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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
hi.. nice .. u started rn ff..
thank u for it.


even I dont like dthe way they shown after rajveer accident. .

ao looking forward to read ur story.. vi am sure which will be filled with raj naina. plz do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
super awesome and this part was the last i saw in lrl tats all i was just checking in btw raj will come back bt he didnt come
sry nowadays nt able to read stories at all and not responding in btw
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Just love the background of story..
Same thoughts yar.. after Rajveer's accident.. sab jaise use bhul gaye.. Use kabhi wo samman mila hi nahin jo wo deserve karta tha... thanks for writing on this plot..

Glad to read that Brig, Chandok saved cadets and not Chouhan..

waiting for next update..
do PM me..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
plz continue & update soon it's been a long time since you updated & plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Hi
Recently joined the forum.
This fic is just brilliant please continue soon.
Waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Chapter 2

As much as they wished to stay there, to look for their Rajveer Sir and to find anything that could assure them of his existence, they knew reaching the academy at the earliest was the best for Huda's life. So they did what was right. They marched back to the academy.

Major Nair did try to create a scene by accusing them of helping an absconder but BC knew better than him and ordered Dr. Shalini to treat Huda first.

Other cadets were asked to assemble in BC's office, along with Major Nair and captain Salve.

Major Nair: Sir, mujhe nahi lagta hume in cadets se kuch baat krne ki bhi zarurat hain. Inhone jo kiya hai vo sirf aur sirf saza k kabil hai. Bade hi sharam ki baat hai ki hamare KMA ko aaj aisa din dekhna padh rha hai

Capt Salve: aur vaise bhi Sir, hum captain, oops! Ex-captain rajveer k favourite cadets se unki tareef k alawa kuch aur expect kr bhi kaise sakte hain. Sach chahe jo bhi ho, ye to captain ko bachane k liye usse kisi b tarah tod-madod denge hi.

Major Nair: exactly sir. Aap to is baat se waakif hi hain ki kis tarah Rajveer ne pehle cadet Naina ko us terrorist encounter ka hero banaya tha aur fir cadet aalekh ko us arms smuggling k case me...aur cadet sahni, vo to aaj apne zinda hone ki vjah hi us rajveer ko smjhte hain. Cadet Huda ke to love guru bhi reh chuke hain vo, aur cadet baig ko un Farzi letters ki punishment se bachana..,.in sab k baad in cadets se sach ki umeed rakhna bewkoofi hi hogi Sir.

BC had let them speak for he was judging how the situation had turned out to be. Here, cadets were talking about the present scenario and he had seen them fighting too. But major Nair and captain salve were talking of their personal grudges. And it only made clear to BC that how happy they were in playing games. They never cared about the country or its people. For them, winning the argument was all that mattered.

Suddenly, as the room was engulfed in silence, Naina spoke up, "fir toh Brigadier Sir ko bhi aap Rajveer Sir k taraf baised samjhenge na Major Nair? Aakhir vo bhi to mauka-e-wardat pe maujood the. Aur rahi baat Rajveer sir k chaheete hone ki, toh...(turning to BC) Sir, bhaiya k baad captain rajveer hi to aapke best student the na?

Major nair (interrupting naina): aur inke bhai ki tarah hi gaddar bhi!

BC enraged by the dialogue between naina and Nair: major! Captain Naveen ki sacchai shayad hum nahi jaante, lekin captain rajveer ne kis tarah apni duty nibhai, isse tum bhi waakif ho.

(Then feeling a little disheartened,) aur aaj unpar hue attack se mujhe bhi yahi lgta hai ki koi to hai jo unhe fasane ki koshish kr raha tha.

This statement brings a hope in the cadets that maybe now Rajveer will get a fair chance to prove himself, only if he is safe and sound somewhere...

**

Seeing that Major Nair is not capable of doing any good, Lala uses his contacts and calls for someone to find and kill Rajveer.

That man is in a dark room when he receives a phone call stating him about his task, and waits for the envelope which has rajveer's picture. He then turns on his computer and searches for the accident location of Ambala. And looking at the map, tries to see what all possibilities Rajveer has to escape and where should he search for him.

