SS : Rajveer-Naina The Red Saree! Pg8 LAST UPDATE - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wait.. let my heart stop dese virtual sumersolts 😆 😆
Finnaaalllyyy.. dey both cnfess deir feelings... i think M more happy den
Raj-Naina 😛 😛
Kiss on cheek *Blushing*
Loved the whole SS.. i ws wishing k ye kabhi khatam na hooo
Achha hota agar aap original series ki writer hoti.. hme ese wndrful scene milte
I luved dat u maintain naturality of Raj.. I love shy Raj more den blunt nd bold Raj..
It suits Hero alot

PS. I address Rajeev as hero
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: elrein_2046

Wait.. let my heart stop dese virtual sumersolts 😆 😆
Finnaaalllyyy.. dey both cnfess deir feelings... i think M more happy den
Raj-Naina 😛 😛
Kiss on cheek *Blushing*
Loved the whole SS.. i ws wishing k ye kabhi khatam na hooo
Achha hota agar aap original series ki writer hoti.. hme ese wndrful scene milte
I luved dat u maintain naturality of Raj.. I love shy Raj more den blunt nd bold Raj..
It suits Hero alot

PS. I address Rajeev as hero


YOU SHOULD TRY 'RAJVEER-NAINA POINT 1857' FANFIC NOW! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: elrein_2046

Soo I cmpleted Chapter 2... Nw u hv to bear my chatar patar again 😛 😛
Raj-Naveen convo ws btfl.. so naveen nd aap ne mill k ne Raj ki batti jlai 😆 😆 nd Thnk God jall gyi.. so nw he gonna express his feelings
U knw jealous Raj s always a treat to read or watch.. I always wished dat dere wud be some more romantic RaiNa scenes in LRL.. bt jo bhi the each nd every scene ws special..
M Loving dis SS 😊


Soo I cmpleted Chapter 2... Nw u hv to bear my chatar patar again 😛 😛

I always love reading the comments of my readers and reply accordingly. So I am rather enjoying your chattar-patter than bearing it! 😳

Raj-Naveen convo ws btfl..

Thank you! I am glad you liked it 😊

so naveen nd aap ne mill k ne Raj ki batti jlai 😆 😆 nd Thnk God jall gyi..

Hahaha! 😛

so nw he gonna express his feelings

Yup! 😳

U knw jealous Raj s always a treat to read or watch..

I completely agree! 👍🏼

I always wished dat dere wud be some more romantic RaiNa scenes in LRL..

I guess all the fans of Rajveer-Naina wanted that 😕😭

bt jo bhi the each nd every scene ws special..

Bingo! Although less but they all are worth watching 😳❤️ They did show jealous Rajveer once, but only ONCE! 😭 It was when Abhimanyu appreciates Naina. 😛 I guess it was a scene in Rajveer's room 😳

M Loving dis SS 😊

Aww... I am really happy that you are enjoying it! 😳👏🤗

Stay blessed!
❤️

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: elrein_2046

Wait.. let my heart stop dese virtual sumersolts 😆 😆
Finnaaalllyyy.. dey both cnfess deir feelings... i think M more happy den
Raj-Naina 😛 😛
Kiss on cheek *Blushing*
Loved the whole SS.. i ws wishing k ye kabhi khatam na hooo
Achha hota agar aap original series ki writer hoti.. hme ese wndrful scene milte
I luved dat u maintain naturality of Raj.. I love shy Raj more den blunt nd bold Raj..
It suits Hero alot

PS. I address Rajeev as hero


Wait.. let my heart stop dese virtual sumersolts 😆 😆

Hahaha! 😆😆😆 I hope everything is tranquil now 😆😉

Finnaaalllyyy.. dey both cnfess deir feelings...

Yes at last they confess! ❤️😳❤️

i think M more happy den

And that makes me happy that you are happy 😳


Raj-Naina 😛 😛
Kiss on cheek *Blushing*


Loved the whole SS..

