mera ashiq.. a note pg 7.. look and see - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i knkow i said ill post weekly but since i was free i thought i'd give you guys a little treat..

The next morning, as the sun rises, the nurse comes to change the IV pack. Just as she is about to leave, Kripa wakes up. She slowly gets up making sure not to move the body who is sleeping peacefully beside her (the boy). She asks the nurse, in the quietest voice if she knows who this boy is. The nurse doesn't know so she is about to wake him up just when Kripa stops her. She tells her to leave it. The nurse agrees and leaves being careful not to disturb her or the boy.
Kripa starts caressing the boy's hair, wondering who it could be. She doesn't know anyone with such "fine" hair. Slowly the boy wakes up and raises his head. He is shocked to see Kripa awake and Kripa is shocked to see "him" here.
Boy: I am so sorry Kripa, I shouldn't be here right now. I was about to leave before you woke up but…
Right then something interrupts him. The door opens and the doctor informs Kripa her parents are here. The boy is thinking, oh no, I shouldn't be here.
Kripa's parents come in and are worried to death. They are so glad she is alright. Kripa's parents had to leave for work but wanted to see her one last time before they left. As they were leaving Kripa's dad,
Surya (S) asks: Who is this boy and what is he doing here?
Kripa (K): Dad, relax, he is just a friend here visiting me.
S: Okay, alright, I just can't have anyone bugging you right now. I am just so happy you are alright.
K: I know dad, but now I am alright so stop worrying.
S: Okay, okay, just take some rest and I'll stop by later. Bye.
K: Okay dad, Bye.

The boy tries to leave but Kripa stops him.
K: Wait, I wanted to ask you something.
Boy: Look, I want to apologize for coming. I just needed to make sure you were alright. I was worried.
Kripa: You were worried for me?
Boy: We should just forget about the past and move on.
Kripa: The past? What past? We don't have a past, PRITHVI. I am surprised you even know who I am. I was just going to ask you what I was doing here and how come you know about me. I mean how you know I am in the hospital.
Prithvi is shocked!


WHAT IS THE PAST. IF KRIPA WAS INVISIBLE TO PRITHVI THEN HOW COME HE KNOWZ ABOUT HER? WHAT IS THE TRUTH? FIND OUT NEXT TIME ON……(still thinking of a name)

PLEASE POST UP COMENTS AND PREDICTIONS.. IT KEEPS ME BOOSTED AND HELPZ HE CONTINUE!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
hmm interesting very curious 😛 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, it is very interesting...waiting for more more more....cont soon plzzz😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wat.. only 2 comments!!! cmon, i need more than that!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cont soon plz me waitin plz plz plz plz

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part!

I REALLY think that a good title 4 this ff would be:

Pyar ki ek Kwaish

Dil ki ek Kwaish

Bin tera

Meri Ashiqui

Dil se..

Dillagi..

Sathi re

Bas ek baar

Bas ek paal

Tera liya

okiee thats alot of titlez 😆

lol

kanwer 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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bingo, i was right!!! it was prithvi, and as usually he must have done something wrong. i wonder what.... but the only thing i am thinking about is whens angad coming in the story. i can't wait for him 2 come. i hope he comes soon.... continue soon!
Nalni 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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should i enter angad right now or later.. cuz remember angad is in mumbai and kripa is in america.

i am not going to bring them "together" for a little while so can u bear to see angad with people cuz remember he is a playboyyy!!!!!!!!!

plz do respond.. ill make my story according to that..

is mera ashiq a good title cuz i tthougut this would bt good for this ff... yes no..?? plz respondd
Edited by brainychild92 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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mera ashiq is really good!!!!!
i like that name 4 the title.
Nalni 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

should i enter angad right now or later.. cuz remember angad is in mumbai and kripa is in america.

i am not going to bring them "together" for a little while so can u bear to see angad with people cuz remember he is a playboyyy!!!!!!!!!

plz do respond.. ill make my story according to that..

is mera ashiq a good title cuz i tthougut this would bt good for this ff... yes no..?? plz respondd



bring angu now!!!!!!! 😳 😆

i like the titile but i like Meri Ashiqi rather than mera Ashiz bu ur choice 😳

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