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Posted: 9 years ago

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Love, Hate & Murder Mystery

Part 1

I am starting from the scratch. Gopi is as educated as Rashi or anyone else. I would like to start with the families of two neighbouring cousins i.e Gopi & Rashi. In this Ahem is married to Anita but is not happy in his married life. No compatibility between them. Anita is lazy and Kokila gets irked very often. She is also a troublemaker in the house and wants to dictate terms to others. Jigar is doing his MBA abroad who will be joining the family business very shortly.

Modi Bhavan
Ahem: Anita, I am going for jogging and swimming. Before I come back, I want green tea to be ready.

Anita: Fine, I will do that.

Ahem gets up in the morning and reminds Anita about the green tea before 6:30 a.m. Anita is in deep sleep.

Anita: Oh it is only 4:30 a.m please don't disturb me. I want to sleep now.

Ahem sees the time and finds that what she said was right.

Ahem: Fine, do what you want but I want my green tea at any cost.
He goes for jogging. Anita wakes up & prepares green tea. She thinks this is the best time I can impress Ahem & keep him under my thumb that he won't think about his mom again. Ahem is back from jogging.

Ahem: Is my green tea ready?
Anita: yes. she goes & gets it.
Ahem finds different taste and calls Anita.
Anita: Now what?
Ahem: Is this the green tea which I have it daily? It has got too much of sugar.
Anita: Green tea is green tea. If you don't like it why don't you ask your meethi to prepare it.
Ahem gets more angry. "Cant you prepare even a simple green tea? If you cannot then what is the point in having you as a wife? Why should I give you what you want? Why should I spend my money on you? You are very selfish.

They both fight. Kokila comes out
Kokila: What is the matter? why are you fighting?
Anita: That is none of your business. We are husband & wife.
Kokila: I'm not interested to interfere between the married couples. Because both of you are shouting it is disturbing the neighborhood.
What is the matter Ahem?
Anita: Why are you asking him? Are you trying to create a rift between us? Solve your marital problems with Parag then you come to us.
Ahem slaps her. All come out to watch the scene & are shocked.
Kokila: Control yourself son & tell me what is the matter? It is not good to raise your hand on ghar ki bahu (DIL).
Ahem: Don't call her bahu. She is a dhabba in the name of that. She has put too much of sugar in green tea whereas she knows I don't take too much of sugar. One more irritating thing is that she does not keep the room tidy & things are not organized. Woh yeh sab toh tab karegi jab use rooz rooz ki kitty party or club main jaane se fursath mile. (She will do these things only when she gets time from going to kitty party & clubs daily). I'm sorry mom, I have disobeyed you by marrying this lady. She has been giving me hard times. I am not even able to find my office files because of her. My laptops are slow no matter how much ever RAM I add to it. She puts too much of videos in my laptop & has deleted my files. What will I do before my clients if I have to give the presentation? Everytime I take a new one, she takes them. Last night, I even saw her with another man. Every time I see her, she is engrossed with her phone.

Kokila: Oh Lord Krishna! why didn't you tell these to me before?
Anita screams, Mother, don't believe him, he is telling lies. I was not with any man.
Ahem: Really?
He shows the pics to Kokila.
So tell me now whether its a lie.
Kokila: Son, I trust you. Anita, get out of the house.
Anita refuses. Ahem drags her & takes her by his car & drops her to the maika.
Jigar returns & shows his degree to the family. All are happy.
Ahem comes out & congratulates him. He asks him to join his business to which he agrees.
Jigar: Bro, why are you so dull? Is everything fine?
Ahem: Do your work. (He is grim as usual). Jigar figures out that something is wrong & decides to find out from Baa.

Gopi & Rashi meet. Both of them go to Modi Industries for an interview. They both wait. Gopi's turn comes. She goes to the cabin & meets Ahem

Part 2 coming up

Edited by katrinasalman - 9 years ago

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 2

Ahem sees her coming in and asks her to take a seat. Gopi thanks him. Ahem keeps silent. Gopi nervously looks at him as he looked grim. He had no smile on his face. He was not in a condition to speak as he was engrossed in his personal problems.

Then he realized he needs to interact with the candidate. He takes a glass of water and offers her. He then recollects that he saw her somewhere before. Then he realizes that Gopi had topped in her graduation and PG. She is also a table tennis player. He and Chirag had come to their college in USA to recruit people and Chirag gave her the visiting card for topping the University. He talked to her casually and asked her to join the next day. He liked her profile.

Same was the case with Rashi. She had applied for different department wherein she met Jigar and Chirag.

Both Gopi and Rashi left. Rashi had got something in mind. She gets attracted to Jigar. Gopi has lots of responsibilities at home. Her mother Madhu is mentally ill as her father is missing. He had gone abroad and he got stuck there. He is unable to come back as his passport is with his employer and his contract kept extending.

Madhu had taken lot of pains to educate their daughters. She and Urmila had taken education loans but Urmila kept fooling them about repaying them.

She got away from them with her kalakaris. Madhu had got a mental shock that her husband is no more whereas the fact is that he got stuck.

Gopi has to treat her mother and educate her sister Radha who is going to the college. She has been supporting the family with her scholarship money and part time jobs.

At Modi Bhavan, Jigar learns about what happened between Ahem and Anita. He realizes that Ahem is upset because of that.

Anita's brother Umang learns that she was thrown out of the house. He goes there and creates a tamasha. But Kokila is firm about not taking her back. Ahem had sent divorce papers to Anita. Umang demanded alimony from the Modi family to which they agreed.

