ArSh Mini ss 'Aadat-Tere Ishq Ki' PART 3 PAGE 10 16/07 - Page 3

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of course we dont mine..,plz continue soon
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armaan ki bag chori hogyai kya?hhehe
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hehehehehe super awesome 😆
shilpa to total chatter box he
wow sissy
great start
continue soon
plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz
thanks 4 pm
n m sry 4 late comment
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"AADAT-Tere Ishq Ki"

PART 1

Fir kuch der baad unki mehnat rang lati he or door open ho jata he but but but...

Door to open ho jata he but door ke saath wo ladki bhi us ladke par gir jati he

Both are in that tiny washroom in eachothers arms

Dono ek dusre ki aankho me kho jate he

Ke tabhi aane jane walo ke shor se wo ladka present me aata he n pushed that girl n come out of that place

Wo girl sudden push se disbalance ho jati he but she steady herself girne se bach jati but use us ladke par bohot gussa aata

She turns n follow that guy

She poke his back n says

Girl : oh hello mister ek to mene tumhari help ki or tumne mujhe hi aaj kal to bhalai ka zamana hi nahi raha kese papi log he babaji"she said melodramatically"

Boy : can u stop ur nonsense"said irritately"

N wo ladka irritate ho raha he us ladki ki continuous talks ke karan or isi ke saath wo apni seat tak pahuch jata he

But to his utter shock na waha uska saman he na hi wo aadmi jiske paas usne apna saman choda tha

He was look at the place jaha uska saman rakha tha with wide eyes

Boy : OH NO MERA SAMAN"he said loudly n shockingly"

Wo ladka to shock ke mare statue ban ke khada he ki tabhi kisi ke zor zor se hasne ki aawaz aati he

It was that girl wo zor zor se has rahi he

Ab ladke ko bohot gussa aata he

Boy : can u plzzz stop laughing dammit wo aadmi men eke vishwas kar liya uspe he stole my luggage ab me kya karunga mera phone, wallet, ticket sab usi me tha"he said worriedly"

Girl : ummm excuse me

This is the first time she talk soberly

Ladka uski taraf mudta he

Girl : aap mujhse pese lelena I mean I'll pay jab TT aayega tab hum aapka ticket le lenge what say

Ladka kuch der sochta he n nod his head

Dono apni apni seats par beth jate he

Wo ladka apne compartment me betha n the girl went towards her compartment jo uske ladke ke piche wala he

Waha kuch collage students he the girl set her luggage n settled down

With this she starts to talk

Girl : hello everyone

Sab uski taraf dekhte n also said hello to her

All : come join us

N the girl happily oblige but un logoko kya pata tha ki wo kise invite kar rahe he

Girl : hey guys mera naam shilpa he shilpa malhotra from Hoshiyarpur or tum log u now what abhi mera collage khatam hua he or tumhara by god mene na apni schooling Hoshiyarpur se ki or na collage are family to keh rahi thi wahi se karu par mene to keh diya collage jaungi to Hoshiyarpur se bahar ab koi kya kehta to me kusoli aa gayi mene na mera collage kusoli se kiya ab me na apni internship ke liye Mumbai ja rahi tum sab bhi Mumbai ja rahe ho jante ho me na waha blah blah...

Wo bolti hi jati he unlogo ko time hi nahi deti baat karne ka ya kisi question ka jawab dene ka

But sab uski company enjoy karte he

Un collage students me se koi ek ask her

Diya : to shilpa tum pyar me yakin karti ho

Hearing her question her eyes get wide

Shilpa : pyaar me yakeen he babaji I M IN LOVE me to total crazy hu uske liye u know what wo bhi na same collage me padhta tha

Sona : acha tumhari batch me

Shilpa : are nahi yr wo to mujhse pehle padh chukka he mene collage join ki na uske pehle hi wo collage pura kar liya tha

Sab shilpa ko weird look dete he jese uske sar par ek or head grow ho gaya hoga

Shilpa : kya hua ese kyu dekh rahe ho u know what mene na bohot suna he uske bare me wo na collage ka star he aaj bhi he pata he basket ball, foot ball, volley ball, cricket her sports me topper tha wo, music hayye uski voice to itni khubsurat he, n education me bhi ek dam avval he is a genius my hero my jaanu"wo ye sab dreamily keh rahi he"

