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Posted: 8 years ago
Jyesht 🤗
It was a lovely, adorable treat!

Some very sensitive incidents dealt with utter simplicity, that's the power of my Jyeshtha !!

Yudi remembers Arjun in every small activity...touched 😭 always love their bond!


Kalyani was the strenghth... Kids the Soul!
Childhood, their antics, maturity and loving bond. 👏

But but but... Then at the end Subhadra came and stole the show!
Just loved the way you described her character... N interaction with kids was mah fav 😳

Hope that My Jyeshtha will be writing his Diary regularly now😉


Lots of love
Mohini
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderfully written chapter ! It's an honor to get an opportunity to read such great works over here . 😊
Thanks a lot for this literary treat .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful chapter Semanti didi😊
Edited by Nonie12345 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...so Draupadi gave birth to Yudhishthir's son and gave him happiness...👏👏👏...after that she gave birth to the three brother's son...🤔...Arjun married many princesses on his way upsetting Draupadi......soon after 12 yrs their sons became teenagers and it was time for Arjun to return back...😎...Draupadi's heart broke as she learned that Arjun is coming with his present wife, sister of Krishna...🤔...Yudhisthir became very worried for her but all problems got solved when Arjun's wife spoke with her...👏👏👏...does Draupadi loves Arjun only...😕...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
HI I received your pm and started to read. I'm athi
Part 1 or Thread 1 has ch 1 - 34 it says removed on every link.
So disappointed. I was looking forward to read a big story. 😲
Would you let me know why all chs have been removed?
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Beautiful part dear 👏


Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Dharma_dasi..

Jyesht 🤗

It was a lovely, adorable treat!

Some very sensitive incidents dealt with utter simplicity, that's the power of my Jyeshtha !!

Yudi remembers Arjun in every small activity...touched 😭 always love their bond!


Kalyani was the strenghth... Kids the Soul!
Childhood, their antics, maturity and loving bond. 👏

But but but... Then at the end Subhadra came and stole the show!
Just loved the way you described her character... N interaction with kids was mah fav 😳

Hope that My Jyeshtha will be writing his Diary regularly now😉


Lots of love
Mohini


Thank you for your sweet words Madhav 🤗 actually in this chapter Dharmaraj is more highlighted as a family man than a King, and his love for family is an important side of his character which I wanted to show.
Glad you liked Subhadra's portrayal 😊 that part is my favourite too.
As for regularity, your Jyeshtha will definitely try to find some time in his busy schedule.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Avyakta

Wonderfully written chapter ! It's an honor to get an opportunity to read such great works over here . 😊

Thanks a lot for this literary treat .


Thank you so much for your kind words 😊 Glad that you have liked my effort.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

superb update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...so Draupadi gave birth to Yudhishthir's son and gave him happiness...👏👏👏...after that she gave birth to the three brother's son...🤔...Arjun married many princesses on his way upsetting Draupadi......soon after 12 yrs their sons became teenagers and it was time for Arjun to return back...😎...Draupadi's heart broke as she learned that Arjun is coming with his present wife, sister of Krishna...🤔...Yudhisthir became very worried for her but all problems got solved when Arjun's wife spoke with her...👏👏👏...does Draupadi loves Arjun only...😕...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...


Thank you for reading and liking my update 😊 And Draupadi does not love only Arjun, she loves all her husbands. She would have shown the same reaction if Yudhishthir brought Devika home in a similar way.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

HI I received your pm and started to read. I'm athi

Part 1 or Thread 1 has ch 1 - 34 it says removed on every link.
So disappointed. I was looking forward to read a big story. 😲
Would you let me know why all chs have been removed?


Welcome to Dharmaraj's Palace 🤗
Sorry that you had to suffer this inconvenience 😳 actually I want to publish this work so I have removed the chapters from my previous thread. If you want to read them send me a PM and I will inbox you all the chapters together.
Please stay here to read my future updates 😳

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