Umang then decides to take revenge from them. He went to Kinjal's college to flirt with her. Both Kinjal and Radha are studying in the same college and are close friends.

Part 3 coming up

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 3

Both Gopi and Rashi are selected and are happy. Rashi goes to Urmila and says:

"Mummy", I went for an interview today. I got a job.

Urmila: Oh Badamvini meri dikri.

Rashi: I want to say one more thing.

Urmila: What?

Rashi: One handsome young man with his father had interviewed me. I like him.

Urmila: Oh not bad. First you find out whether he has a girlfriend.

Rashi: Mummy shub shub bolo.

Urmila: Do you believe in yourself?

Rashi: Yes.

Urmila: Girlfriend hua toh kya hua. You know we are the best in kalakaris.

Rashi: Mummy, you are great.

Urmila: What is the name of that handsome guy?

Rashi: He is Jigar Modi.

Urmila: I will work out a plan and tell you what to do.

Gopi is thinking about Ahem who interviewed her.

Jeetu: I know you are alone. Your mom is not in a condition wherein you can share your feelings. Radha is too young to understand it. You can tell me. I took care of your mom and sister when you went to study abroad.

Gopi: I am wondering how come Ahem changed. He was looking stern when I stepped in.

Jeetu: Maybe he was in tension but had to do what he is supposed to do.

At MM

Ahem looked relaxed after coming.
Jigar: Baa told me what happened between you and Anita when I was away.
Ahem: Don't take her name.
Kokila: Yes, Ahem is right. No one is going to talk about her. I am thinking of getting Ahem remarried to a nice girl.
Ahem (thinking about Gopi): I am going to my room. I have some work.
Kokila: Fine.

At the workplace.

Gopi and Rashi are introduced as new managers to their staff.

Chirag: Guys, you need supervise your team and send us a daily report. We will have meetings for every alternate day. But you guys should meet your boss before leaving.

Rashi is happy but Gopi is nervous. Both submit their reports and meet their bosses.

Jigar: Well done Rashi!

Rashi: Thankyou.

When Gopi goes to see Ahem she gets speechless.

Ahem: Come on! Why are you scared? You are doing a good job.

Gopi: If I ask you something will you give me?

Ahem: Tell me what it is.

Gopi: I want you to smile at the end of the day.

Ahem smiles.

Gopi: You look good when you smile.

Ahem is happy.

Part 4 coming up

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 4

Ahem: Thanks Gopi! Now I understand why people are not as close to me as they are to Jigar.
He shares about his personal life with Gopi.

Gopi: I'm sorry to hear that. But life has to go on. You should not allow anything to ruin your happiness.

Ahem: I know and will try my best.

Gopi: Nothing is impossible. Leave all your worries & stress to Kanhaji. He will take care.

Ahem: From now on, I will do that.

Meanwhile Jigar & Rashi have a casual talk.

Jigar: You look good smiling.

Rashi: Thanks. You too look good.

Jigar: Will you have some tea or coffee?

Rashi: Sure! But even you should have.

Even Ahem and Gopi decide to have some snacks. Both go to Jigar's cabin.

Ahem: Shall we have some snacks as well?

Jigar: Sure!

They spend quality time. Then Ahem and Jigar drop Gopi and Rashi to their place.

Rashi is happy.

Urmila: How was your day?
Rashi: Fine! Do you know that Jigar dropped me here.
Urmila: Yes and that is a good beginning. Try to know about his life.
Rashi: I will tell you if I see something.
Urmila: Create such a situation for him so you will get the right answer.

At MM
Ahem comes home smiling. All are surprised and happy.
Kokila: After a long time, I could see this smile on your face. What is the matter?
Ahem: Nothing special. My new manager cracked 90 billion deal.
The entire family is happy. Kokila blesses him. Ahem goes to his room and thinks about how could he share about his life with Gopi. She is a new joinee. Is anything happening to me? No, I don't want to love again. It has only given me pain. It took away all my happiness but I have to keep her words in my mind.

He goes to the temple and asks for Kanhaji to guide him and show him the right path. Kokila had found something more in his smile and wonders there could be some special reason as to why Ahem is happy. Deals always crack. I need to find out. She decides to surprise him.

At the workplace
Rashi overhears Jigar saying my girlfriend Purvi... Rashi wonders who is that Purvi. She gets the clue about their relationship and gets to know that she doubts him and gives him hard times. Purvi is actually his cousin sister but a distant relative. She is very forward who freaks around but is possessive about Jigar.

At the end of the day both submit their report. Jigar looked upset about Purvi's behavior.

Jigar and Rashi discuss about the office schedule and routine. That was the task assigned to her after everyone else leaves.

Purvi enters Jigar's cabin and misbehaves with Rashi. Both of them fight and argue. Then a loud voice is heard. STOP IT. It was Jigar.

Rashi got upset tears started rolling out of her eyes. Jigar gives her a tissue paper and apologizes to her for Purvi's behavior.

Jigar: I will speak to you later.

Rashi leaves.

Jigar and Purvi have a verbal fight. Ahem comes out and confronts Purvi to leave as it is an office. He also blasts Jigar after Purvi left.

He tells Gopi about Purvi coming often and creating a nuisance in the office who tells him to keep his cool and giving him a glass of water. He then drops Gopi to her place and goes home.

At MM
Ahem apologizes to Jigar for blasting him.

