mera ashiq.. a note pg 7.. look and see

hey guyz. i am thinking of starting a new fanfic. i currently do afsana pyaar ka. its not too popular but it gets comments so if you're one of the reader.. no worriez im gonna update.

tell me if youo like the idea..
its not decided if its an ak fanfic but both of them will be in it.
concept: kripa/angad are in highschool. 12th grade to be exact. they dont go to the same school. kripa lives in america. she has a crush on this boy, prithvi but he doesnt even know she exists. kripa is a quiet girl because she is in a wheelchair, has asthma, and a heart problem by birth. one day an "acciedent" occurs. (thats a secret how) she is in the hospital bed... wat happens read on..

angad on the other hand lives in india. he is a flirt. he never went "too far" and doesnt believe in love. his current gf is mishti. we will find out more about angad later..

now plz tell me.. do you guyz like it. should i continue? will i have readers if i continue? also if i should then give me a name for it.. thankxx

plz reply..

hey yaar
great concept 👏

luv it 😳

cont soon

lolz
ana

👏 plz do cont wanna read moreeeeee

interesting concept....cont sooon 😃 😃 😃

please continue..it sounds great 😃

its sounds really good continue.

gr8 ff u defineteley gotta continue 😛

u have to start this ff 😃

its very diff 😊

kanwer 😊

I forgot to inform you that prithvi and kripa live in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania and go to school in Shaler Area High School. That is where I got to so I am putting as that. The majority is white but we are going to pretend it isn't, okay. Also I am not gonna include angad for a long time. I know you guys are getting mad but just forget about angad's introduction for right now.

You see this huge building which says Children's Hospital. This is Kripa's hospital.
(I don't know any other hospitals as I go to this one so just deal) The doctors are rushing in and out the everyone is pacing. You see this one guy who is far away from everyone and is trying to seem invisible. Everyone is so tensed that nobody realizes he is even there. Then after a couple of hours the doctor comes out.
Doctor McKenzie: Kripa is now fine Mr. and Mrs. Sharma.
Sharma's: Oh really, thank god. Doctor can we see her now.
DM: no I am sorry but she needs rest. You can come back tomorrow and see her when she regains conscious.
Sharma's: Is it possible for us to stay here.
DM: I apologize but no there is no room. There are many nurses here to take care of your daughter so you don't need to worry.
After arguing Kripa's parents accept defeat and half-heartedly go home.

Nobody is left in the waiting room for kripa. Just then, Doctor McKenzie sees a boy. She goes to him and asks him to leave.
Boy: No, I won't leave after seeing that girl, Kripa Sharma.
DM: She has not regained conscious.
Boy: Then I will wait until she does.
After arguing the doctor just gives up and lets him in Kripa's room. The boy goes over to kripa's bed and holds her hand and starts crying.
Boy: I am so sorry, Kripa. I am so stupid. How could I make such a mistake. I trusted her and she… you warned me and still, I ignored you.
He sleeps holding her hand.

WHO IS THE BOY AND WHAT DID HE DO??
PLEASE LEAVE PREDICTIONS AND COMMENTS..