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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wohoo so honeymoon it is!

Hmm so Shilpa is angry... sahi hai; hogi bhi! I am toh wondering how did Armaan agree? Matlab I don't know for sure if he has yet but looks like 'coz he did speak to her but then...urghhh... yahi problem hai na sneak peak ka!

Dekh achi baat hai you gave acha sa sneak peak, but now update soon ok. Soon se I mean sooon! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

From past one hour he has been trying to fix things up...but to his luck...which never supported him..its all leading to...a bizarre...

He saw his friend who was in full clothes now...standing not at all facing him...and on other side his 1 day old😆newly wedded wife..who was facing other side..both were adamant on their stands...

Rahul coughed as kaka got the tray with glasses of cold water...Armaan took the glass and gulped hard the water in one go...

kaka-beta khana laga du?bohot der ho rahi hai...

atul-nahi kaka...der to ho hee gayi hai...zaalim duniya aur ab paraye dost..ab to jana hee banta hai yahan se...

Rahul-(in mind)nautanki sala...

Armaan-champp...plzz...for god sake..meri baat sunega tu...main

At-ab sunne samajhne ko kuch baki hai...apna vada tora hai tune..heart breaker hai tu...sach mein...mere hote huey tu kaise kisiko mera kamra de sakta hai..pichle saalon se rehta aya hu yaha main..apna basera basaya hai yahanpe maine..aur aaj aise hee uthake kisi bhi de diya

Shilpa-excuse me?main..

Ar-okay enough yaar...pichle ek ghantey se isi baat pe behes kar rahe hai hum...champ..meri baat samajhne ki koshish kar...yeh sab itne achanak se ho gaya hai...I didnt gt time...maine to apni family ko bhi nahi bataya ab tk kuch phir..

At-ha a bol na..complete kar sentence..main to family bhi nahi hu..huh..

Ar-tu mere liye family se barkar hai yaar..do I need to explain now?plzz...

Atul looked at his friend's face who looked drained and tired...finally he was convinced for the sake of his friend...he stared at shilpa who glared at her and then bak to armaan...

at-acha theek hai..tu kehta hai too...maan leta hu...

ar-ahh thank god

at-lekin...mera kamra...perfect hona chahiye..kuch ulta pulta hua na to...

ar-kuch nahi hoga..hmm...chal tu mere kamre mein shift ho ja aur main...

At-haa chalo mujhe woh room poora khali chahiye...phir apna samaan dalvata hu kaka chaliye...waise hee bohot der ho rahi hai..bhook ke maare choohe daur rhe hai mere pet mein..pata hai...shehh

Atul left with kaka while rahul made some excuse sensing the tension between the newly weds...

Armaan took another glass of water and sipped it...when saw kaka shifting his things on this room...he choked on the water and coughed hard...

ar-kkkaka yeh kya kar rahe ho aap...mera samaan

at-beta atul bhayiya hee keh rahe hai ab to aap isi kamre mein rahoge to...

He closed his eyes cursing his fate and hearing the footsteps..he made an image in his mind with closed eyes...she was there infront of him...all ready to pounce on...


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At night after atul left for bed he sneaked out of the room and shifted on the couch in living room...he switched off the lights and finally could take a breath of relief...

Ar-kya din agaye mere..apne hee ghar mein choron ki tarah so raha hu...sahi kaha hai kisine..kuch bhi karo aur maro..magar shaadi mat karna...

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At-waah kaka kya naashta banaya dil khush kar dia...lovely paranthas...tu lega?

He was all ready for hospital..dressed in his jeans and a grey shirt revealing first few buttons open..hair gelled up and he was fixing his watch when saw her climbing down the stairs...

His eyes were fixed on her...she was looking so pure in white...a long white kurti along with jeans..and those green bangles on her hand..and the red vermillion...made his heart skip a beat...
While he was busy at staring atul noticed this and his expressions changed to angry one...He coughed hard bringing dr mallik back to earth getting that toothy grin from his friend...

