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akai

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow! Like always it's beautiful.

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Lana ^_^

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Posted: 9 years ago

Well written story

Beautiful I loved it

U r an amazing writter gorgeous👏

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful OS
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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Adigallia Rodriguez

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice small twist you have here.

But he did hurt her on Diwali, and his words really rages you up.
I like the way Khushi turned around without giving him answer and he has to seek forgiveness before confession.
😊
Lovely as usual

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Aww this was so beautiful dear..

Loved it...

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Sadh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow this was so beautiful.. This so makes me wish and want that IPK was like this. And there was such a scene in the serial. My day is made just like wine with lime. Wherever did you find such a diff title? The repentance, the realisation, the love, the need and the desire everything was so gracefully written with a poetic elegance. I couldn't have asked for something more! The emotions were raw and bubbling. I loved the eye conversation.. something new and enjoyable. I really loved this di <3

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madhu1210

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow beautiful to the t...

Wine with lime...

The wsy you describe khushi's eyes amazing...

No worries dear take your time for your story..

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Aju

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Posted: 9 years ago

beautiful os 👏

FA love u yaar🤗😳

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sanasahel

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Posted: 9 years ago

Eyes are true mirror of ones mind. However u hide ur emotions ur eyes reflect it in some or the other

way. The eye convo between Arnav and Kushi was so cute. Good one. Thanks for this beautiful OS.

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MariaYourTitli

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Posted: 9 years ago

He couldn't be able to forget her... and her eyes were haunting him! 😲😳 An OS based on that?!? Unique concept, I loved it 😳

Such a beautiful OS Faiqa! You've nailed it!

He was determined to get his love back... in ASR's style! 😉😃😆

My most favourite part was when they both met , I mean when their eyes met once again. Such a beautiful scene

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