Thank you so much for loving it! 😳

i ws wishing k ye kabhi khatam na hooo

Hahaha! 😆 Well what starts ends too some day 😳

Achha hota agar aap original series ki writer hoti.. hme ese wndrful scene milte

Lolz.. I guess original writer was far more better than me. I am nothing in comparison. I love this serial like anything. The writer and director did an awesome job! 😳👏 They are worthy of all the applauds 👏👏 it's just that Rajeev left the show abruptly 😭🤔💔 Yes there is one thing that I would have wanted the writers to do. They gave the hint about Rajveer and Naina on the Freshers' Ball episode and after that they didn't give any other hint as if they forgot that they were to show them together 😕 They literally took way too long to show the real chemistry between Rajveer-Naina. Freshers' Party was around episode 40 and after that they gave hint about Rajveer-Naina's relationship around episode 85 or so that was around mentorship program. I mean they wasted 45 episodes in between 😭😕 Then after returning back from the camp Rajveer started ignoring Naina. Ufff! again many episodes got wasted 😕 I guess this is the only thing I don't like about this serial 😕 Otherwise it was an awesome serial 😳

I luved dat u maintain naturality of Raj.. I love shy Raj more den blunt nd bold Raj..
It suits Hero alot

I always like to maintain originality of characters when I write a story. That helps the readers to connect with the story easily. 😳 Even I as a reader prefer reading the stories on Rajveer-Naina with the same concept as they showed in the serial rather than reading an altogether different concept. Well this is particularly my view. No offense to the readers who read Rajveer-Naina stories with different concept as well. 😳

It's not that I have never read any story on Rajveer-Naina with different concept. Of course I have and I have enjoyed it too but I guess there are only a few which I have read based on different concept than the original 😊

PS. I address Rajeev as hero

Well glad to know that! Again, like you must have noticed and seen that there are people who like to call Rajeev as Raj or even Captain Rajveer as Raj, but I never call Rajeev or Rajveer as Raj rather I like calling them with their original names that's Rajeev when I am talking about the original person and Rajveer when I am talking about the character 😉😳

Well thank you so much for your comment!
Stay blessed!
❤️
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry 4 late comment dear
I read that all in one go
It's amazing really
Raina nervousness when they both saw each other
Or Naina jaise explain kar rahi thi sab kuch raj ko

Or Naveen ka raj ko apni feeling confess karwana that really raj loves her
Fir raj ka who jealous hona
Nd that nightmare was amazing yar
Raj kitna kuch assume kar leta h huda or naina ko leke
Kitna gussa karta h
Nd jis tarah se dono haq jata rahe the
Oll are amazing
Nd d most awaited moment
Their confession
Awesome dear
Keep writing
Luv u lots 😛
Millee
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Posted: 9 years ago
1st part.. beautiful..
aesa laga i m watching it..
thanx for gif images jisey rela laga..'
dhkkk dhakkk
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 2nd..
Rajveer and Naina ka nahi pta bt mera heart Dhakkk dhakkk..

Itni acdity aaj tak nahi huwi..

and glad u explained what was in ur heart...

kaash aesa kuch huwa hota bt asi blv jo hota hai achey k lye hota ha..
agr tb na huwa hota aaj hogaya..

blv me my hands r nt working.. i m js thinking dhakk dhakkk dhakkk..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 3 i mean last one..
Mai Zinda kaese rahi ye padh k..

beautiful beautiful bs aur kuch nahi bolna..

u r d best..
thank u for giving this typ of SS..


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: elrein_2046

How come i ws nt aware of ur write ups??? *poor me*
I planned to read the whole SS first nd den cmment at last epi but cud nt cnttol myself *Sch a Desprate Soul I am*

Same here jaaan.. my heart is still beating fast.. Dhakk Dhakk

So I Read first chaptr... nd I LOVED IT 😊 .. The most favrt scene of every RaiNa shipper.. dis scene hv a atmost imp. Place in our hearts nd we all r emotionaly attach to dis nd u write it sooo well Nd detailed dat i imagine whole scene again... Nw M a fan of ur writing style 👏 👏
I think i shud stop blabbering now nd cntinue reading
😉 😉
Lots of love nd TC

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Posted: 9 years ago

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