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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Hiii...Riya...firstly sorry for not replying for long time...but I never missed ur story especially ur RN ones...have read all of them n each hold emotions and memories...here comes boxing match ...waiting to see naina n Raj's emotions...

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: lovern
Hiii Riya

One more OS on RAINA .

Superb writer u r u know that. 👏👏

Amazing dear. Seriously i just wanted to see something like this in LRL but all in our dream .
The bond between both of them is very strong u know. Woh ek dusre ka saath kabhi nahi chodenge.

Continue soon dear... waiting for update. 😊😊

And PM me too.

And one suggestion for u I just wanted to read the story after Rajveer tells her truth about Naveen from your point of view. Plzzz think about it if u can. Noo i know that u can do that.

Lots of hugsss & lots of love ❤️

Priya

Hiii Riya

Hello Priya 😛😆

One more OS on RAINA .

Yup! I hope you like it 😳

Superb writer u r u know that. 👏👏

Is that so? 😳 Thank you so much!

Amazing dear. Seriously i just wanted to see something like this in LRL but all in our dream .

Wow! It feels good when I come to know that you people wanted to see something like what I have written! 🥳

The bond between both of them is very strong u know. Woh ek dusre ka saath kabhi nahi chodenge.

Absolutely! 😳

Continue soon dear... waiting for update. 😊😊

Updated a little at last 😉 do check 😊

And PM me too.

Sure 👍🏼

And one suggestion for u I just wanted to read the story after Rajveer tells her truth about Naveen from your point of view. Plzzz think about it if u can. Noo i know that u can do that.

Hahaha! 😆 First of all thank you for having the faith and trust in me 😳 and now I would like to tell you I have already one request which is yet to be fulfilled 😉 After completing this story I am gonna write that one first. Then will start working on yours 👍🏼 I am being lazy these days in writing stories. 😉 I never keep stories pending but abhi hain stories pending. I still haven't resumed HJNH 😭 Took a longgg break haven't I? 😉 Apologies for that 😭

Lots of hugsss & lots of love ❤️

Priya

Lots of hugs and lots of love to you too! ❤️

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Sanchari

@BedouinMe

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Jaan le lo meri tum ! Bcoz THIS is a slow kill.. I'm sure tujhe nahi pata tu kya likh ri hai.. It gets my heartbeats racing !!! And then you pause at a cliffhanger.. Its so unfair ! :-( Update karo jaldi jaldi.. I promise main tujhse kam bak bak karungi aur zyada time dungi update karne ke liye.. ;-)

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Ayushi2608

@Ayushi2608

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

This was brilliant os...vry beautifully written...

The short conversation between raina n their eye lock... was amazing

I really wished this scene we could watch in LRL

I hv a request for u...

I want u to write a os on the extension of the concentration game rajveer was playing with the cadets after they save him from the terrorist...more preciosly what was naina n rajveer thinking while they were hving a eye lock..

Plzz continue soon...waiting for ur nxt part..

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias
Hiii...Riya...firstly sorry for not replying for long time...but I never missed ur story especially ur RN ones...have read all of them n each hold emotions and memories...here comes boxing match ...waiting to see naina n Raj's emotions...

Hiii...Riya...firstly sorry for not replying for long time...

Oh not a problem at all 😳

but I never missed ur story especially ur RN ones...

Thank you so much 😳

have read all of them n each hold emotions and memories...

Aww... thank you 😳

here comes boxing match ...

yay!

waiting to see naina n Raj's emotions...

Sure 😳 Do check updated a little 😳

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: BedouinMe
Jaan le lo meri tum ! Bcoz THIS is a slow kill.. I'm sure tujhe nahi pata tu kya likh ri hai.. It gets my heartbeats racing !!! And then you pause at a cliffhanger.. Its so unfair ! :-( Update karo jaldi jaldi.. I promise main tujhse kam bak bak karungi aur zyada time dungi update karne ke liye.. ;-)

Jaan le lo meri tum !

Awww... baby main apki jaan kaise le sakti hun 😳❤️🤗

Bcoz THIS is a slow kill..

Is it? 😛 😉

I'm sure tujhe nahi pata tu kya likh ri hai..

Mujhey such mein nahi pata! 😆 😛

It gets my heartbeats racing !!!

Hahaha! 😆 Awesome! 👏 Mission accomplished! 😎

And then you pause at a cliffhanger..