Jigar: Its ok. As an elder brother and a Managing Director, you have every right to scold me.

Ahem: I scolded you though it is not your fault. I understand that she is related to us. She can come to the office but tell her to behave accordingly.

Jigar: She only comes to check me what I do. I am fed up. I was discussing with Rashi about the office schedule and she misbehaved with her.

Ahem: Why don't you spend time with her? Take her out for lunch or dinner. I was spending time with Anita in USA during my college days but my marriage with her didn't work out. I never knew about her intentions. She has been double-crossing me and I didn't get any clue. As an elder brother, I advise you don't take any hasty decisions. Ring up Rashi now and ask her how she is feeling.

Urmila Mansion
Rashi is crying.

Urmila: What happened now? why are you crying.

Rashi: I got to know about Jigar, he has a girl-friend. Her name is Purvi.

Urmila: Purvi! Yes, I know her very well. She is related to the Modis and is after Jigar.

Rashi: I heard him saying "My girl friend Purvi" over the phone.

Urmila: No that can't be. I don't think he really loves her. We should do something to break their relationship.

Rashi: When she was abusing me, Jigar supported me.

Urmila: That is a good sign.

Rashi: So this is the reason why you told me to find out. It all happened by itself. I got the information effortlessly.

Urmila: That is much better.

Rashi: Hope even this relationship breaks without our efforts.

Urmila: Don't expect things to happen. You should make them happen. I have a plan.

Rashi's phone rings. It is Jigar's call.

Jigar: Are you alright now?

Rashi: Yes but I want to tell you something.

Jigar: Tell me.

Rashi: You told me everything about yourself. We have studied in the same college in USA but you were senior to me and Gopi. But our timings were different. You told me everything about yourself in the cabin but you didn't tell me that you have a girl-friend. I only heard over the phone and it was casual.

Jigar: No dear, she is not my girl-friend. She is my cousin sister. She is our distant relative.

Rashi: But you love her.

Jigar: No, I don't love her but she loves me. I don't want to marry till I establish myself in business. But she wants to marry me immediately. She wants to have a physical relationship with me and she seduces me but I don't budge to it.

Rashi: But what about girlfriend you were mentioning?

Jigar: I was talking to my classmate over the phone and he was pulling my leg. I said it for fun. I will see you tomorrow. Bye & Good night.

Rashi: Bye and kisses her phone.

Jigar blushes

Rashi calls her mother.

Urmila: What happened now?

Rashi: Jigar called me up. He told me that he does not love Purvi.

Urmila: That's good news but we have to focus on make Jigar free from that chudail.

Kokila starts searching a girl for Ahem. She tells Panditji I want a DIL who will listen to me. Pandit shows her the girls who had asked for the groom but she is not satisfied.

Kokila: I want someone who does not talk much. But you are showing me a wrong girl.

She then decides to come to Modi industries for a casual visit.

Modi family decides to conduct a Gokul Ashtami Pooja in the office. People are seen working and things are smooth. Kokila sees Gopi and gets impressed. She then recollects as to why he is happy these days. She says to herself, "Yes that is the girl I am looking for. She is the one who brought back the lost smile in his face. Though she is highly educated, she is different from others. She is quite modest. I think he has fallen for her and has made a right choice."

Gopi had made sweets from home and she distributes them to everyone. Kokila too tasted it and she liked it.

Kokila: You have prepared a nice dish.
Gopi: Thankyou Aunty.
Kokila: Don't call me aunty. You can call me by my name. I know it is the tendency but aunty is only called to the relatives. My name is Kokila.
Gopi: Kokilaji.

Ahem realizes that he has developed feelings for Gopi.

Days pass by. Ahem calls Gopi in the cabin.

Ahem: Good job. The management has decided to promote you as a CEO.

Rashi too gets the promotion as a Vice President.

Next Day

Gopi comes by rickshaw to the office. It was getting late that day. She reaches on time. Auto rickshaw stops. She has 500 rupee note and does not have a change. Auto Rickshaw fellow also does not have a change. She asks at all the places for the change. Ahem sees her.

Ahem: What is the matter.

Gopi: I don't have change. I have 500 rupee note.

Ahem gives the money to the rickshaw wallah but shouts at her for asking the change from the strangers.

Ahem: If you don't have change, come to the office and ask. Anyone of us will give.

Gopi feels bad and starts crying in private i.e during lunch time. Ahem too feels bad for shouting at her and gives her a tissue paper.

Ahem: I am sorry for shouting at you. Those people are not good. Most of them are drunkards so I told you that if you want something please ask us. We do this for Rashi too. Don't feel shy.

Gopi: Usually, I don't come by rickshaw. I come by walk. This is the first time.

Ahem: That is fine but henceforth you should do that.

At the end of the day, Ahem feels this is the right time to speak to Gopi.

In comes Gopi.

Ahem: I want to tell you something important.

Gopi: What?

Ahem: I don't know how to start but I want to ask you one thing.
Gopi: Yes, tell me.
Ahem: What do you think about love and marriage?
Gopi: Love is Kanhaji's gift. It is the innermost feelings of a person. Marriage is a sacred relationship between man and and woman.
Ahem: After my divorce I began to think Love is a bs and is a time waste. But you have given me a hope. You restored my smile. You have always stood by me and have solved the most complicated problems. When I was angry at Purvi incident, you have not let me lose my cool. I had those feelings for you from the time you have joined us but I didn't want to love again. I had suppressed my feelings. I want to spend my life with you. Will you be my wife? Will you marry me?

