ArShi Drabble: Heir of Darkness|Part 16|4/12/17|

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Shalvikamathur

@Shalvikamathur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

it was amazing...great work yagya...waiting for the next update...

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@newmoon18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

awsme update
loved it

khushi is pregnant and in coma
she's so broken

I guess arnaav malhotra and our asr r two different person

excited for nxt

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Mally

@-CrazySobtian-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Mein aa gayi!

Arnav Malhotra? I think I know what's going on here. But this Arnav Malhotra needs to get punished [Even if its ASR but you used a different surname for some reason] Its so sad that Khushi is going through all this torture and now she is at such a point that all she can see is darkness and no hope at all.

I love the way you have described her pain. Its just perfect <3 Can't wait to read more :D

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Superb update... Title is very endearing...n so is the story line... Want Asr not Malhotra... Khushi's condition was well defined...she wants to live but can't...wants to speak but not able to...

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sasir

@sasir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.
Shyam and Arnav are just names, at least for me. What matters for me is the personality which defines the name. For me this Arnav and Shyam of IPK are no different. They committed the same crimes. For me Anjali of IPK and this Khushi seem to be in a very similar situation, almost a situation overlapping each other. That was the reason i decided to make Arnav Malhotra, a character played by the actor who played Shyam.

My sincere apologies but this Khushi is not going to end up with Arnav Malhotra anyways. And Arnav is Arnav Singh Raizada for all of us. It is an ardent request that you don't assume a plot which I have not planned and drop the story.

Thanks for your continuous support and love.

Yagya

No..
Don't think like that..
I won't stop reading just coz of some person..
I am not complaining ..just asked as I am sensitive to that subject..
N asked u coz u always clears my doubts..n always supportive..
I just said it coz of some disturbance...
Recently what all I was reading was kushi being physically abused...n forced..
Especially by shyam..
I want to say this again I just like the shyam of ur pride n prejudice...
N yes I am not at all assuming plot..
As I said I was disturbed reading kushi in pain again by shyam so asked it..
I really appreciate u peoples courage but it pains me so asked...
I am sorry
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