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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Awesome..
Kudos to this arnav..
Loved him a lot..
Such a sweet heart..
I don't know what I feel for kushi right now..
I pity her for her state but then get angry on her that she bought this on herself..
She gone overboard in her blind love..
Sorry but I ffel its not really love..
Yes she is blind...in her love but she also ruined everyone close to her with her blindness... Its not right ..
But I think she is not in frame to understand it..
Now she ruined others life's...
I think she too knows that arnav..her lover one is not truly bonded to her so in her stupidity of her blindness to hold on to him she started to live in...
At least in this way she will hold him..
One part of me feel bad for her...
But the daughter part of me can't bear her stupidness which cost her father life..
Y they never stopped her..
I think they too should have made her understood.. Sorry to say ..at least given her a slap for her that step..
If u truly loved then y live in it itself shows that the other person don't want responsibility...
Then how can u trust him that he loves her truly..
If one loves truly.. They give u commitment...
In my view marriage is more of commitment to each other ...n promise to stand by them..
If one fails u that..
U should know there is no love but only lu**..
Sorry if I said anything wrong
But its really getting on my nerves..
In all this I feel terrible for her mother one side her daughter who terribly hurt her with her actions n stupidity..
Coz of which she almost lost her..N her husband..
Poor soul..
If I think of her parents what I feel for her is only anger..
Sorry to say this...

Agreed, it was stupidity. But love is like that. A mother can go to any extent for their child. Will you name it as stupidity? There are mothers who sold themselves, there are mothers who killed, there are mother who died, can you name it all as stupidity? This is exactly what I wanted to tell through this fiction. The love today has become of two types, by love here I mean the romantic one. The showoff type or the extra serious type. Getting scared of the showoff type, some people have become extra serious about their love so that they wouldn't have to lose their love. And they actually love you know.

Love is all about giving and not about what you received. I don't know if you have ever listened to this, but I was unfortunate enough to listen this advice that if your husband/lover goes out of your hand, which is a better way of saying that he has other women in his life, then you should try harder and show how much he is wanted in your life. I have even heard that husbands love it if the wife is submissive and bears everything they give. Don't blame Khushi here. Blame the upbringing and society here. Her parents pushed her into this as I clearly stated in the first part. It was not just plain love from their side, it was also lust for money which possessed them. They might have wanted a better life for their daughter but they also wanted fame and money for themselves. Her mother was one who was oppressed by her husband. That shows that he was not the best of men and Khushi's suicide only brought in guilt to him. He was guilty when he died not in pain. They cut off all the love and affection when Khushi fell for Arnav Malhotra. Why? Because they thought that they wouldn't have the power on Khushi they would have had without them. I am in no way saying that our parents think like this but this specific set or if I can say her dad was that. Power had got into his head and he even oppressed his wife, restraining her from talking to them, to show their dissent, hoping that she would back off from the relationship but for their reasons.

Love happens from heart not from brain and heart has no brain. She was not selfish, she was devoted to Arnav. Her parents abandoned her with him and what else she should do? He was her sole support and everyone clings to their last support with a grip harder than a normal person would. Every part of this fiction shows her true love to him. True love has no actual logic and psychologists have proven it. This fiction shows that you should know where you should draw the line. Usually I try to give a message through my fictions and I leave it to people to understand it. And here, by your condemnation of Khushi, I see that I have succeeded.

Secondly, they were never married. She wanted to win his heart which might be synonymous to Arnav Singh Raizada winning Khushi's heart in Khel Khel Mein. That lady is better than Arnav Malhotra but if the way Arnav forgets his self-respect and everything to make sure his wife is in love with him is same as this Khushi's. That Khushi hates Arnav but this Khushi knows for sure that AM likes her, desires her and it makes it all easy for her. Hell, she thought for the better part of her life that he was in love with her. She thought that it was something in her that made him go to Sheetal. That is how our mothers and our fathers teach us. If your husband leaves you, it is your fault. Every advice she recieved just backfired. That's all I have wanted to tell through this.

When I read your comments, I feel that how easy it would be if life is as simple as you say. Don't ever let go of your innocence. Sorry if this hurt or offended you. This is my point of view which went behind the writing of this.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.

Agreed, it was stupidity. But love is like that. A mother can go to any extent for their child. Will you name it as stupidity? There are mothers who sold themselves, there are mothers who killed, there are mother who died, can you name it all as stupidity? This is exactly what I wanted to tell through this fiction. The love today has become of two types, by love here I mean the romantic one. The showoff type or the extra serious type. Getting scared of the showoff type, some people have become extra serious about their love so that they wouldn't have to lose their love. And they actually love you know.

Love is all about giving and not about what you received. I don't know if you have ever listened to this, but I was unfortunate enough to listen this advice that if your husband/lover goes out of your hand, which is a better way of saying that he has other women in his life, then you should try harder and show how much he is wanted in your life. I have even heard that husbands love it if the wife is submissive and bears everything they give. Don't blame Khushi here. Blame the upbringing and society here. Her parents pushed her into this as I clearly stated in the first part. It was not just plain love from their side, it was also lust for money which possessed them. They might have wanted a better life for their daughter but they also wanted fame and money for themselves. Her mother was one who was oppressed by her husband. That shows that he was not the best of men and Khushi's suicide only brought in guilt to him. He was guilty when he died not in pain. They cut off all the love and affection when Khushi fell for Arnav Malhotra. Why? Because they thought that they wouldn't have the power on Khushi they would have had without them. I am in no way saying that our parents think like this but this specific set or if I can say her dad was that. Power had got into his head and he even oppressed his wife, restraining her from talking to them, to show their dissent, hoping that she would back off from the relationship but for their reasons.