Gopi is shocked.

Gopi: Are you telling me to be your wife?
Ahem: What is wrong in that? I know you have the same feelings for me as I do.
Gopi: I'm a poor and a simple girl and you are very rich. Don't show me those dreams.
Ahem: You are not poor. You are rich at heart. Your inner beauty has captured my heart.

Hearing this, Gopi runs away. She starts avoiding him from the next day. She too has been suppressing her feelings.

At Modi Mansion

Kokila: Son, I want to tell you something important. It is about your life.
Ahem: Before you start I want to tell you something. If it is about my marriage, I'm not interested.
Kokila: What about Gopi?
Ahem is shocked. He starts wondering how does my mom know that I love her?
Kokila: I could figure it out when I saw your changed behavior. I have been observing you for many days. It was my decision to conduct Puja in the office so that I can see her. You have made a right choice.
Ahem: I proposed to her and because of that she is now avoiding me.
Kokila: Call her to the cabin and speak to her. I will give one more visit tomorrow. I will be preparing the food in the office.
Ahem: As you wish.

Workplace
Things are going smoothly.

Receptionist: Gopi, Ahem's mom has come. She wants to talk to you.
Gopi is reluctant but she goes to Ahem's cabin. They hold her till everybody leaves.

Kokila: I called you because I want to talk to you something important.
Gopi: I know what is it. Ahem told me that but I won't be able to accept as I have a lot of responsibilities.

Kokila: You are not different from us as all of you are working together.
Ahem: I have shared about my personal life with you. It is an open book but you have not told me anything. What is your responsibility?

Gopi: My mother and sister. My mother is not keeping well. Radha is too young. She has to concentrate on her studies and other activities. She does little work but I take the entire burden. My mother is in a mental shock from the time she heard the death about my father. I need to treat my mother, educate my sister and pay off the education loans. I have been taking tuition for children upto 10th standard, doing embroidery and tailoring work along with my studies and extra activities. My uncle took care of them after I left for US. I need to repay him.

Ahem: Why didn't you tell me this before. You should have told me at least when I proposed to you. I love you. Your priorities are my priorities.

Kokila: Yes, Ahem is right. We will take care of everything. You can help him in his business after you enter our house as my DIL. What happened to your father?

Gopi: My father had gone to Saudi Arabia for job purpose. He has not been in touch with us for long. After we got a news about his death, my mother lost her mental balance. She is not able to recognize anybody. She lost her memories. I can't marry till my mom gets well.

Ahem: I can understand. Btw, where was he working.

Gopi: He was working in Deltas Ltd in Jeddah.

Ahem: We are going to meet the client at the same place for business purpose. So we can get some information there.

Kokila; When you are going let Gopi and Rashi come with you.

Ahem: They are coming with us as we have promoted them and given them more responsibilities.

Kokila: What does the doctor say about your mother's condition?

Gopi: He says try to do similar things so that she will remember everything. She has not fully recovered. She believes that dad is alive and will come one day.

Kokila: Then chances are there for her to recover if your dad is alive and if you succeed in bringing him back.

Part 5 coming up

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 5

Ahem informs Jigar and the family about his decision to go ahead with Gopi. He tells the family about meeting the client at Jeddah at the earliest as Gopi's dad can be traced. He tells them about her condition. Everyone in the family offer their support to him. He calls up to the client for the earliest appointment and gets it within 2 days.

Ahem: We have to meet the client day after tomorrow.

Kokila: Start your packing at the earliest.

All start packing their belongings. Rashi and Gopi too packed their belongings.

Jeetu: If you get any information about your dad, please tell me.

Gopi: I will.

Madhu: I will also come. I want to see him

Gopi: You need to take rest. I will inform you about dad. Please pray that he is alive.

Jeetu: Gopi is right. It may take some time as they are going out for business purpose. They will search for your husband on the way.

Madhu: Ok.

All go to the airport to catch the flight. As soon as they get into the plane, Ahem and Gopi sat together. Jigar sat next to Rashi.

Jigar: I want to ask you one thing which I couldn't because Purvi was around.

Rashi: Tell me

Jigar. I heard the kissing smack after we talked over the phone. Was if for fun or did you kiss me seriously?

Rashi: To be honest, I was serious. If you have felt bad, I'm sorry. I don't know what is going on in your mind and your feelings for Purvi.

Jigar: No need to be sorry. It is fine with me. I don't love Purvi. It is true that her parents had brought the proposal at my place. No one likes her but at the same time my parents cannot refuse. I accepted the same as I don't want to hurt them.

Rashi: You should tell your parents about it as you are their only son & they want the best for you. They will understand your feelings.

Jigar: You are right. I will tell them.

Rashi: Do you have any other girl in your mind?

Jigar: Yes

Rashi: Who is the lucky girl?

Jigar: It is you.

Rashi is happy.

Jigar: I liked you from the time you joined us but I was shy & Purvi has been blackmailing me. Her father has been favoring us whenever we needed loans for business. If her mom tells her husband to stop our loans, we will get doomed. I'm able to talk to you freely as I will be away from her at least for few days. Once we come back, I will talk to my mom.

Rashi: Fine.

The flight takes off. All of them reach Saudi. Ahem informs the client about their arrival. Kokila comes to Saudi taking the next flight. They are in the hotel room. Ahem asks the receptionist about Jayanthi's company & gets the details. All of them go for sight seeing & spend good amount of time there. All of them went with their heads covered.

