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arshi_sarun

@arshi_sarun

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Awesome... Thanks for the pm

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Awesome faiqa 😊

If kushi was engaged to someone else, what would've happened to arnav. .. interesting idea. ..

Description of kushi's eyes, and feelings of arnav and arnav's realisation, everything is beautifully penned down ⭐️

I loved the way kushi backed out when arnav proposed her and thought about her family's honour and her morals was great 👏

Lovely ending faiqa ❤️

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Arshi2503

@Arshi2503

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Beautiful OS
Their eye conversation is so realistic.
Yes, her eyes speaks volumes to him.
Very nicely written dear
We will wait for the prologue.Take your time.

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Beautiful one shot dear.. :)

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

For once I thought she would do the same that he did on diwali.. announce his marriage with Lavanya.. He came, apologized and proposed.. She let him, forgive him and accept him...

Loved it!

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amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Amazing superb and entertaining

Loved it too much

Very beautifully and well written

Edited by star_fan1 - 9 years ago

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Roop_P

@Roop_P

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Updated here

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/132554821

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thakurpreeti

@thakurpreeti

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Awesome & superb os, liked it, both are always mean to eachother, he didn't see that his khushi with anyone, do everything to get her, true love never dies,