ArSh Mini ss 'Aadat-Tere Ishq Ki' PART 3 PAGE 10 16/07 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
awesome update sissy
shilpa to totally chatter box he
bina dekhe sirf uski qualities se hi pyar kar bethi
n uska pic dekhne ke chakkar me kai bar suspend bhi
she is something
song bada mast tha n perfect suit bhi hua
omg the kiss...😳😳
wow👏
m loving this
update soon sissy
cant wait
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome, Mind Blowing And Superb Job Ramya, Aage Ki Part Ke Liye I Am Very Exited So Please Update Soon Yaar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
love this shilpa omg she is so crazy
but arman ki madad to ki usne ab pata nahi iske badle mai arman ka kya haal karegi
arman bhi kuch attracted to hai shilpa k liye update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...
Awesome used update...
Loved it...
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awesome sart...so nice...superb...Shilpa is so cute...Armaan or Shona ki nokjhok kamal ki hai...
I think Shona jis lrke se pyaar krti hai wo Armaan hai...hope k aisa he ho...
OMG...Shona ne Armaan ko kiss krdiya wo v pehli mulakat main...so romantic...
waiting fr next part...pls update soon...
Edited by arohiarsh16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"AADAT-Tere Ishq Ki"

PART 2

Shilpa ke kuch samjh nahi aata kya karna he TT or close aa gaya she forget everything n pull that guy towards herself n placed her lips over his

Kuch pal ke liye us ladke ko kuch samjh nahi aata uska pura dhyan to us TT par hota he yahi sochne me ki kese koi rasta mile uska Mumbai pahuchna bohot jaruri he but suddenly he feels ki uske lips par kuch soft he

Jab use samjh aata he ki ye kya he to uski aankhe badi ho jati he mind numb ho jata he

He never thought ki wo ladki use is tarah kiss yes yes its not false or illusion its damn true n real the girl standing infront of him who gave helping hand to him is kissing her

Us ladke ke mind me jab ye baat sink karti he to use bohot gussa aata he, he is going to push her n want to yell on her

But tabhi uski nazar apni taraf aate hue us TT par padhti he jo kisi jallad se kam nahi lag raha is waqt he immediately close his eyes in fear

But kuch hi palo me wo bhi kho jata he n starts to respond the kiss

Shilpa or wo ladka puri tarah se dube hue he us kiss me its so pure n soo passionate

TT : hello ticket

But this two are busy in exploring eachothers mouth

TT : oh hello madam sir ticket"highly irritated"

But ye dono tas se mas nahi hote

TT : SIR.."little loudly"

Isse shilpa ki trance thori toot-ti he or wo thora nervous hone lagti he wo ladka uske muh ko ravish kar raha he but shilpa ab koi respond nahi de rahi the guy don't like this so to make her respond he bite her on her lower lips shilpa moan n open her mouth becoz of pain he takes advantage of this n thrust his tongue in her mouth shilpa again starts to feel dizzy n once again drown in passion n starts to respond back

TT unhe aawaz de de kar thak gaya but ye dono apne mehi lage hue he

TT moved from there while saying

TT : ye aaj kal ke ladka ladki koi sharam nahi inhe na jagah dekhte na log chi..."disappointedly"

After like eternity they broke their passionate liplock

Both are breathing hard with their mind clouded with the after effect of their kiss both are gazing each other intensely but in a few second wo passion wo intensity anger me badal jati he the guy pushed shilpa away from himself n yell

Wo ladka gusse me he use koi hosh nahi ki kya bol raha he jo wo mean bhi nahi karta wo bhi keh raha he gusse me

Boy : how dare u tumhari himmat kese hui mujhe kiss karne ki tum aaj kal ke teenagers ye sab normal hoga tumhare liye right aaj kal tum logo ne insab chizo ko adventure bana rakha he its fun thing aaj ek ke saath kal kisi or ke saath cha.. pyaar karne ka dhindhora pit rahi thi kuch der pehle tum jesi ladkiya pyaar kar bhi sakti ho pyaar ka matlab bhi janti ho tum huh.. na jane kitno ke saath tumne...

