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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Very nice story. Really loved it. It was so simple & everything just went on smoothly.

No high pitched drama or should I say melodrama, no big dialogues, no crying or shouting , but the emotions you delivered were right on place.

It was not a depressing OS. I really really really liked it . It is not at all stretching, not highly melodramatic & quite a positive ending.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

I love the way you described her eyes. Wine with Lime...arree wah kya title hai Faiqa. Lovely confession made by both.

Very cute and beautiful OS.

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Aakanksha

@ina_saahil

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

A beautiful OS it was with the emotions pouring out through your words...😊

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hira2050

@hira2050

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

I don't have words to describe what iam Feeling Right Now and You Know that Why iam saying this

.I want Moreee

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

they truly are made for each other.. A beautiful piece of work

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

very nice one Faiqa

well written dear

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Alicia2012

@Alicia2012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Wow great short story

I really love your os so much and also khushi and Arnav and the ending is an amazing . Thanks for the pm

Welcome back

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

fantastic os👏

Edited by Anapneo3003 - 9 years ago

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

As 7 KHOON MAAF to Arnav Singh Raizada in the serial n in the fiction quite frequently..

Nice idea...

Khushi's crying a little bit..n hitting his chest was more than enough..

All is well that ends well😉😆

@getting chappals..

I assure u won't be getting any pairs .. but many single piecec...😆

Tou Kya faida 😳

Awww..

U know naa that we all love u so much..🤗

Take ur time..

We can wait..

Edited by pakpearl - 9 years ago

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

wow beautiful os loved it thank you for pm.

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