mera ashiq.. a note pg 7.. look and see - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

ummm bring him soon, but if he doesn't fall for Kripa quickly that is fine too, whatever you have planned is good, i am liking the story...so keep it up👏

and I like the title you have picked...sounds good👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guyzz ill bring angu now.. if u can bare him in toher peoplez arm.... and im gonna change the title to mera ashiq.. kk

ill continue laterr..

thatnkx for the commentss
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yo i no i said id continue but my midterms are in a month and i needa do that.. ill continue after jan 20.. okay.. thanks for coperatinggg
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

yo i no i said id continue but my midterms are in a month and i needa do that.. ill continue after jan 20.. okay.. thanks for coperatinggg

okieee...no worries, will wait till jan 20th....😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome part when are you gonna continue

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon plzzz if i have to ill even type a song or do whatever you want me to if you can continue soon i will be in favour to you like if you ever need any thing then feel free to ask me if i can help you with it then i will try

BUT PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
wow...itz really nice........i just completed reading it n itz really nice!!! continue soon....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
nice part... plz cont... n bring angad in now loll
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sry for keepin u guyz waiting.... ill post the next part this weekend.............

sry for keepin u waitinggbutt studies first..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Right before Prithvi can say something, the nurse comes insides to make sure she is alright, to see if she needed anything.
N: Are you sure you don't need anything.
K: Yes, I am sure. Thanks for asking.
Right before the nurse leaves, she notices a boy there.
N: Who is this, Kripa?
K: Oh, nobody. He is my classmate from school, (Kripa said hesitatingly)
N: The nurse laughs and says alright. She is about to leave and shut the door behind her when she hears a voice.
K: Please do me a favor and keep the door open. It's not like you need to make sure I won't run away. I can't.
The nurse understands what she means but keeps quite. She fulfills her wish.

Kripa weeps silently forgetting about her question. Prithvi keeps quite. He doesn't want to cause any problem because he knows she is sad because of her handicap.

A couple of hours past, there is silence between the two. Kripa is still confused about Prithvi's presence because she knows for sure they were never friends. It's not like she never wanted to be his friend, she has had a crush on him for about 2 years now. All of the sudden, Prithvi's cell phone rings. He excuses himself for a minute. At that time the nurse comes in and tells Kripa that her parents are here and it's time for her discharge. Prithvi also comes in after talking on his phone and tells Kripa he has to go since an urgent work has come up.
K: Good. I mean you'd get bored all alone in a hospital wouldn't you? I am getting discharged and going home.
N: Honey, who said you're getting discharged from the hospital right now? You still have to go to all of your doctors and then we need you to see your new physical therapist.
K: Physical therapist?
N: Wait, I've already have said way too much. I'm sorry. Forget I said anything to you. She is about to leave when Kripa tries stopping her. She is unsuccessful.
Kripa is still wondering though, what NEW physical therapist was she talking about??? She doesn't need a physical therapist. She only has one in school. They never gave her one for daily visits because she didn't want any false hopes about her walking again.

Prithvi has already left for his urgent work.

Later her parents came to pick her up to take her to the P.T office. There, Sharon, her new physical therapist tells her that she has a chance to recover. Kripa was ecstatic. Unfortunately for Kripa, she has to go through surgery.

Doctor: This surgery may help kripa or hurt her. She may be able to start walking again or she might never be able to move her legs ever again.
Parents; What! No, we can't take that risk. She moves around with the help of her legs and that is enough for us.
Kripa: But mom, dad, you can't do this to me. I have a chance to fulfill one of my top wishes. Please let me.

After so much arguing they finally agreed to go through the surgery.
Doctor: Alright, in two months we will be all free to do this surgery. Until then, we need Kripa to do some therapy. She will be with Sharon doing some exercises.
Finally Kripa is released from the hospital and she starts going to school.

Kripa is doing great at school until one day when Tori, Kripa's friend, comes up to her and tells her to beware of Sam.

Intro to Sam: Her name is Sampada but for short everyone calls her Sam. She is a total white girl and is in love with Prithvi and is jealous of Kripa. I know your wondering why would Sam be jealous of Kripa, a handicap. That is a secret!

Kripa is confused as to why Tori said that and went away without giving any explanations. Anyways, Kripa did what Tori told her to and made sure nothing out of the ordinary went wrong.


i hope u liked this part.. its more than 1 page on microsoft 12pt times new roman....

wat do u think is going to happen next.. i will introduce angad in a little while.. its just angad has a BIG role and i need to build the story so u'll understand.. plz dont stop reading cuz angad isnt in it yet cuz its killin me to not write about angad either but............... i cant do anything about it yet...

do comment AND predict!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was aweosme just like u ,poor kripa cant wait for angads entry 😛

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