She fidgeted with her dupatta and settled on one of the chairs...atul was not keen on wishing her morning while mr husband could hardly gather courage to do so...though he was staring glances...

Sh-aa ahem..kaka kuch light sa milega khaane ko...woh main itna heavy breakfast to karti nahi...

At-kaka aur do paranthey lana mere liye...

Shilpa stared at this guy who was busy in relishing that oily food...she scrunched her nose and munched on her plain toast...

Ar-aa ahem...

At-kya hua...khaasi kaise ho gayi...raat ko ac ka tem zyada low tha kya...ya phir mere balcony ki taaza hawa raas nahi ayii...

Sh-agta hai ise zukaam ho gaya bahar raat guzaarne ki wajah se...ahh main kya karu..meri galti thori hai..isey hee itna sense hona chahiye ke apne stupid bhukkar friend ko samjhae...

Ar-wohh...shilpa..main soch raha tha ke..tum ghar pe bore ho jati hogi na?too..kuch karti kyun nahi?

Sh-hmm soch rai hu aloo bechne ka business suru kar du..waise bhi aajkal logon ko kuch zyada hee pasand a rahe hai na..dozen ke hisaab se...

Atul almost choked on his food.. her munching the toast with a sly grin...sensing things wld get out of hand..armaan continued...

Ar-ah nahi mera matlab studies se tha..tum agar chaho..to...parh sakti ho agey...thinkk abt it...
kaka main nikalta hu...getting late..se yaa

Sh-huh..parhayi...ab woh sab karkey fayeda bhi kya hoga..jo hona tha woh ho hee chuka hai and Iam stuck here...

She left the table with atul finally finishing his breakfast with a happy grin...seeing her leaving barely eating anything he fnd it weird...

At-nai...armaan ne shaadi ki...iss ladki se...kuch to jhol lag raha hai mujhe..itni asani se chorunga nahi iss muddey ko main...armaan mere dost namak khaya hai tera maine...ab karz chuka ke rahunga..iss shaaadi ka raaz to nikalna hee hoga mjhe ab...

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Ar-yaar har ek din nayi musibat..tang a chuka hu...

Rah-do din mein yeh haal dr armaan...not bad...

He massaged his temples when rahul passed the steaming mug of coffee to him

rah-u alright?

ar-nahi...bas marney hee wala hu...

Rah-problem kya hai..subah se itna chira hua hai...biwi ne room se nikal diya kya

Ar-yeah...infat woh prob nahi hai...

Rah-phir?atul ne phirse jhagra kiya

ar-Shanky...

Rah-kya?

Ar-pata nahi khaas dushmani hai ya pyar uneh mujhse..pehle bulaake ladki thama di..aur ab...puri tarah se khoon karvane ki planning...full proof plan...

rah-abey kya bakwaas kiye ja rha hai?


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Shilpa was scanning the channels on tv in living room...she was hell bored and tv was also doing no good to her...she spotted atul coming out of kitchen looking all drained with sweat...

Sh-yeh koi kaam vaam bhi karta hai ya phir...aghh mujhe kya hai...

She again gt back to tv screen when atul settled on the couch...she found a glass of milkshake on the centre table which kaka kept...

Sh-yyyeh...

kaka-beta pee lo...atul bhaiya ne banaya hai...

Sh-thnk u but..main nahi peeti...

At-pee lo...low calorie hai yeh...waise bhi iss rate mein khaogi to loug bolenge doctor ki biwi ka wazan kum ho gaya😆

Her mouth was left open..this guy's guts...

sh-huh main nahi peeti...

The shake looked tempting indeed...and aftr havng nthng for breakfast she was hungry also..so she picked it up and it did tasted nice...

Atul was keeping an eye at her from distance and when she finally picked the glass he finished his second one...