Next day they reach the clients place. Gopi shows the presentation. Modis get the project. From there, all of them go to Jeddah in search of Jayanthibhai. The Modis find that many Indians are captured there & are tortured when they protest against terrorism & drugs supply after they complete one year. If they want to leave, they have to pay the huge amount to get their passport & they don't have money.

They were locked inside the room & it was difficult to trace Gopi's dad. All of them spread to different places. Gopi finally finds her dad. He is happy to see her. Gopi informs everyone that she found her dad. All of them come to that spot.

Gopi hugs her dad.

Gopi: Thank God, you are alive.

Jayantibhai: What happened? How is Madhu?

Gopi: She is not fine. Someone gave her the information that you are dead. She lost her mental balance. She is waiting for you. She tells daily that you will come.

Jayanthibhai feels guilty for leaving the family.

Jayanthibhai: I was unable to reach out to you people because they extended our contract. They seized our mobile phones when we refused to use the computer for the wrong cause. They have kept us captive. I don't even have money to give them to get out of this contract.

Ahem: Whatever is the amount we will give.

Jayanthibhai: It is 15 lakhs (According to Saudi currency).

Kokila and Chirag tells them they might be upto some tricks. We need to take some safety measures. They contact the clergy and ask for help. All of them came to that spot. Ahem meets Jayanthibhai's boss and hands them the cash. When he refuses to release Jayanthibhai, the clergy seized him and gave him a rigorous imprisonment. They returned Jayanthibhai's passport.
Jayanthibhai is rescued.

Part 6 coming up

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kavita

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Part 6

Jayantibhai checks the passport expiry date. Luckily, time was still there for the passport to expire and there were enough blank pages.

Jayantibhai: thanks for saving me.

Ahem: Welcome.

Jayantibhai: I don't know how to repay you. You helped me though you don't know me.

Chirag:Your daughter Gopi is working with us. As soon as we came to know about it, we got our appointment preponed from the client.

Jayantibhai: Thank you once again.

Kokila: You don't have to thank us. You are safe. That is enough for us.

Jayantibhai: Why did you take so much trouble for me?

Ahem: It is not a trouble for me. I did it for Gopi, her mom and myself. I want to marry your daughter. So I consider you as my father.

Jayantibhai is happy.

Gopi: Mom is waiting for you so we have to make a move now.

All of them go to the airport and catch the flight to India. They reach home. Madhu sees her husband and is elated. She starts recollecting everything and gets her memory back. She recognizes everyone.

Kokila and Ahem put the proposal before her parents. Ahem then kneels doen before Gopi with the ring and proposal. Her family accepts it.

Kokila: We are now taking leave. Now we have to do a lot of preparations.

At MM

Jigar tells his parents about Purvi's behavior and he doesn't want to marry her. Ahem and Kokila back him. He also tells them about his liking for Rashi.

Hetal: It is a good that you told me. We too don't like her.

Chirag: We have to look for another bank to apply for the loan because we cannot expect anything fron Purvi's dad. Nothing is as important as our sons happiness.

Rashi tells Urmila about herself and Jigar. She also tells about Jigar's condition.

Urmila: So that is the condition. I know a financer. He will definitely help.

Rashi: Let the Modi family come here with the proposal. After that we will tell them.

Jeetubhai gets the news about his BIL's return and is happy that Madhu recovered.

Hetal and Chirag goes to Purvi's place and reject their proposal. Her father gets to know about her behavior and apologizes to them but her mother began to throw tantrums.

The Modis decide to conduct both the engagement and marriage on the same date.

Jigar calls Rashi and gives her the good news. Everyone goes to Rashi's place and brings the proposal. Shah family accepts it happily.

Gohem RaJi engagement within 2 days and marriage is within 15 days.

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kavita

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Part 7
Engagement preparations are going on. Purvi & her mother are very much upset. Chirag gets a call from Purvi's dad & tells him that he won't pass on the loan for the new project. He looked upset but does not tell anyone about it. All guests come for the engagement. From Urmila's side even Dhawal comes for the engagement. All are excited about the engagement party of both Ahem and Jigar. Rituals take place & finally they all exchange rings. Engagement is over. Chirag is still upset. Jigar, Hetal and Ahem enter his room.

Hetal: You don't seem to be happy what is wrong?
Jigar: Dad, are you not happy with my relationship with Rashi?
Chirag: Nothing like that. I got a call from Purvi's dad. He changed his mind and refused to pass on my loan application.
Suddenly, Chirag hears a voice "Don't worry, I will pass on your loan application for the project." It was none other than Dhawal. He is working as a manager and is related to Rashi and Gopi. He had also saved Urmila from the education loan guys by paying them back. Chirag is relieved. Gopi had paid 75% of the loan. Ahem pays the remaining 25% and settles them in one shot.

Chirag: Thanks Mr. Dhawal.
Dhawal: It is my pleasure to give my services to you.
He gives the application form to Chirag who fills it. Dhawal goes to the bank and processes it immediately.
Gopi and Ahem have their moments.
Ahem: Both of your problems are solved. From now on, your responsibilities are mine.
Gopi: Thanks Ahem. I wish I had got you earlier.
Ahem: Same here. If you had come in my life before Anita, we would have got married a way back.
He shows his room to Gopi.
Gopi: Your room is very nice.
Ahem: It is more beautiful when you are there.
They hug each other.