Devika : acha to kesa dikhta he wo

Shilpa : kesa dikhta he bohot handsome he wo pure collage ki ladkiya marti he uspe aaj bhi me to kuch jyada hi are dil jigar jaan he wo meri hayye bohot sona he wo

Shilpa bas us ladke ko praise kiye ja rahi he or idhar apne compartment me wo ladka uski baate sun sun kar irritate ho raha he

Boy : ufff... kitna bolti he ye ladki thakti nahi he kya kabse ek hi puran chal rahi he iski but ye ladka jo bhi he bada lucky"he smile lightly at this"

Tabhi use kuch esa sunai deta he ki wo shocked ho jata he

In shilpa's compartment

Diya : so hume bhi dikhao tumahre boyfriend ki taswir

Shilpa : uski taswir nahi he mere pass

Sona : ab tum jhut bol rahi ho esa kese ho sakta he ki tumhare paas tumhare boyfriend ki pic na ho

Shilpa : wo mera bf nahi he abhi

All : matlab

Shilpa : are kaha na ki mere join karne se pehle hi uska collage pura ho gaya wo ex student tha mene to aa tak usko dekha bhi nahi sirf suna he or pyaar ho gaya mera jaanu hayye"again she lost in her dream land"

All : WHAT

Ye wahi chiz he jise sunkar wo ladka bhi shocked ho gaya

Boy : what dekha nahi or pyaar ho gaya kabse us ladke ke bare me bole ja rahi he ese ki mano janti he use but dekha tak nahi she is weird n crazy"he shook his head in disbelief"

Wo fir us ladki ki baate sunne lagta he

Shilpa : ha nahi dekha actually na mere join karne ke kuch saal pehle hi wo passed out ho chukka he mene na uske bare me jaane ki bohot koshish ki matlab uski pic dekhne ki but students ko allow nahi tha so I sneak into collages store room

All : what

Shilpa : bas dekhne hi wali thi ji meri jaan kon he kesa dikhta he I got caught

All : fir fir kya hua"fearingly"

Shilpa : fir kya mujhe suspend kar diya"she said cooly"

All : what or tum ye itni calmly bata rahi ho

Shilpa : are ye mere liye casual he mujhe to kai bar suspend kiya gaya he collage se sirf ek hi jurm ke liye bar bar store room me jane ke liye

N with this she starts to laugh n others join her

But durse compartment me wo ladka abhi bhi shocked he

Boy : suspend ho gayi sirf us ladke ko dekhne ke kiye she is totally crazy god is she real kya koi fairyland se aayi he

Shilpa : ab na Mumbai ja rahi hu usi ke liye are isilye to itni mehnat ki itna mann laga ke padhai ki taki top kar saku wo Mumbai me hi he itna pata chala mujhe isliy to ye sab kiya warna padhai or me ek saath bilkul fit nahi bethte aa rahi hu jaanu tumhare paas muhaaa"she gives flying kisse in the sir"

Devika : this is crazy shilpa tumne kaha ki wo tumse bhi pehle collage pass out kar chukka he to tumse bada bhi hoga chalo age chodo but ab tak shaadi bhi to ho chuki hogi uski

Ye sawal sunke wo ladka bhi attentive ho jata he, becoz he wants to hear ki kya jawab degi wo is baat ka

Shilpa : nahi uski shaadi ho hi nahi sakti"she says this with utter confidence"

Sona : tum itne yakin se kese keh sakti ho

Shilpa : are jab me yaha hu to wo kese kar lega shaadi without dulhan shaadi kabhi suna he kya

N again starts to laugh

N that guy just shook his head over this

Shilpa bole hi ja rahi he us ladke ke bare me wo milenge to esa hoga wesa hoga

Diya : acha or tumhari first kiss what about that tab kya hoga batao batao"they are just teasing her"

Ye question sun the guy just shook his head n says

Boy : teenager

But she take it seriously n says

Shilpa : haay rama rama ho haay more rama

dil me macha hai kyun koi hungama

the guy get surprised hearing this sweet voice

aayega koi baaho me leke

chumega mere yeh lucky lips

haay rama rama ho haay more rama

dil me macha hai kyun koi hungama

aayega koi baaho me leke

chumega mere yeh lucky lips

shilpa starts to dance with this also make everyone dance with her

gudgudi si hone lagi, iss jahan me khone lagi

kyun jaagi jaagi sone lagi, jaagi jaagi sone lagi

kuch naya sa ehsaas hai, in labo pe ek pyaas hai

yeh dard to zara khaas hai, dard to zara khaas hai

she sing n lost in her own dream land

jayega koi betaabi leke

dekhega mere yeh lucky lips

haay rama rama ho haay more rama

dil me macha hai kyun koi hungama

aayega koi baaho me leke

chumega mere yeh lucky lips

dance karte karte wo us ladke compartement me chali jati he n those collage students too they dance there too