But wo aage kuch kahe isse pehle shilpa interrupt him

Shilpa : shut up just shut up samjhte kya ho tum apne aap ko jo mann me aaega bolte jaoge kya samjh rakha he tumne mujhe kis tarah ki ladki hu me haan tumhari soch kitni giri hui he tum jese log hote he jo ladkiyo ka jina mushkil kar dete he chote kabpe pehen liye to kehte he hum invitation de rahe he raat ko bahar nikale to samjhte ho je tumhari property he kisise has ke baat karlo to samjhte ho ki ladki available he"she said all this with tear in her eyes"

Wo ladka chup khada he shilpa ka outburst sun raha he

Shilpa : tum hote kon ho mujh par ilzam lagane wale mere character par sawal karne wale tumhari madat karna chahti thi kyuki tum mushkil me the hoshiyarpur se hu jitna khana nahi khilati humari maaie utne sanskar deti he meto sirf paiso se madat karna chahti thi biji humesha kehti he ki jaruratmand ki humesha madat karna unki sikh yaad rakhke tumhari madat ke liye aage aayi thi nahi jaanti thi ki wo TT paiso se nahi manega tumhe Mumbai pahuchna jaruri tha nahi janti ki kyu par us wait me bohot panic ho gayi or jo samjh aaya wo kiya mene or jaha tak mere pyaar ki baat he tum koi nahi ho jo uspar sawal khade karo me pyaar ka matlab janti hu ya nahi ye meri pareshani he tumhari nahi haan shayad log pagal samjhte ho mujhe ki jise dekha nahi usse pyaar kar bethi me sirf uski achai uski baate sunkar haaan ho gaya mujhe pyaar par mene kisiko ye haq nahi diya ki mujhe judge kare vishwas he mera wo pyaar he tum jante bhi ho aaj mene kya kiya he aaj aaj mene use dhoka diya he mera pehla kiss tha jispe sirf uska haq tha mujhpar sirf uska haq tha wo wo mene tumhare saath share kiya tumhare liye shayad ye bachpana yam era pagalpan ho par mere liye meri zindagi he par aaj mene.."now she is crying so hard"

She left her talks in mid n run from there leaving that guy in guilt n pain

Shilpa ro rahi he bohot wo train ke door ke paas khadi he n crying continueously

Tabhi koi back se uske shoulder par haath rakhta he shilpa turn n see ki wo ladka khada he uske samne wo ek dam se usse dur hoti he she was going to fall from train but that guy hold her hand n pull her back

Boy : M sorry"while holding his ears"

But shilpa turn her face to other side the guy smile seeing her child like antics he also turn to that side an again said sorry to her this goes for few time

Slowly shilpa smiles with tears in her eyes n says

Shilpa : me jyada der kisise naraz nahi reh sakti jao maaf kiya

Boy : m sorry n thank u sorry isliye ki mene gusse me aake pata nahi kya kya keh diya jo me khud mean bhi nahi karta m really very sorry n thanku meri madat karne ke liye

Shilpa ne us ladke ko maaf to kar diya but wo abhi bhi upset he becoz usne apne pyaar ko dhoka jo diya he the guy understand this thing

Boy : wo samjhega

Shilpa : hu.."confusingly"

Boy : tumne koi dhoka nahi diya

Shilpa : par..

Boy : jaha sacha pyaar hota he waha understanding hoti he tumne janbujh kar kuch nahi kiya log to anjane me ki gayi galti ki bhi bohot badi saza dete he agar wo tumhara sacha pyaar hoga to tumhe samjhega tumhara saath bich raste nahi chodega"he said this with lost n distant look"

Boy come to sence n says

Boy : its very late so jao tum bhi

Shilpa nod her head n move towards her berth

Both lay down on their berth but sleep is far away from their eyes

Shilpa apne pyaar ke bare me soch rahi he or jo is ladke ne kaha us bare me

Dusri taraf wo ladka apni kismat apni zindagi or kuch pal kahi apni baato ke bare me

N at last dono ko wo mind numbing kiss yaad aati he

Next morning

Sona : shilpa oh shilpa utho

Shilpa : umm kya hua y r u disturbing my sleep

Devika : are madam Mumbai..