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Rah-kya honeymoon?tickets..tu pehla damaad hoga is dharti ka jisey khud sasur ne tickets diye honge honeymoon pe jaane ke

Ar-tujhe hasi a rahi hai...band baj rahi hai meri

rah-abey honeymoon pe hee jaha hai...sanyaas pe nahi...chill...shilpa khush ho jayegi teri prob solved

ar-right...sanyaas pe jana bhi better option hota...aur yehjo teri sweet si chunnu munnu shilpaa hai na...bas dikhne mein hee itti si hai...jwalamukhi ki trh fat ti hai mere saamne yaar...uska gussa

Rah-to ab..kya karega tu?dr shashank ko to mana bhi nahi kar paega...

Ar-pata nahi...aag mein koodna to hai bass...darr hai jal na jau...

rah-best of luck 😉

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At night dinner was set on table and three of them were silently busy...when armaan wiped his mouth and felt it was time to jump on fire😆
he noticed her taking her meal slowly...

ar-a champ...tu chamber mein nahi gaya apne aaj?

at-arey kaha...woh meri bekaaran assistant bola hua tha ajaye aaj lekin nahi...2 din aur extend kar li leave apni...mushkil tabhi khol paunga chamber main warna patients ko handle kaun karega...

ar-ohh...aaa main soch raha tha ke mere absence mein tu to rahega yahan kaka ke saath...ghar akela to nahi chorke ja sakta...

at-kyun kahi ja raha hai tu?phirse koi conference...

Shilpa was done with her food and was drinking water...

ar-nai woh...hum dono ko jana hai...honeymoon pe

He blurted it out without giving the duo enough time to digest what he meant...Atul left the fork on his plate while shilpa was still in shock...

at-kya kaha tune?honey..moon?kiska..

ar-ab main ja raha hu obviously mera hai champ...aurr

She got up startling everyone and left with heavy steps towars her room...

at-awaaz kiye bina kuch hota nahi...ek min tu bata...tu iske saath jana chahta hai I mean

ar-champp...tu khana kha...main baad mein baat karta hu...

At-huh...ab to rahul se baat karni paregi...


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She felt like strangling him hard..how can he even think of going to honeymoon with her?yeah he was dreaming on to romance...and lead a happy go lucky life...heights of insaneness...

she heard the noise of door and knw he was there...

sh-jao yahan se

ar-shh...listen to me

sh-maine kaha na jao..gussa arha hai mjhe...main kuch kar dungi to...

ar-meri baat sun lo..phir jo bolna hai

She turned around facing him with red shot eyes...tears forming in them...she was angry with rage building inside her...and to some extent he felt she was hurt..but why?did he hurt her?

ar-shilpa

sh-just shut up...aur kuch bolne ki zarurat nahi hai tumhe...

ar-maine kuch nahi kiya..tumhare dad...dr shashank chahte hai ke hum honeymoon...I mean iss trip pe jae..unohne khud tickets book karvae aur mere haat mein thama diya...main kaise mana karta uneh?

sh-huh right...

ar-see..i can understnd...but..tum khud socho aur kya option hai mere paas...woh tumhare dad hai aur

Sh-Sh-main koi kathputhli nahi hu jab man kiya shaadi karvaadi...aur ab yeh..honeymoon...

Ar-shilpa listen to me

She pushed him with anger taking over her...

Sh-I was right...tum...tum bilkul waise hee ho...jaisa maine socha tha...papa ke chamchey...pet dog

Ar-shilpa...

He pulled her towards him with strong hold...while she winced in pain...both of them were in rage...she tried to get out of his hold while his grip tightened...for first time she was seeing him in such a mood...his nostrils flared and he was trying his best to control him...

Sh-leave me...ahh...

Ar-dubara aise tone mein mujhse baat mat karna...samjhi

He left her and banged his fist on the wall startling her...

Ar-iss baap beti ki larai mein main shaheed ho jaunga...

He banged the door hard...she fell on the bed crying on her fate...

Sh-I wish you were here mumma...I miss you...uneh kabhi meri khushi ki nahi pari..bas wohi kartey hai jo uneh sahi lagta hai...I hate him...