Rashi sees Jigar's room.
Jigar: Thanks Rashi. You have relieved me from this burden.
Rashi: I had anticipated that something like that will happen so I sat with my mom and had made this plan. By the way, your room is very neat & beautiful.
Jigar: Thanks a lot. Your presence adds to its beauty.
Then the background song of both couples comes.

Dekh ke tumko dil dola hai
God promise hum sach bola hai
O humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare
Bolo to jiye bolo to mar jaaye
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare
Bolo to jiye bolo to mar jaaye

Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare
Bolo to jiye bolo to mar jaaye
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare

Kabhi bolun main kabhi bole tu i love you
Love you, love you, love you, i love you, love you, love you
Maine tumpe tumne mujhpe kar diya jaadu
I love you. love you, love you, i love you
Ab tak chhupaaye rakha shola dabaaye rakha
Ab tak chhupaaye rakha shola dabaaye rakha
Raaz ye humne ab khola hai
God promise hum sach bola hai
O humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare
Bolo to jiye bolo to mar jaaye
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare
Hmm...
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare
Bolo to jiye bolo to mar jaaye
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare

Tere sang jeevan ki dor bandhi hai
Chup chup main dolun
Tere sang jeevan ki dor bandhi hai
Kaise main bolun tere sang main dolun

Main sapno ka saagar tu prem nadi hai
Ab tak chhupaaye rakha shola dabaaye rakha
Ab tak chhupaaye rakha shola dabaaye rakha
Chaand chakori yun duniya mein
Ram kasam tu rahe jiya mein
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare
Bolo to jiye bolo to mar jaaye
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare

Dil mein dilbar tu rehta hain
Khuda gawaah hum sach kehta hain
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare
Bolo to jiye bolo to mar jaaye
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare

Ek to akbar ka salaam usme shaamil tera naam
Do lafzon mein kehta hun muft se kissa tamaam
Main shaayar hun mera hai vaasta haseeno se
Teri furqat mein main soya nahi mahino se
Nahi karte ye baatein parda nasheeno se
Sar e baazaar chhodo chhed mahajabeeno se
Ab tak chhupaaye rakha shola dabaaye rakha
Ab tak chhupaaye rakha shola dabaaye rakha

Husn hamesha rootha rehta hai
Khuda gawaah hum sach kehta hain
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare
Bolo to jiye bolo to mar jaaye
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare
Bolo to jiye bolo to mar jaaye
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare
Bolo to jiye bolo to mar jaaye
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare
Bolo to jiye bolo to mar jaaye
Humko tumse ho gaya hai pyaar kya kare

The girls then go to their respective houses. Next day, they go for shopping. The prospective brides are asked to select their sarees for their mehendi, haldi & sangeet functions.

Marriage date is on the Valentines Day. On the 12th day mehendi ki rasam takes place.

Umang decides to double-cross both Kinjal & Radha. He meets both the girls at different times. Kinjal thinks Umang is hers & Radha too thinks the same. Umang becomes Swayam for Radha. He wears dark glasses whenever he meets Radha.

Umang pressurizes Kinjal to reunite his sister with her brother
Kinjal: I cannot do anything in this regard. It is Anita's stupidity. She has been creating problems for us. She has been throwing my clothes on the floor saying these are old fashioned. Now my brother loves Gopi & has moved on with her. I will cut off with you but will not anyone come between them.

Umang is shocked to hear this but says that he was kidding. But has something else in his mind. He starts meeting Radha more & starts ignoring Kinjal. Then Kinjal decides to break gohem engagement & reinsert Anita. She also changes her attitude towards Radha. Umang creates misunderstanding between them & breaks their friendship. Umang finds Radha crying and consoles her. Kinjal decides to stop GoHem marriage. Purvi decides to stop RaJi marriage.

Even haldi ki rasam gets over.
In sangeet function,
Kinjal: Congratulations Gopi. But your dress selection is out of fashion. Here we wear designer clothes. We appoint a fashion designer to make our dresses. Oh sorry, I didn't know that you cannot afford for a fashion designer. You are as educated as us but in dress sense, you are too backward to fit in our family & society.

Radha overhears and is shocked to see Kinjal's changed behavior.

Radha: I didn't expect from you. Why are you doing this?

Kinjal: For Umang. I love him & am ready to do anything for him.

Radha: You cannot ruin my sister's happiness for your selfishness.

Kokila overhears that & slaps Kinjal. Hetal & others ask why she is slapping her? Kokila exposes her in front of all. Everyone are shocked. Ahem too slaps her & disowns her. No one is ready to speak to her. Kinjal apologizes to all & they forgive her but Kinjal cannot forget Umang. Kokila & Hetal also catch Purvi red-handedly while fighting with Rashi. (Both have a physical brawl as well.)

Kokila & Hetal slap her & show her the right place.

Wedding Day
Both the couples are happily married.

This is the first prologue. Second prologue coming shortly.

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Part 8
Kinjal & Radha become friends again. Both share about their boyfriends not knowing, Umang & Swayam are the same persons. I'm also making Tripti as Gopi, Radha & Rashi's cousin sister.
Umang will now play triple cross.