Hahaha! 😆 lolz... 😆 Main to ye humesha hi karti hun beta! 😉

Its so unfair ! :-(

Everything is fair in love and war! 😉😛 Don't you love Rajveer? ❤️ Kehdo ki tum Rajveer se pyar nahi karti Sanchi 😉 Come on I know you can say it... koshish karo... 😆 😆 😉 😉🤣 🤣

Update karo jaldi jaldi..

Kar diaaa... check! 😳

I promise main tujhse kam bak bak karungi aur zyada time dungi update karne ke liye.. ;-)

Hun... don't promise something that you can't keep 😉 😆

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
This comes for your OS on jail scene which I read recently. I just loved that scene and I wish it would have happened in the way you wrote.

Superb work 👏 👏

Naina must have been there and their eye lock...hieee soch kar hi kitna khush ho jate hain na hum.

I hated when Raj behaved rudely with Naina without her fault. She even didn't understand why is Raj behaving like this with her?

I have a suggestion for you to write a OS in your style with two scenes Rumal and Watch; one is mud scene. I wish we would have got some extensions for that.

This comes for your OS on jail scene which I read recently. I just loved that scene and I wish it would have happened in the way you wrote.

Thank you so much Mahak. 😊 I am glad to know you liked it that much 😳

Superb work 👏 👏

Thank you 😊

Naina must have been there and their eye lock...hieee soch kar hi kitna khush ho jate hain na hum.

Haan! I can exactly understand how you must be feeling! 😳 I was feeling the same while writing it! 😛 😉

I hated when Raj behaved rudely with Naina without her fault. She even didn't understand why is Raj behaving like this with her?

Well this is a normal behavior you are showing here Mahak 😳 If you ask me I won't lie by saying that I also got angry! No, I didn't get angry, I actually blushed 😆 😳 I knew what he was doing was for her sake, while deep inside he had feelings for her. And I loved that part! What I didn't like was they should have shown more often how after scolding her or ignoring her, he felt sorry for behaving with her that way 😳 Although they did show a few times, but may be I was a bit greedy here 😉 I wanted a bit more 😳 But nevertheless I am glad to know your honest views on this scene. Thanks for sharing it with us. 😳 I am not against your viewpoint, I am just putting my point of view here! 😳

I have a suggestion for you to write a OS in your style with two scenes Rumal and Watch; one is mud scene. I wish we would have got some extensions for that.

I'll keep this in mind. 😳 Frankly I have a list of demands from my readers 😉 I am trying to fulfill those right now. 😊 I'll keep this in mind. May be someday I'll write on these two too! 😳

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Ayushi2608
This was brilliant os...vry beautifully written...
The short conversation between raina n their eye lock... was amazing
I really wished this scene we could watch in LRL
I hv a request for u...
I want u to write a os on the extension of the concentration game rajveer was playing with the cadets after they save him from the terrorist...more preciosly what was naina n rajveer thinking while they were hving a eye lock..

Plzz continue soon...waiting for ur nxt part..

This was brilliant os...vry beautifully written...

Thank you so much 😳

The short conversation between raina n their eye lock... was amazing

I am glad you liked that part 😳

I really wished this scene we could watch in LRL

Ohh... 😛 Thank you ! 😳

I hv a request for u...

I think I have used this scene in my story RNTMB 😳 you can check that 😳

Plzz continue soon...waiting for ur nxt part..

Completed! 👍🏼

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago

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Sri

@sridhsc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Hi Riya,

Right justice done to the title Jiya Re and RN.

The song suits them better than SwaDarsh.

Bohut aachi thi.

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: sridhsc
Hi Riya,
Right justice done to the title Jiya Re and RN.
The song suits them better than SwaDarsh.
Bohut aachi thi.

Hi Riya,

Hello 😳

Right justice done to the title Jiya Re and RN.

Dhanyawad! 😉

The song suits them better than SwaDarsh.

Yes I also thought the same, therefore couldn't resist using it 😛

Bohut aachi thi.

Thank you 😳 Another reason for writing this was I wanted to try this style of writing since a long time but I doubted whether I'll be able to accomplish it successfully or not!😛 But when I thought of this song and Rajveer-Naina, I was like - 'damn! Acha ho ya bura main likhna shuru karti hun, koi conclusion mein to pohchungi. Either I'll end midway, abruptly or I'll learn how to write stories using a song as the theme!' 😳

This story was indeed a first experience and thankfully it turned out good! 😳