Love happens from heart not from brain and heart has no brain. She was not selfish, she was devoted to Arnav. Her parents abandoned her with him and what else she should do? He was her sole support and everyone clings to their last support with a grip harder than a normal person would. Every part of this fiction shows her true love to him. True love has no actual logic and psychologists have proven it. This fiction shows that you should know where you should draw the line. Usually I try to give a message through my fictions and I leave it to people to understand it. And here, by your condemnation of Khushi, I see that I have succeeded.

Secondly, they were never married. She wanted to win his heart which might be synonymous to Arnav Singh Raizada winning Khushi's heart in Khel Khel Mein. That lady is better than Arnav Malhotra but if the way Arnav forgets his self-respect and everything to make sure his wife is in love with him is same as this Khushi's. That Khushi hates Arnav but this Khushi knows for sure that AM likes her, desires her and it makes it all easy for her. Hell, she thought for the better part of her life that he was in love with her. She thought that it was something in her that made him go to Sheetal. That is how our mothers and our fathers teach us. If your husband leaves you, it is your fault. Every advice she recieved just backfired. That's all I have wanted to tell through this.

When I read your comments, I feel that how easy it would be if life is as simple as you say. Don't ever let go of your innocence. Sorry if this hurt or offended you. This is my point of view which went behind the writing of this.



Thank u..
Ur stories always give me life lessons..
N also see other side of coin..
Thank u..
No I am not offended..
Its wat even I want to say..
It was always only man.. N what he wants..n if he is wrong or on his path its
Women fault..
But women should also stand for them..
At least try to..
What hurt me most was she was not some gullible undeucated n dependent lady..
But she acted like that.

I understood that she done it in love...
But it hurts..
Thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.

Agreed, it was stupidity. But love is like that. A mother can go to any extent for their child. Will you name it as stupidity? There are mothers who sold themselves, there are mothers who killed, there are mother who died, can you name it all as stupidity? This is exactly what I wanted to tell through this fiction. The love today has become of two types, by love here I mean the romantic one. The showoff type or the extra serious type. Getting scared of the showoff type, some people have become extra serious about their love so that they wouldn't have to lose their love. And they actually love you know.

Love is all about giving and not about what you received. I don't know if you have ever listened to this, but I was unfortunate enough to listen this advice that if your husband/lover goes out of your hand, which is a better way of saying that he has other women in his life, then you should try harder and show how much he is wanted in your life. I have even heard that husbands love it if the wife is submissive and bears everything they give. Don't blame Khushi here. Blame the upbringing and society here. Her parents pushed her into this as I clearly stated in the first part. It was not just plain love from their side, it was also lust for money which possessed them. They might have wanted a better life for their daughter but they also wanted fame and money for themselves. Her mother was one who was oppressed by her husband. That shows that he was not the best of men and Khushi's suicide only brought in guilt to him. He was guilty when he died not in pain. They cut off all the love and affection when Khushi fell for Arnav Malhotra. Why? Because they thought that they wouldn't have the power on Khushi they would have had without them. I am in no way saying that our parents think like this but this specific set or if I can say her dad was that. Power had got into his head and he even oppressed his wife, restraining her from talking to them, to show their dissent, hoping that she would back off from the relationship but for their reasons.

Love happens from heart not from brain and heart has no brain. She was not selfish, she was devoted to Arnav. Her parents abandoned her with him and what else she should do? He was her sole support and everyone clings to their last support with a grip harder than a normal person would. Every part of this fiction shows her true love to him. True love has no actual logic and psychologists have proven it. This fiction shows that you should know where you should draw the line. Usually I try to give a message through my fictions and I leave it to people to understand it. And here, by your condemnation of Khushi, I see that I have succeeded.

Secondly, they were never married. She wanted to win his heart which might be synonymous to Arnav Singh Raizada winning Khushi's heart in Khel Khel Mein. That lady is better than Arnav Malhotra but if the way Arnav forgets his self-respect and everything to make sure his wife is in love with him is same as this Khushi's. That Khushi hates Arnav but this Khushi knows for sure that AM likes her, desires her and it makes it all easy for her. Hell, she thought for the better part of her life that he was in love with her. She thought that it was something in her that made him go to Sheetal. That is how our mothers and our fathers teach us. If your husband leaves you, it is your fault. Every advice she recieved just backfired. That's all I have wanted to tell through this.

When I read your comments, I feel that how easy it would be if life is as simple as you say. Don't ever let go of your innocence. Sorry if this hurt or offended you. This is my point of view which went behind the writing of this.

Amazing...
I think u should share it with others ,too..
Yagya... this's the motive behind ur story n all of ur readers need to read it !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic update
i just love arnav
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir



Thank u..
Ur stories always give me life lessons..
N also see other side of coin..
Thank u..
No I am not offended..
Its wat even I want to say..
It was always only man.. N what he wants..n if he is wrong or on his path its
Women fault..
But women should also stand for them..
At least try to..
What hurt me most was she was not some gullible undeucated n dependent lady..
But she acted like that.

I understood that she done it in love...
But it hurts..
Thank u

Thank you. This really means a lot to me. It hurts, it hurt even me when I saw the news that Pratyusha acted like this but love is actually blind and no one could have understood her pain except for her. We don't know what exactly happened between both of them and hence I feel bad for Pratyusha and in this case Khushi. And definitely, women should try to stand up for themselves and the society should change.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Amazing...

I think u should share it with others ,too..
Yagya... this's the motive behind ur story n all of ur readers need to read it !!!

I will post it as a note after the next part, Api. Thank you so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago

👏 👏 fantastic update...

he just gave her confidence... to live and face the world..


beautiful ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Like how you showed the emotions and understanding
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
i so love this arnav...
how he encourages khushi...
how he gives her hope...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

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