ud rahi main hawao me aaj banke deewani

aankho me ek haya hai, saanso me hai kahani

saanso me hai kahani

when she sing this line wo ladka use dekhta hi reh gaya is waqt woe k teenage girl nahi ek mature n so much in love lag rahi he

dhakdhak si mere seene me hoti

bheege hai mere yeh lucky lips

again she become that bubbly girl n dance freely n that guys just shook his head

haay rama rama ho haay more rama

dil me macha hai kyun koi hungama

aayega koi baaho me leke

chumega mere yeh lucky lips

sab nach ga rahe he train me khub masti mazak chal raha he

Ese hi ye log baate, masti mazak kar rahe he ki tabhi TT aata he

Wo ladki ekdam se uth kar us ladke ke compartment me chali jati he n gave money to him

Boy : thanku mera Mumbai pahuchna bohot zaruri tha thanks me tumhare pese Mumbai pahuchte hi lota dunga"he said scincerly"

Girl : to tumhe kya lagta he chod dungi tumhe apne paise liye bina to bilkul nahi"she said in her typical way"

Tabhi they saw

TT : ticket

One man : mere paas ticket nahi jaldi jaldi me chada to le nahi paya train me wese bhi jagah he aap abhi tickent de do kya fark padta he

TT look that person like ki abhi kha jaega

TT : ticket nahi he to train me chadhe kese bina ticket ab agle station pe chalo mere saath

Wo aadmi bohot plead karta he but TT tas se mas nahi hota

Ye scene shilpa or wo ladka dono aankhe badi badi karke dekh rahe he

Then they saw ki TT unke compartment ki taraf hi aa raha he

Ab kya karna he dono ko samjh nahi aata us ladke aa Mumbai pahuchna jaruri he or agar TT se kaha ticket nahi he to wo jese us aadmi ke ssath kiya wahi karega or ise bhi utarna hoga

Dono ko kuch samjh nahi aata dono soch rahe ki kya kare kya kare TT or nazdik aa raha he yaha ye dono panic ho rahe

Shilpa ke kuch samjh nahi ata kya karna he TT or close aa gaya she forget everything n pull that guy towards herself n placed her lips over his




so here is the update plzzz tell me guys howz it m waiting for ur reviews koi mistake ho to plzzz ignore it guys

love u all

ramya😊

Edited by arsh4heaven - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Its awesome
Shilpa total chatterbox..
Hahaha
Dekha nhi kbhi fir uski dewani hai
Or sirf use dekhne k liye suspend..
Song selection was perfect
And atlast kisss..
Superb update..
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome part
Shilpa is such a chatter box...
Kabhi bhi ladke ko nahi dekha
Fer bhi pyaar ho gya...
Uski pic dekhne k liye suspend bhi ho gyi...
Very nice yr...
Usne uss ladke ko kiss kiya...
Plz update next part soon...
Wating
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg what a update
I just loved it
She is really a hungama
I know train boy n his dream boy is armi
But really she is amazing love some one without seeing him after knowing his qualities only.
Hope atleast she know his name.
But a question how is it possible that there is no pic of him
I mean toppers n itne active student ki pics to college lobby mai lagte hi hai.
Sorry its just a silly question
But omg atlast her wish come true.
She n her love actually kiss
Update soon
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sur1911

Omg what a update

I just loved it
She is really a hungama
I know train boy n his dream boy is armi
But really she is amazing love some one without seeing him after knowing his qualities only.
Hope atleast she know his name.
But a question how is it possible that there is no pic of him
I mean toppers n itne active student ki pics to college lobby mai lagte hi hai.
Sorry its just a silly question
But omg atlast her wish come true.
She n her love actually kiss
Update soon
Thanks for pm



thanku so much didu
i know pics n all hoti hi he
its a silly thing 😆
but something happend in the collage ye sab uska natija he
hope u r getting it😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome part
shilpa is such a chatter box
woh armaan ke liye crazy haina..hehe..lets see jab armaan ko pata padega toh kya hoga
she kissed him...i hope this helps ..warna kiss toh waste hojayegi

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