Rajveer-Naina's Stories Updated PG 51 ON 11.8.2018

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Frankly I don't remember who exactly asked me to write an OS on this scene. 😕 But someone I guess on RPFC did ask me. 😕 Therefore I wrote on this scene 😛 So kindly remind me if anyone knows here, or may be the person herself can let me know 😉 😆

Ok so this is one of the requests that I am fulfilling here. I know there are more 😛 I'll try to fulfill those too! 😛 Bus patience rakhna and mujh par bharosa 😆 😆 😆 😉

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago

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Ayushi2608

@Ayushi2608

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Awesome superb

U r an amazing writer...👏👏

The os after boxing match left me speechless...the way u showed the inner turnoil both were going through and the effect of each other's closeness on each other was mindblowing😳😳

The songs selection was superb and its lyrics completely matches them...

The boldness they hv shown and asked the ques directly was something new to read and i enjoyed it...

I wished i could see this scene in LRL too...

And they definitely can't stop playing the staring game..😆😆

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saalfi

@saalfi

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#193

😳 both of the os are very good... really liked RN scene's... plz do continue it with more os...

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Manveer

@ManVeer8495

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Jiya re...
lovely cute awesome os Ria!!! you are an amazing & writer 👏 ❤️
your writing brings a smile on face i can easily visualize the scene raina kitne adorable & cute lagte hai tumhare story me
ek baat kahu jab bhi main tumhar story padhti hoon aise lagta jaise captain sahab me kabeer aur sujal ki aatma aa gayi ho & this is the best part of your stories
captain sahab apni feeling chhupate nahi apne uper naveen ki maut ki guilt ko haavi hone nahi dete i just love this side of rajveer
jabse tumari story read karna start kiya yaar mujhe naina se pyaar ho gaya hai aise lagta hai yaar ki yeh hai real naina naveen ki sister & rajveer's beloved kash! show me bhi cvs naina ke character ko aise rakhte

rajveer ke match haar jane mujhe koi problem nahi thi because i understand rajveer's feeling his turmoil ek aisi ladki se pyaar karna jo aapki student ho apke best friend ki sister ho woh bhi aisa friend jispe apne goli chalayi ho yaar koi bhi khudko guilty hi feel karega but mujhe match mujhe naina ke sath raj behaviour achchh nahi laga 😕 match ke baad main jaise scene chahti thi tumne waise hi scene likhe hai thank you for this
waise mujhe laga tha ki naina ko bhi kuchh kuchh hone laga hai yaar cvs ko ek scene to dikhana chahiye tha jisme naina apne feelings ke baare me soche confusion hi sahi lekin nahi... raina ke pyaar ke sabse bade dushman to cvs hi the 😡
but thank god!!! Ria tum ho humare paas hamari wishes humre dreams ko pura karne ke liye

the dhaaga scene pe likhne ke liye thank you thank you thank you very much ria!!!
well abhi padha nahi padhne ke baad achchhe se comment karungi plz reply zaroor karna...
love you darling!!! keep smiling keep writing

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Ayushi2608
Awesome superb
U r an amazing writer...👏👏
The os after boxing match left me speechless...the way u showed the inner turnoil both were going through and the effect of each other's closeness on each other was mindblowing😳😳
The songs selection was superb and its lyrics completely matches them...
The boldness they hv shown and asked the ques directly was something new to read and i enjoyed it...
I wished i could see this scene in LRL too...
And they definitely can't stop playing the staring game..😆😆

Awesome superb

Thank you 😊

U r an amazing writer...👏👏

Thank you so much 😳

The os after boxing match left me speechless...

Hahaha! 😛 Really? 😉

the way u showed the inner turnoil both were going through and the effect of each other's closeness on each other was mindblowing😳😳

I am glad you enjoyed it 😳

The songs selection was superb and its lyrics completely matches them...

Thanks a lot! 😳

The boldness they hv shown and asked the ques directly was something new to read and i enjoyed it...

Yes I wanted to show this since a long time now 👍🏼

I wished i could see this scene in LRL too...

Awww... 🤗

And they definitely can't stop playing the staring game..😆😆

Lolz! 😆 😉 Indeed! Indeed! 😆

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Mrumi

@Mrumi

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Both the OS were superfantastic.. AS USUAL.. Mrumi.. kuch naya bol yaar😉😆

Jiya re... Kaash humein dekhne mil jaata..

( Tu OS likhe aur mera Kaash naa aaye aisa ho hi nahin sakta😆)

Boxing match ke baad Naina gayi bhi thi Rajveer se milne bas tere Naina jitni bold nahin ho paayi.. aut jab baad mein Naina bold huyi woh bhi class mein.. insult karwa di sabke saamne...😛

Jab usse pata chal gaya tha ke uske cheer karne ke baad uske Rajveer Sir aur maar khaa rahe hain toh cheer karna band kyun nahin kia usne😆😆

Now.. about dhaaga scene.. toh yeh toh mera fav scene hain you know..

Jab friends life ka dahi banana start karte hain tab kaisa lagta hain I know.. so i can understand rajveer's emotion.. achha kia Naina ne jo usse jabardasti waha le gayi.. Waise kya Naina ko tab ye pata tha ke wo kahin bhi uske piche kheencha chala jayega... without any efforts of her..

Bol na halke halke.. one of my fav song.. thanks for using that particular stanza..

waiting for more OS..🤗

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treta

@tr_eta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Awesome part.,loved the way naina has gone to raj to cheer up his mood

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385641

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#198

Awesome vwork .love you for this

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Manveer

@ManVeer8495

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Posted: 9 years ago

#199

THE DHAAGA SCENE OS

Beautiful, a bit of romantic,absolutely amazing just loved it

after the red saree scene this scene is my 2nd all time favourite scene in this scene everythig (raina's clothing their expression specially raj's expression, their sitting position, background, time, bg music ) was just perfect
in this scene raj is looking so cute charming & cool and naina simply beautifull!!! isn't it?

rajveer & naina they both never need any words to express their feeling and without any vocal expression they can completely understand each other they are awesome

you have written so beautifully that i can feel it & can easily visualise & after reading i'm so happy

thank you so much ria for this os
love you