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Rah-atull pagal mat ban...raat ke 12 baje yeh bakwaas karne ke liye tuney phone kiya mujhe

at-to aur kya karta...ek tum hee ho jisey insab ke baare mein pata hai...yaar...kuch galat hai..main janta hu armaan ko...ajeeb hai yh sb

rah-ajeeb tera dimaag hai...ab ja aur so jaa...sar mat kha mera...

at-khaunga..atleast tab tak jabtak puri sachai na pata chaley mjhe

rah-abey kya sachai yaar...

At-shak tha pehle mujhe..magar ab thora yakeen aney laga hai...zaroor uss Dean ne na mere dost ko fasaya hua hai...apni pagal beti se shaadi karvaakey...

Rah-oye..kuch bhi bolta hai na tu...

At-shart lagalo...armaan ke liye main jaan de du...phir is pagal ko pagal saabit krna koi aam baat nahi hai...

rah-abey?phone kaat diya...kabhi kabhi shak hota hai mujhe...armaan ka dost hee hai yeh ya..shit..I need sleep man...


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Well iam back..break time and iam super bored...so hope I will have readers😆bhayiyo behnon 😭😲dhoka na dena
-Laddoo😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Wah wah wah finally pyaari behna ne update diya😳
Shukriya Shukriya!!!😳 bohoot pyaara part tha😆
Atul toh Shilpa k peeche hi padh gaya h🤣 aur
Dialogues toh mast thaen!😉 Yeh Aloo k business
hi karle toh acha hoga!😆 nhi?😉 Hero ne Aaj awaaz
uthae!😡 gussa dikhaya! achi baat h kuch toh reaction aya!😉
woh dialogue mast tha - pehla sasur jo honeymoon tickets deta h!🤣
agla part jakdi dena behna!😳 love u tc😳❤️ aur huggy kisses b🤗
Edited by ajuswa19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Ye leejiye finally aapko aaj time mil hi Gaya update karne ka. Par by God the part was ekdum worth the wait... chota Tha par acha Tha.

And Tere dialogues na, especially the taunts they are just out of the world. Shilpa's dialogue "soch rahi hu aaloo bechne ka kaam shuru kar du" 😆 that was definitely the highlight of the part. This Atul is really confusing yaar, seriously pakka dost hi hai na Ye?! But I loved how he made milkshake for her as well. And vo honeymoon discussion ka poora scene toh was hilarious. End mein thoda serious ho Gaya but it was brilliant all on all. Enjoyed the update thoroughly.

Do tc and please try to update sooner next time. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Awesome blossom update
Love it
Brilliant work
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Nice update
Loved it
Armi bechara.shil to tigress hai
Atul shil tashan amazing
But pis to armi gaya.ab kya hoga
Update next soon
Thanks for pm

Oppsi I m also Aryan aru fan. Lovely couple.love their chemistry.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Atul toh Shilpa k peeche hi padh gaya
aur Yeh Aloo k business...nic one
pehla sasur jo honeymoon tickets deta h!ROFL
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
yeh atul sahi mei pagal
shanky ...stop it yaar mat bhejo hm pe ..kyun armaan ko marwana chahte ho
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
So happy you are back loved this story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
🤣🤣

IAS aur IFRS se sir uthaya to socha distraction chahiye thoda.. phir socha k na padhun.. kaunsa complete karna hai tumne koi story.. Dill, Sambhal jaa Zara ka haal dekha haina maine 😡

But then when i read this i burst out laughing!! Shilpa and Atul OMG!!🤣 Aur bechara Armaan..

Rahul and Armaan lunch scene was hilarious!! Shilpa again namooni, hogi kisi k pyaar mein pagal 🤢 Aur phas gaya Armaan..

Huh!! Yeh Armaan he acha tha.. Real naam aur kaam donow se to nafrat hogai hai mujhe🤢😡
Likha he nahi jaata aur sab ko mujhse update chahiye.. Oppar se papers sir pe hain! aur ghar pe agaye mehmaan rehne ko!!😡😡 Kahan jaoon?????🤢🤢

Khair chalo... ab agle saal jab tum update karogi, 🤔 Tab dekha jayega!!
Tata!!👎🏼

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