"Kamaal hai, pehle underworld ke manjhe khiladiyo ka kaam khatam karne ke orders milte the, aur ab apni hi army ke captain ko khatam krna hai, aur vo bhi Rajve..." he suddenly recalls that he had heard this name earlier, but he is not able to remember when or where exactly...

**

Back at the academy, in BC's office...

Aap sabne jo kiya shayad vo apni jagah sahi bhi ho, lekin aisi harkat dubara nahi honi chahiye. Aur chahe captain rajveer aapki nazro me nirdosh kyu na ho, ye desh aur iska kanoon unhe ab bhi col. Chandra ki maut ka zimmedar maanta hai. Isliye, aap sabko ye aakhri warning di jaati hai, aaj k baad captain rajveer se judi kisi bhi baat ka zikr is academy me nahi hona chahiye. Aur aapki aaj ki harkat k liye aap sabko 5hours k liye solitary confinement me rehne ki saza di jaati hai. Orderly! Le jao inhe...

Major nair gives a evil smile at his victory, and captain salve too smirks at them.

While in the solitary confinement, they all were shocked at what had just happened, how naina had argued with major nair and bc, and how much affected she was with captain rajveer's accident.

"guys, mujhe toh ye nahi samjh raha ki BC captain rajveer ko dundhne ki jagah, hamari raid lagane me kyu lga hai..." yudi says

"oye haan yudiye, sahi kaha tune, yaha kisi ko padhi hi nahi hai hamare shahrukh ki...jaise ye sab shahrukh ko kbi jaante hi na ho" joins in pooja

"aisa nahi hai yudi bhai, pooja...agar unhe rajveer sir ki fikar nahi hoti toh vo vaha aate hi kyu...aur chahe job hi ho, aaj hum sab yaha sahi salamat hain to brigadier k vajah se hi na...aur huda bhai, unhe toh humne aaj kho hi diya hota agar brigadier sahi samay par na aate..." says ali

"lekin Rajveer sir ka kya...kya unhe dundhna is academy ki zimmedari nahi hai..." asks yudi

"jisko jo sahi lgta hai kare, apun jaa raha hai, apun k Rajveer sir ko dundhe" aalekh says, as he moves forward to escape from the confinement room

"guru, please aisa kuch mt kijiye...khuda na kare, hamare kisi galat kadam se Rajveer sir ki mushkile nab had jaaye..." ali tries to make him understand the gravity of this situation

"oye haan qaidi, tu chala jaega, toh yaha bahot badi musibat khadi hojaegi..."pooja says, and turns to look for naina, "oye naina, tu hi smjha na ise...is par to pagalpan ka bhoot sawar ho rkha hai"

As she completes her sentence, she notices that naina is sitting there motionless, as if she is just a statue, with no life in it, "oye naina, kya hua...kuch bol na...aise chup mt reh naina..."

Pooja gets nervous seeing naina like this, yudi and ali too shout naina's name to bring her back in her senses, aalekh too gets worried, "aye naina, jasti natak mt kar...chal uth...tu nahi chalegi kya sir ko dundhne" aalekh says

"aalekh bhai..." ali shouts and stares at him

"chief!!!" yudi too gives him a look

"shalini mam! Dr. shalini" pooja shouts near the door, so that someone could hear them and call for Dr. shalini.

Major nair, who was passing by, hears pooja's voice and shouts at them, "dr. shalini ko bulana band kro...yaha koi picnic manane nahi bheja gya hai tum sabko"

"lekin sir naina ki halat kuch theek nahi hai" yudi shouts from inside

"kuch nahi hua hai cadet singh ko, cadet sahni! Bas apne chahite mentor ki maut ke sadme se guzar rahi hain vo. Jald hi theek ho jaaengi" and he leaves by saying this, while yudi kicks the door with his leg in frustration, and aalekh hits the water pot kept there.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
nice update
thanks for pm
keep smiling keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
amazing update...👏

i just hate this nair n salve😡 n lala too😡

pls raj ki entry jldi krwana...uske bina dil ni lgta😛

eagerly waiting for next part...continue soon😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
WOW!!!!!

Pl cont soon
Loved it

Love and prayer
Yogini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Awsmmm
But I want raj asap
Cont soon

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