ArShi Drabble: Heir of Darkness|Part 16|4/12/17|

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: sasir

No..
Don't think like that..
I won't stop reading just coz of some person..
I am not complaining ..just asked as I am sensitive to that subject..
N asked u coz u always clears my doubts..n always supportive..
I just said it coz of some disturbance...
Recently what all I was reading was kushi being physically abused...n forced..
Especially by shyam..
I want to say this again I just like the shyam of ur pride n prejudice...
N yes I am not at all assuming plot..
As I said I was disturbed reading kushi in pain again by shyam so asked it..
I really appreciate u peoples courage but it pains me so asked...
I am sorry
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P&P 2? Mally needs to read this for sure. Please don't apologize. Sorry if I sounded rude but since many people were asking the same question i wanted it to be clarified for once and for all.

There is no Shyam in this fiction. It is Arnav Malhotra. And there is forcing as Khushi willingfully submitted herself to Arnav at every point. I definitely hate Shyam but the actor was so amazing that I thought imagining him doing this would help me write this better. I am yet to see a person who can act so well in negative shade. Moreover Arnav Malhotra is for a reason. And will be revealed soon.

Sorry if this offended you in any way but that was what struck me when I sat down thinking for this.

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angeldream14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Khushi loved him but he cared less

but still when she is as good as dead all she cares abt his love

will d child be safe

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Tulishikha Biswas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

I love this story

Excellent writing

The magic you created with your words is mind boggling

Brilliant work

Thanks for pm

Please continue soon

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sasir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.

P&P 2? Mally needs to read this for sure. Please don't apologize. Sorry if I sounded rude but since many people were asking the same question i wanted it to be clarified for once and for all.

There is no Shyam in this fiction. It is Arnav Malhotra. And there is forcing as Khushi willingfully submitted herself to Arnav at every point. I definitely hate Shyam but the actor was so amazing that I thought imagining him doing this would help me write this better. I am yet to see a person who can act so well in negative shade. Moreover Arnav Malhotra is for a reason. And will be revealed soon.

Sorry if this offended you in any way but that was what struck me when I sat down thinking for this.

No need to say sorry...
Thanx for clearing it..
I never said in this kushi is forced...
I said about other stories...
Here kushi is in pain coz of him..

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: sasir

No need to say sorry...
Thanx for clearing it..
I never said in this kushi is forced...
I said about other stories...
Here kushi is in pain coz of him..

Was just clarifying that Khushi is not forced for future. Thanks for your continuous support.

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Prabhleen Arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳 😳

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aishwarya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

well penned👏

loved d update😊

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

How grateful was I that I couldn't view the person who had the privilege to break me beyond any repair I known?

The truth was strangling. More strangling than the rope of strangulation was. Strangling was the truth that the man who made me embrace that light of death was the one who pulled me away from that light and placed me back into darkness. Just that this time this darkness was not just in my heart but it was real.

I suddenly had so much of time and I didn't know what to do with that. My brain was functioning but it yielded absolutely no control over my body, but I never regretted it, probably because it gave me what I yearned for the most; peace. At least in this time, he would not own me again like he always did.

Suddenly a few voices fell on my ears. It felt as if they were fighting. I just hoped they were not fans who were trying to come in to the room as that would only end up in them getting hurt in the hands of the police or security. But I was wrong, as I was since long.

" Look Arnav-"

" It's Mr.Raizada for you, Mr.Malhotra." A calm voice managed to erase every bit of calmness from my soul.

Arnav Raizada?

Actually, Arnav Singh Raizada, my neighbor since ages, an actor like me but we never exchanged any words beyond pleasantries and formal words. And he was holding my defense up against that As***le Malhotra?

" Bloody Hell, Arnav Singh Raizada! She is my girlfriend and you cannot deny me the right to see her when she is in coma. She wouldn't have wanted it."

Mar Kar Bhi Tumse Mooh Na Modna..

My own words came back to me. I didn't want to go away from him even in the face of death and I chose death to run away from him, only to witness this fight as he claimed right on me saying that I would have wanted to meet him? How much more crooked and twisted could my destiny be when my own wishes turned into curses and my own words wrecked havoc on my senses?

" She was screaming, she was crying and she was pleading. For what? For your company and your love. Now when they all stopped, why do you want to tie her in a bond of YOUR convenience, Mr.Malhotra? If I had not broke open the door, when the maid was saying Khushi didn't open the door for 10 damn minutes, she would have been dead. DEAD. Do you understand that? And what pushed her to this? YOU and YOUR GODDAMN LOVE. You are not going to meet her, that's it. Because I know why you are here. You want to act even in real life and want to escape the case I have lodged; the case of abetment to suicide. And I BLOODY UNDERSTAND THAT. NOW GET OUT!"

A person whom I didn't even talk properly to was trying to fetch me justice from the person, who meant everything to me and who held the cover which made injustice look like justice?

Irony.

That was what my life was.

I allowed myself to be lost in oblivion once again as I somehow knew that Arnav Singh Raizada would not allow that jerk to cause me any more damage.

Trust.

Was I trusting a stranger so soon?

I mentally chuckled at my stupid heart which had the guts to trust again, even if it was partially when everyone whom it had trusted had sworn to make it bleed.

Thoughts of my unborn took away every kind of struggle from me when a last thought struck before I lost myself.

How can two people with the same name be so different?

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Edited by .MereRangMein. - 9 years ago