Shilpa : kya Mumbai aa gaya hayye meri jaan me tumhare paas pahuch hi gayi aakhir"with lots of excitement"

Uski voice itni tez hoti he ki saath wale compartment me so raha wo ladka bhi uth jata he first he feels irritated with this loud noise but then he feels happy ki wo fir se pehle ki tarah ho gayi

Shilpa to non stop shuru he Mumbai jake kya karegi wo apne pyaar ko pehli bar dekhegi she is going on n on

Kuch der baad train Mumbai station par pahuch jati he

Sab apna saman leke bahar aate he shilpa bhi she bid bye to her frnds jo train me hi bane the

N starts to move but tabhi use us ladke ki yaad aati he

She turns n look for him wo ladka bhi shilpa ko hi dekh raha he they both move towards each other

Boy : thank u once again

Shilpa : its okie bye"with smile n turn to go"

Boy : tumhe tumhara pyaar jarur milega

Shilpa turns n give bright smile to him

Both bid bye to each others n left in opposite directions

Scene shifts to some beautiful house

There someone is moving one place to another while muttering something with frown over face

Voice : huh... ye kya baat hui aane do aaj me bilkul baat nahi karungi this is too much koi esa karta he bhala huh.."with anger n pouting face"

Voice 2 : hmm koi esa bilkul nahi karta

Hearing that voice the first person stop n turn towards that voice n says

Voice 1 : youuu don't talk to me

Voice 2 : M sorry

Voice 1 : no mujhe apse bilkul baat nahi karni aapko pata he me kabse aapka wait kar rahi hu

Voice 2 : me thora busy tha

Voice 1 : busy !! oh really to apko kya lagta he me free hu aaj kitna important day he or aap huh..."n turn face from him"

Voice 2 : Sha m sorry sweetu

Sha : don't sweetu me

Voice 2 : sha but..

Sha : no if no but aapne kaha tha aap jaldi aaenge n where is ur phone jante he aap mene kitne call kiye apko

Voice 2 : wo actually mera sa.. saman ch.. chori ho gaya"said slowly wid closed eyes"

Sha : WHAT.. HOW.."with shocked expresion"

N the other person aka voice 2 gives puppy face to her while nodding his head

With in a second sha starts to laugh

Sha : hehehehehe really saman chori The Greatest Armaan Malik ka saman chori ho gaya"n again starts to laugh"

Armaan aka voice 2 : sha plzz yaar"with irritation"

Sha : okie okie now tell me kya hua

Armaan use sari kahani batata he shuru se end tak


(armaan ke station me aane se lekar shilpa ki irritational talks tak)

Sha rolling over couch n continuely laughing

Sha : omg hehehehhe aap itne bhole kese ho sakte ho hehehehehe apko pata hi nahi chala wo aapka luggage churana chahta tha hehehehehe

Armaan : sha stop laughing"wid embarrassment"

Sha : awww I wanna meet that girl kya naam tha unka yup shilpa rite handsome

Armaan : yaah n stop there she was so irritating can u believe bina dekhe pyaar how childish"with frown"

Sha : oh please usne help ki aapki"thoughtfully"

Armaan : haan haan help kesi help u have no idea"while remembering the kiss"

Sha : then get idea handsome"playfully"

Armaan : Sha.."warning tone"

Sha : yes handsome acha tell me na

Armaan starts to tell her ki kese TT pese lene ke liye nahi mana kese wo dono panic hue n at last kese usne armaan ko kiss kiya

Sha's jaw dropped hearing this

Sha : OH GOD... u two kissed really"with surprise return all over her face"

Armaan : sha stop staring me like this u r making me conscious"while correcting his collar"

Sha : was she pretty"with hopes"

Armaan sha ki taraf dekh raha he, he understands her curiosity n smiles

Armaan : ummm acha let me think"pretending to think"

Sha : oh please

Armaan laugh n says

Armaan : yes she was pretty fair complexion, big almond shape green eyes, dark black long hairs till her waist, but total chatter box ufff

Sha : kash me..

But wo aage kahe isse pehle armaan stops her

Armaan : stop there only acha hua tum usse nahi mili

Sha : but..

Armaan : no but sha..

Sha : handsome

Armaan : sweetu

Sha : ufff

Armaan smiles n says

Armaan : Miss Prisha Armaan Malik kya aap apne deda ko hug bhi nahi dengi

Sha immediately hugged him tightly both smiles brightly

Sha : I love u handsome

Armaan : I love u more sha..


So here is the next update guys do tell me howz it n plzz drop ur views over it

love u all

ramya

Edited by arsh4heaven - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Awesome update 👏
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awesome part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pehele To Mujhe Bohut Shikayet Hai Ramya Dear Aapse Late Update Ke Like, Very Nice But Ammy Ka Bachha Kaise Aaya...Ab Shona Ka Kya Hoga, Please Update Soon.. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mind blowing update
Loved it...
So,prisha is armaan's daughter...
Thanks for pm...
Eating
Update soon...

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