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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#331

khatam hogaya kya!!! nahi...roshogolla naaa..amonta koro na..mishti roshogolla <3

sigh...but u r stubborn so kisi k nahi sun ne wali.. sigh

very beautifully written...luvd it.. ps. here i m gona miss the Shenoy couple mor than arhi... they r really cute..

be bk soon...u will b missed..thorouglly...

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#332

Awesome update. Every one have flaws. Finally khushi knew hw arnav is... hope dey stay happy forever

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#333

Beautifully written
Wonderful update
Loved it
Fantabulous ending
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#334

Thank you for pm... 😛

I loved the update dear... Love you & thank you for this brilliant story... 🤗

Feeling sorry that this story is over... 😭

Please dear can we get an epilogue ? ?

This story is very realistic dear... Arnav will take time to change but he will because he wants to change for Khushi...Finally its one big happy family...

PS: Please dear it's a request do come up with a new story on Arnav-Khushi once you get time... You have the talent dear... Yup I will love dear if you can repost your earlier stories... I did not get a chance to go through them. Again it's a request... ⭐️

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#335

This was a really perfect finish for such a wonderful tale. Saiyyu won't you also make sure Laavanya writes? Kuch shart lagao na?

This tale was beautiful from the start and the ending made it brilliant. He has flaws yet you have made sure she looks beyond them. And sees the real Arnav. I am going to miss not getting your PMs and your notes. And ofc reading your story thrice or more. It has become my habit. Reading every chapter of yours thrice before I comment. And my routine sorries that always tops the list.

Too see Khushi finally khush made me happy. And finally Anjali and Shyam spread their wings. Though, Arnav was a thick head, he made sure to apologize. Apologising is the first step towards owning up and rectifying. Their ever honest conversation will always lay the foundation for their strong relation I feel. Akash and Payal managed to conquer a large part of my heart and so did Gautami and Ram. I am glad lazy and la coerced you into writing more about them. They are a very delightful couple and a breather for us.

Finally seeing Arnav and Khushi muse about the family made me so happy. It shows how far they have come and how far they will go, hand in hand. And the final quote, it was so bang on. Couldn't have asked for a better finishing words. And with this I am forced to bid adieu to one of the best stories I have read. Thank you saiyu for writing it and having me a part of your readership.

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Shalvikamathur

@Shalvikamathur

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#336

fantastic story...loved it..!!! 😊

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Nimbus_211

@Nimbus_211

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#337

Great story!!!
Loved every bit of it. Arnav and Khushi's journey has been phenomenal!!! Especially Arnav.. from being a fool to becoming a king(since he has his queen now)...
Amazing work girl !!
Thanks for this wonderful story!!
:)

Edited by leabello - 9 years ago

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johngalt

@johngalt

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#338

thank u for a lovely story!!

Enjoy ur AD, do miss us a teeny weeny bit to write in your free time!!

Take care and all the very very best!!!

👏 ⭐️ 👏

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.brokensilence.

@.brokensilence.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#339

Beautiful endinh to an awesome story. This will be missed dearly. I looked forwaed for every next update of this par ab toh khattam hi ho gaya :(

I liked the way you ended it, everything solved and sorted out with Arnav finally understanding he cant always hold everyone together. Him letting Anjali shift to her other family was surely a big step for him but with his Khushi by his side, he surely understands thats what life is all about. If he wants someoe all to himself, he should let others have their way in their lives as well.

The cute banter beteween them, him teasing her and her slap in return everything was just lovely!.

Thank you for giving is this wonderful story.

Take care.

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coolpd93

@coolpd93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#340

hi..this has come to an end..loved the journey..

he let her see through his soul..trust is very important in a relationship..w/o that its NOTHING!!! i m glad he is getting to know it in his own ways..with an understanding wife like her..he wud definitely pull it off..shenoy couple.akash n payal...wow they are cuties:)

this is beautiful..mean it:)

Edited by coolpd93 - 9 years ago