Umang meets Kinjal & both apologize to each other. But Umang's apology is fake. Both go to the restaurant to have lunch after the college hours. After they finish their lunch, Kinjal leaves. Umang then wears dark glasses to meet Radha in the college who is waiting for her Swayam. Umang takes Radha to the pub & disco where she learns to do western dance. He then drops Radha to her house & goes to meet Tripti. Urmila sees her & informs to Madhu, taunting her about her upbringing. As soon as Radha comes in she finds her mother upset.
Madhu: Urmila told me that you have a boyfriend. Is it true?
Radha: No, he is my college friend. I had gone to take some notes from his. (She is lying which Madhu does not know).
Madhu then gets back at Urmila
Urmila: Whatever I felt I told you. Rest is all left to you & leaves.
Even Dhawal took care of Radha & Madhu during Gopi & her father's absence. He meets Madhu.
Dhawal: Don't get upset about what fai said. It is her nature.
Madhu: I don't know what is true and what is a lie. I'm now worried about Radha.
Dhawal: I will take care of her. I think Gopi should be informed about it as she took care of Radha like a mother when you were unwell.
Madhu: Gopi is newly married. She will become quite upset to hear this. She has to spend time with her husband.
Urmila then tells Rashi about what she saw.
Rashi: I can't believe it. Radha has turned out to be so forward.
Urmila: Radha has denied it. But let them do whatever they want. What is the news from your end?
Rashi: Jigar and myself are going for honeymoon trip in Thailand.
Madhu calls Gopi and learns that she and Ahem are going to Switzerland for honeymoon as well as for business trip. The couples leave for honeymoon and have a good time.
For RaJi the background song is
Aa..Aa..

Suraj hua maddham
Chaand jalne laga
Aasmaan yeh haaye
Kyon pighalne laga

Suraj hua maddham
Chaand jalne laga (Chaand jalne laga)
Aasmaan yeh haaye
Kyon pighalne laga (Kyon pighalne laga)

Main thehra raha
Zameen chalne lagi
Dhadka yeh dil
Saas thamne lagi
O..Kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai
Sajna.. kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Oho..o.. aa..
Suraj hua maddham
Chaand jalne laga (Chaand jalne laga)
Aasmaan yeh haaye
Kyon pighalne laga (Kyon pighalne laga)

Main thehri rahi zameen chalne lagi
Dhadka yeh dil saas thamne lagi
Haan kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai
Sajna.. kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Lalallalala..

Hai khoobsurat yeh pal
Sab kuch raha hai badal
Sapne haqeeqat mein jo
Dhal rahe hain

Kya sadiyon se purana
Hai rishta yeh hamara
Ke jis tarah tum se hum
Mil rahe hai

Yunhi rahe har dam
Pyaar ka mausam
Yunhi milo hum se
Tum janam janam

Main thehra raha
Zameen chalne lagi (Lalala..)
Dhadka yeh dil
Saas thamne lagi

Haan kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai
Sajna.. kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Aa..aa..

Tere hi rang se yun mein to rangi hoon sanam
Paake tujhe
Khud se hi kho rahin hoon sanam
Oh mahiya
Main tere ishq mein
Haan doob ke paar mein ho rahi hoon sanam

Sagar hua pyaasa
Raat jagne lagi
Shole ke dil mein bhi
Aag jalne lagi

Main thehri rahi zameen chalne lagi
Dhadka yeh dil saas thamne lagi
Kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai
Sajna..
Kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyaar hai

Suraj hua maddham
Chaand jalne laga
Aasmaan yeh haaye
Kyon pighalne laga

Aa..aa..

Background song for Gohem

Mujhe Haq Hai

Tujhko Jee Bhar Ke Mein Dekhu
Mujhe Haq Hai
Bas Yuhhi Dekhta Jao
Mujhe Haq Hai

Piyaaa Piyaaa
Piyaaa Piyaaa
Bole Mere Jiyaaa

Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai

Antara

Dhal Rahi Peghal Yeh Raat Dheere Dheere
Badh Rahi Hai Pyaar Ki Baat Dheere Dheere
Chudiyan Gun Guna Ke Kya Kahe Sanjanaa
Yeh Chudiyan Gun Guna Ke Kya Kahe Sanjanaa

Raat Ki Raat Jagau
Mujhe Haq Hai
Chand Poonan Ka Churaaoo
Mujhe Haq Hai

Piyaaa Piyaaa
Piyaaa Piyaaa
Bole Mere Jiyaaa

Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai

Antara
Antara

Kal Subah Tujhse Mein
Door Chala Jaunga
Ek Pal Ko Bhi Tujhe Bhool Nahi Paunga
Yeh Chehara ,Yeh Muskaan
Ankhon Mein Bhar Ke

Yeh Chehara ,Yeh Muskaan
Ankhon Mein Bhar Ke

Mein Teri Yaad Mein Tadpu
Mujhe Haq Hai
Tujhse Milne Ko Mein Tarsuu
Mujhe Haq Hai

Piyaaa Piyaaa
Piyaaa Piyaaa
Bole Mere Jiyaaa

Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai

Madhu is still troubled about Radha and tells this to Jayantibhai.

Jayantibhai: We know our daughter very well. Why should we take Urmila's words seriously.

Urmila enters and overhears the conversation

Urmila: I told you whatever I saw. Tomorrow if someone else sees that and spreads this issue, then don't ever come to me.

At Switzerland

Ahem & Gopi meet the client & get a huge project & return home. Jigar & Rashi also come back from Thailand with a project.

Next day

Urmila finds out from Rashi that Kinjal is giving her a tough time. Rashi & Urmila decide to teach her a lesson. Rashi had got some clue about Kinjal which she tells Urmila to which she says I will check & tell you.

