. Even I can see that you still have feelings for Umang. The only way to get over it is to face it. We deliberately gave you responsibilities to divert your mind from him. What I suggest you is go to Kanhaji in the morning & pray to him. Keep yourself engaged & fast for 3 days. You can have fruits in the evening. On the third day, give thanks giving prayers to Kanhaji & break the fast." Radha agrees & starts immediately.

Both Krishna & Radha follow it strictly. Radha's develops her feelings towards Krishna. Radha tells to the family about going ahead with Krishna/Paul.

Krishna & Radha go in for a date & confess their feelings to each other. Radha thanks him for helping her to get away from the feelings she had towards Umang.

To be continued.

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