Urmila sees Kinjal with Umang in the restaurant. She recollects the same guy was with Radha. She finds out that Umang & Swayam are the same persons. Umang is Jeevan before Tripti.

At MM

There is a proposal for Kinjal. Even Radha & Tripti get proposals at their places. Those people had come for dual wedding i.e Ahem & Jigar.

Tripti informs this to Jeevan(Umang). After testing her love for him, they go to the registration office to get married. It was their breakfast time & they had to wait. The go to the terrace & have some moments. Tripti sits on the terrace wall showing him the mangalsutra. Umang then takes her to the hotel room & uses her.

Umang: I have some urgent work in the office now. I have got an urgent call. I will come back.

He then disappears.

Next day, Umang is with Kinjal. He gets a call from Tripti. Umang answers but talks to her rudely. Kinjal then tells him about the proposal. Umang & Kinjal make a fake pregnancy report.

Urmila again sees Kinjal with Umang this time at the park. She tells Rashi about it. Both plan to stop Kinjal's wedding. The groom's name is Elesh.

At MM

Engagement takes place between Kinjal & Elesh. But Kinjal meets Umang secretly. The family does shopping for Kinjal. Kokila keeps the jewellery in Kinjal's cupboard.

Rashi calls Urmila

Urmila: Let the marriage date come, then we will do something.

Meanwhile Tripti is pregnant. She meets Umang personally & fights with him. Umang stabs her & Tirpti is dead. Umang then wears the gloves & erases the fingerprints.

All are shocked about her death. The post mortem finds out that she is been murdered & is in look out for the culprit.

Part 9 coming up

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 9

The post mortem further finds the knife but find no fingerprints. They find that Tripti was pregnant. They come to conclusion that it was none other than her boyfriend who killed her. News reaches her parents & relatives. Gopi & Radha are in dismay but after seeing the evidence, there is no other choice. They told Gopi that she will get more information when they get some clue.

Next Day
They find the mangalsutra & bring it to Modi Bhavan. Gopi takes it to the jewellery shop only to know that it was real. She realizes that investigation was correct. Both Gopi & Kokila talk about this issue. Rashi too joins them. Umang continues to be Swayam before Radha & drops her home by his bike as usual. Dhawal sees them.

Dhawal: Why is this guy dropping you everyday?
Radha: We are doing combined studies. So he drops me.
Dhawal: If you have any feelings about him, you can tell me or Gopi who took care of you like a mother when your mom was not well. I will not tell this to anyone.

Radha confesses her feelings to Dhawal.

Dhawal: I advise you to stay away from him till the time I tell you as I want to find out about him. If he is a right person for you I will talk to your parents & sister. If not, I will be the first one to stand against you. Gopi has given me your responsibility. I'm answerable to her if anything goes wrong.

Radha: Fine.

Next day she tells Umang about what happened & tells him not to come near her place.

Umang: You are right. We will meet in the college. I will not drop you till your house.

Days pass by. Umang continues his affair with Kinjal & Radha. Umang met his friend Cyrus in the club where all of them were gambling. Cyrus does not have money. Umang finds out that Cyrus has been using his money. Both of them fight. Cyrus starts blackmailing him.

Cyrus: I know all your secrets. If you don't give me money, I will tell your girlfriends about you. I also know that you killed Tripti.

Umang: I don't have money. Give me some time. I will arrange.

Cyrus: I will give you 5 days. If I don't get, you know the consequences.
Umang decides to teach a lesson to Cyrus. Next day he gives him Rs. 2,00,000.

Cyrus takes the money for gambling & finds out that the notes are fake. He meets Umang and confronts him.

Cyrus: You have cheated me. You have given me fake notes.

Umang: No I have given you real notes.

Cyrus then shows him the note. Umang sees it and finds it fake.

Umang: I'm sorry. Once I arrange I will give you.

Next day, there is a dance competition. Umang does not have a dance partner and offers Kinjal to be his partner.

Kinjal: I cannot come as I have to go to shopping. People are around me.

Umang: If you don't come, I will tell everyone about your affair with me.

Kinjal: At what time is the dance competition?

Umang: 12 p.m. It is near our college.

Kinjal informs the family that she has to go to the college library. She meets Umang at the college.
Dance competition take place. Umang & Kinjal wins the competition. They get Rs.3,00,000 cash.
Umang & Kinjal then go to the cinema hall to watch a movie. Kinjal leaves & goes home. They family then go for shopping to buy jewellery. Kokila then gives the jewellery yo Kinjal to keep it in the cupboard. Kinjal keep her pregnancy report separate from the jewellery. However, there is not enough space so she hides the report underneath the boxes.

Dhawal decides to find out about Swayam & asks Kinjal about it as they are close friends, not knowing both Umang & Swayam are the same.

Kinjal: I have only heard about him but I have not seen him personally.
Urmila comes & tells Dhawal that she also saw him & can make out something is between them. She also tells him that she saw the same face in the restaurant with Kinjal.

Dhawal: Maybe, they are twins. I saw him with dark glasses. I need to go deep.
Urmila: Could be. If you need any help please tell me.
Dhawal: Sure
Madhu overhears the last sentence & asks what is it.
Dhawal: No we are just discussing something. Dhawal goes to his room.
Urmila: Now even Dhawal saw Radha with that guy. They are more than friends.
Madhu decides to talk to Gopi about it.

Part 10 coming up

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